HI GUYS I, AM BACK WITH YET ANOTHER EPISODE BUT BEFORE THAT I WANT YOU ALL TO SUPPORT ME AGAINST THE IMPOSTER WHO HAS BEEN FOOLING PEOPLE (THINKS HE OR SHE IS ) BUT IS ACTUALLY MAKING A FOOL OF HER/HIM SO GUYS THE THING IS THAT MR/MISS IMPOSTER HAS BEEN POSTING THE WORST OF COMMENTS ON MANY FFβS USING OTHERS NAME THIS IS NOT WRITE I HAD TO USE HARSH LANGUAGE IN SAYEEDA DIβS FF AND LOVERS TO IN THE COMMENTS COZ THIS MAN/WOMEN WHOEVER HAS NO RIGHTS TO SPEEK SO SEE I AM A SOFT SPOKEN GIRL BUT WHEN SOMEONE SPEEKS ILL OF MY FRIENDS THEN I MAKE SURE I SHOW THEM THEIR STANDARDS WELL YOUR STANDARDS I THINK YOU DONT EVEN NEED TO BE CALLED A PERSON ATLEAT RESPECT OTHERS FEELINGS YOU DONβT WISH TO CONNECT WITH US ITβS OKAY BUT PLEASE DONT USE THOSE NAMES TO WHOM WE ARE CONNECTED THE SAME THING HAPPENED WITH KUSHAGRA TOO BUT AT LEAST IN HER CASE THE PERSON HAD DROPED A PRIVATE MESSAGE FOR HER THAT SOME WHAT OKAY LIKE EVRY ONE HAS AN OPINION BUT YOU SHOULD HAVE THE COURAGE TO SPEEK UP YOU ARE A COWARD AND WILL ALWAYS REMAIN ONE FOR ME (KUSHAGRA YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER LOVE YOU A LOT π )
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AND FOR THOSE WHO COMMENT ON RELIGION OUR CONSTITUTION GIVES EACH AND EVERYONE OF US THE RIGHT TO CHOOSE A RELIGION AND FOLLOW AND PREACH IT BE IT ISLAM OR HINDUISM OR CHRISTIANITY OR ANY OTHER I, AM A HINDU BUT GUYS WE HAVE ALWAYS HEARD THAT GOD IS ONE IN DIWALI ALI AND IN RAMDAN IT HAS RAM SO IF GOD IS ONE AND YOU BASH A RELIGION AND FELL YOU ARE A STAUNCH FOLLOWER OF YOUR RELIGION THEN I AM SORRY COZ YOU ARE MISTAKEN YOU ARENT HURTING ONES RELIGION BUT GOD WHO IS YOURS TOO
NOW END OF THE TOPIC AND ON A SERIOUS NOTE PLEASE DONT DO THE ABOVE MENTIONED THINGS AND TAKE MY ADVICE
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EPISODE BEGINS :(one more change Mahi will be an introvert type of girl and not a spoilt brat but she will hate Twinkle for being able to attract everyone okay so now enough of my bak bak )
OKAY SO NOW YOU HAVE MEET KUNJ ,TWINKLE ,LUTHRA FAMILY,OLD AGE HOME FAMILY AND BEBE SO NOW ITS TURN FOR TANEJA FAMILY
LOCATION :TANEJA MANSION MAHIβS ROOM
TIME:8 AM
Leela:Mahi puttar wake up dear or else you will be late for the presentation
Mahi:Ma 5 minutes
Dadi:Leela let her sleep or else who will marry a girl who has dark circles
Leela:Ma even Twinkle wakes up early but she has no dark circles
Dadi:But she is casting a black shadow over my Mahi
Leela:maaji its nothing like that she is such a sweet girl and loves Mahi a lot
Dadi:Then why did she snatch Uv from Mahi
Leela:Maaji UV never loved Mahi so there was no point in spoiling her life thank god her life is saved Uv loves Twinkle and will never let anyone take her place Now come down for breakfast Mahi you too
Dadi:Leela there is no point talking to you Sautali bete se sagi se zyada par nahe karna chahiye khyuki apna apna hota hai or paraya paraya (You should not love your adopted child more then your real coz real is real and adopted is adopted)
Leela:Ma(shouts) How many times have I told you Twinkle is my daughter and more then real for me (she leaves)
Dadi:Mahi rani beta wake up ha you need to go to office before Twinkle so that you win the contract and then for the auditions too
Mahi:(wakes up)Ha mere pyari dadi ma
Dadi:Go freshen up (she leaves)
Mahi:(to god) Babaji UV loves Twinkle but I love UV and will get him any how (she goes to freshen up)
LOCATION:TANEJA MANSION DINNING ROOM
UV ENTERS
HUGS LEELA FROM BEHIND
UV:Hey beautiful
Leela:Uv you her beta when did you come
UV:(turns her facing towards himself ) Why baby do I need an invitation to come to my own house
Leela:No beta not at all
Uv:You Know babes I got my lost brother back..
