Hello everyone….
How are you all??…
Well i know this time i m hell late….but seriously i was really hooked up with things….firstly ramzaan have started so i get buzy with house stuffs and secondly my health isn’t supporting me….i had started writing the epi long back but whenever i sit to write i cud just write for about 5 mins and i then i get somework or i feel tired……i m really sorry for making u all wait…..and thank you soo much everyone for the comments and all the silent readers too….
And i m really sorry i m not able to comment on each and every ff…i hardly do comment on any ff…i m really very sorry…i ll surely try commenting…☺
Well i m here with episode 21…
Agar koi previous epi bhul gaya ho to recap is here: kunj’s bday…..twinkle’s efforts to wish him first but she cudn’t….but finally she wished him later on…
So here you go with episode 21
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It was almost more than a month from kunj’s birthday….new year had started…
It was 25th of january 2016…
At taneja mansion..twinkle was sitting in her room and thinking something very deeply…..her face was sad and her eyes were swollen; it seemed like she had cried alot…
Twinkle’s p.o.v.
In this whole month so many things have happened….so many things have changed….i was soo happy after kunj’s birthday….finally i wished him atleast on his birthday and later on i talked him on chat for 5 days as had my phone back….life was going easy……school was perfect….and mine and kunj’s story was like somewhat moving ahead….
But kehte hai na ki khushi zyada der tak tikti nahi…..aur mere sath to hamesha aisa hi hota aya hai….jab bhi mujhe bohot khushi milti hai uske baad kuch na kuch bohot bura hota hai jo saari khushi chheen leta hai mujhse…
After new year….we had an off from school for a week…..it was 9th january…..i was sitting in my room after dinner and was reading a book…just then yuvi bhai called me and told me to come to his room asap…
I felt something fishy but i brushed my thoughts and hoped that nothing must be serious….i closed my book and hurried to yuvi bhai’s room…
He was sitting on the couch with his phone in his hands and his was red with anger….i got scared looking at him but then i went towards him and sat beside him on the couch and i asked him what was the matter??…
Bhai didn’t say a word and handed me his phone…i looked at his phone and it was his and mahi’s chat….i got confused so i again looked at him and he asked me to read it…
I started reading the chat and i was deep engrossed in reading it….as soon as i completed reading the chat my face was pale and tears made their way through my eyes…..
“Bhai and mahi broke up”
I was shocked to know this coz i always thought that how much they would fight but they will never leave each other….
This time they both had a argument on a small thing but that concluded into a big fight between them and literally lead them to part away….
I was not ready to believe this i just held bhai’s hand and said him “bhai please dont do this…its okay u fight but please dont leave each other”…..and after this bhai’s statement made me double shocked…he just said me “twinkle this time i m not gonna go back…i m just sick and tired of these fights now….its just all over now….i dont wanna go back to her…please u dont force me….u just stay away from this matter”….
I left his hand and left his room too….i went to my room and sat on bed….things were spinning continously in my mind….and i was just crying thinking all that…i was not getting anything and then finally i decided to call mahi….i called her and talked to her…..my conversation with mahi too was same like bhai…she was not ready to understand my point and said dat she is done with all these now…
Both of them are very much stubborn….and none of them would go back to other to apologise….
I donno why but i was not able to digest this thing…..i was having a severe headache due to all these….i was just thinking that how can i get them both together….chinki was also not there…she had gone to my aunt’s house as it was a leave from school…
I was feeling alone….i just laid on my bed and i tried to sleep but this matter kept ringing in my ears…..i donno what happened but suddenly i started feeling suffocated and my eyes were turning heavy… with much difficulty i went to washroom and splashed cold water on my face….i looked my at face in the mirror….my nose had started bleeding….i panicked and then i cleaned the blood with the tissue….i had a severe pain in my stomach and head….i was fully exhausted..i just came out from washroom and laid back on bed…i dint have enough energy to go to mumma….
And then i donno when i drifted to sleep…
End of twinkle’s p.o.v
Next morning twinkle woke up…..her head was still aching and her eyes felt heavy due to crying….she immediately checked her bed and her pillow if her nose had bleeded….but thankfully it didn’t….she sighed of relief and then went to have shower….
