Hello peeepies aagyi me..
I read an os today and got this idea..ok don’t think i copied..the story is completely mine it’s just i liked that plot!
Sundar cover banaya tha pr TU upload ni krne dera😏
This os start from press conference but with some changes..
Here kabir and ahana are not together..vansh brought her for attacking riddhima..
Everyone is present there expect kabir
Let’s start
Scene 1
“Meet my wife Mrs.Ahana vansh raisinghania” announced vansh shattering all the hopes of an innocent soul whom he used to call his Sweetheart once
“Va..vansh..i am your wife..your riddhima..” she tried to explain but words strucked in the middle of her throat
“I don’t know you mam” he said and she lost the last sole hope she had somewhere in her heart..
“You..cheap characterless woman!! Get the hell out of here” ishani spitted the venom pushing riddhima to the door..
She was about to kiss the floor but a pair of arm caught her in the nick of time..
Her eyes glistened thinking it to be her not so beloved husband but her leftover hope also shattered seeing kabir holding her securely in his embrace
“Kabir” she whispered out of the shock.. afterall he is her Tormenter..he is the sole reason because of whom she is suffering here ..how can she expect him to save her when her own husband abandoned her
Vansh’s jaws clench seeing his wife in his enemy’s arms..
“Leave her” he barked making everyone flich at their spot expect his beloved enemy
“And may i know who the hell are u to stop me ” kabir asked politely holding riddhima’s hand securely
” She is Mrs.raisinghania” vansh said with blood shot eyes!!
“Yes!! Absolutely she is Mrs.raisinghania..
Mrs.Riddhima kabir raisinghania” kabir said giving 440 volt shock to everyone
“Kabirrrrr” vansh shouted clenching his fist in anger..
No matter how angry he is..but his manly ego is not allowing him to see his own wife with someone else
“Easy man!! You have your own wife” kabir chuckled pointing towards ahana..
Everyone was spitting whatever they wanted but one soul was all silent as if she doesn’t exist even..
Making up a note in her mind that she is not gonna going back to her ungreatful husband again she looked at kabir with a questioning gaze..
“Let’s go love” kabir whisperd in her ears blinking his eyes ..
All she could see was guilt and some foreign emotions in his tormentors ‘s eyes..
“She is not going” barked vansh trying to grab her hand but only to be jerked by her..
“I don’t want to stay in this zoo” she said and left the mansion holding his tormentors ‘s hand..
Don’t know what was gotten into her but she couldn’t resist that guilty eyes of his tormentor
“Why” this is all she could whisperd sitting on the bed as kabir took her to his home
“I ..am..so..sorry riddhima” cried kabir keeping his head on her lap sitting on floor..
Her hands automatically started stroking his hairs to calm him down..
“Kabir what happened” she asked N number of time but he kept murmuring sorry crying profusely
Whatever he did with her but she can’t deny she loved him once..and love is not something foregatable in a nick of time..orjust because you got someone else
Although she could have forget him if her husband was worth for her love but all he could give her was pain and agony
“She used me..riddhu!! She f**king used me” cried kabir cluthching her duppatta more tightly
“Kab.. kabir.. listen to me..” she said cupping his face..
“The woman i considered my mom killed my dad and Vansh’s mom just to marry Ajay raisinghania..
She f**king used me for her motives.. she never loved me😭” he cried pouring his heart out..
Her heart cried seeing him like this.. afterall she knows how it feels when someone uses you for their own benefit
“Karma is a boomerang riddhu..once i used you and today i got to know i was used by my own mom” he said digging his head in her lap..
“Enough!! I want to end this game of using ..
We are not gonna be a puppet more..
Just forget whatever happened in this few months!!
Their is No vansh and no Anupriya exist in our life .
We are not gonna suffer because of others” she declared holding his hand..
——
Few months later..
How life changes just by your one decision..
It could be different if she would have choosed to live in that hell .
But she chose to be a free bird again..that care free riddhima again with her PT teacher..
“I am loving this life kabir” she said chewing the corn again on street..
“Me too” said kabir dreamily looking at her which went unnoticed by her..
“It’s 11 pm and gonna rain soon.. let’s move” riddhima said and face plamed herself as it started pouring heavely
This late night walks and rains.. always soothes a person!! Only if they have someone to hold their hand..
“Kabir” a loud shriek escaped from her mouth as soon as he pulled her on his chest
The dripping water from her hairs to lips aroused so many desires in them..
The environment heated up more as two souls kept staring at each other in moon light peeping through the cloud
Tucking her hair strands behind her ear he drawn some patters on her bare waist..
