………………………..Hi Friends……Here Is Next of this Story……………….
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What’s up asked by vikrant
He kept hands on his shoulders.. Veer to kept hands too other side.. Sanket touched his feets and said bhaiya you came?? Tears was falling from his eyes.. He quickly hugged him and said to sanket Arry chote why are you crying?? Your Kabir bhaiya is here so stop crying you na I not tolerating tears in your eyes..when they broke hug..veer punched Kabir’s stomach and said what bhai we are nothing in front of you both..Kabir.. Toh maar kiun raha hai gadhe seedha hug kar na.. Then they all hugged tightly..
Time skip.
They reached home and doing fun with eachother..kabir was sincere from all of them..that is why all family members mostly liked to kabir and always gives his examples to others but the remains brothers took them in fun…
Day passed
One day at hospital..
A girl was checking the patients… Kabir came in ward to see is everything is alright?? Actually it Kabir’s first day at hospital.. Checked the patient and is about to turned then her sandle’s heel batryal her…she was about falling on the floor just than kabir ran to hold her but it was fortune or unfortunate of them kabir was not able to hold her and girl felt down on him…then they share deep beautifull magical romantic an eyelock…bg song
Tere naina bade qaatil maar hi daalenge
Tere naina bade qaatil maar hi daalenge
Qaatilana.. qaatilana adaa se ek din is dil ko..
Hansayenge, rulayenge maar hi daalenge
Tere naina.. naina, naina!
Tere naina.. naina, naina!
Kaatilana bade naina.. naina!
Tere naina.. naina, naina!
Tere naina.. naina, naina!
Kaatilana bade naina.. naina..
Qaatilana.. kaatilana adaa se ek din is dil ko
Hansayenge, rulayenge maar hi daalenge
Tere naina bade qaatil maar hi daalenge
Shararat naina karte hain
Tadapna dil ko padta hai
O dheere-dheere haule-haule
Silsila bhi badhta hai
Teri yaadon ki garmi se
Mera lamha pighalta hai
Dard ko teri baahon mein
Bada aaraam milta hai
Bada aaraam milta hai
Qaatilana adaaon se ek din is dil ko…
Hansayenge, rulayenge maar hi daalenge
Tere naina bade kaatil maar hi daalenge
Naina… kaatilana… naina re…
Aww this was so beautifull..feeing lovely…this was so beautifull…..saanchi stand up bcoz they interrupts by noise whish was made by nurses, Patients, and ward boys..Kabir was still looking at her..after sometime they leaved.
Kabir was in his cabin, saanchi’s flashbacks were shown i his eyes……
Tere ehsaas ki khushboo
Meri saanson mein behti hai
Tere deedar ki khwaahish
Mujhe din raat rehti hai
Tere aane ki aahat se
Machalte hain, mehakte hain
Bichhadte hain to har lamha
Teri hi raah takte hain
Teri hi raah takte hain
Kaatilana adaaon se ek din is dil ko..
Hansayenge, rulayenge maar hi daalenge
Tere naina bade kaatil, maar hi daalenge
Tere naina.. naina, naina
Tere naina.. naina, naina
Kaatilana bade naina.. naina
he was smiled on that…jsut than veer nad vikrant came to his cabin. They said to him So kabir are you ready??
Kabir puzzled : Ready for what??
look bhai he show him some pics of girl.
Veer: Bhai she was insulted our Vikrant bhai even not insulted but she also slaped him so we want to teach he lesson …in that mission you can help us….kabir was shocked to see her pics..
Precap: Saanchi’s heartbroken……Kabir Lock himself in the room……Kabir Rushed Hospital for searching saanchi…..
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Regards
Anosha(Anee)
14 Comments
its awesome dear
now understood your title meaning to this story
loved it and you are fab writer how can i give suggestions
whatever you write i will read
if i feel any improvement then definetely i will let you know
Nice episode waiting for next one. Post ASAP
Oh so this is the revenge you were telling ??? well Vikrant might’ve done something really bad to deserve a slap from Sanchi!! Can’t wait for the next part Anee ??? and this one is totally awesome ???
Oyeeeeeee????……KABIR KAPOOR FS kaha h????………plz jldi update kr yrr…..nhi toh m katti…….just kidding haha…but usse bhi jldi post kr..aur iss epi k baare m ky bolu….it was fab and blockbuster….update soon
awesome ep yrr…..I just love it…..plz update next ep soon
The girl who insulted vikrant is saanchi…. Nice…. Waiting for the next part
So so awesome and outstanding episode yaar…….I am eagerly waiting for next part……..love u dear
Awesome episode yaar. Pls try to Post soon. ….luv u sweetie ??
Superb.. Amazing.. Impatiently waiting for the next one. Post as soon as possible..
superb ff waiting for next one post asap next one and sorry for not commenting previous ff but you forgot me……………….
love you anee
Ye kya tha anee???.. Ittu sa episode suru kab hua or khatam kab ho gya pata hi nahi chala?tum.isse 3 shots m complete krne wali ho naa to kaise karoge agar tumne isse extend kar diya h to???tab koi baat nahi?.. Bas jaldi se nxt post kar… Btw epi is amaz kanchi eyelock is awsome.. Brother bonding outstanding..post nxt asap. Bye lovv u tc???
yaar Abhi abhi Post kiya hai next final shot Major story ussi main reveal hogi…..aur Luvv you kabir bhi post karra hai…time mile toh padh lena…khushh?????
Khush hun but sach m chahti thi isse extend kar de.. Per koi nahi m article k post hone ka wait kar rahi hun.. Yippee..,??or padhungi kyun nhi jarur tu mana karegi to bhi???..
toh post hogaya hai jaake padh le….Niya.