Sometime later she came out and got ready and went down for breakfast…..she had a hope in her heart dat mahi and yuvi would have patched up…..she went and sat on the chair beside yuvi….leela was in the kitchen and Rt went to office…
Twinkle asked yuvi if everything is normal but yuvi replied in a no and said” please twinkle stop having false hopes…its all over now…me and mahi are not going to get back together now”
Twinkle got sad hearing his reply…
She silently had her breakfast and then sat in the hall…..just then chinki came inside…..twinkle’s face lit up seeing her…chinki came to twinkle and hugged her….she looked at her face and asked her dat what happened…twinkle told her that she would tell her everything in room..
Aftersometime they both went to their room and then they both sat on bed….chinki again asked her….and then twinkle narrated her the whole thing about yuvi and mahi…
Chinki was shocked to know this….
Twinkle then said her that she wants to get them both together….chinki told her no and said “no di….you wont do anthing this time….i just dont get one thing if they both dont care about themselves and their realtionship then why do u care….why you always cry for them….whenever they fight you are only the one who get them back together….but this time u wont…just leave this matter to them….you always get emotional and makes you suffer….i dont want you to suffer in these silly fights….actually i m hell angry at yuvi bhai…if he broke up than why did he tell you….he should nt have told you as he dont wanna go back to mahi di…”
Twinkle stopped chinki from speaking all this and said dat”chinki its not the time to think all these..” chinki then just asked twinkle to not to interfere in them this time and let them do whatever they want…
Twinkle unwillingly nodded in a yes…
Present on 25th january…
Twinkle stopped thinking all these as in these days everything was still same…mahi and yuvi dint got back together….
Days passed and it was 29th of jan…the next day it was twinkle’s birthday…twinkle seemed happy as her dad promised her that they would go out for a dinner tomorrow with sarna’s…..and then she wud b able to meet kunj….
It was late night….about 11 pm…
Twinkle didnt have a hope this time that kunj would wish her first as she thought that kunj didn’t have any feelings for her…
She just slept thinking about tomorrow…
At sarna mansion…
In kunj’s room…
Kunj was sitting on the chair with his phone….he was constantly looking at his phone..
Kunj’s p.o.v.
Ohh god…twinkle’s last seen is before 2 weeks…dat means she does not have her phone right now……shitt now how will i wish her….please twinkle come online please….
It was 12 am now…..twinkle was not online…kunj dint have any means….so he just opened twinkle’s pic in his phone and said ” happy birthday twinkle…just stay happy always….i love you….love you alot”
He was sad as he was not able to wish twinkle but there was nothing he can do about it…
Next day in the morning twinkle woke up and then chinki wished her….she smiled and hugged her…later both got ready and went down….leela rt and yuvi wished twinkle and blessed her…
Mahi called on leela’s phone and wished twinkle…usha too wished her….
Twinkle thought that kunj too would wish her but he didnt….
Twinkle was waiting for evening as they were going for dinner and she would meet kunj….
But in the evening Rt called from office and said dat he had got an urgent work at office so they would not be able to go today….but he promised her that they would ho tomorrow…
Twinkle got very sad as she wnted to meet kunj on her bithday…..and still kunj had not wished her…
She went to her room and started crying..
She was questioning god that why does he always do this with her…she soo wanted to meet kunj but again her hopes broke..
She cried for sometime and then went down for dinner…it was 8 pm…
Still kunj had not wished her…Rt came back from office and said sorry to twinkle and also gave her gifts…
Twinkle got happy seeing the gifts..yuvi leela and chinki too gave her gifts…..and they had brought a cake too for her…twinkle happily cut the cake and later they all had dinner….and then all went back to their rooms..
It was just an hour left for the day to end….kunj hadnt wished twinkle yet..
Finally it was 12 am and the day ended…twinkle looked at the watched and a tear escaped from her eye…
Twinkle’s p.o.v
Kunj dint wish me…..that means he really does nt care about me…he doesnt love me….
And she cried thinking about her fate…
Here at sarna mansion
Kunj ws looking at twinkle’s pic in his phone…
Kunj’s p.o.v
I m sorry twinkle…i m really very sorry..
I cudnt wish you….i m sorry..how wud have i wish you….i cant call on leela aunty’s phone to wish you and i didnt want to ask mahi too..
I m so sorry twinkle…sorry..
I love you…
And they both slept…
Next day morning….Rt told twinkle at breakfast table that they were surely going today evening for dinner….and he had said manohar too..
Twinkle smiled and said thank you..
Whole day twinkle was happy too but sad aswell….coz kunj did not wish her…
Later in the evening….
