Hi all, I am back with the next chapter. I know a lot of you wanted me to post sooner, but unfortunately I have only just been able to complete typing it out. Big big hugs to all of you for your wonderful comments in the last part and all the parts before that! Things are starting to get intense now. Hope you like it as much as the rest of the scenes – Azure
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Ragini gently opened her eyes, as she woke up from her sleep. A soft smile broke on her lips, feeling Sanskar spooning her from behind. So much had changed in the past one week since they confessed their feelings to each other. She gently touched his arm that was wrapped around her, enjoying the feel of being held in his arms, for a bit, before she made to get up. But as she did, she felt Sanskar tighten his grip around her waist.
“You are awake” she said softly
“You know I end up waking up when you do” he said in a sleepy tone, his voice muffled against her neck
Ragini smiled a bit “If you are up, then let go of me, I need to get up now” she told him gently
“Ummmm” Sanskar said complaining “I need to sleep some more. Don’t go just yet” he said even as he pulled her into himself.
“Sanskar, it is already late. You know that Bhabhi has been coming up to wake us up every day these past few days. Everyone has been teasing me” she complained
“So! You can bear some teasing for me” Sanskar said nuzzling her neck, still resisting getting up.
“Sanskar! You don’t know all the things I have been hearing” Ragini complained, blushing, as she tried to loosen his grip on her.
“I am not letting you go so soon. I need to get some sleep. I haven’t had much of it last night” he said
“Why did you need to stay up so late” Ragini told him
Sanskar lifted his head slightly hearing his. He brought his lips closer to her ear, whispering “Do I need to remind you why we were up late, last night”
Ragini blushed “But I am ready to get up on time, unlike you.” she tried to counter
“That is because it is your fault” Sanskar said huskily
“How is it my fault?” she asked confused
Sanskar moved her hair off her neck, before placing gentle kisses along it “When the wife is so blo*dy gorgeous, the husband cannot be expected to control himself”
“Sanskar” Ragini gasped, affected by his kisses
“Ummmm” Sanskar said, but did stop
“I really need to get up. Bhabhi will come and knock the door any minute” she said softly
“Between your internship and housework, I am barely getting any time with you” Sanskar complained, as he ran his hand along her arm
Ragini turned her face a bit, to look at him “You know that if I could, I would want to be in your arms for eternity. Never leave them” she said looking at him
Sanskar kissed his shoulder gently, letting her know that he understood “I think I need to just whisk you away somewhere far, where there is no one else. Just us” he told her softly
“Then why don’t you?” Ragini told him
“I will the moment your internship is done” he said as he continued to plant soft kisses along her shoulder “And then I am not letting you let the bedroom”
“When you whisk me away, then you can” she told him with a smile, before pecking him on the cheeks and rushing out of his arms and out of the bed.
Sanskar leaped a bit to catch the edge of the sheet that she had wrapped around herself
“Sanskar!” Ragini complained even as she blushed
“Here I am making plans to whisk you away on a romantic getaway and you are giving me just a peck the cheek” Sanskar complained “Not happening!”
Ragini smiled and quickly ran toward him giving him a peck on the lips, but he moved his hand behind her head and pulled her in for a deep kiss.
“You have to make up to me because I am losing my sleep” Sanskar told her teasingly as he let go of her
“Don’t I, every night” Ragini said mischievously, before rushing to the washroom.
Sanskar fell back on the bed, ruffling his hair, smiling at her antics. Realizing that Pari Bhabhi might actually be coming over to call on Ragini soon, he got out of the bed and got dressed. He was just wearing his t-shirt when there was a knock on the door. Expecting Pari Bhabhi, he rushed over and opened it “She will be ready in” he started to say, without looking at the person, only to stop when he realized it wasn’t Pari Bhabhi. It was Adarsh bhaiyaa and he had a serious expression on his face.
“We need to talk” was all Adarsh bhaiyaa said. But the expression was enough to make Sanskar realise that it was something that was both important and urgent. He glanced towards the washroom once, before looking back at Adarsh bhaiyaa. He nodded and went with him, closing the door behind him.
Adarsh led him to the terrace. He found Ranveer already waiting there. Sanskar looked between the two.
