Hello Everyone…
This OS was requested byΒ @Aditi_A fan of Riansh..
RIDDHIMA’S TRUAMA
This one was quite difficult for me as in this I have to turn my mind to write emotional and I have not written any emotional stuff for a week..
So, Yay let’s start, Aditi hope you are reading this..do tell me,Β It was up to your expectationΒ or not..
So, This OS begins when Vansh asked Riddhima to kill Kabir to prove her love for him..
POOLSIDE…
Vansh:-Riddhima if you love me Kill Kabir, you have to prove your love..
Listening to this Riddhima was having a blank expression..
all the moments she shared with Kabir were flashing..Then all the things that happened in this past 1 year(shayad)
Vansh’s back was facing Riddhima..
Riddhima:-Va…n…s..h.. h.o..w…c..a..n.i..ki..l.l.
saying this she fainted..and her head collided with the deck of the pool..blood was flowing..
when Vansh did not get a further response he turned back..and saw riddhima lying and blood was all over..
Vansh:-Riddhima!!
he went towards her and patted her cheeks..
Vansh:-Ridhima open your eyes…
he picked her in his arms and rushed to their room…
Vansh:-Angre!! , Angre!!
Angre:-Yes boss
Vansh:-Call the Doctor fast damn it…
Dadi with Aryan, Ishani, and Chachi entered(or kiski ko bolana ha toh bola lo…)
(yes how can I forget Kabir and ahana..)
Dadi:-Vansh ye Kaise Hua, Riddhima meri Bachi(crying)
(I remember Shakuni mamma saying mere Bache mere Bache..)
Vansh:-Dadi relax Riddhima ko kuch nahi hoga..
Chachi dadi ko room mein le jaiye..
Dadi:- No I will pray for my daughter, chanchal come with me to temple..(I really missed this dadi)
Vansh:- Angre!! Where the hell doctor is?
Aryan:- Relax Vansh bhai..let me see..(Aryan is good here..I don’t want and don’t like Arayn as a negetive role..)
Aryan left…
Kabir (physco lover mode on without realising he is engaged);- Vansh you did this na??…you harm my Riddhima..you tried to kill her..I will not leave you..
Ahana:- Kabir!! My Riddhima??
Vansh:- Kabir pls get out with your so called finance..or else..I will not spare you..
Kabir:- you!!! I willΒ see u(Granny khel raha h kya??)
Aryan entered with doctor..
(Don’t worry I have not forget about Angre. He will be there..)
Doctor:- pls move out… I have to check her..
Vansh:- Doctor I want my Riddhima back fit and fine…usko kuch nahi hona chahiye!!
Aryan:- bhai lets go..
Outside room..
Vansh’s pov..
You played with my feelings..but I still love u, I can’t see you like this..my heart is paining..pls get up..
Doctor came..
Doctor:- Mr.Vansh, your wife is in a truama ,she got a panicked attack..Is her mind disturbed?
She was in depression almost about 4 weeks ,it seems from her condition and now her condition is worst…she is in truama,try to keep her happy and no tension,she might be get affected and then we can’t do anything..she may get get heart attack..so pls take care..I have bandaged her head..and prescribing some medicines..
Aryan:- gave me..I will bring them..form dr..I will show you the way to exit..
Doctor with Aryan left…
Vansh was shocked…
Vansh pov
She was suffering from past 4 weeks..and what I did?
He hit his hand with glass table..
Ishani:- Bhai!!
Vansh:- Ishani leave me alone!!
Vansh went near Riddhima..
He cares her face..
Vansh:- sorry Riddhima!!… somewhere I am responsible for your condition..I am sorry!!
When Angre entered panting…
Angre:- Boss
Vansh:- Angre where were you..and why are you tensed..??
Angre:- bhai I got call from hospital..Siya is out of Coma..
Vansh:- What!! (Happy)
Angre:- yes bhai and she told me everything..she wanted tell u but doctor doesn’t allow her..Bhai bhabhi is innocent..she was just a pawn..real mastermind was Kabir and Anupriya..and was blackmailed..by Kabir and Anupriya ..I checked the CCTV footage..and Siya was right…they electrode Bhabhi..and forced her to marry Kabir..they blackmailed that they will kill Ishani and her unborn child.. she is innocent…(He was also crying)
Vansh:- What I did with her..she was innocent..I doubted her.doubted my Riddhima..u know angre she was in depression..and her condition is just because of me…I am…s..o..r..r.y…r..dd..h..i..m..a.
He start slapping himself..
Vansh:- I did wrong…she did so much for me…and..
He collapsed…He was in guilt..
Days passed Riddhima was weak…she did not talk much with anyone..Dadi somehow managed to give her food and medicines..
Riddhima completely ignored Vansh…
Vansh was disheartened..he tried to talk with her..ask her forgiveness but all in vain..
The only time he talked with her is when she is sleeping due to medicines..
Kabir and Ahana were thrown out..
Siya was discharged..
Almost everyone was ignoring Vansh …
Siya and Aryan were almost spend time with Riddhima to cheer her up..
And Riddhima was comfortable with them…
Ishani after knowing the truth was guilty..she wants to ask forgiveness from Riddhima but Siya and Aryan stop her..they don’t want Riddhima to think about her past again..
One day at night..
Riddhima was sleeping..
“Vansh:- I am sorry!!
I was selfish..
I couldn’t cook fish
But was talking to cook our world,
But I failed,
I lack Trust,
I burst out without any reason..
Not thinking that sun also goes to take rest..
And rest I mess…
I am sorry, feeling guilty..
Need to remove my guilt..
But I am ready to be punished..
But pls don’t be quite..
I want to be scolded ,
Holding my ears I need to be sorry!!
I am sorry..
Β Don’t want to loose u..
I am Sorry!!
I was worng..
Pls prove me wrong and love me as you were…”
(-Aayuπ₯)
He cares her face and kissed her forehead..
Vansh:- Good night sweet heart..
Tears were filled in his eyes..
He rested his head at the wall of bed and hold Riddhima’s hand..
When Riddhima wake up with sudden jerk..
She was breathing heavily..
Riddhima:- No I .c..a..n.t k..i..l.l!! N..o..
She was shouting..
Vansh:- relax Riddhima , relax..no one is saying anything Relax..
He hug her to comfort her..
But at very next moment she pushed him..
Riddhima:- Leave..me..w..h.y you have cam..e h..e..r..e
She was breathing heavily and crying..
Siya and Aryan came there listening Riddhima’s voice..
Siya hugged her,she somewhat came back to normal but she was still shivering..
Siya:- Bhabhi relax see I am with you..
Riddhima was crying holding Siya…vansh was also shattered seeing his wife like this..
Aryan:- Bhabhi see I am there…Siya is there..no one will say anything to you..relax!!
But at very next moment three of them were shocked,
Riddhima fainted..(I wanted to kill her..but nojore violence)
Vansh:- Riddhima!!!
Aryan called the doctor fast
Aryan:- yes bhai..
After few minutes..
Doctor:- Mr.Vansh I have already told you not to stress..Is she missed her medicine?
Vansh:- No all the medicines were given on time..
Doctor:- okay!! But take care of her..
Doctor left..
Vansh:- what sin I have done..
Siya:- Bhai don’t worry she will be alright..
He hug her..
Vansh:- Siya she will be alright na?? I am very bad!!
Siya:- Bhai! Nothing will happen to her..trust me..
Precap:-Bol na halkeΒ halke….
So this is the first part..I thoughtΒ to end this but something was missing so thought to write 2 part also..will post soon..
Do comments…
Take care…
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