After a while Rikara came infront of Tejvi and Hiteh. Tejvi gets to know about truth from them.
Tej : Om, I really don’t know what to say now.
Hitesh : Tej Ji, I am sorry from my daughter’s side, You better take Omkara from here.
Omkara : Uncle , What are you saying ?
Hitesh : Beta I think you should go with your parents back to your home. The more you will stay here seeing Gauri it will give you pain.
Omkara : And what about your daughter’s pain ?
Hitesh : I am not able to convince her for accepting someone better than Shlok , but I can tell her to maintain distance from you. She will listen to me.
Jhanvi ; Om, what you wants beta ?
Omkara : Mom I really can’t take any decision now. Can I get some time ?
Tej : Okay, Beta stay here for few more days. But after that don’t forget to take decision. Remember a coin has two sides.
Hitesh : I wish my daughter also understand this thing.
Gauri weeps in tears and ran to her room . Hitesh looks Tejvi and Om
Hitesh : I am sorry for whatever happened from my daughter’s side.
Jhanvi : We can understand her conditon, Hitesh Ji. Don’t worry.
Gauri locks her room and looked into Shlok’s wall pic
Gauri weeps in tears
Gauri : What should I do now ? Shlok tell me what I should do now ? Why you didn’t take me also with you ? Shlok as you said your heart is not leaving me and I am getting myself attached to it despite of knowing the truth that it belongs to Omkara ? Why Shlok ? Why I can’t see Omkara leaving from me ? Why ?
Suddenly wind started blowing , curtains of Gauri’s room were waving and Gauri was still looking at Shlok’s pic only
As the wind was waving so fast Gauri tried to close windows but suddenly she sees some one looking at her
Gauri gets surprised to see him as it’s none other than Shlok.
Gauri hugged him and gets emotional
Gauri : Why you went away Shlok ? Why ?
Shlok : I haven’t left you Gauri , I am with you always. I am going to take you with me , Will you come ?
Gauri ; Of course, Shlok
Shlok ; Think well
Gauri : I am your better half Shlok. I am always ready to come with you
Shlok smiles .Shlok holds Gauri’s hand.
Shlok : Please shut your eyes, We are going to fly over the sky
Gauri nods her head and does the same
After some time Gauri sees Moon and a beautiful Palace before her eyes.
Gauri : Why this moon is so near to us ?
Shlok : Because we are far away from earth , the materialistic world. We are in universe now. This moon is showing light to the way of Paradise
Gauri : Paradise !!
Shlok : Yeah, People after living their lives arrives here. That’s why I asked you to think well
Gauri : I have no problem in entering Paradise .
Shlok smiles and looks her
Shlok : Are you Sure ?
Gauri : Then I will show you some thing. Look at there.
Shlok points out his finger at Omkara’s room.
Gauri sleeps Omkara sleeping at his bed . A woman was holding knife in her hand was trying to enter Om’s house through back door.
Gauri : Oh No, Who is that woman ?
Shlok ; Omkara hasn’t locked the back door, so surely that woman will enter inside. She is going to kill Omkara.
Gauri : Shlok what are you saying ? Do something ?
Shlok : I can’t do anything Gauri, Because I am not a human being , I am just a soul. I don’t have body and I can’t fight with her.
Gauri ; But you bought me here
Shlok : That’s because of our love only. It doesn’t mean that I am a supernatural soul. Trust me I don’t have that powers. If any one can help him, then only it’s you. He helped you by defeating Kaali. Now it’s your turn to help him. You wants to know who was that killer ? She is Kaali’s sister who stabbed knife at my chest and killed me. My wounded heart paved life for Omkara. If you won’t stop her then she will stab again at my heart and this time it will literally destroyed and Om will also come here.
Gauri screams : No , Please don’t say that.
Shlok : You have two choice, one is to enter here , but at paradise you can only enter as a soul , not as a human. For that thing you need to leave your life and I don’t want that. I can’t see your death before my eyes Gauri. So please don’t come with me to Paradise. Other choice is to fight with her and save Omkara. Saving a life is not less than salvation ,Gauri . If you did it then I will be feeling proud that the girl whom I loved is so brave and concerned for others. You can come here when the right time arrives , that day and time hasn’t came till. Before it’s arrival why you should come with me to here ?
Gauri : But Shlok without you how can I live ?
