Rishmi love forever-getting back her love epic-10
Lakshmi: come with us and you can stay at our chacha house it will be more when we used to play in school days and college days.
Shallu and bani: s it will be more fun and we can enjoy its lyk our old days.
Varun: sure i will come but not today ,tommorw i will come till night we can shit chat about our days.
Rishi: get fumming in anger,nobody think about my feeling(mind voice)its not fair yaar everyone are busy with varun,rishi feel jealous this stupid boy why he came here today my mood are getting spoiled.
Lakshmi: she noticed that rishi is fumming in anger,but she acted to close to varun some more.You always ignore me when you are with malisha ,so its my turn to show what you did to me.
Rishi: anway that stupid wont come today ,so i celebrate our friendship with lakshmi.
Rano:When they are return to home rano told lakshmi and rishi you guys go home and take rest ,we need to go tp one place we return back.
Rishi: no problem aunty we also coming.
Rano : no beta you two go we will return in cab.
Rishi and lakshmi: k you all return fast
Shalu ,bani and neha asked were we are going.
Rano:ah stupid girls i told lie,if we travel with them ,they dont have privacy.
Ohh like tgat.
Lakshmi and rishi while travelling in car.
Lakshmi: call him rishi do u know i like varun soo much,he is my best friend ,dearest friend..
Rishi: after hearing best,dearest,his anger raised and stop car.
Lakshmi: why did you stop tge car?
Rishi: come close to lakshmi and kiss her on head , face atlast lips close to her and say dont address dear,best another person.you are only mine ,so u can say me as dear,best .he kiss her on lips,if you repeat like this.
Lakshmi: she noo she in sock,she is in deep thinking till chacha home.after arrivied lakshmi didnt recognized that they arrived in home
Rishi: Rishi take lakshmi in his arm
Lakshmi: came to sense what are you doing.
Rishi: you are in dream world im not reasy to spoil ur dream so i carry you to our room.
Lakshmi: why he is doing this to me,he dont lyk me but always getting close to me and keep distance from ,it ache me a lot.
Rishi: keep lakshmi on bed,he extended hand will you my best friend? and dearest one?
Lakshmi: it wont come from single minute its a magical bond create best,dearest term.
Rishi: anger raised and go near lakshmu and ask you donf have magical bond with me?
Lakshmi: she get nervous heart beat increases .she said no there is no magical bond between us.lakshmi try to getup from bed and go
Rishi: rishi held her back really now you will know magical bond,he kiss her forcily,after sometime she respond to his kiss.
They rest in kiss for half an hour,due to breathing they break the kiss.
Lakshmi: she feel shy and ask her own mind voice why i started to respond to the kiss.
Rishi: he thought i can see improvement in lakshmi,she started to respond me thats means she is getting better day to day,i love you lakshmi,as soon as you will also feel it.
Now everyone return.
Bani ask jiju and didi come and have dinner its ready.
They came down everyone had dinner went to their respective room
Lakshmi: she didnt lyk to go to room,but she went to room and arrange bed .
Rishi: came to room
lakshmi: told to him that she will stay in bani shalu room. I have to spend time with my sisters.
Rishi: understand lakshmi thoughts,(mind voice) if i allow you today in there room you will be going everyday i wont lose opporunity to feel my love ,sry lakshmi.his mind voice was this,but he told lakshmk s you can stay there,laskhmi went out ,he call bani and shalu that your didi quarel with me so she coming to ur room.you two donnt allow her to stay.
Shalu and bani: k jiju while they talking lakshmi came ,they thinnk she heard everything,but she didnt hear.
Lakshmi: she asked with whom you are talking?
Shalu and bani : with my friend priya.
Lakshmi: oh k
Shalu and bani: k didi why are you here at this time?
Lakshmi: i thought to spend time with you two people.
Shalu and bani: no didi you stay with jiju we already so tired so we thought to sleep spaciouly its already small room didi you go there,while saying this they push her out playfuly and close the door.
Lakshmi: ask shalu and bani go open door but they didnt open.lakshmi come to her room without willingly she is coming.
Rishi: why you told that you r going to spend time with your sisters now are here?
Lakshmi: they are so tired so ask me to go to my room..lakshmi stand near bed without willingly.
Rishi: ask her to sleep in bed i will not do anything you can sleep peacefully.
Lakshmi:he understand whats going inside my mind but sometimes he take some advantage.lakshmi lay down the bed and thinking about rishi
Rishi: lay down the bed and thinking about romantic incident he cant sleep properly he face the lakshmi side.
Lakshmi also face rishi side.
They make eyecontact and cant sleep ,then they change their sides and sleep.after sometimes they come close each other and hug each other,after hugging position they slept peacefuly.
Thank you guys for your valuable comments,your comments are encouraging me more,you can give your suggestion,Thank you guys keep supporting me.Nexr will be interesting one jealous part
7 Comments
Anjesta, hats off to you for your creative writing. Honestly, when this FF was started I had no idea this was going to be this good. Amazing, really.
One suggestion, instead of writing lines like rishi: or lakshmi: ..do this when they are saying something. Other parts where you’re describing a situation don’t write like this.
For example, I’ll quote from the beginning of this part –
Varun: sure i will come but not today , tommorow i will come till night we can chitchat about our days.
Rishi fumes in anger, in mind he thinks – nobody thinks about my feelings, its not fair yaar..everyone is busy with Varun. Rishi feels jealous and thinks this stupid boy, why did he come here today?! My mood is getting spoiled.
Just my suggestion,I hope you take this positively.
Waiting eagerly for next part. Much love.
K sure yaar ,tq u for your valuable supports,i started to post on wattpad also pls support me ,give more suggestion yaar
Yes of course
It was very very very good… And super excited for next part
great…outstanding story ..loved it ..cant wait for the next one..please post next one asap😊
Wow…..its beautiful episode yaar…..really loved it….go ahead…eagerly waiting for the next part……plz upload soon….cant wait more…
Awesome ❤️❤️.. waiting for more jealousy scenes