very very short one shot depicting how we understand importance of loved ones when they go far from us.
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Swara kneeling down outside an airport and was crying vigourously in heavy rain. She was weeping hard like something precious to her has lost.
Pehle kabhi, na tune mujhe gham diya
Phir mujhe, kyun tanha kar diya
“why sanskar why , why you left me why you left your swara” shouted swara like a mad person
Guzaare thhe jo lamhe pyaar ke
Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke
“i was a kid not to understand you, your love, please come back, please come back to your swara please “she said childlisly still weeping
To phir tune badli kyun adaa
Yeh kyun kiya?
“fine you have gone naa “she said while wiping her tears and standing from ground “i will also go but difference is that i will be gone forever and ever from you” saying this she stand in middle of road closing her eyes and said in her heart ” i know i am stupid, your stupid swara who could not understand the relation between us, i always thought that we are besties thats why i was so comfortable with you , i can be myself with you and in that misunderstanding i was going to get married but when i found your letter telling me that you were going from here for always and that how you love me i felt like my something precious is getting away from me, there i realised that how much i love you, but befor i can stop you you went away from me”
Muskurane ki wajah tum ho
Gungunane ki wajah tum ho
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na..
O re piya re..
Swara was now standing in middle of road to go far away from this world but destiny has something else for her, as she was going to be hit by car,a hand pulled her and engulfed her in bonecrushing hug and shouted angrily” are you mad or what. Haan you were going to give your life, have you ever thought what would have happened to me, it is good that i came on time otherwise you yo..” at end his voice start trembling and he could not complete his sentence and his tears threatened to come from his eyes
O re lamhe tu kahin mat jaa
Ho sake toh umr bhar tham jaa
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa..
O re piya re..
Swara pulled from his embrace and kiss him passionaltely on his lips, sanskar also reciprocated it. She pulled from kiss and cupped his face and said “never never ever dare to leave me samjhe ”
Sanskar also cupped her face and kissed her forehead and said “never i will never leave you because i love you alot swara and i cannot live without you”
Swara smiled and kissed his cheeks and said “i love you too sanskar , i love you alot”
Both swara and sanskaar hugged each other promising themselves to never leave eachothers hand and loving eachother forever and ever in presence of rain who became evidence of their pain of separation and then their love for each other.
Haan..
Kisi shaayar ki ghazal
Jo de rooh ko sukoon ke pal
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjaare ko ghar
Naye mausam ki sehar
Yaa sard mein dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjare ko ghar
Hmm…
Jaise koi kinaara
Deta ho sahaara
Mujhe wo mila kisi mod par
Koi raat ka taara
Karta ho ujaala
Waise hi roshan kare woh shehar
Dard mere woh bhula hi gayaa
Kuch aisa asar huaa
Jeena mujhe phir se woh sikha raha
Hmm.. Jaise baarish kar de tar
Yaa marham dard par
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjare ko ghar
Naye mausam ki sehar
Yaa sard mein dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjaare ko ghar
Here ends my first ever os on any site, please comment on this os, it will surely encourage me to write more, thank you.
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19 Comments
Awesome… Please write more OS…..
Nice 🙂
Really a good one do continue writing
Nice
Nice Loved it❤️
Awesome…
Awesome…!!
Nice..!!
Nice plz write more…
Beautiful os dear…simple yet Awesome… keep it up.. ??
Fabulous dear.
nice
Aaaww short simple cute… loved it.. write more stories on swasan
Suprb…
ohhhhh myyyyyyyy godddddddd it was sooooo amazing pls give lond one shots
Awesome
It is small and beautiful
short but nice…..the feeling of our loved one’s going away from us is really a great pain…
Awesome