Hi guys
Thank.you for commenting on my ff each comment of yours makes me feel so happy …
I am a bit sad because of the less comments but … it’s okay … Abhi I know I am a bad writer so …should not expect more comments … so it’s okay …
And 1 request Don’t bash Nisha … if Kunj is her brother than Twinkle is also like her sister … (her boy Friends sister )…
And Rohan too … he thinks Twinkle as his friend and she is his first love too … so … thoda sad tho feel kare ga na for her … and he may have some hopes to get …. Twinkle back … but there is a new girl for Rohan who is not so important for the ff..
Okay any ways you can hate Mahi if you want coz I hate her too … bl**dy despo… beachara UV ( well Zain bhi Hot hai guys …. wishing him luck for his new show )
(as promised a small episode …)
Let’s start :
Twinkle’s POV
“Babaji please give me the strength to face all the difficult situations in life ” I prayed while getting ready for going down It had been a week since that incident and Kunj has now started turning normal I hope he tells me where Bhai is …
I quickly combed my hair and left it open I walked towards the kitchen to prepare Tea and breakfast … Bebe needs to have her medicines on time and I have to prepare breakfast before that …. ” today’s menu according to Jasmin bhahai is her Upma and Nisha is her Cornflakes and Rohan is his Sandwich and for the others it’s paratha ” I instructed the servers to quickly start the preparations while I prepared some juices …. I have made it a rule for Bebe and the others to have 1 glass of Karela juice before having breakfast and they have to do as I say …. All the family members love … me … but I hope babaji you won’t snatch this family from me like you snatched the previous one ” Bebe ” I heard Kunj calling her several times so I rushed out to the Living room to see what he wants to say …
“What happened puttar ?” Bebe asked ” Bebe I got the deal ” he said Bebe was very happy for him she hugged him and kisses his forehead . . How I long for such a motherly love …. I have never seen my mother but .. Leela Ma is tho also my mother na… My thoughts were broken when Bebe Been called out to me” Twinkle you go and shop some good clothes with Nisha … and buy something western Because you look beautiful in western and I know you feel comfortable in it ” and she left Shit I did nit even here why I am supposed to buy a dress God I am really a Siyappa queen ” Nisha ” I called out to her ” Twinkle just a minute I will bring my purse we will leave after breakfast ” she said and left with no option left I left of the kitchen and started preparing the breakfast ” Kaka go call Kunj ” I told kaka a servant in the house but he is very nice man … he had always helped me out in this house from the very beginning …
” I want I kiss the hands of the person who made this Paratha ” Kunj said killing his fingers making me feel embarrassed and the others giggle “Devar ji hi we can’t hand her over to you now … vaise big you are taking her in the evening ” Bhabhi said while Kunj smiled ” oh so it means today evening me and Kunj are going out ” I thought and cleared the plates after breakfast . . “Come Twinkle ” Nisha said coming down the stairs on the way in the car ” Nisha where am I going in the evening ?” I asked ….
” Twinkle you did not listen … you and Kunj are going to his clients party ” she said “Ohh ” I said and started looking out of the window …
We entered the mall and I knew where exactly I would get a perfect party western outfit … ” This one ” Nisha said bringing the 13 or 14th dress “Nope ” I said and started walking towards the designer section ” This one ” I exclaimed ringing a perfect black floor length sleeveless and backless gown with a ribbon type buckle on the waist” Perfect ” I heard Nisha di say ” Go try it ” she continued I went to the changing room and was about to open my dress when I saw Kunj in the reflection ” Kunj ” I exclaimed being shocked ” wifey ” he said exclaiming like a kid ” Kunj what…. what are you doing here ” Words trembled out my mouth ”
I was here for meeting my friend when I saw you coming in this shop so I came here to see you ” he said moving close to me “Kunj” I whispered as he locked me between his arms while he placed his fingers in my lips .. I felt a current in my body ” Twinkle be careful you forgot to lock the door ” He said and moved out of the changing room… I don’t know he acts weird at times the time I think I have understood him he shows me a completely different shade of himself I quickly tried the dress out and then moved out of the changing room to show the dress to Nisha di but I saw Kunj there instead of her … “Beautiful” He said making me blush “Twinkle ” Kunj called out to me but it was in Nisha di’ s voice how could he do that I thought while he came close to me and held me …. but his touch was different … he shook me and then I saw Nisha di …. I felt a little embarrassed as I thought it was Kunj but he was no where to be seen …. am I imaging him I thought but then brushed my thoughts we then bought a few more things and left the mall
In the evening :
“Bye” I said to all the family members who were on the door seeing me and Kunj off …..