The dimples on his cheeks were fluttering butterflies in her stomach
And why won’t they ..she used to admire this man once..
It could be so different if he wouldn’t have become her Tormenter
“Chale” she said adjusting her dress slightly
His gaze lowered automatically as her dress got transparent due to the water..
She won’t believe this man could change this much!!
He gave her everything in this months without expecting anything from her..
They don’t say they love each other..but the action speaks louder than the words..
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“We missed u both so much ” the children shouted happily seeing the couple back in orphanage
“Still u both look made for each other” the warden complimented looking at kabir..
A small blush crept on their cheeks remenicing the past moments where they used to roam in the city holding hands
“Let’s go ” riddhima said pulling him by his arm..
“I missed this place so much riddhu” kabir said throwing his hands in air looking towards the same room where they used to spend their time..
“See this wall..we used to have our pictures here” said riddhima with glassy eyes..
Several emotions flooded in them seeing the place..
Just a one wrong decision by kabir and their life got doomed
But luckily he had some brain leftb
in him that he supported her when she needed someone at her side and why can’t he be the one!
Afterall it was his first right on her..on her love.. on her care..
“Can i hug u like previously”asked kabir with a hopeful eyes..
How can she deny him .. afterall because of him only her life is back on track again..
If
it was he who ruined her then it is him only who Intacted her..
“Don’t leave me this time plz” cried riddhima in his embrace
“Never” he murmured planting a soft kiss on her crown..
—-
” Vansh!! She whispered as soon as she bumped into him on the road..
Same as she bumped with his car few months ago..
But this time destiny won’t repeat itself..
She won’t allow him to ruin her again..
She knows she can live without him ..that too happily
“Riddhu..your icecream…” Kabir said coming from back but stopped in his track seeing the encounter in front of him ..
“Riddhima..i am sorry..”, vansh tried to justify but cutted of by her
“Who are you SIR” she said with no emotion on her face
He felt how bad she must have felt when he called her mam
“You are my wife damn it” he shouted holding her arm..
” Do u have any proof” asked riddhima with a determined face..
And this time his face fell remembering it was he who destroyed every single proof which could prove that she is his wife..
” Vansh baby!!” Exclaimed ahana coming from somewhere
“Kabir!!” Shouted riddhima suddenly pushing him slightly in order to save him from a vehicle
Both vansh and kabir fell on the road due to the sudden action
“Kabir..you ok..u didn’t get hurt na” asked riddhima scrutinizing his body finding a wound if any
Ahana kept dusting her branded dress without noticing his fake husband on road..
He got up himself realizing their is no one who will care for him now..as his Sweetheart is gone now..
“Stay happy always” he said and walked out wishing riddhima and kabir a better life atleast not like his..
Not everyone get second chance to repent..
He used to consider his enemy unlucky but actually he is the one who is unlucky.. atleast his dear enemy got the chance to repent his sins..
——
Kabir’s breath hitched seeing the epitome of beauty in front of him decked up in a white saree..
“Riddhima” he whispered slowly admiring the lady in front of him..
Sitting on her knees she kneeled down again holding a rose in her hand in front of him..
“I tried so hard to control my growing feelings for you..but i fell for my tormentor again..
Will you be mine again…but this time without any price ” she said with tears in her eyes..
Only she knows how much courage she had to gather for confessing this..
Vansh’s memories kept haunting her in dreams but atleast the love bloosemed again in her heart for the very same person she fell for before
“But i will torment you again in such a way that you will kept chanting my name day and night” said kabir winking at her..
She blushed getting the another meaning of his cryptic line..
“My knees are paining” she whinned like a kid..
“You won’t be able to walk for a week now ” kabir said and picked her up in his arms..
Only he knows how much he waited for this moment
Sometimes we do mistakes but when life gives you another chance you feel the same feeling blooming again..
“Kabir…” She moaned beneath him who is torturing her lips from past 5 minutes
Sliding his hand in her waist he planted numerous kisses on her body just to ensure himself that she is his now and he is not gonna leave her again..
“Aaah.. kabir slow” she moaned as he started tormenting her twins..
They never get intimated in the relationship of 2 years before but this time he won’t let anything unturned for claiming her his .
If he is Tormenter then let him be..he will gonna torment her by his love this time..
“I love you..” he whispered placing a soft kiss on her forehead
“I love u too” she said wrapping her arms around him..
May be she was never comfortable with him before because it was not love from his side..but all she can see in his eyes now is love and only love..