Shlok : The day when I died my heart was transplanted and you didn’t took a step for ending your life , Why ?
Gauri : Because I want to meet that person who was holding my heart , First I was hesitant, later destiny bought us together and I started friendship with him.
Shlok : You really cares my heart, won’t you ?
Gauri : Yes
Shlok : Then how can you refuse Om when he is showing full of love to you ?
Gauri : But his face , How can I ?
Shlok : You just sees my heart, you doesn’t sees the tears of his eyes, won’t you ? How can my Gauri hurt that person who is leading a life with my heart ?
Gauri : Shlok !!
Shlok : You have hurt him by refusing his love, The more you keeps doing it let me remind you my heart is there and it will be paining and paining . You really want because of you my heart should pain ?
Gauri : No Shlok,
Shlok : Then go and save him, Gauri . She is going to kill him. Save his life Gauri and feel his love , Omkara will give you full of love, Love him as Omkara
Gauri : And you ?
Shlok : My soul will be happy if you both unite and if you won’t unite then it will be wandering here and there . Gauri may be at next birth we will be together , till then I am in this paradise and I will be recalling all those moments of our journey which will make me happier . Trust me
Gauri ; Shlok , I missed you a lot and now you are saying to leave you, I will again miss you
Shlok : If you really loved me then you have to do it.
Suddenly wind was over and Gauri looked again , she find that she was in her room. Gauri came out from her room and walked towards Om’s house and to her shock she saw a woman who was entering at Om’s house.
Gauri’s view
That means what I find was not just a dream it’s reality . This lady killed my Shlok. Now she is behind Omkara. Gauri rushed inside and pushed her hand from back. The knife fell down. At anger that lady grabbed Gauri’s neck and Gauri started coughing. Om wakes up and he stares her.
Omkara : Leave her I said leave her.
Lady : My brother Kaali got arrested because of this girl and you, first I will kill her and then you. There was an Inspector Shlok who was also behind Kaali earlier , but I finished him when an encounter was going on. At that rush , I stabbed knife at his body from behind and since I was covering my face no one saw me. At my first stab he fell down. Later I stabbed three times at his chest .Then I kicked him to the spot and I went away. After the riot was finished the other police men may be any of the criminal has done it and they didn’t find me.His heart beat was stopped when I stabbed again and again at his heart.
Omkara : You are wrong, His heart beat is not stopped , it is alive and it has become more strong and it has given life to me . I am carrying his heart. Look at me Daring Lady.
She gets shocked to see Omkara’s angry face and leaves Gauri.
Gauri hides behind Omkara.
Omkara : You are a lady and that’s why I am not raising my hand at you. It doesn’t mean that you are free. Police will be arriving soon to take you.
Lady : What ? Police…….
She tries to run , but Gauri grabs her hands and slaps at her face.
Gauri : You killed my Shlok and thought just like that way you can kill my Omkara also ?You rude lady !!! Beware of this man and his heart , He is double strong now . He is Omkara and you can’t kill him so easily. Before any one could attack him he has to fight with Gauri who will stand as the shield of Omkara.
Lady stares them and police arrived there and arrests her .
As soon as she left Om looks Gauri . Gauri also looks Om
She extended her hand to Om , Om holds her hand. Om finds Gauri’s eyes filled in tears , but she was smiling also.
Omkara ; Thank you Gauri
Gauri : I am sorry Omkara, I am sorry.
Omkara : Sorry !!! Why are you saying sorry to me ?
Gauri : I realized who are you in my life , I know it’s late , but I really understands it now, Omkara. You was right, that second line of poetry- it shows my concern to you. Omkara I hurt you a lot. I don’t want to hurt you any more.
Omkara :But Gauri my heart is of Shlok’s . But I really wonder just now you said that you will be the shield if any danger comes to me. What does it mean ?
Gauri : You said heart as my soulmate and I really sensed what it is to me , Omkara the more and more I will keep distance from you , my shlok’s heart will never forgive me. Why I didn’t understood that it’s my Shlok only who got a new birth as Omkara and has arrived to see me ? I was going through the waves of emotions and reality and a moonlight came which showed me clearly what’s my way .
Omkara :I didn’t get you Gauri.
Gauri : Come with me Om. I will show you.
Rikara goes near Shlok’s wall pic.
