Our episode starts with (Still we are in flashback) Abhi
moving her hairs.She sees him and gets shocked and asks
“You??”.He deeply look into her eyes and says “Yes..me..”.
She tries to free her hand but no use.She gives him a pity
puppy look and says “Its paining!!”.He then gets lenient
by loosening his grip but still holding her hand.He pulls her
saying ” Come with me!”.and walks fast.She tries to ask
where but she was pulled forcefully.She follows him running
as its difficult to cope with his walking.She still asking many
questions”Where ???…Where are you going???…What’s the
matter…Already I m late…I have to go!!” …There series of
words made him irritated.He suddenly stops.But she unaware
of his sudden move hits her head on his chest and screams
in a shock!!.Abhi sees her funny reaction while screaming
laughs and pretends to be in anger…He then continues to go..
She stops suddenly and says in a strong voice”See !! Leave
me now!!…Otherwise I…”.Abhi gives her “Are you kidding me??”
look and approaches near her saying”Otherwise what ???”.She
gets afraid and gulps.She then sees the classroom.He
drags her to the classroom and sits in his bench.He
sees her standing and makes her sit with him.She again
starts asking”Why?..”.She stops as he saw her.He says
in a mild and smooth voice “Will you…be…my friend???”.
She just sat with no expression in her face.He continues
saying”I lost my parents..in my childhood and had no
much friends..but…” He stops seeing she stood.She says
“Ju…just a minute…I will be back! Ok!.” and runs out.He
Says ” but…where??”. And thinks”She…is crazier…CRAZIER!!
than ME!!!!”
Abhi waiting for her.He frequently
looks at the door but she didn’t come.He now started
walking to and fro.And sees the watch and says in an
irritated voice”Just 5 minutes??? But I am missing
her…where this…” and wonders he doesn’t know
her name .He says “Shit !!! I don’t know her name??
This is completely ridiculous Abhi…What she did with
you!!”.He hears some footsteps and sees the doorway.
She came very tired,hiding something in her hands
and breathing heavy (I think
she ran all way to reach here).He goes to her and
drags her to sit.He scolds her saying”Are you
out of your mind??!!! See yourself…I came here
to share with you …really important thing in my
life but…what you did???…Just left like that!!”.
She tried to say something “But..” but he interrupts her
by saying”Just Listen To My Words!!!” in very angry
voice.She gets scared ,her eyes were
ready to fill with tears and remains silent with her
eyes opened wide.He now bends towards her…
facing his face to her’s and says “If you can’t
understand me..just say it …What’s the need to…”
He hears her voice “I just wanted to say…” and turns in a shock.
She sees him in shock and
realises that he misunderstood and tries to explain.But he interrupts her and asks in a clarification tone “So!! You don’t wanna
be…” and kicks the bench.She gets afraid with his
harsh behaviour and tries to speak.But he says
“I didn’t ever shared anything with others…but
you..didn’t mean it…and You Don’t Deserve It!!!”.
He then closes her eyes and turns away and says
in a grunt voice”Forget what happened here!!”.
Tears rolling over her cheeks and asks him
“Let…let me speak..”.He roars”Out !!!”.She
starts crying and keeps something on the table
and ran away wiping her tears.He sees her running
and thinks “Why this drama now!!?? Its all my fault
I shouldn’t have done this..” and hits the bench
and shouts in pain.He stops shouting and gets
shocked seeing something on the table.He picks it
and says”Its..Its a Chocolate???? and sees a note
He opens it and reads “I will always give chocolate
to my friends…And no need to worry…I m there
for you,no matter the situation!!! I mean as a
Friend.So??? Friends???”.His face lost his full
reactions and he stood there like a statue.
.He felt that
his heart beats to remind his guilty every sec.His eyes
gets teary eyed and turns.He started walking…then fast…
soon it become rapid.He reaches the bus stop and is
searching her everywhere.He thinks”She must be hurt…
What are you Abhi…just !!!!! “he then sits on a bench
like lost and feels worried to the core…He then hears
sound of footsteps and turns in a great joy.But soon
his face turned tragic…While she ran away when he
shouted as out …she left the place with great
great disappointment ..Her heart raised many more
killing questions.She thinks”I shouldn’t have…gone
with him…all my fault”.She reaches her room and
sees more missed calls from her sisters (Its sisters!!
you have to note this…to understand my future
twists)She takes the phone and calls …but ends
the call soon before its connected and thinks “I
should not talk now…If I do…all will find that I
was cried …”.She switches her mobile off and
goes to sleep.She tries to sleep and closes her
eyes.Suddenly she felt someone holding her hand…
She jumps in a shock and finds none there.Then
she sees her hand having his hands marks which
happened by his strong grip and cries saying…
“Why this is happening to me!??.When I decide
to step ahead…I am falling down back…why ..