“What is going on?” he asked
“Just wait for a bit” Adarsh told him
“Are you sure about this?” Ranveer asked Adarsh “It might make things worse”
“I am hoping he will realize the situation now” Adarsh told him sincerely
“What is going on? Will someone tell me?” Sanskar asked concerned
“I am here. What did you want to talk about?” Laksh said
“Why is he here?” Sanskar asked. Things has been tense between them lately and family had been keeping them out of each other’s way as much as they could – or actually, they were keeping Laksh away from Sanskar so that he wouldn’t do something that would make things worse, according to them.
“Will you both stop it!” Adarsh told them “This is important!”
Sanskar looked away from Laksh and towards Adarsh, giving him a nod.
Adarsh sighed and said “It is about Uttara”
“Uttara!” both Sanskar and Laksh exclaimed, worried
“She could be in danger. We have been hearing things. Or more preciously Ranveer has” Adardh explained
“Who?” Laksh asked feeling angry
Sanskar looked at Ranveer, before saying “Aditya, right?” Ranveer nodded “I am not surprised. I was wondering how he could sit by and not do something considering I threatened him”
“What the hell!” Laksh shot angrily at Ranveer “You stay away from my family and don’t create such ridiculous rumors. I know why you are trying to do this”
“I am not trying to do anything. Aditya is” Ranveer told him plainly
“Ady is my best friend. I know him. He would never do anything like this” Laksh shot at him
“Actually, you should be the one not surprised by this considering he is your so-called best friend” Sanskar shot back “Considering his intentions towards my wife, I and not surprised. But then, again, you are no different from him!” Sanskar said angrily
“Don’t talk about something you don’t know” Laksh screamed at him “Ady wouldn’t do that”
“With his cheap and dirty intentions, he can think anything. Just like you do!” Sanskar said angrily
“It is different with Uttara” Laksh screamed
“How is it different?” Sanskar yelled back
“Because she is my sister and I am his best friend. She is off limits” Laksh said
“And you Bhabhi isn’t off limits?” Sanskar screamed “You must be really delusional if you think he will spare one person in your family if he doesn’t the other”
“You don’t know him like I do” Laksh told him
“Are you even sure you know him as well as you think you do?” Sanksar shot at him
Laksh lunged at him ready to attack, but Adarsh held him back. Sanskar was losing his cool as well, anger building in him for some time now. He rushed towards Laksh, but Ranveer held him in a tight grip.
“Laksh, if you are not going to have a sensible talk, leave!” Adarsh told him as Ranveer and Adarsh pushed the two brothers in different corners.
“You are just doing this to make me stop being friends with Ady” Laksh shot at them “But that is not going to work!” he said walking away from there.
Adarsh stood there in the same spot for a minute before walking back towards Ranveer and Sanskar. “I am sorry about that” he told Ranveer
Ranveer nodded “He can make things worse. He will go and talk to Aditya for sure”
Adarsh nodded “You are right; I should have kept him away. I thought it would get some sense into him if he heard that Aditya was targeting Uttara”
“It doesn’t matter. Aditya is not going to give up his quest just because he knows that we know what he is up to” Sanskar told him
“It is not as simple as that” Ranveer told him
“We will deal with it” Adarsh told him
Sanskar had calmed down by then “I was wondering what he was going to do” he said softly “I thought he would target me or Ragini again. I didn’t think he would go after Uttara” he said looking at them “I don’t understand. Why Uttara? He would have to realize that he risks alienating Laksh because of that”
“Uttara is a soft target” Ranveer explained “He must have known that we have increased the security on Ragini. You are there with her most of the time and both of you are surrounded by a lot of guards always. He cannot exactly target Adarsh, your father or your uncle. The rest of the family is usually at home. He knows that targeting Laksh won’t help. Who does that leave?”
