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It Ends With Us – Chapter 7
Riddhima tossed and turned on the bed, wanting to ignore her constantly ringing phone. She’d been extremely absent-minded throughout her day at work and thought back to their argument innumerable times. She did not know why Vansh hadn’t understood her plight. As the thought unraveled in her mind again, she wondered about the number of times she’d relied on Vansh to clear their misunderstandings.
She sat up on the bed and rested against the headboard, sighing deeply. She stared at the wall to the opposite with the thoughts spiraling in her mind. This relationship – this marriage – was her destination. She couldn’t see a future beyond it – beyond him.
She inhaled a deep breath and looked for her phone under the pillow, her fingers stretching across the cotton bedspread. When she found it moments later, she tapped on the screen and contemplated her decision. Her fingers hovered over the screen, undecided. Her call-log was filled with his missed calls.
She’d blatantly ignored him throughout the day. After he’d called her to ask for a pair of socks and his wallet, she’d switched off her phone. She’d attended all her work calls from the landline in her cabin, not wanting to even see his name flashing on her screen. She knew the idea was severely stupid, but she’d wondered if the two of them needed a break from each other.
She pulled down the notification bar on the screen and stared at the string of messages. He’d texted her to ask about the groceries at home. She mumbled incoherently under her breath and looked at the time on her phone; it was close to midnight. She tapped on his number and waited as it rang, patiently waiting for him to attend her call.
Vansh (in an agitated voice): Hello?
Riddhima: Hi. So, the pair of socks that you were looking for are in the second drawer on your side of the cupboard. The wallet would be in the bottom drawer of the dresser and as for the groceries, the dairy products needed to be re-stocked, but the vegetable and pulses stock should do just as fine for you. If you’ve anything else to ask for, you can ask now so I don’t receive these unnecessary calls at office.
Vansh: If you didn’t have anything important to talk about, then you could’ve called in the morning. I was beginning to fall asleep.
Riddhima: I’m sorry I was concerned for you.
Vansh (smirking sarcastically): Right. You were concerned.
Riddhima fell into silence at that, almost wanting to run away. Despite her continued refusals, she knew switching off her phone had not been the correct decision. When the thought for an apology wavered inside her mind, she heard the rattling over the call and held the phone closer to her ear. She heard him curse under his breath and she frowned, not understanding what had happened.
Riddhima: Is everything…
Vansh (interrupting): If that’s all, we can talk tomorrow. I’ve had enough to do all day.
Riddhima (exhaling a harsh breath): Good night, Vansh.
However, he’d already disconnected the call and she held the phone before herself, staring at the blank screen. She knew she was wrong and she was readying herself to apologize, but he hadn’t been wholly correct either. She still couldn’t forget that he’d talked about their argument with Ishani, yet he’d no regrets over it.
She exhaled a deep breath and lied down against the pillow, the thoughts beginning to cloud her mind over and over again. She didn’t know if the two of them were being stubborn and were allowing their egos to slide in. Did two people in a marriage really need a break from each other?
She did not know, but as she began turning and tossing on the bed with several of their memories filling in her mind, she felt the dampness on her cheeks. She sniffed and berated herself for crying, but the tears rolled down and she began muffling her cries into the pillow.
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“Hello?”
Riddhima held the phone closer to herself as the voice leaked over the phone, the tensed nerves within her slowly relaxing. Her mother’s voice had always calmed her – and even at such a distance, she could almost hear the affection in her voice.
Riddhima: Hello, Ma. Kaisi ho?
Sharmishtha: I’m good. (her voice suddenly filling with happiness) You know I and Raima were just talking about you. Raima was asking if you’d be coming over anytime soon.
Riddhima: Not now, Ma. There are a lot of things going on, so maybe sometime next month. But why doesn’t Raima visit us? In fact, even you should come.
Sharmishtha: Nahi, Beta. Raima was suggesting that too, but her campus placements are going to begin very soon. And how can I leave her alone here?
Riddhima: Why? I was staying alone when I was her age. Plus, if she needs anything, she can always call Papa and ask.