The journey was a silent one I did not know what to speak …. though it was not the first time me and Kunj were alone but still …. The situation was a bit different …. “the morning incident and in the evening … when I was tying the lase of my dress and I could not Kunj helped me do so. …. I really don’t think he is the Kunj who was here to take revenge from me he seems to be a very nice person ” I thought while it was broken by Kunj who had opened the door for me the valet was parking the car for us while me and Kunj stepped down on the floor everyone were looking at us I was looking breathtaking … bass zyada taarif nahe varna Nazar lag jayege I thought to myself and chuckled … Kunj was looking hot in this black tordexo we looked like a perfect couple the most handsome boy with the most beautiful girl ….. looking at the men who were staring at me Kunj placed his hands on my waist the back of the gown was quite deep and open so his hands touched my skin I did not felt like resisting in fact I was living his possessiveness … I let him place his hand maybe because .. ha may be Because all the girls are staying at him and they should know that he has his girl … but why does it matter to me ? and wait what did I say “His Girl” ?
“Good evening Sir and ma’am ” the manager of the hotel greeted us he showed us a table a …. table of 4 which was occupied by 2 people already …. the man was in white and his wife too “Good evening ” I greeted the two with a smile but then when they turned their face towards me the smile on my face dropped it turned pale the bad dream I thought I was forgetting came right in front of my eyes seeing Mahi and Uv there My eyes meet UV’s he looked angry on tracing where he was looking I could see him looking at Kunj’s hand on my waist … I tried removing Kunj’s hand but he only tightened his grip … “Sir and Ma’am please be seated the party is about to start “ The manger said and left us Having no option we sat there I was between UV and Kunj …. My past my future My friend my devil No one can ever even think of this situation I looked at Mahi to divert my mind she was busy staring UV I wanted to tell Uv about Mahi but then Mahi loves him … though she tuned out to be a bad sister I cant do that right ? “ I thought to myself when the couples were called for a Dance I was pulled to the dance floor By Kunj and seeing us Mahi and Uv too joined us …
The music was instrumental a soft song Kunj placed his hands on my waist and my hands were on his shoulders the distance between us became less I could feel his breath We swayed with the song slowly in our place I then saw UV I could see him string at me and Kunj Mahi was getting annoyed because Uv had many times held her tightly and even made her trip but then she somehow baled her self
The song ended and we went back on the tables Now we were seated In such a way that I was facing Uv and Kunj was facing Mahi ..