“But it isn’t as though Uttara goes out without guards” Sanskar told him
“You are right, she doesn’t” Adarsh said “But he realizes that there are only two people that he can hurt to impact a lot of us, Ragini or Uttara. And between them, he feels Uttara is easy to get to”
“So what do we do?” Sanskar asked them
“You need to ensure that you keep her and the rest of the family in-door, without letting them know why” Adarsh instructed him. Sanskar was about to talk when he cut in “We cannot tell them about it. It was only cause them more panic and things are more likely to fall apart then. We need you to hold the home ground”
Sanskar nodded “What else can I do?” he asked
“Nothing” Ranveer told him “We will manage the rest”
“But I cannot sit by and do nothing” Sanskar told them
“Look there was a time when you didn’t want to be part of the business” Adarsh told him “Today I” Ranveer touched his shoulder, making him pause for a bit “We” he said correcting himself, getting a nod from Ranveer “Today, we are telling you that you are not right for this business. You are impulsive and lose your cool too quickly”
“So! Isn’t that what you do! Killing people!” Sanskar told them annoyed, not that he wanted to be part of that world
“This is real life. Not some movie where we beat someone up in raw anger. Yes, lives are taken. But it is more about being able to live with that decision and be able to move on. In his world, it is the cool minded who survive and those who act rash perish the fastest” Adarsh told him
Sanskar looked away from them. He didn’t want to know this. He didn’t want to know how they could move on after taking a decision to take someone’s life. He didn’t want to look at them and think about every time he saw their face.
“I will do and see if I can talk some sense into Laksh. One final time” Adarsh said, looking at Ranveer before he walked off.
Sanskar and Ranveer stood there, in silence, that weighed heavy because of the words that had just been spoken.
“I need to talk to you” Ranveer said after a few minutes breaking the silence.
Sanskar looked up at him
“It is about what we spoke two days back” he added quietly.
Sanskar’s eyes widened. He walked towards the entrance of the terrace, looking out to ensure there was no one there. He walked back towards Ranveer “Let’s talk about it quietly” he said lowering his volume
Ranveer nodded
“Did you find something?” Sanskar asked him
“I got the call records from my source at the India telecom company” Ranveer told him
“And?” Sanskar asked feeling impatient
“Let just say that there could be some weight to your hunch and reasoning” Ranveer told him before quickly adding “But it is not enough evidence to be conclusive”
“I knew it! I knew it” Sanskar said pointing a finger in the air “What are we waiting for? We need to take action for trying to hurt Ragini”
“Not so quick” Ranveer told him “Not until the evidence is conclusive”
“What!” Sanksar said annoyed “So we are just going to wait around find to find conclusive evidence and do nothing? What is going to be this conclusive evidence for you? Ragini being hit again?” he asked angrily
“That is not what I meant” Ranveer tried to explain
“Then what did you mean?” Sanskar asked him
“Are you willing to take the chance of focusing only on the suspect and attacking them, when there is a possibility, even a small possibility that he could be someone else? Are you willing to risk Ragini’s life because we focused too much in the wrong direction, leaving her open to attack” Ranveer explained
“But I am sure it is this one” Sanskar countered
“Are you willing to bet Ragini’s life on it?” Ranveer asked
Sanskar stayed silent. No, he couldn’t risk Ragini’s life. He couldn’t develop a blind eye, but equally he was sure about his theory, even though that was all it could be in the situation that they were in. Without knowing what Swara knew or even the truth behind Swara herself, they were basically flying blind. He had to find a way to secure the proof. But before that, he needed to protect Uttara from the recent threat.
Sanskar came back to him room to find Ragini had already left to help with the kitchen work, before she went to office for her internship. He rushed downstairs. If he was to keep all the women safe, he needed her help.
“Ragini” he called out as he entered the kitchen. She was there with Badi Maa, his mom and Pari Bhabhi. They looked up at him as he entered. He schooled his expressions looking at them.
“I need to talk to you” he told her neutrally, before adding “alone”
“Go Ragini” his mom told her, in a teasing tone.
Ragini blushed and her eyes widened as if to ask him what was he doing? She was going to get teased even more for this. He just tilled his head to signal her to come out. She lowered her head and walked out of the kitchen, with him following behind. The kitchen erupted in giggles as soon as they left.
“Sanskar!” Ragini reprimanded, even as she blushed
“Come with me” Sanskar told her quietly
“Sanskar” she said softly, sensing that he wasn’t teasing. Something was wrong. “What is wrong?” she asked softly as they walked up the stairs.
He intertwined their fingers together “I will tell you. Let’s just get to our room”
They reached the room and Sanskar bolted the door. Ragini was looking expectantly at him as he turned to look at her.