What will I do…”. She then makes her voice
strong and says “I didn’t do anything wrong!!
And..What he said…I..I don’t deserve!???…
What is That mean…where is it comes in friendship!!
Friendship is not a deserving thing…Its respecting
them..their feelings…”She feels tears rolling over
her cheeks and wipes it fast…She then closes her
eyes and tries to sleep.Her ears are filled with his
hurting..spiny words stinging whole if her heart.
She comes out of the bed and walks to and fro…
She hears windows making scary sound by the wind.
She goes and closes the window.She then turns to come
but stops suddenly remembering something she
saw now by her own eyes.She rums towards the window
and stares out in a great shock.She rubs her eyes as
she cant believe her own eyes and utters few
words within her heart.”Why he is here???? And
at this hour!!”.She gets nervous and says “What
now!!!”. She then smiles little and says “He
sure need this punishment!! Hurted me…for no
reason???”.She folds her hands and again starts
walking here and there.She starts acting mad
saying”So…I won’t forgive him…and I am
going to sleep”.She goes towards bed and
fell on it.She closes her eyes and sleeps.Abhi
thought to ask forgiveness but thinks to do
something more to prove she is special to him.
He gets an idea and reaches the hostel.He sits
outside parking his car.He waited there for
hours for no reason…because he surely can’t
expects whether she will see him or not.But
still something in his heart pushed him to do
this.He watches all the rooms and suddenly
lights where going off in their rooms.He sees
his watch and says “Already 1.45????”.His
mind taunts him for his madness but his
heart showed only one room had light with
lights on..His heart said “Sure It should be
her…please please…She should be there…
He smiles getting an idea and searching
something in ground.Just then she saw him
from her room and gone closing the window.
He picks a stone and prepares to aim.He
gets angry says “What is this ??? How that
window closed now???” and confused.He
tries to throw but says” No Abhi…if you
throw this …your crime rate will increase!!”.
He puts that stone down and thinks what to do…
She still tries to sleep…
(Hope you like this…I thought to finish it small…when
She sees him outside…
but my craziness urged me to pull the story this much…
Thinking…how to make him apologise)
Abhi reminisces his harsh
words .They made him to feel bad and remembers
her doings from the first day…He recalls her
surprised eyes and gets teary eyed thinking”How
can I do this to her…I must wait here!!!” and
looks the window.Soon the lights gone off his
heart lost its last hope.He bends his head down
and is sat in his car .He rests on the steering
and breathes heavy saying”These days you
didn’t leave me…from now I won’t leave you
??? Her name???? ” and wonders and says
“Fuggi… Yeah!! Its funny…like her!!” and smiles.
In her room she can’t sleep and gets worried
for him as its cold inside and thinks” I should
do something to make him go…”.She sees
the light and switches off it and prays “God!!!
Let him get angry on me again..but..I can’t
see him worrying himself by standing out
like this”.She sees him hiding from Window.
She gets worried and feels “He is worrying
for his guilt…but why I getting this much
pain??!!”.She then decides something and
turns.Here Abhi in car sees the room and
breathes heavy and says “How long you are
going to act?? I know by now you should be
thinking and worrying”.He then sees the time
5.While she sitting out side in cold.She thinks
“Its good he is sitting in his car…but why
is much cold here?? Its just freezing me!!!”.
Abhi’s eyes gets tired and sleeps.While she
thinking”I can’t come before you…because
I can’t see your eyes normally…
And now!!!! full of guiltiness…Even though
its a mistake of yours…I can’t see you worry”.
She sneaks and sees his car.She smiles seeing
him sleeping and gets an idea and runs up to
her room.She stands near his car and does
something.Soon Abhi wakes up and finds
it already late.He sees a note on his front
mirror and gets surprised.He reads it
“It’s ok… No more guiltiness…as you
felt worried by your heart…And its enough
for now..and already you are late to class “.
He gets happy and his eyes leaks some tears
of happiness.He says “Definitely!!! She is
Something!!!!…special…”.He drives fast.
She comes out smiling in contentment and
sneezes.She says “I got cold??? Sure my
Lovely sis will scold me and gives dialogues
like Mother India!!”.she then worries and
switches on her mobile saying”Sure I will
be caught today!!”.Immediately she gets
call from her home and says “Ma…”. Her
ma gets worried and asks “What happened
child?? Why your phone is from night???