Riddhima inhaled a sharp breath, almost pausing herself. Why was she talking of her father? He was just another acquaintance in her life who had barely committed five years of his living to them. She cleared her throat, trying to ignore the question casually, but she’d already hit one of her mother’s weak spots.
Sharmishtha (with a saddened tone): You know that wouldn’t work, Riddhima. I’ve stopped having expectations from your dad since a long time.
Riddhima: Right, I’m sorry. In fact, men should never be expected from. Perhaps, you should be gratified for the bare minimum they do.
Sharmishtha: Ab aisa bhi nahi hai. I’ve seen men being so different. In fact, Vansh himself would never fit into this category and you know that for the better.
Riddhima (quietly): I know.
She fell into silence, knowing perfectly well that Vansh would never fit into that puzzle. He’d given to this relationship more than she admitted, but she didn’t need someone else to tell her how gentle he had been. She respected him dearly.
Sharmishtha: Is everything okay between the two of you, Riddhima? You don’t sound very happy.
Riddhima: It’s the work-pressure, Ma. You won’t believe the number of times they send me to Ahmedabad. I really can’t wait for this project to end.
Sharmishtha: The two of you do talk when you’re away from each other, right?
Riddhima: Ha, Ma. Just the past few days have been very hectic and I haven’t been getting time, so Vansh has been really considerate and…
Sharmishtha (interrupting): Regardless of how important work may seem, Riddhima; don’t let it get between the two of you. Never allow anyone or anything to dictate how things would happen in your relationship. If there’s anything, just talk and get it out so that it doesn’t lead to a problem later. Okay?
Riddhima felt her throat drying as she tried to suffocate the cries within her. She’d looked up to her mother since she was a kid and she’d always known that her mother would help her despite. She inhaled a deep breath and smiled softly, wanting to tell her mother how much she’d helped her. However, she did not. Because their issues were supposed to remain between them, weren’t they?
Riddhima: Yes, Ma. You don’t worry and listen, I’ve to leave for office now. I’ll talk to you later?
Sharmishtha: Sure. Take care of yourself and Vansh too.
When Riddhima disconnected the call several seconds later, she knew she’d to bridge the increasing gap in their relationship. She recalled the number of times Vansh had tried to tend to her temper and sorted their matters. Perhaps, she could try at times too.
She was getting off the elevator when she unlocked her phone and tapped on his number to text him. His chat had been completely empty since the previous night and she mentally chided herself.
Riddhima (inhaling a deep breath): I miss you.
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When her phone rang several hours later, Riddhima picked it up from the desk and sighed heavily. She’d gotten extremely weary thinking of their fight the entire day whilst working and had continued wondering if the argument had started forming cracks in their marriage. However, as she looked down at the screen, she felt the comfort unravelling within her and a small smile lifted the corners of her lips.
Vansh: I miss you too.
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What do you guys think should (or will) happen next? Also, would you guys like to read a little more about their marital life? Or else this FF will be wrapped up within another chapter or two.
Hi there, this chapter took a little more thinking to get done, but I’m hoping to have another chapter up by this weekend if time and health permits. Anyhow, that’s it for this chapter. Thanks for reading and stay safe everyone!
58 Comments
Awesome episode dear you can extend this ff by adding their marital matters eagerly waiting for next update
thank you! Sure, I’ll try extending the FF and show a little more of their married life.
There was practically no romance, humour or drama. Yet, of all your articles, this one has left the largest impact on me. I have learn’t alot from this ff, that it is now my favourite. Yes, I definately would like to read more of this, any day, any season.
Please have plenty of rest, and care for your health. Get well soon.
Hi Sahada, thanks so much. It’s great to hear that this FF seems to have so much to take-away from, I always aimed for it when I was beginning to write this story. I’m extremely glad you’re liking it, I’ll surely write a little more of their married life.
At first, had you seen the still from Half girlfriend ,where Shraddha,her name Ria in the movie,she is standing beside a board with rules for english in that, whenever I read your English I remember that.