“I need your help to keep everyone inside the house” he told her
“What’s wrong?” she asked walking towards him and touching his arm
“Aditya has some plans to attack Uttara. We cannot let her go out. We don’t know what this means for the rest of the family, so we need to keep all of the women in the house. And we cannot let them know about this, or they will panic” Sanskar told her sincerely
She gasped “It is because of me, isn’t? He is targeting Uttara because of me” she said, her eyes welling up even as guilt washed over her
Sanskar cupped her face “No, it is not because of you. It is because of me. Because I threatened him” he told her softly
“But you threatened him because of me!” she told him
“He is a cheap bastard. He has been messing around with the family for far too long. It was just a matter of time before I or someone else in the family handled him, trust me on this” he told her gently wiping the tear that had made its way down her cheek “You are not to blame. If there is anyone to blame, it is that slimy snake himself” he assured her
“What do we do now?” she asked softly
“Help me find a way to keep all of them in house, without them guessing what is happening” Sanskar told her
Ragini nodded
“I need you to call you work and tell them you won’t be coming in for a few days. You can work from home if needed” he told her
“Do you think this will hang on her for long?” Ragini asked, worried for Uttara
“I don’t know. I hope it doesn’t, but we can never be sure” Sanskar told her honestly “Is there some way he can find to her while at home? You have been her friend; do you know if they have any common connection that he can use to get to her?” he asked
“I don’t think there is, but I will find out again” she assured him.
He nodded, before looking at her worried face “Everything is going to be okay. It is just for a short time” he told her, before pulling her into a tight hug.
Holding everyone almost under house arrest without letting them know what was going on, wasn’t all that easy. Both Sanskar and Ragini had to school their looks and not let the worry show through on their faces. They had done their best, but there were trace still that showed through. They had managed to tackle the questions and make excuses that day, but they weren’t sure how long them could lie to Badi Maa, Mom, Pari and Uttara enough to keep them from panicking.
Neither had much appetite that day at Lunch. As they sat together for a few minutes in their room, after evening coffee, Sanskar’s phone rang. Sanskar looked at the screen, it flashed ‘Laksh’
“What is it?” Sanskar asked, annoyed from his behavior that morning
“Is this some way to talk to your brother” said the person on the other end
“Who are you?” Sanskar asked, even as his heart raced a bit
“I thought you would have guess by now, considering you see to know everything about what I know and what I intend” the person said
“Why are you calling me?” Sanskar asked Aditya, realizing he was the one calling
Ragini looked at him worried, hearing the tone of his voice
“I thought I would check to see if you care about you brother to want him back” Aditya told him sneering
“What brother?” Sanskar asked, not wanting to fall for any trick that he might pull
“I didn’t realize you had that many brothers, but I guess when you have two, you can get confused. I meant your dear Lucky” Aditya told him
“What about him?” Sanskar asked
“Well let’s just say, he was a bit confrontation and he isn’t in best of shapes right now” Aditya told him maliciously
“What do you want?” Sanskar asked
“It is not about what I want. It is whether you want to see him again” Aditya told him
“Get to the point. I don’t have time for these round about talks” Sanskar told him bluntly
“Fine. Let me make it simple. If you want him back alive, come to meet me. I will be willing to let him go in exchange for you. After all, you are the one I have problem with” Aditya said drawling
“And if I don’t come” Sanskar shot at him
“Well you can be responsible for the consequence then. Considering you claim to know me, you can guess what they would be” he said
“Where do you want me to come?” Sanskar asked
“Now we are talking business” Aditya said giving a vicious laugh “My farmhouse 8pm sharp. Come alone. No bodyguard. No one following you. And I am going to monitor your calls. If your family knows, consequence come into play immediately” he warned
“Fine!” Sanskar said cutting the call
“Sanskar!” Ragini asked concerned, holding his hand
“Aditya has Laksh captive” Sanskar told her somberly.
