Heyyyy guyzzzzz i hv got somethng to share with u all ……
And plz note that this is not any romantic love story becoz agar mn n romantic stories likhi na to log romance krna chor denge π
its just random piece of writing and here it starts,…….
Flashback
A very cute lil girl is sitting on stairs of school and crying and teacher comes
teacher:mishti! Y r u crying what happen beta
mishti(her name is mishti):i hv lost the way of my brother class
teacher:(smiles) in which class he is
mishti:5Th A
teacher:come with me(she takes mishti to that class a small boy lil elder than mishti is standing mishti runs towards him and hugs him)
boy:ary kya hua ro kun rahi h
mishti:ap kho gae thy bhai
boy:ary mn nh to kho gai thi budho (aadarsh smiles and hugs her back yes boy name is aadarsh)
flashback over
present…..
A girl around 15yrs is sleeping when someone shakes her like a hell
mishtiiiiiiiiii!!!!!
girl: (gets up in shock) aaaaa kya hua
boy smiles widely he is abt 18yrs and says 8am school nh jana
mishti throw herself in bed again
mishti: kya yar bhai nh jana mujhe
(yes and boy is non other than aadarsh
aadarsh pull her blanket with force and mishti was holding it with equal force
aadarsh: uth ja chup chap khud to late hogi mjhe b krwaege…. Uthhhhh!!!
Mishti leaves her blanket suddenly and aadarsh falls down
mishti:(gets up by sound and was shocked to see aadarsh on ground and burst out in laugh) awwww kya hua gir gaye (she shows him tongue)
aadarsh:mishti ki bachi tu ruk tujhe btata hon(he goes towards mishti but she gets up from bed)
mishti:aaaaa!!! Mama
(mishti runs out of room and aadarsh behind her)
they start running in all around hall lady was making breakfast(their mom) and mishti hides behind her
mom:phir shru hogae tm log
aadarsh:isne mjhe giraya
mishti:is ne mjhe utha neend se
mom: bas bas ab jao jaldi sy tyar hojao dono
both goes to their room
@breakfast table
aadarsh:mishti pani pas kar
mishti: nh dongi π
aadarsh shows her his hand dirty with food
aadarsh:nh degi π
mishti: aa han han deti hn na dara kun rahe ho
everyday passes like this in their masti and fights they were for eachother they did not want any one else
and one day mishti got high fever
dad:mishti dawai pe lo beta
mishti: nhhhh yeh bohat krwi he (she makes face)
aadarsh:(laughs) toh kya methi hogi or tujh bhi kisne kaha tha barish mn bhegne ke lye ab pi chup chap warna injection lage gi
mishti: mama!!!!
Mom:aadarshhhh!!
Then late night mishti was sleeping and aadarsh was puting wet cloth on her forehead continuously
mom comes and chk mishti,s fever
mom: abhi fever kam h tm jake sojao mn hon yahan
aadarsh: nh mom ap jao mn yahan rahunga
mom kiss his forehead and goes
after 2/3 days she gets fyn
and one day after school
mishti: bhai plzzz mjhe b apke sath chalna h ap ki farewell mn
aadarsh: tu kya kregi whn wese b tera class allow nh h
mishti: per mn n permission li h mam se
aadarsh: noo!!!!!
Mishti makes sad face
aadarsh:asha chal!!!!!!
And in function aadarsh get bit injured while coming down of stage and mishti runs towards him
mishti: ap thk ho ?? Tears come in her eyes
teacher: aww mishtiii y r u crying itni bari chot nh and hugs her
other teacher: thats how the relation of bro sis is!!
Aadarsh cupped mishti,s face and wipes her tears i,m fyn come here and hugs her
and mishti take care of him very well………
And then the day come when one day mishti goes downstairs to his dad who was working on laptop
dad: aadarsh bhr h islye bor horahi
mishti: hmmmm……..ap kya kr rahe ho???
Dad: mn aadarsh ke liye kch foregin colleges dekh raha hn kun ki school khatam hogya h ab use clg jana hoga
mishti:(gets sad) mn bhi jaongi
dad:smiles han per 3 years bd kun ki tmhara school abi chal raha h
mishti gets sad and dad notice her
dad: princess ab tm dono bare hogae ho kb tak ek dusre se bandhe raho ge its matter of his future!!!
Mishti: yeah!!