The food came the starters had a fruit salad Pineapple Apple Pear Papaya and many other fruits “ Mahi don’t eat this Papaya “ UV told Mahi in a attention gaining voice Why so was the question going on in my mind when Uv answered it “ Mahi I cant take a risk you need to be careful our baby needs to be safe “ He said What Mahi is expecting my brain had many questions I wanted to hug my sister After all I am going to become a Masi But How ? It has hardly been sometime since they got married and she is pregnant I mean how so soon Did Uv really Love me or was it just for my body ? I thought trying hard not to show my expression on my face “Congrats “ I said that was all what I could say
Twinkle’s POV ends …
Kunj’s POV
“Congrats “ I heard Twinkle say “Congrats “ I too said UV all the while is staring at my Twinkle why is he doing this ? I faked a call “Okay Okay we are just coming “ I said and hanged the fake call “Sorry guys we need to leave you carry on “ I said and grabbed Twinkle hand I meet our client and then left the hall “Kunj … all men are the same na “ I heard Twinkle say She looked sad did she love UV ? this thought kept disturbing me “ Why ? “ I asked trying to control my anger “ UV said he wanted his wife to be his best friend and not a bed mate But I think He does not remember this The way He was behaving with Mahi Hurting her during the dance and then suddenly taking care of her or rather say showing me that he is happy with Mahi “ She said feeling betrayed “
Twinkle but Mahi loves him so maybe it’s there mutual decision “ I said trying to hint it to her that UV has moved on so she should also Suddenly the car stopped “Shit” I said checking the car “What happened ?” Twinkle questioned “The engine is jammed “ I said “Oh Then how will we reach home ?” she questioned Pouting and looking at the car “ We can go to our guest house here “ I said “ Okay lets go” she said and turned but she twisted her leg “ Ahh..” she screamed I quickly bent down to her “Twinkle are you fine ?” I asked “Yes I am completely fine I was just shouting for fun “ She said and faked a big smile How silly am I how could she be fine I thought And picked her up “ What “ She said trying to protest” Twinkle How will you walk “ I said and then she stopped protesting
We reached the guest house and the watchman brought the keys for us we entered inside the house it was a small mountain facing isolated 1 room cottage While Twinkle was seeing around I called bebe and told her about the car She asked me to take care of myself and Twinkle too I looked at Twinkle who was busy dancing in the rain It was raining …. unseasonal rain (Guys ahi yeh mat pucho March meh Mumbai meh rain kaise ?…. Hota “Mili” ke story meh hota hai )
I saw Twinkle playing the drops of rain slowly tripping down her back I moved towards her I could not just control myself ……..
TO BE CONTINUED …
Guys is baar I have given a long episode but next time kam comments aayenge tho sacchi meh very small episode dunge
PRECAP: Twinj in the rain 🙂
Guys this part was a bit of fun Some heated scenes seeing your ex happy (UV saw Twinj happy )
And much more Hope you liked it ….
I would show some romance between Twinj but can’t promise more … Because Twinkle is not ready for it ….
Love you all Keep smiling 🙂
25 Comments
It was fabulous, awesome and amazing episode
Hehe bechara uv felt jealous
Eagerly waiting for the next update
Do continue and post soon bye
Hey in previous episode kunj said that they were going for honeymoon
So my question is are they going to honeymoon or it got cancelled
Honeymoon is on but wait for some more time … ?
awsm..epi
Fabulous episode
It was awesome dear
Hey milli its just awesome I really loved it…
Waiting to read teinj rain romance…
Post soon..
Love u
Nice episode more twinj moments
Huhhhh Milli di.., i m angry on you..! Why you do that? Why you said that u are a bad writer?. Yarr how many times I told you that you are my favourite writer..! At least for me stop calling yourself a bad writer..! This is the last time. If again you say that u r a bad writer then surely I m not going to comment on ur writings..! Get that?. Or abhi bhi me gussa hun..! Mujhy maanao..! Or pata hai me kesy maanun gi next episode jaldi dey do wo bhi long one.,! Or baaki ffs bhi post kero..!,
Dekho soch rahi hogi kitni ajeeb hun mein..! Ek to gussa hun fir naraz hun apse. Fir manane ka bhi khud bol rahi hun or fir kesy maanungi ye bhi bata rahi hun..! Huhhh silly me..!
Achaaa leave all that..! Mera gussa or narazgi ek taraf or is ff se pyaar ek taraf..!
???????????? I m speechless..! You made me speechless by this awesome work of yours..! Yarrr Millu di.. I m just in love wid ur writings..! I loved them all….!!!!!!! That was the best part when Kunj placed his hand on twinkle’s waist….!! ??????? Ohh god di…..!!!! I can’t describe in words how much I m in love with this..!!!
Then car conversation was amazing..! Twinkle’s dialogues..! Ufff maar dala di..!
Wohooooo yipppeee next episode twinj in rain..! Ohhh i just can’t wait..! Plsss post soon millu di..!! Plsss plsss its my request..!!!!!!
Nd yaa plssssssss sort out all the misunderstandings soon..! I can’t see Twinkle unhappy..!!!
Love you ????❤❤❤?
Post soon ?
Nd I m naraz..! ????????