Precap – Sanskar Aditya & Laksh
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Links to previous chapters
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=red+string+of+fate+%28ragsan%29
85 Comments
It was really nice. But I think it will be great if Swara come back to create problems in ragsan life and them overcoming all their problems. Anyways it was amazing and please try to post it regularly
thanks so much dharuni. glad u liked it. don’t worry ragsan have enough people creating trouble for them….swara even though dead is looming on them as well…because of the question marks around her death and linkage of that to ragini 🙂 i cannot bring swara back to life in this one though dear….she is really dead. India police could have made a mistake like sR serial 😉 LAPD cannot…..lol
Thankyou so much for the reply ?It’s ok if Swara can’t come back because it’s already very interesting with ragsan romance and all the problems that they are facing currently. Anyway a big thanks for ur reply..PLEASE POST THE NEXT PART ASAP, I CANT WAIT TO READ IT?
awesome
thanks so much lovely 🙂 🙂
Azure?Too good? Aditya wants Sanskar alone!!? Excited to read the next one ? love u loads?
thanks so much ramya dear 🙂 yes he wants him alone…he wasnt someone who would have forgotten sanskar threatening him …that too in public…could he
Wow
And suspence
thanks so much sindhu….yes suspense kicking off full-time now….it is going to get intense 😉
amazing dear………
thanks dear 🙂 glad u liked it
Superb as always
thanks so much lila dear 🙂
Can u giv me ur previous links
this is the link http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=red+string+of+fate+%28ragsan%29 i usually include these at the end of the precap of each chapter.
i assume u were talking about links for previous chapters in this story, right?
Awesome… Pls update soon
thanks geeta….will update tomorrow dear….the next part is going to involve a lot of work. please bear with me.
Superb as always luvd it
I sumwat hv a feelingl dat adi n laksh r togethr plnning dis whole mischief
Bt den jst a wild guess
Its was vry vry vry nyc
I was desperatly waiting fr ur update
Nw again plz update d nxt prt soon 😀 😀
haha….thanks dear. glad u loved it. about laksh, lets see. i don’t know if i can call this mischief though. day had a big ego and it has been bruised in public. will try to update soon dear. mostly tomorrow….but will need that bit of time since next parts are going to need some work.
amazing dear really too too good……….. Loved it
thanks so much dear….v happy u loved it 🙂 🙂
Awesome dear…
thanks so much taiana dear 🙂
Awww awesome as always was wating for the episode. Specially Ragsan romance. I guess there r no words that can describe the happiness after reading the story . All over again m in love with ur writings the way u explain each n evry scene. The way u write I admire ur writings. Specially Ragsan conversation was jst so sweet. ??
A big big hug n lots of love ???
thanks nami 🙂 so glad that they are turning out good that u are waiting for them. i am glad that the story is making u happy….i love to know that it is doing that. feels good. thanks for loving my writing skills….i am really really really glad u read this. big big big hug to you too dear! glad u liked their scenes
As usual awesome wat else can I say…waiting fr nxt epi
thanks so much dear…..glad i have been able to deliver on this epi. 🙂 🙂
oh this was again awsm but u took a leap of one week . this aditya is really a cheap bustard and laksh a dumb head
And i have started a ragsan ff . DO read it’s name is REALITY
yes dear i took a bit of a leap…i needed to tackle the attacks plot as well and it would have been weird to deal with it right after without them have some time to feel the bliss of being in love na 😉 i will check out your story soon dear 🙂
I guess i am quite late in commenting on your ff but as they say it’s never too late , so thought to broke the silence.
Awstruck……………..
It’s really beautiful with each and every emotion making it’s way in atmost natural and convincing way.
Loved it to the core.
Each chapter is amazingly superv.
Woweeee……
Di , u have another fan of yours, amidst of uncountable admirers in the list.
Update soon.
Love u .Tc
you are so right…it feels good to read the comments….doesnt matter when u post it 🙂 🙂 i am so happy it is coming out natural and even more so that you are liking it. i sometimes wonder if i am making it dull but comments like these make me stay strong and on the track. v happy u loved it dear. i am really glad u loved the story enough to be a fan…big big hug and lot of love dear 🙂
It was awesome.eagerly waiting next part
thanks so much ammy…..will try to post by tomorrow ….the next one needs a bit more thought into it as i write it so cannot rush it…hope that is okay
Superb dear..amazing
thanks so much rakhi dear …big hug!
Superb
thanks so much swati 🙂 🙂
This epi is asusual amazing, extradinary, superb and etc etc…………????how r u di ?????actually I was waiting for ur ff eagerly and coming to epi its classy!!!!!! And my stupid analysis of today’epi????
Starting of the epi was so intense,?????romantic,??? and i m happy that romantic sanky is started in ur ff which we all r waiting!!!