All got ready and then left for having dinner….on the way to restaurant….twinkle was feeling happy that finally she wud see her kunj…
Sometime later they reached the restaurant….sarna’s were already present there…
Twinkle came out from the car and went towards mahi….she was going to reach mahi but kunj came in between and forwarded his hand and said” happy birthday twinkle” twinkle smiled and shaked hand with him and said thank you…kunj smiled back and went to yuvi..
Later they all went inside and sat…
They were sitting like…rt , leela,manohar,and usha were sitting on one side and on the other side..
Mahi twinkle and chinki were sitting beside each other….kunj was sitting opposite to twinkle nd yuvi was sitting opposite to mahi…
Mahi and yuvi were giving angry glares to each other?
Twinkle and kunj were just passing smiles to each other???
And chinki was buzy looking at the menu????
Later they all had dinner and then all came out….as it was quite late they decided to leave…
All bid bye to each other…..twinkle hugged mahi and said bye to usha and manohar..
Kunj came to her and said byee…..twinkle to replied a bye and then all left…
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Precap:twinj confession☺☺☺
Hope you all like it guyzz….
And i hope it was long enough…
Please do comment…..
Love you all????????????????
23 Comments
Very emotional episode
Sad that kunj was not able to wish twinkle
Wow confession is coming
I’m very excited about it
Waiting for the next update
Do continue
Awwww loved it sooooooooooooooo much can’t even describe what I am feeling now he yuhi na huh always fighting and twinkle bechari oyeee sun itna stress nah liya Kar samjhi be like kunj care free and sweet and thats lovely he too wanted to wish you first lovely episode loved each n every scene ..
Love u. ?????…..
Waiting for confession now do post when u get fine okay bye ????
Really schi twinj confess krenge cnt wait. ..
Post soon. …
Very emotional
N ur so emotional dear
I mean u even for others so nice of u
N this is awesome Amazing
Post soon
Love you keep smiling
Hey diiiii….
Its awesome…
Felt bad for twinkle….
Yuhi r so stubborn….
Waiting for confession..
Loved it…
Post soon
Hi fatimaa,emotional episode yrr
Ur story amazing??
Aur itna mat roya karo yrr aur itna stress bhi mat liya karo
Waiting for ur confession yrr
Luv u
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Heyya.
After reading this chapter i will just tell you one thing; stop being soo weak dear,i mean i was feeling really sad reading your conditions in this chapter,
I cant even think how much pain you had to bear; but really i cant see you in this much pain girl
Thoroughly i loved the episode
Just wanted to read more and more;
About the precap; it seems interesting but sadly it would be hard for me to read; as its my love’s confession with someone else??
Well dont get me wrong,
I m truely saying i love you and i want you to stay happy always my dear.
And please take care,post the next when you feel like okay.
Love you❤
Heyy fatimaa dii
Again it was a blast
I loved to read this..
I felt soo bad for you dii
Post soonish
Loads of love dii????
Hii fatimaa
Ohh my cryy baby
Seriously gurl u cry alot and i guess u have some medical problems?? Is it?
Well this chapter was fantabulous?
I enjoyed reading it fully?
Awwh kunj didnt wish you on your birthday sweetheart…
Well but it was written blissfully
Post the next asap
Lots of love ???
Di it was awsm amazing superb just love it eagrly waiting for next bcuz its confession time plz plz post asap if you can love you
from your lil sista…
It was tooo emotional my dear
Dii seriously I am telling the truth I was really so upset with u…kyu maat pucho like itna intazaar life may maine kabhi nai kiyaa…u r seriously too late…par koi nai aapne u were buzy I understand par dii plzzz agli baar don’t be late…ok…
Regarding the epi it was just so mindblowing…
Di seriously aap na itna maat roya karo…it hurts yaar…dii agli baar aise rona nai..hope yesi situation toh pir kabhi naahye…seriously di u described each n every scene so perfectly…really…post asap…just can’t wait for the confession…uffff yeh intazaar kabh katam hogi…love u too di..post asap
Finally you posted
It was really good
Get well soon
Loads of Love
Hey Fatima
The episode was really awesome
Waiting for twinj’s confession …
Plzzzz post soonest
And yeah Ramadan Mubarak
Lots of love
Bye……
Glad u post it love it twinj confession ?
AWESOME….was eagerly waiting for the epi….n get well soon…n post next part asap
Hey fatima api finally u posted
I luvd it ….
It was sad….
Emotional….
Feeling sad ka bhai na ap ko wish nhi kiyA ap ki b-day pa …..