Gauri : Shlok I can’t explain whatever you show me, but for making Om to believe that I have accepted him please show a sign . Please Shlok
Rikara sees some stars shining besides his pic , Om gets surprised
They hears a voice over of Shlok
Shlok : Omkara , Gauri has accepted you whole heartedly, My role to unite you both has been over. Om, you got posting at this village as officer which was entirely a surprise to you, Hey naa ?
Om : Yeah, actually as far as I remember I wrote another place , but authorities informed me that it’s Barely only and I was wondering when I wrote like that.
Shlok : It’s all destiny’s play. You came here for a purpose and now you have to fullfil it. Gauri now loves you truely , Om not just my heart. Hey naa Gauri ?
Gauri : Haan Shlok. I saved Om as per your instance and now I realized why my heart was feeling pain to see Omkara in pain ? Why I said I will be the shield ,I have fallen for him. But I feels confused. What I am doing is …
Shlok ; Gauri Life is a journey and love makes that journey very much beautiful. So don’t kill the beauty. Omkara’s life has risen up and now his love also needs to rise up . For that you have to love him. I will be the victim of your love story when you both see me among the shining stars at the night. My soul needs peace, for that you have to accept and love Omkara. Omkara you should show immense love to her that she should forget the name Shlok istelf from her mind.
Gauri weeps in tears. Om holds her and they both hug each other and gets emotional
Shlok : Now I can be at the Paradise happily ,Good bye my beautiful Prince and Princess
The stars stopped shining and eventually it turned as just a pic of Shlok only.
Omkara : He was really a star of our life, Gauri.
Gauri rushed outside and finds the night has become rainy.
She weeps in tears . Om walks near her and holds her . They both looks intensely
Omkara : I can never be a shining star like Shlok to make every moment as bright and memorable for you. But I will try my level best to make you happier. I will always hold your hand whatever threat comes at your way and I will pick all those stones away from our way which will hurt my shield. I can’t see tears in your eyes as it will give pain to my heart which you loves to the core. I really loves you and my whole heart, whole body,my soul everything is for you, I love you Gauri.
Gauri : Stars may be disappear as night changes , but shine never goes Omkara. As Shlok said I don’t want to kill life’s beauty by hiding feelings from you, The moment you respect my feelings for Shlok’s heart I realized you are a true soul . You would have left me that day, but you stayed here and show me that you are here for me only. Whenever my eyes will become teary you will hold me like these , whenever I feels low you will hold my hand, that’s enough to show that how much you deeply loves me Om. I loves your heart,your eyes, your voice, your words, your concern , each and everything . I really love you Omkara, I really love you.
They both hug each other passionately, Saathiya plays….
Gentle wind breezed on them and they realized Shlok’s soul was getting happy to see his Prince and Princess melting in full of love
AN : I hope you all liked this one. I thank my readers who commented without fail in every episode and also specially dedicating this one to Ishana stories who loves Rikara a lot. And in original one heroine goes with soul after saving second lead which was very much tragic. I changed it here and hope you all will like this. Happy reading guys.
4 Comments
Thank you so much for dedicating this amazing story to me. I really loved the ending.. Om’s love and concern for Gauri was so pure. Shlok’s role was so good, his journey with Gauri to the moon and the way he united rikara was really emotional. Gauri’s love for Shlok was so pure and gauri realising that she loves omkara was awesome. Her concern for omkara and standing as his shield was so emotional. In the end when they confessed their love in the rain was beautifully written.
Thanks a lot
Hitesh apologizing on gauri’s behalf was emotional. Shlok’s soul taking gauri near the moon was surprising. Shlok asking gauri how she can hurt the man who carries his heart n telling her that if rikara unite his soul will be happy otherwise his soul will keep wandering was emotional. Shocking that kali’s sister killed shlok n now she is trying to kill om.shlok convincing gauri to save omkara n gauri trying to save omkara was nice.i loved omkara saying that shlok’s heart beat hasn’t ended..his heart has become more strong n its in his body was superb.stars shining in shlok’s photograph n his voice over was lovely.gauri telling om that she didn’t understand that he was shlok’s rebirth was nice.om’s dialogues n gauri’s love confession were poetic n romantic.rain hug was very romantic. Perfect pics n perfect edit.
Please write an ashlok ff also in future.
Thanks a lot