And then one more twist in the story thats uttara??? And laksh supporting
To adi actually thats natural bcoz we wont accept our frnds fault easily???that was shown in laksh anger ..…….and sanky countering in ragini’s name ?? that shows the loshowThag that shows his love for ragini…….????
Ranveer and sanky talk shows that sanky started to think in ragini’s prespective……
Then ragsan scenes show the trust of them to each other and it shows ragini as an ideal bahu!!!!!! Sanky’s hug that shows that she l always be there for her and if any bad eye should come to her that should face him first☺☺☺
Aditya’s threating phone call even though sanky didnt believe it we cant say that sanky is not a good bro bcoz that is natural we l do that in real life when our bro or sis play with us by fainting when they really faints we l think that They r playing that only happened with sanky??? but when he realized that his bro is really in danger he forgot all his faults bcoz that’s not his fault that’s the fault of his bad frnd adi!!!! Ragini is concerned by sanky voice that shows her love for her sanskar???????sanky said that truth to ragini bcoz he dont want to hide anything to his lady love bcoz for a relationship truth and trust is imp☺☺☺☺☺
Over all the whole epi is filled with love, affection for family, trust, importance of family, duty of brother…. Fully a blockbuster episode!!!!!!
And di u nailed it whole heartedly???? love u loads and a big big Teddy bear hugs???
let me start with a big big big teddy bear hug dear….i loveeeeee ur comments and the analysis and effort u r putting into it. i am glad u found i classy. i was worried about the first part because i know a lot of you are really young here and i didnt want to add anything that was a bit over the top…..i don’t anyway…but still. i wanted it to just showcase some love and bliss in their life before next complication comes. so i am glad it was crass.
u are right. it is natural for laksh to support him because he feels that there are some things sacred in their friendship….like sisters being off limits..even though they mess with other’s sis. not the right mentality….but then they are messed up as well.
i don’t know if this ragini is ideal bahu though she might appear like one. she is helping with house work because she feels guilty about only the other women doing it….so she cannot sit by and watch. she respects all, that is her nature. she is also mindful of how it will reflect on her mother if she does anything wrong, given what she has been through. but in all of this she is also passionate about her work…staying up midnight for her projects…that is beyond just want to complete her degree. she is also someone perceptive enough that she doesnt want to poke any relationships where she doesnt feel she is the right one to…eg with laksh. but yes she is a good human being…normal one though…with normal feelings of wanting to be with her husband if given a choice.
haha…..yes sanskar didnt trust the laksh adi call…he is worried though u r right.
i am so so happy u found it blockbuster…..biggggg hugggg and lots of loveeee dear
Its awesome azure…..really proud of u.
thanks so much …..that was so touching. big big hug dear 🙂
As usual awesome
thanks so much venni…..glad i am managing that and not letting u guys down….hopefully 🙂
1st is there need of my comment?????
Ofc not……….bcz dis is reallllly realllllllly beautiful………….
Jab koi singer song gata hai to jaroori hota hai wo dil se gaye emotions k sath gaye to usne kuch beats miss kare to ignore kiya jata hai par agr emotions aur beats dono perfect ho to wo song sunane ka experience hasin hota hai….(sorry for dis lecture)
U wrote 2 scenes of ragsan.proudly saying u did not miss any single bit…?????
his voice muffled against her neck ya nuzzling her nack ya sanskar whispered ya ragini ka sanjhna k kuch serious hai ya unka conversation????
Adarsh sanskar,sanskar-laksh’s behaviour,adarsh-laksh-sanskar-ranveer,ranveer-sanskar??????sanskar and aaditya….sanskar’s reaction after watching laksh’s num on screen….
Jis story me suspense hota hai uske writer ko bahot mehnat karni padti hai ki kisi second k liye bhi reader k audience ka dhyan us suspence se na hate…aur us story k jo layers hoye hai unhe ek k baad ek par time(2 layers k bich me reader ko fast ho raha hai ya slow hai aisa nahi lagna chahiye) open karna padta..jo yeh kar paya wo jit gaya…..
And my dear u did it…?????????……..ur story,ur writing skill is really riveting………….?????????????
Most imp I m not ARASIK my dear……..i m enjoining ur story a lot……aadat se majboor hai jo barikiyan commnet me likhne se apne aap ko rok nahi pate hum…..