Leela:Thatβs good news
Uv: but his mental stage is not good
Leela:Beta don’t be sad Babaji will make everything fine
UV:Bebes where is Twinkle
Leela:UV you know her na she would be β¦
UV:Just coming back from her old age home
Leela:Na not coming has come
TWINKLE HUGS UV FROM BEHIND WHO IS SITTING ON THE DINNING TABLE
Dadi:Ladki what is this what are you wearing and you are just engaged not married
Twinkle:Dadi but I just hugged him
Dadi:Leave that what kind of clothes are you wearing do well mannered girls were such type of clothes
Twinkle:(hugs dadi)Dadi (dadi shoves her hand)Dadi dresses dont define you you need to have a good heart and nothing else
Dadi:Stop it always ready to fight with me leave it UV beta when did you come?
UV:Long back Leela ma I am hungry please give me food
Twinkle:Bhukad
Dadi:Twinkle is this the way to talk to your husband
UV:Dadi its okay if she does not call me this I don’t feel like eating
Dadi:Par UV beta
MAHI COMES DOWN IN A WHITE PUNJABI DRESS WITH A DUPTA TOO
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Dadi:This is called being sanskari
Uv:Mahi how do you were all this But by the way you are looking good in this dress
Twinkle:Mahi di looks good in all her dresses tell us something we don’t know
Uv:You are looking se*y in the dress (whispers it)
Twinkle:(spits out the water in her mouth and starts coughing )
UV:(concerned)Twinkle are you okay
Twinkle:(gives him death glares)Yes I am
Dadi:Twinkle how many times have I told you not to talk while eating
Mahi:(rubbing Twinkleβs back)Twinkle so now eat quietly
UV:Mahi Twinkle and quite impossible
Twinkle:I can keep quite
UV:not even for a minute
Twinkle:For an hour
UV:bet you wont speak for an hour okay
Twinkle:Done
UV:Leela ma I was thinking after marriage me and Twinkle will shift to London whats say?
Twinkle:No we wont I cant live without my Old age home family and Ma
UV:(smirks)You lost the bet Twinkle
Twinkle:(bites her lips)No its cheating
UV:Everything is fair in Love and war
Twinkle :chuchbhi (Anything)
UV:Ma today we have a party in our house a small get together so can me and Twinkle go for shopping with Bhai
Twinkle:Bhai?
UV:Voh (he tells everyone everything)
Twinkle:Okay so Mai will also come
Mahi:Ha why not ?(fakes a smile)
Twinkle:Ma I am going to office and then the auditions and then shopping so see you at night
Mahi:Ha ma bye
THE PRESENTATION MADE BY TWINKLE IS CHOSEN SO ITS SELECTED FOR THE FINAL PRESENTATION WHICH LEELA WOULD BE GIVING BY THE BOARD OF DIRECTORS OF BOTH LUTHRA AND TANEJA COMPANY UV WAS LOST IN TWINKLEβS EYES HER EXPRESSION AND WAY OF CONNECTING WITH PEOPLE HE LOVED EACH BIT OF IT AFTER THE PRESENTATION THEY WENT FOR THE AUDITIONS FOR THE FACE COVER FOR A MAGAZINE THEY ALSO SELECTED TWINKLE FOR HER PERFECT RADIANT FACE MAHI WAS FEELING LOW SO SHE DECIDED NOT TO GO FOR SHOPPING (I DID NOT EXPLAIN THE PART COZ I PROMISED TWINJ MEET TODAY)
ON CALL WITH UV :
Twinkle:Di please challo na please UV bolna teri best friend ko
UV:Please Mahi chalna apne bahen ke liye na sahe tho apne best friend ke liye
Mahi:(smiles)Okay I am coming
UV:I will come to pick you up stand near XYZ road
Twinkle:Okay
LOCATION XYZ ROAD:
UV:Twinkle come in (opens the door for her)
Twinkle:Mahi di you sit infront i wont talk with UV
UV:(comes out of the car)Why baby doll
Twinkle:Coz you dint like my profile picture
UV:so this is the matter See I liked it
Twinkle:UV dont need to like my picture (she goes to the back seat)
UV:Oh god these girls are so difficult to understand these girls Don’t like her pic gets angry like all her pics gets double angry what should I do ?