Dad:good u understand my samajhdar bacha! He gives her forehead kiss and goes
mishti was sad and cry whole night
in morning @breakfast table
aadarsh:mishti sandwich pass kar
mishti gives him quitely
aadarsh:tjhe kya hua h
mishti:nothing and gives fake smile
dad:asha aadarsh colleges dekhe jo mn ne select kiya thy
aadarsh: haan dad per mn nh jaonga
mom: per kun
aadarsh: mishti apna school kahtm krlye phr hm sth jaenge tb tak yhn koi clg join krleta hn
mishti becomes happy and run towards aadarsh to hugs him
dad:per………
aadarsh: dad plzzzzzz we will not be able to live without each other
dad:okkkkkk as u both want π
aadarsh and mishti gets happy
mishti: i love u bhaiiiiiii
aadarsh: i love u tooo ( and place some ketchup on mishti,s face and run)
mishti: bhaiiiiiiii……. And run behind him
mom and dad smiles
dad: they are two sides of on coin and cant be seperated
mom: may GOD keep thm like this alwayzzzzz,……..
END!
so yeah thi ek samll story….
Ok guyz as u all want so i,ll write another story after ending love in paradise….ok so do tell me that what u all want…… what should i write
1.another fairytale????
2.sharman ff……
33 Comments
That was such a sweet and cute story. I don’t have a brother or a sister but I can understand a brother sister relationship. Please do write another story like this one. Please please please… ?
BTW, you write well and I honestly loved it. Keep writing Pari! ?β€οΈ
i,m glad u like it alisha!!!! And i,m glad u understand that relation well….nyc to meet u dear π
Same here! Waiting for you to update more stories like these. ??
ammmm u can read my previous fairytale love in paradise its on edkv page do read if u get time π
Yeah sure!
pari it was mesmerizing… my Bhai he is younger to me n wen I tell him dat do whatever you want wen I go to college… he gets sad n asks me is it necessary for u to go? I feel so blessed to have him.. n yes dis was also a very touchy story.. I loved it.. thanks ! β€β€
ohhh i,m super happy that u like it yar π awwwww sho shweet thanks for sharing….. Means thats is the story of every sublings i guess……lots of love
Angel di!! Dis was d best ever story π π u always write something hatke π π π
N yeah di as u wish I knw that u will ri8 smithing amazing as usual π !!
Lots of luv!
ohhhhh maira i,m glad u like it π
Hey angel…d story was so sweet….u can try writing a shraman ff..
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thanku glad u like it π
and thanks for suggestion π i,ll try to
it was so emotional………
i m also gng to cllg n after hrdly a mnth we wll also seperate….. mai bhi kbhi kbhi soch kr k rone lgti hu… evn this tym i m cntrllng my tears fr rolling down…..
wo bhi mere samne sad ho jata h ….. we really love each other ..n nvr live wdout each other……
i cnt wrt more than this wrna sach me tears gir jayenge… bye guys….
sorry sorry i hv no intention to make u cry !!!!!!!
pari r u wrtng that ff wd d name- Someone??????
i,m not wrting any ff except love in paradise….. Which ff u r talking abt
love cnt be explained on edkw page….
pta ni kaun likh rha h wd d name someone
No idea yar
It’s like my own story my brother is like Adarsh fully. Loved it. Please try to write a shraman ff.
glad u like it…. Sure will try to write sharman ff
βΊ??so..sweet story..I liked it..pari..
Keep writing..may its a angle story or shraman ff..
Even a simple story of urs like this..made us day..so keep writing somethingβΊ??
awwww diiii u knw what i love u yr π
okkkl i,ll write somethng π for sure
Awwww such a sweet story ??? it is fab ??
thanks for liking it!!!!
Too good yar….ap itna acha likhty ho plz continue aur chahy fairytale likho chahy shraman ff but likho zaroor……
thanku so much sure i,ll write somthng….thanks dear!!!!
Wow….it was awesome…..i just loved it….
N i would like a fairytale…..
thanksss for liking it π
but hv u read my previous fairytale love in paradise????
Nope dear. I m new on edkv page.
Can u plz give me the links??
http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-paradise-ek-duje-ke-vaste-intro/
here is intro dear
epi 1
http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-paradise-ek-duje-ke-vaste-episode-1/comment-page-1/
epi 2
http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-paradise-ek-duje-ke-vaste-episode-2/
epi 3
http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-paradise-ek-duje-ke-vaste-episode-3/
epi 4
http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-paradise-ek-duje-ke-vaste-episode-4/
epi 5
http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-paradise-2nd-last-episode-ek-duje-ke-vaste/
here are links and welcome to edkv page π
Thx angel pari ??
so cute story or i say cutest…first i thought it’s an os of shraman but it was worth to read it…amazing.brother sister bonding…you.made there bonding so nicely..really liked it
Thankuuuu soo much i,m so glad u like it