?????????????????????????????
hahaha…..absolutely…i want u comment and need it 🙂 🙂 thanks so much for saying that this was a good song experience with the ragsan scenes.. 🙂 🙂 i wanted them to depict some married bliss without going gross or crass. seem like i managed. you are right, writing suspense takes a lot of effort, i had to take a good bit of break after the last time i wrote one. i am glad i have been able to pace the suspense okay…..it has been in small doses so far because their love story had to develop a bit for sanskar to be bothered about investigating things…and since he is bang in the middle of the situation from all sides, he was the one who needed to start looking at it. i am so so so so happy u are liking the writing skills with every epi….glad i have been able to deliver. please kabhi rokhna bhi mat….mujhe accha lagta hai tumhare comments padke……lotttttt of love and big hug dear
Awesome epi……ragsan moments are excellent…..I am very excited …..day by day ur ff was rocking….I have no words to express my feelings…..I am eagerly waiting for ur next updates…….
thanks so much fira dear….i am so so happy that u liked the ragsan moments and that the story is getting better….i hope it stays rocking for you till the last epi 🙂 🙂 will try to update soon dear …big hug
Amazing epi…..waiting for ur updates….
thanks so much dear…will try to update soon
Hey azure…..how r u buddy……happy day wishes….
Lovd d way u started off d epi….intense but not too much….apt size of sizzling romantic morning of ragsan….d way d woke….deir nok jok…..d way both r shown happy….with all happy happy momennts dat started of in deir life…….awesome????
Ady targeting uttara is a sweet spot… d plan of keeping d ladies in house was ok ……n lucky opposing his bros is actually a good turn ovr here as i xpctd lucky will turn as d cause was for uttara…..bt surprised???
N abt wat sanky n ranveer talkd was a mystry again…..???
N last d fone call in btwn ragsan moment was d gr8 trap for either lucky or worst sanky…????…..
Well a vry nc epi…..lovd 2 readit…..
Love u lots…hugs…..tc
hey buddy i am good. how r u today? thanks for the wishes…hope u had a good day. i am so glad loved the start…..i was it to be romantic, intimate and blissful without getting over the top or crass or gross. the only reason for the first scene was to show that they were lost in their own cocoon despite the reality of the world outside. adarsh popped that bubble. it may be in the background but the reality is that their lives have effectively changed and have become guarded…things aren’t normal yet. lucky feels that all of them are lying to him because they have wanted him to break his friendship with ady. he doesnt trust them. he trusts ady and feels that adi would never hurt his sister since sisters are off limits between best friends. you will know the mystery soon…but they need to deal with situation one at a time…laksh situation first and then everything else. glad u loved it….lots of hugs buddy
wat u say u nailed it as always .I always read ur ff all episodes find out sm clues .but u write in such way that I always fails
thanks so so much dear…..thanks so much for reading the epi and looking for the clues…trust me your subconscious would have picked somethings up. when the dots start getting connected you will find out that you already picked up on some…. 🙂 🙂
Amazing:)
thanks so much anu dear…i read one part of your story yesterday and loved it. you write really well. i need to read the entire story as soon i am done with mine…(which is going to be soon)..
will comment on that part soon (as read others)….sorry went a bit zombie yesterday since it was well past midnight and just only read it without commenting….which was really bad on my part.
hi i am a silent reader of your ff. and I want to let you know that you are just an amazing writer.your story drives me crazy.the more I read it I get a way addictive to it.I just love your story and your way of writing. plz post the next part soon .i an getting impatient to read it
thanks so so much pari…..i am really glad that u didnt remain silent anymore and commented…big big thanks for that. it means a lot to know u liked it enough that it has been addictive. i hope i can keep the standard up till the end so that you always enjoy each chapter. v v happy u like my style of writing. will try to update soon. i will start writing in some time but the next few chapters will need some extra work so will be able to finish it only tomorrow after i come home from work….please bear with me….i will try to ensure that i make up to you for the wait.
Oh no!!! Damn it…l m late again???
So Sorry for that….