Mahi:(laughs)UV you are behaving as if you are a child
UV:Mahi this is love when you will be In love then I would show you now come in
Mahi:(thinks)Love UV I love you and can only love you no one else
IN THE CAR
TWINKLE SITS IN THE CAR WHEN SHE FINDS A MAN SLEEPING NEXT TO HER
Twinkle:Ahhβ¦β¦.
The man:Ahhhβ¦..
Uv:Twinkle bhai what happened
The man:Bhaiya this Aunty she screamed(Hugs Mahi)
Twinkle:Me and Aunty?
UV:Twinkle why did you scream
Twinkle:Coz I saw him,I have never seen him before
UV:Twinkle he is my bhai
Twinkle:Oh (to Kunj)Hello My self Twinkle
UV:I think Twinkle He likes Mahi (showing her the way Mahi and Kunj were playing the game stone paper scissor )
Twinkle:Ha
UV:He has not got this friendly with me also
Twinkle:After all she is my di
TWINKLE SITS INFRONT WITH UV WHILE MAHI SITS WITH KUNJ
Mahi:(POV)Oh god because of this Mad I lost the chance of sitting in front with Uv(POV ends)
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PRECAP:KUNJβS POV AND MAHI IN LUTHRA MANSION
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SORRY FOR TWIRAJ SCENES
42 Comments
Amazing……..!!
Thanks Zakiyah π
Great but is it twinj???
Thank you and its a Twinj ff π
nice ff. i loved it. it is amazing. upload next ff fast
Thanks I will try uploading soon π
Amazing sidmin awesome superbb loved it
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Thanks Sameera π
This is gonna be the best concept ever. Ku j ke itne saare shades dekhne ko mil rhe hai na ff’s mei ki main soch rhi hu kya kahu! Yahan pe wo paagal hai to kahin negative hai…gosh! Anyways, jaldi se agla wala post kro….main keh rhi hu kar do….kr do m telling u…pkka kr rhe ho na? Haan that’s like my pyari Mili di….love ya…tc??
Kunj*
Thank you Laddoo π
amazing episodde w8ing fr twinj 2 at least talk to eo amazing dear post nxt asap
Thanks Baby but you have to wait for Twinj to talk π sorry
It was amazing! Finally Twinj met. Eager to know how these two fall in love and what happens to yuvi. Write soon x
Thanks Monica π
Shruuuutttiiiiii…… Dear u made me ur fan…. Itna accha koi likhta hai kya batao…. Matlab itna accha ke dil krta hai ke episode end hi nai ho….
Superb… Amazing… Awesome… Wonderful…. All these words r very less in front of ur ff….
Loved it….
Nd love u for supporting me…. ???
Sayeeda di you are making me blush you are a better writer meh tho just inspired by you π Thanks π and for supporting I am always there for you π Love you π
Hey mili
Firstly ur every word was correct n agree to it
N the episode was damn good
Loved it to the core??β€
Thanks Shatakshi π
awesome episode..
Thank you π
Superb
Thanks π
Amazing epi shruti
Loved itβ€β€
Thanks Kruti π
Awesome episode…
Very well said about the religion..no one has the right to disrespect some one’s religion…
I don’t know what satisfaction they get by saying nonsense about people…
Thanks Jisha π
It is nice
Its a twin ff only no
Thanks Thanmy its a Twinj ff only that why I was sorry for Twiraj scenes π
Awesome!!!
Thanks π
Thanks Romisha π
Awesome epi..
Thanks Fan π
awesome amazing….it’s twinj ff only naa+??????
Thanks Purinima Twinj ff only thats why I was sorry for Twiraj scenes π
Awesome.. do cont soon βΊ
Thank you will try continuing soon π
Great episode..
Waiting for the next part
Thanks Will try posting soon π
i agree wod ladoo really on ffs so many shades of kunj…n dis ff gonna be so spicy 2 c love story wow…post nxt asap…
Thanks will try posting soon π