Even vansh was her Tormenter but how could she forgive the person who tried to take her life ..how can she forgive a person who snatched her identity
She knows kabir played with her emotions but atleast he regrets for that ..even vansh does but it’s too late now..
May be her love was meant for kabir only.. vansh was just a mere source to realise kabir his true feelings
And with this..she fell for her Tormenter again!!
THE ENd!!
Riansh fans shaant ho jao!! No bashing for my kabbu ok!!
Done done dana done ✅
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34 Comments
Awesome os girl!! But pls post on something Riansh too…….I like Ridhbir but i LOVE Riansh
It’s different….nice
No offense par yaar sabhi mere riansh ko ek dusre se dur karne me lage pade hain aur Vansh ko villan bana rahe hai pehle vora disha and aur and ab app bhi this hurts 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭
If you are talking abt me then next time i will bring them together 😅
Nooo diii zaroori nhi hain ki aapko unhe vaapis laana hi pade….true love true love hota hain chahe kisi ke bhi bich mein ho…aur aap sabhi ko apne hisaab se stories likhne ka hak hain …kyunki yaahan ham sirf RIANSH stories nhi stories padhne aate hain….hm riansh se zaroor pyaar karte hain par aap logoki stories se bhi utna hi…isliye aap logoko ke jaise apni stories likhni hain waise hi likhiye ga…no offense to anyone😘😘
Heyyy Aisha
it was fabulous
I loved it
Amazing di 💕☺️
Awesome 👍🏻 something for riansh pls ❤️
Superb OS di. Loved it. Although I love Riansh but It’s good that Kabir soon realized his mistakes and Ridhbir started loving each other again.
It’s amazing 😍
But no offense 😝 coz I love Riansh more ❤️
U are fabulous di .
Wow
U wrote so beautifully that more than riansh I like Kabir and Ridhima but only in this os
Because Riansh is forever in my heart
But with your amazing writing skills you make me love this couple more than before
Masterpiece
What the hell hate hate hate it
Thnk god atleast you spared your time for reading my stuff..a heart warming thnk u to u dear❤️
Age bura laga aur “what the hell” likha toh agr kabhie kuch accha lage toh pls ” what the heaven” likh dena kyunki jab burayi kar sakte ho toh appreciate bhi karhi dena….I m not saying that u can’t keep ur opinions…u r totally free to do that…but atleast u can do it in a positive way ki saamne waale ko bura na lage…no offense to u…
*agr
Haha .thnk u dear for giving me a pick up line .i am gonna use this in my story..what the heaven!!..
Wese mujhe bura nhi lga..😌..thode Hatters milte h to celebrity wala feel ata h🙈
Wowww…. negativity ko bhi positively lena koi aapse sikhe aisha….I loved ur optimism….aapne bilkul shi kaahan…Aur haan zaroor use karna wo pickup line apne story mein aur mujhe mention bhi karna haan main bhi famous ban jaungi….aapke itne readers jo hain…lots of 😘😘
❤️
This was amazing 💫
To be honest I started watching the show for kabir and Riddhima 😌☘
Riamsh has another charm but Ridbir has another.
And coming to ur writing it has another charm 😌💫
Riansh mere favourite hai par nice one I love it
Awesomeee Aisha…loved it…it was surely different…but a great concept….lots of love
Amazing 😁😁 ridhbir theek hai par riansh is best 🥰😍😘
Rianshians hai , dil mein riansh hi rahega , yeh toh sirf ek one shot hai , fiction entertainment keliye , story bindaas hai , writing jakaas hai , ridhbir sirf iss shot kein hai , par dil mein , uski dhadkan mein ek naam hi likhhaayegi , rrahel ….
You know what di , I am praying everyday to get rrahel married in real life 😜😜🤣🤣 , hope it becomes true *puppy eyes*
Fantastic ❤❤❤you nailed it dii ….and sorry for late comment
Awesome dear ❤️🥰 but don’t feel bad because I love riansh more😊
Well.. thoda dukh hua that it became ridhbir.. par koi na… Jo hota hai acche ke liye hi hota hai and it was superb as usual.. amazing Di..
U recognised some changes?!!
Yes . Ur writing skill is changed thodi in a positive way which is just fabulous!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Incredible ✨
Dii meri insta par friend request too accept kar lu plz🥺
Kis nam se h dear
Nice one.❤
Awesome OS Aishu RidhBir goals I liked it
Awesome dear ❤😘
Fabulous 💖
Amazing di!
Ridhbir ho ya Riansh, any but your writing is always amazing!❤