This epi made my morning…no no afternoon? The starting of the epi was really cute( As m a hopelessly unromantic person its hard for me to explain on it more…)…Really loved the nok-jhok of RagSan and u explained each and every activity of theirs so pointedly that it is easy for the readers to imagine….m really glad their love story started in full swing at last and the way u have portrayed that trust on each other is really beautiful….but more than that m overjoyed as now some part of mystery is going to unravel soon which had been giving me some kind of sleepless nights???
Coming to the Sanskar-Laksh duel l had be happy if Sanky had given him a punch and left him with a bleeding nose and broken jaw…seriously hate this idiot!!! But m more scared about the upcoming chapter fearing that it might be trap by the scoundrels to trap Sanskar and well…l don’t want to imagine that scene more…so l ll leave it and wait for ur next thrilling chapter…but if u need any help tackling those idiotic duo call me, l ll come and ll break their heads???
How r u??? Super happy l guess and always be…Have a great day….
Wanna tell u something (l think my comment is becoming ridiculously long so do forgive me for that)….I ll be giving Neet 2 soon as the SC has ordered that candidates appearing in Neet 1 can also apply…as m quite unsure of the cut-off so l have decided to give it 1 more shot…hope l crack it this time…so as ur story starts getting intense my preparations are going to be too…but no worries l ll still come and read the story and at least drop by a small comment for ur coming up fantastic chapters…
Also l have opened a wattpad account in a rush and have followed u…but would only be able to read ur stories or talk with u there after July (l hope it comes soon)…
Ok enough of my blabbering..l think u ll be having a painful headache by now reading this so m going…Ta-Ta…and tkcr…lots of love and big hugs????
first no sorries….no worries when u post it. it is fine. i am really glad u are giving neet2 as well. u are right u should give it a shot….i hope u crack it too! hahaha we are going in tandem them with intensity levels. focus on your studies…the story will be here and on wattpad. no rush. i saw u there. i realised it was you. no problem. july is fine 🙂 i am used to reading a lot don’t worry about headaches 😉
now coming back to the epi comment…i am really glad i made ur afternoon. i am glad u could imagine it…i wanted to show them being in their own blissful bubble and then them facing reality….i am glad i didnt overdo it. i was a bit worried wondering if it was over the top, i mean the romantic scene.
haha….u r like me…i love the mystery part more. with this one since sanskar needed to be the one investigating (since he is the one bang in the middle of all the connections) i needed to feel bothered about investigating first and that meant more romance than i usually have in the suspense stories…but i am really glad every had loved the romance and i have hopefully not gone over board there. as they say karma is a…..you can fill in the blanks. so laksh and adi will get what is coming to them. right now family is trying to prevent showoff between them though sanskar is ready to beat the hell out of him.
i am good….hope u are okay too. u have a great day too…today what is left of it and tomorrow.
big big big teddy bear hugs and lots of loveeee
Aaahhhh…how did u realised it was me…maybe it was the describe urself section where l have blabbered a lot like a zombie…or no no it might be the name, yes it is the name only…he he he…btw the name other than nupur appearing there is my real name…funny name na???
Yes its true di, l like mystery and horror more though l can’t sit silently through a single horror flick and ll definitely make the next person sitting near me deaf by shouting??? hence l read them…but mystery, comedy and sci-fi is my all time favourites. I also like emotional stories( though l don’t cry at the end as l have a problem with my tears…they don’t come out only???) but l certainly feel awkward about romantic stories(reason l had already mentioned in the above comment)…but ur story gives the right dose of everything so no worries….
What kind of stories and movies do u like? Do share….and ll wait for next chapter…so come back soon?
Ok now l need to go, my break from my books is over and now they are staring at me with their dangerous eyes and showing their sharp teeth as if they r gonna eat me alive??? So Ta-Ta….have a nice day…
hahaha…yes it was based on the name….and i like your real name too…it is really nice. don’t worry i don’t like to cry much either. with movies it is mystery, comedy and romance with some sci fi. i am more than dan brown, tom clancy, john grisham type I don’t read mills & boons. …. lol
OH my god!!!! You’re making me fall in love with this Fan-Fiction even more!!! You’re an awesome writer!!!! Good job sissy!!! Muahhh~Nusz
thanks so much nusz…..big big hug sista! i am so glad u are falling in love with this one. i don’t ever want u to fall out of love with it 🙂 thanks so much for your compliment…lottssss of love