I too have a friend ,her name is too Ria,she Is doing english honours, these facts are making me believe that to have a better english ,I would have to make myself called as ‘Ria’ 😁
Next ,coming to this chapter,I am just speechlessss,this was so detailed, so realistic and above all, it expressed every thought of marital life ,so so so clearly, I think there will be no need for anyone to say sorry ,just a bit of emotional talks, if Riddhima permits her heart to be poured ,and Vansh too,understand her view.
And last
Please (infinity please) dont end this ff.
I haven’t watched Half Girlfriend, hehe. But thank you for your continued appreciation, Disha. It honestly means a lot.
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I’m so glad you liked this chapter because I’d a great time writing it and I’m equally excited to write the next chapter. Hope you like that too. Let’s see though, how things turn out to be. Sometimes, perhaps, an apology is all that’s needed.
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This story will be continued over a few more chapters, hope you like all that’s in store. 🙂
Nice
thank you.
Nice episode
thanks Ishu!
Amaing episode..❤
thanks so much.
Nice
thank you!
Awesome 👌.
Extension de do apne ff ko
thanks, Yashi. Yes, there’ll be a little more about their married life, hope you like it.
Extend please
yes, it’ll be extended a little further. Thanks for reading!
Nice episode. Take care. Marital matters please we want
thanks Akirti! Sure, I’d definitely try writing a little more about their married life; hope you like it.
Nice
thank you.
Nice episode
thanks so much!
Amazing!! 💙
Loved how this time Riddhima is trying to sort things out.
You should extend this ff 💜💜
thank you so much, Cutuuu. Yes, I really wanted to show Riddhima trying to resolve issues between them too and am glad that’s caught your attention.
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Yes, the FF will surely be extended and I hope you like it. 🙂
Amazing.. Please update soon
thanks a lot, Sayani!
Wow amazing 💞😍💞😍💞
Thanks for updates 😊❤️💗
thank you so much.
Super 💞💞😍😍💕
thanks Priyadharshini!
Wonderful 💗💖☺️☺️
thank you, JJ.
Wow fabulous ❤️❤️❤️❤️
thank you so much.
Fantastic episode 😍😍😍😍
thanks Sree!
Nice episode and extend please
thank you, and yes the FF will be extended. 🙂
Awesome episode di!! Post soon please and take care of your health
thanks Parita! I’ll try posting as soon as possible.
More we need more especially written by u!!! Amazing… Ur words, brilliant!!! Amazing.. post soon
thanks so much, Aarushi. That definitely means a lot to me. I’ll post asap.
Superb ❤️❤️
thanks Sumisha! So good to have you back; I guess it’d been a while.
Hey… You know this story had became my addiction I used to wait for it… I mean how beautifully you write about the martial life of two individuals who are completely from different povs… I loved it…. Please post soon…
thanks so much, Niyati. That certainly means a lot. I try to be as realistic as possible and really appreciate all the love and support that’s been extended forth.
Dear Riaa,
I guess I misinterpreted the earlier episode and thanks for clarifying the same.
The intensity in Vansh-Riddhima relationship portrayed by you is truly mind-blowing and exceptional, I am not really a movie buff but I have not seen many content of this nature on TV or other platforms.
The topic of this FF centres on these 2 characters only, you did not really use any supporting cast, except in certain instances, but the way you elaborate the entire story and the creativity level in developing each episode is totally outstanding. I mean this is the 7th chapter and in each of the chapters, you have developed different issues/topics/discussions between these 2 persons and it leaves one to ponder for a while as there are always some take-aways.
I can understand Riddhima but I tend to side Vansh not because of IMM2 or his good looks but guess I could relate to him more in this story. All it takes to make him melt is a simple phrase of “I Love You” from Riddhima. I dont think he is expecting any form of affirmation but perhaps he just needed to be loved and understood and a shoulder to lean on, as perhaps he was “less loved” in his younger days.
Thank you for a beautiful episode.
Hi Jayanthi, thank you so much! I guess this is a dynamic I don’t see a lot of stuff about, especially without the existence of unnecessary romance and drama, which is why it makes me want to write something as simple (and complex at the same time) as this. This FF is very close to my heart, if I do say so myself.
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I’m honestly glad that you can takeaway something from these chapters because to me, a story has always meant just that. If it’s a good read, it must leave me pondering and at the end, even if it’s a line, I should have something to take-away.