I can’t sleep for whole night…” and her
sis gets phone from her ma and scolds her
“What problem dii???”.She gets tensed
and thinks “I should be careful as she is
smart and easily finds ..”. She manages
that her charger damaged and so..Her
sister asks “Any problem di?? and what
you came to say last time…I didn’t able
to ask you…”.She gets nervous and
says “Nothing my Mother India…If I
get into any problem…I will just give
you a call..ok???” and laughs.On other
end she also laughs and says “My plan
is coming well di!!! Soon will dreams
will happen!!”.She gets happy and
congrats her.Her sister says “Then…You should take care
of your cold dii!!!
Do you thought I won’t find your sickness!???”.She
gets tensed and says “Ok my lord..!! Sure I will ” smiles and ends the call by saying its
late.She ends the call and thinks smiling
“Even though she is young..she is strong
enough to fulfil her dreams by her own…
And without anyone’s support…I m proud
of my Mother India!!”.She then gets sad
and thinks “I too want to fulfil my dreams.”
and gets thinking Abhi and distracts
herself saying”It’s late already” and runs.
(For your kind notice…I always used the
word “she” in flashback scenes…and not mentioned
her name …Soon A real suspense will reveal..
Definitely…not in next epi…as I m planning
to think more!! …I m really enjoying
to write this crazily )
She entering
the classroom and sees him.She then slowly walks
pretending not noticing him.She then turns and goes
to sit in her place.Just then she felt her shawl stuck.
She gets shocked and wonders if it is him??.She turns
to see.Abhi with a little smile removes it.And holds
that edge.She then gets shy and pulls it from his but
he holds it tight and smiles a mocking smile.She tries hard
and thinks “What he is doing…this shawl…”.She then
gives him a pity look to leave.He folds his hands and
shows his bench with his eyes.She nods immediately as “No”.
Abhi replied by his ignoring look and keeps the shawl edge.
She thinks”Why he is not listening me…I just cant sit..”.She
then sees his face and hand again and again.She with her
angry face says “Fine!!” and sits in the bench.She sees him
sitting next to her and gets nervous.She pretends
searching something in her bag…and looking some books.
Abhi notices this and smiles.He starts saying something.
She thinks” God!! Why the class not started yet…”.Just then
A lecture came.She gets relieved and thinks “Yes’s…now
he can’t apologise”.After the class all went she is busy
in picking her things and stands to go.She hears a sound
saying”Wait !!” and turns.He in a low tone says “Actually..
I am…” Just then she interrupts and says “I already said
No need to…”and stops her words as she found him
very close to her.She then completes “ap…apologise..”
in a nervous voice.Abhi for a sec sees her eyes and smiles
saying” I…actually…I am not apologizing now as you
already forgave me…”.She asks “then why you told
me to wait??”.Abhi says in a casual tone “I just called
you to have a coffee…with me??”.She gets shy and
says “No…I just…”.He doesn’t let her complete the
sentence.As usual he just dragged her out.She says in
a calm voice “Ok !!!…I m coming…Leave my hand..”.
He just smiles and says “Good!! Fuggi!!”.She gets confused
and asks “What ??”.He says “Fuggi…your name!!”.She gets
angry and says “My name is not Fuggi…Its…”.He stops her
and says “Whatever…is your name…I will call you like this!!!”.
She folds her hands and gives him an angry look.
He then nods his head and asks her showing the way as
“Shall we go?”.She then keeps her lips tight and
just follows him.Soon they reach a coffee shop and sees
all seats are occupied.She sees him going without
noticing and walks fast and holds his hand.She sees him
turned and gets nervous as she held his hands.He asks
“What??”.She was interrupted by the shop manager.
The manager came running and says “Sir??? You(aap)
came ??? Here is the way…”.She leaves his hand
immediately and follows the manager and thinks
“Why the manager is inviting him??? “.The manager
then shows them a private table and takes Abhi
with him.Abhi turns and sees her eyes staring him and signals
her “I will be back”.She sees them talking and thinks
“Seems he is his Friend…But Why
he is calling him sir ??!!” and starts watching around.
She sees him coming and sits straight.He sits saying
“So??” How is the coffee shop???”.She says “Nice “.
He smiles and says “Just tell me…who am I to you???”.
She gets shocked to his sudden question and avoids
answering.He says “See me…”.She hesitantly sees
his face and says “You said…we are friends…”.