Heya…mili di..after a long tym..yeh..well missed ur writing vry much…anyways today’s episode was just amazing nd hehe..uv was feeling jealous i loved that part…aur nxt part i m so excited…
Post soon..
Luv u..
Bye..
Amazing
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Miliiiiii…..
Kya bola tune ki tu bad writer hai,,?? kyu bola yeh haan,,?? toh sun tu bad ho sakti hai or hai bhi,,?? but meri mili or uski writing kabhi bad nai hosakta samjhi,,??….. she write just SPECTACULAR,,??….. n I just love only her ff not urs samjhi,,??….. now bhtt ho gaya tere se bak bak kya ab mai meri mili ki writing ka tariff karlu,,??…..
Well this episode was just OUT STANDING yarr,,????????????????….
The brkfst, Mall, Party, Car n guests house, every scean was just MIND BLOWING,,??????????…..
I just loved it very very very much,,❤❤❤ ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤….. Bechara UV n twinkle… kunj n mahi ki maya jaal mai fash gayi,,????…..
Hope mahi realized her mistake soon n 1 day yuhi loves eachothr truly,,??…..
N preceps omggg,,?? I can’t wait to read next,,??….
Plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz post soon ok,,m waiting Yarr,,???….
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LODS OF LOVE 2 U,,???
Muaaahh,,???
Amazing awesome fabulous
Awesome amazing Superb Mili
But how can i say dat u r bad writer ha ?
Go I’m not talking wid u
But yeh jaan lena
Episode was just amazing lovely superb
Love u
Keep smiling
Hi my white mailer I’ll not talk to you bcz you’re very bad itna chotu sa episode ????????????????????????????????? mujhe next part bhi chahiye chahiye chahiye chahiye. Pata hai kitna miss kiya tumhare ff ko mann kar raha tha ki padhti jaun padhti jaun padhti jaun but you ended it very bad ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
Well it was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb episode. Loved twinj scene nd their jealousy towards each other. Yuhi scene was also good . Loved whole episode too much ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? waiting to see twinj romance ???????????????Pls pls pls pleasssssssssssssssss post next part asap nd other ff too. Pleasssssssssssssssss ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
No delay else I won’t talk to you nd you know I can’t stay quite for long time. So post next asap.
Love you ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
Heyya….it was awesome amazing fantastic….lovedd it…
hey mili..this is awesome episode..loved it..thank you for the long update.. please please update next part soon.. don’t take much time dear.. love you..
That was Awesome…..loved it
Continue asap
Hey it was fab….
Mindblowing….
Luvd it to the core….
Post nxt asap…..
Hey Milli
Sorry for not commenting recently
been busy hope you understand
really enjoyed it
post soon
loads of love
Haye Mili!
The episode was too good☺☺Uv jealous??loved it dear❤❤n han only show Twinj Romance when twinkle is comfortable ☺☺n how dare u to call ur self a bad writer??don’t u know… last time I also said I loved ur writing’s??but no tumhe toh yaad hi nahi??Ainda apne writing ko bura mat bolna??warna I will not talk to u??post next one soon n don’t u dare to again say ur self a bad writer??
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Loads of love ??
Omg finally u r back….I was waiting for your this FF since so long yrr….It was soooooooooo amazing superb epi yrr….I loved it… Please Post next asap…Love you
Ohhhhh god mili lovely episode twinkle feeling good bt don’t know it…..well cute jelousy painful episode baadmein bataungi painful kun…bt dont say urself bad writer agn I wont leave u..if u repeated it agn….
Ohh god mili yaar loveddddddd the episode to the core ummah ????????feeling bad for UV bechara ne kuch nahi kiya and kunj too amazinggg love him excited for next one yaar plzz post soon ?????????
Just now I’m speechless… My mind is blank…. Milluuu I think should find new word to appreciate u… The way ur write so unique… How dare you to say ur not good writer.. Please tell me ur not good writer.. Then in worst writer… Hats off to u… U wrote it so well that I felt like I’m watching in TV… And ur story plot… So interesting and amazing… Really my words may less to explain ur talent… Ur fantastic.. Keep writing… Really may bless u… Keep smiling.. ?????????????????????????????????????