I’ve no idea how old your are, but sometimes I do wonder if these stories tend to kind-of be targeted only toward young adults because I’m not sure how much of this is relatable for teenagers.
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What I really love about your insights are how raw they are. While mostly everyone feels for Riddhima – because of being a girl mainly – you’ve always understood Vansh’s perspective without a lot being there in the open. Yes, Vansh melts very easily and he really just wants to be loved, but there’s so much more depth to his character that I do want to delve into. Hence, once this topic is resolved, I’ve plans to delve into some of his insecurities/ grieves too.
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Thank you for being so kind, I’m doing very well now. 🙂
Dear Riaa,
Do take care of yourself first, take lots of rest and FFs can wait. I hope you will recover soon.
Riaa, I really loved this chapter! I also loved the conversation that Riddhima had with her mother. Often mothers are like that, in spite of not revealing anything in front of them, they are still able to guess that something is amiss.
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And the ending part was my favourite where she messages him “I miss you”, and he replies back “I miss you too”. I can’t stop gushing over it. So natural yet so romantic and deep! You proved that to write romance, you don’t need to have kisses, hugs or over the top cheesy lines. These subtle, little things are more than enough.
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I don’t know what you’ve planned, but I’d definitely like to read more about their marital life.
Thank you so much, Nia! I’ve always wanted to write a chapter on Riddhima and Sharmishtha’s conversation, but haven’t really gotten the scope. Just like Vansh’s and Ishani’s too – maybe it can happen sometime in the future if the plot permits. I’m glad you liked it, though!
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I’ve been so bad at writing romance lately that I cannot think of scenes with kisses, hugs and cheesy lines lol. Although, I do like it better this way. It feels way too natural to me, but also shows how deep a relationship truly is.
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There’d be a few more chapters to the story and I hope you like it because I’m so excited to write about a few of the matters I’ve in my mind! 🙂
All this while my favourite ongoing ff was “Becoming Mrs.Raisinghania” but recently it got replaced bt “It Ends With Us” 💞💞 Everything written seems so natural that I cannot explain in words. As this my favourite, I surely don’t want to end so soon😌😌😌 I want you to continue this ff as long as possible 🙂🙂
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In the beginning of the episode, I loved how you described Riddhima’s restlessness post their quarrel. Their care and love for each other has also been depicted after their quarrel.
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I have noticed one thing. The relation between mother-daughter has been reflected in your other ffs. I truly liked how you give due importance to other relations also. For me, the conversation of Sharmistha and Riddhima was the highlight of the day.
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And the last scene where a smile crept down Riddhima’s face after reading Vansh’s text was truly amazing ❤️❤️
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P.S: Amar jene khub bhalo je tumi Bengali 🥰🥰 আমার সবচেয়ে পপছন্দের লেখক বাঙালি। আমার আরও ভালো লাগলো। আমিও বাঙালি। অনেক শুভেচ্ছা রইলো তোমার জন্য ❤️❤️ Everytime I see a Bengali, I am become over excited 😅😁
Sorry my Bengali Keyboard malfunctioned 😅 It will be :আমার সবচেয়ে পছন্দের লেখক বাঙালি জেনে আমার আরও ভালো লাগলো। আমিও বাঙালি। অনেক শুভেচ্ছা রইলো তোমার জন্য ❤️❤️
Hi TSA, thank you so so much! This FF has been the closest to my heart since I began and I’m so glad you’re liking it equally. There are going to be a few more chapters to this story. However, it won’t be continued over a long expanse of time because I want to ensure that the story doesn’t lose its charm!
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I’m so glad the conversation of Riddhima and Sharmishtha has been perceived so well because I love writing these conversations even though they’re a tad-bit difficult for me to write. I’ll see if I can include something alike from Vansh’s side so we can see some of his relations too.
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TSA, that’s very sweet. Thank you so much, tomar jonneo onek bhalobasha roilo. 🙂
Enjoyed the episode n yeah add it to n eagerly waiting for next
thank you so much. The FF will be extended by a few more episodes, thanks for showing interest.