Excited for nxt….
Wanna read soon and more….
Plzzzzzzz post soon…..
Plzzzz take care of ur self get well soon…..
Luv u …. Give nxt soon plzzzzzz u know we r greedy incase of ur story bcz we luv it like we all luv u….
Fatima!
It was Fantastic??
Awww Jiju wanted to wish u first but could not??
N janeman itna tension mat liya kar?Jiju haina then why to take tension?
And finally confession??I really wanna see how jiju proposed U??
Love U dear??
Post Soon☺☺
Heyyy jaaaaaan….!!!!!!
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Please itna mat roya ker…! I m felling so bad for you..! Tu bhi na..! Kitna royi tum….!!! Nd haan take care of ur health..! What’s the prob..? Kyun itnj tabyat kharab haii.? Doc se consult kiya?? Agr nhi to foran karo yarrrr….???
Seriously itna wait keraya..! Me to na pagal hogayi thi wait ker ker ke…!
Nd u knw what…?? Jab me ne teri post dekhi na… i started dancing ke yeahhh yippiee finally meri jaan ne post kiyaaa…..!!!!
Epi was a bliss to read…but seriously i m feeling very bad for u….!!!
Awwww he too wanted to wish u first but….!!!
Chalo koi na…! Atleast he wished u… but sadly after ur birthday…!
Yeaahhh whatttt????? AM I DREAMING????? SOMEONE PLSSSSSS PINCH MEE……??!???? TWINJ’S CONFESSION…… IS IT SOOOOO??????? UHHH THANK GOD….. I WAS WAITING FOR IT DESPERATELY…. FINALLLLLYYYYYYY….!!!!!
MATLAB KITNA WAIT KARAYA NA HAMARE JIJU NE TUJHE…. KITNA ROYI TU UN KI WAJAH SE…! ND ITNI TABYAT BHI KHARAB RAHI… BUT NOW FINALLY…, CONFESSION HOGA…! JIJU SE POOCHNA MERI TARAF SE THODA JALDI CONFESS NHI KER SAKTY THY…. ???? ITNA RULANA ZAROORI THA…???
POST SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONESTT…
I CAN’T WAIT FOR THE CONFESSION… PLSSSSSS REQUEST HAI TERI JAAN KI…???? AGR AJ HI POST KER SAKTI HAI TO KR DY… PLSSS… AJ POST KER DY.. ITS MY REQUEST JAAAN.. PLSSSS…..
LOVE YOU LOADS ND LOADS…! HOPE U ACCEPTS MY REQUEST.,.???❤❤❤❤?❤❤?????❤❤
Heyyy jaaannn….
Pehle toh thank you so much for commenting and dat too this big…
Well yaah there are many health issues with me and still the medications are going on…hopefully i ll get well…
Hehe you are way too excited for twinj confession….
Hmm meri jaan ne request ki hai….soo ur request is my command…i ll surely fullfill it…
But aaj raat ko post karungi der se q ki abhi to mene likhna start b nai kiya hai….
Aur abhi to roza hai soo mujhe thodi weakness aa gayi hai..
But i promise raat ko likh dungi aur post b kar dungi…
Pakka wala promise jaan..
Love you toooooo❤❤❤❤??????
Hi Fatima, sorry for not commenting on your previous episodes ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? but what to do yaar I was hell busy with exams but what is this itna bimar kyun ho? Apna dhyan nahi rakhti na? Arrey yaar aisa karegi to bechare mere jiju kahenge ki kaisi bimaar ladki se pyaar kar liya nd ro bhi nahi payenge????? ????????? take care of yourself nd don’t take stress.
Nd episode was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb. Batao mere tumhein pehle wish karna chahte the but nahi kar paye so sad???? but seriously you are rondu???? itna koi rota hai?? Ab confession dikha dena wo bhi real wala???????? post next whenever you feel good.
Love you ? ? ? ?
*****Batao mere jiju tumhein pehle wish karna chahte the
ohhhhhhhhhh my god……..♥
itnaaaaa pyaara episode…..♥
srsly emotional too……..♥
n dat was sooo cte both wanted to wish eo first……♥
srsly speechless…….♥
n finally as u r telling d dates my mind is saying one thing finally confession……..♥
ohhh god cant wait…….♥
srsly loving it…..♥
lods of love dii…..♥
post soon plsss……srsly confession vahan aapka hone wala hai dil yahan mera dhadak rha hai…….♥ hehe….