This os was requested by dear aditi(a fan of Riansh username). So here we go! If you want me to write any os of your choice do comment!
One note from 1234aayu(writer of born to be united and souls forever)- she will not be able to post today because her mind is not in the frame to write! So let’s start:
It starts from ishani’s birthday party:(storyline is same before this just Riddhima is not pregnant)
All family members were enjoying and then a dart was aimed at riansh. It hitted Riddhima and she fainted. All rushed to her. Vansh was shocked. Angre called the doctor. Doctor came and went in to check her. Vansh and sia were waiting outside the room and were crying heavily. Angre were consoling her. Dadi was in the temple praying for Riddhima.Doctor came out.
Doctor: mr Raisinghania her life is in danger.
Vansh collapsed on the floor.
Vansh: Riddhima (crying)
Angre: boss nothing will happen to bhabhi..
Vansh looked at Riddhima from outside. His heart was peircing seeing her in this condition attached to so many machines. After a while doctor came out.
Doctor: sorry Mr. Raisinghania but she is in coma.
Vansh collapses. He starts crying bitterly. Sia also cries. Angre was trying to console both of them but was crying himself. Dadi came from temple and got to know about it. She also started crying.
At ishangre’s room:
Angre comes to his room and sees Ishani dancing.
Angre: are you mad Ishani! You are dancing here and bhabhi is in coma.
Ishani: so what can I do!! She just spoiled my birthday!
Angre: shut up Ishani!!you don’t have humanity in yourself!
He leaves. Some days passes. Riddhima didn’t wake up. Vansh was in trauma. He had caged himself in his room. He used to eat very less and didn’t talk to anybody.(here you wanted trauma aditi so I added it but of vansh not Riddhima because I am writing what is coming to my mind.)
Dadi and sia used to come to his room but he didn’t talk to them. He did not even open his door. They just used to pass the food to him.
In vansh’s room:
He was sitting there like a lifeless body chanting Riddhima’s name. His face turned pale. His eyes were dried. There were marks of tears on his face. Anyone can say that he had been crying from many days. He was in his room since Riddhima went into coma. He didn’t look at his business. Angre used to manage it. He was in serious trauma. He kept on looking at Riddhima’s picture and say’ please come back sweetheart’. After few days he decided to go to Riddhima. He came out of the room and went to see Riddhima. He sat besides her.
Vansh: sweetheart please wake up(crying). I can’t live without you I just can’t (crying).
He then left. Now everyday for once he came to meet Riddhima and say ” sweetheart wake up. I can’t live without you. I will kill myself if you don’t wake up”.
He had turned weak. He was not the old VR. He was just Riddhima’s husband. He used to not eat at times because he used to think about Riddhima. One day he went to Riddhima with a matchstick.
Vansh: Sweetheart wake up or else I will burn myself.
He waited.
Vansh: fine..
He was about to burn the matchstick but Riddhima moved her fingers and hand. Vansh threw the matchstick. He was having happy tears in his eyes. He hugged her.
Vansh: sweetheart I know you will not leave me!(happy tears)
He called the doctor. After 2 days Riddhima was back to normal. He made vansh the old ‘VR’. She helped him come out of the trauma. Vansh was now back to his original one. Things get solved and they led a happy life ahead.
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I know it was a very very short one but this was a different kind of story so I could write this much only π! Hope you like itπ!
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Amazing episode di
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loved it post soon
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nice man!!!!!!
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Amazing
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nice one man!!!!!!
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Awesome babe π
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Nice.
Write a os on childhood love story of riansh then bade hokar ek stranger ki tarah milna fir marriage.
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Wow nice idea akriti dear!! Will write it for sureβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ!
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Thank god no sad endingππππit is amazing yr. Their love for each other is β€β€ππ so much. Awesome
I have to take tips from aayu to make a sad ending πππ€£π€£π! Thankyou π₯°β€οΈπ!
ππso am I expert in doing sad endings…
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Amazing π
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Nice episode Gauri ji….and thank you very much for keeping my request….lots of love and keep writing….I am also thinking to start writing can you give me some tipsπ§
Thankyou β€οΈπ₯°ππ! I am very happy that you liked it β€οΈβ€οΈ! Sure why not start writing on any topic which is in your mindππ!
A really nice onee! Loved itβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Ati Sundar…ππ
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Outstanding episode.
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Awesome…π€
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Nice one…
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Nice update
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Awesome…………Will be looking forward for further
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Please a os on socity what is socity I can not understand hm girls ko hmesha society kya kahegi ye kyu sunn parta h kyu hmre parents hme night out allow nhi krte woh maat kro aise mat kro aise maat baitho aise baat maat kro aise kapde mt pehna kro aise maat chlo … Ye mt kro aise maat kro ye kb tk chlta rahega hm girls k sath kyu itna difference h girls or boya mein i cannot understand… I am frustratedππ«π« all of these thing please make os on this I request you please
Yes bitter truth of our society πΆπΆπ! And vaishnaviaddanki di has started a ff on it !! But I will surely complete your wish and I write a os on itπ
Can you made my friend gauri
loved it gauri di.
DI I WANT AN OS ON VIHAAN TRACK, IF YOU CAN WRITE THEN PLEASE WRITE.
Thankyou π₯°β€οΈπ! I will surely fullfill your wish but can you tell me do you want the same storyline of the show till Vihaan came and then to add my story or something else?
Actually I want a simple story where Vihaan ( vansh ) is taunting Riddhima as in immj2 but gradually he will realize his mistake Ridhhima will tell him her truth. Vansh will repent his mistake. You can also add you story.
Oh ok got it will post it very soonβ€οΈπ
Beautiful episode ππ» lovee
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Yes you can add your story.
Nice os.
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Hi sidhi didi (I got to know your name from comments π ) I have read lot of stories from your site and itβs really really fantastic , no word for your skills . I would like to give a suggestion to you that please right a os on βdangerous obsessionβ on Riansh , if possible so please . Thank you loving your Os
First of all dear I am not siddhi…siddhi is the writer of do jism ek jaan ffπππ! I am gauriπππ! Thankyou β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ! Glad that you like my stories β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ₯°! And yes I will surely post an os on that!β€οΈ
Amazing OS dear
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Wow so emotional.. vansh can go to any extent.. he did not eat π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίso pure love .. uff kisi ki nzr na lge … Amazing os.. post being scared from vansh, it’s a arranged marriage and vansh does talk with Riddhima, infact he love her. But she is scared.. later she becomes fine.. pls if u would, do tell me( and yes no ji in itπ€£π€£π€£ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»)
Yea wanted to show something like thisππ! Thankyou π₯°β€οΈπ! Oh ok nice idea will post itβ€οΈππ but please wait as I have got many wishes todayβ€οΈ! Yes yes no ji it sounds weirdπππ
Amazing
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Amazing one!! It was different, first time seeing Vansh in trauma.
Post another one soon, you’ve got great suggestions while i’m still thinking of oneπππ€
Thankyou π₯°β€οΈπ! Yes got many I was also shocked. I am posting daily and they are of readers wish onlyπππ!