He says “Any friends wouldn’t have apologized me..
for my harsh behaviour…but you??? Just forget
everything and forgave me…”.She thinks “Why he
is asking more questions now??? I don’t want to
answer these questions!!”.He then holds her hand
asking “So…who am I to you??”.She gets
embarrassed…anxious…nervous and can’t utter
anything looks him nervously.An eyelock continues…
Background song heer heer …from jab tak he jaan…
She thinks “I just want to say how I am feeling now…
And Who You Are to me…My Crazy …Naughty Prince…”
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And still we are in flashback guys…..
And thank u lovelies…….
Aditi…Kristy….tharu…nasima…maahi….nivethitha….devi….Reshma pradeep….sharaya….shriti…durga….Hema D’Souza…Zari…somiya…sana….anu…ammu…vaishali……and special friend my dearyyy
Sandy….fa pointing the scenes again…and krishnani…fa telling her heart felt thoughts….
And my friends…. Life is really crazy….
And never would be fairy tale…..
It would be very scary than this tragedy in ma story…..
These sad endings are not really painful…..the reality of life is painful….ha ha…I will stop this…or I will be boring….any way ma friends…be happy…..
If u are happy to fall in love…then be ready to bear the pain of falling too!!!!
Love u all……keep ma words in ur mind friends….and keep smiling!!!!
Love u all!!!
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SUPERBBBBBB…………………IM ËAGERLY WAITING FOR THE ANSWER “WHO IS SHE?
Wowe hateera luving ur ff . Wen i see the name a restless rockstar and his secret fan , a smile came frm ma lips . I just luv ur ff
really good….osum. ..I am crazy fan of ur ff
nice
wow..hateera..its really awesome..and wondrful convo btwn abi and pragya…its really nice.update regularly…and xpect many suprized ansr in ur questns for up coming epi….very well done..keep going…
Of all the episodes this is my favorite one??. I liked the way you narrated below scenes
*abhi getting close to her and asking “otherwise??
*her note in the car mirror
*abhi holdding her shawl
I guess u mentioned Pragya as she coz abhi doesn’t know her name from past to present
I was able to imagine each and every scene.
This episose os soo classy and it took one hour to read and imagine. Waiting fa the next one.
Nowadays my day starts with this Restless Rockstar
Loved it as usual
Lovely i enjoy reading
Superb yaar awesome yaar… Just Ur way of describing each n every moment s mind blowing… In short I love Ur ff 4m top to bottom… Keep rocking…
omg dr now who is she ???? I vil b mad at this suspense but trust me it is the most precious suspense of my life which I am enjoying a lot nd ur crazinesss drove me more crazyyyyyyyy than what I am I really feel to b more crazy like this but afsoos mera koi boyfriend nahi hei its kkkkk I vil imagine myself in ur beautiful ff which is drove me crazier than ever dr u r right tht if at all v njoy the love we shld also accept the pain it gives but still v enjoy tht pain at any cost it may b hurting r happy giving theme but UPDATE TODAY ITSELF NXT ONE I AM ADDICTED TO UR CRAZINESD PLS DR UPDATE IT TODAY NLY ND I HOPE U VIL GV HAPPY ENDING
awesome
nice ya..
Superb yaar…………Its Really interesting………. I am soooooo excited to read next one………Plzzzzz post soon…………
Really really awesome hateera………… eagerly waiting for pragya’s ans
hateera ho wat a story…its really awesome ma…
hateera ho wat a story…its really awesome ma…i loved it ma.now i am singal.bt i though i want to see my prince charming in this way.i know my though it crazy,but i wish this will happen in my life..i even want this lovely pains also…
Hateera your a amazing writer I loved this episode a lot
Awesome….waiting for next twist
Mind blowing yaar I just loved it pls reveal the suspense soon eagerly waiting for it… And pls upload it regularly
U know what hateera, you are one of the finest writer, i mean who could be so perfect in planning all thses types of scenes but u omg, i seriously love ur ff, i don’t know what i should further say bcoz everything here is so perfect….. I loved it, i just can’t wait for ur next update… All scenes were so perfect and that concern! I loved itttttt
Nice episode I really like it
Superb episode. U r writing as love movie. Very fantastic love story of youngster’s. Abhigya fits for any kind of story. Amazing.
Hey hateera!
Grt story and wonderful presentation just loved each and every scene. Its really a wonderfull story. Just loved ur ff alot…
U r crazy yaar…???
and ur story is awesome…?