“Sorry” said Ragini pouting as she hugged Nitin from his back and placing her head on his back. Nitin turned to her holding her hand. “Speak dumbo” said Ragini wiping her tears. He signed her wait. She looked at him confused. He looked at his watch and held his three fingers and started counting Three, Two, One. “I love you” screamed Nitin on top of his voice stretching his hands. Ragini jerked and closed her ears and sat down panicking. Nitin who opened his eyes smiling looked around and saw Ragini sitting down panicking. He knelt at her height and cupped her face. Ragini immediately hugged him. “Ragu I’m sorry. I forgot you get scared of noises. I was just excited bacha to talk to you after a week.
I’m really sorry” said Nitin and started tearing. He patted her head and Ragini cooled down after sometime. “Oye Nittu. We are also on date. So control your emotions” said Manny as he neared them as he heard Nitin’s scream. “Sorry” said Nitin shrinking his eyes. Manny looked at Ragini panting and asked what happened through eyes. Nitin signed him nothing. Manny nodded his head and returned to their part of terrace on Arjun’s house where he had arranged a candle light dinner for Suhani. “What happened?” asked Suhani when she saw Manny approaching their table smiling. “Nittu and his over excitement” said Manny smiling. “Stay without talking to me for one week you will understand his excitement” said Suhani biting the cucumber in the salad. “That would be the best punishment a husband can get Mrs Chadda. I would love to stay like that” said Manny chuckling. Suhani opened her mouth shocked. “Manny people at least take a year to change. You tho changed in one week only how mean” said Suhani huffing. “I was just joking Jaan” said Manny holding Suhani’s hand and kissing it. He winked at Suhani who blushed lowering her head.
“You’re okay?” asked Nitin cupping Ragini’s face. Ragini nodded her head weakly. “It is all because of me. Sorry Ragu I don’t know how it went out of my mind. I..” before Nitin could say further Ragini bent her head and kissed his lips closing her eyes. Nitin jerked and opened his eyes shocked. He looked at Ragini. Tears were flowing from her eyes. More than him the punishment was for herself to stop talking to Nitin. Nitin hugged her holding her waist and dragged her close and closed his eyes losing himself in her fragrance. She moved her fingers in his hair making him crave to drag her close to him. As they felt difficult to breath they departed from each other and stood touching their foreheads. Nitin smiled widely and Ragini blushed lowering her eyes. Nitin kissed her forehead closing his eyes and she hugged him encircling her hands around his stomach and placing her head on his chest where his heart was racing making her blush. He placed his chin on her head and patted her head.
“Ani. Slowly” said Manny looking at Suhani who was eating the fourth Samosa. “You know na Manny this is from Chandu uncle’s shop. It’s my favorite” said Suhani munching the Samosa. Manny nodded his head and sat supporting his chin with his hand and enjoyed Suhani’s childish expressions. “My life would be colorless if this Jhalli wasn’t there in my life” thought Manny and his smiled widened and reached his eyes.
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“Ohho Jaan. I’m so jealous of them right now” said Ishan talking to Radhika over the phone. Radhika blushed holding the curtain. “What to do Mr. Ishan Kashyap. You got to wait still two more weeks” said Radhika and chuckled. “Hmmm tease, tease how much you want to tease me. After two weeks I will see how you will tease me” said Ishan leaning to the wall. Radhika blushed biting her lips. “Hey don’t byte my strawberries” said Ishan. “What?” asked Radhika confused. “I meant don’t byte your lips. They are my strawberries and you have no rights to byte them without my permission” said Ishan. “OMG I can’t believe this” screeched Radhika. Ishan jerked due to her excitement and stumbled. “Radhu” said he rubbing his ears. “I can’t believe my bholu sa Ishan can speak such cheesy lines” screamed Radhika. “Relax Jaan. This is just the trial. Control your excitement” said Ishan. “Ishan. Now go sleep. Good night” said Radhika in warning tone. “And my good night kiss?” asked Ishan. “Did you brush?” asked Radhika. “What?” asked Ishan freaking. “This is what your Gini says when Nitin asks kiss” said Radhika and burst out laughing. “Really?” asked Ishan horrified. “OMG. Bechara Nittu.” said Ishan and joined Radhika. “I love you” said Radhika stopping Ishan’s heart beat. “Love you too” said Ishan smiling widely. Radhika kissed the phone and disconnected the call. Ishan smiled widely and fell on his bed stretching his hand and blushed. He hugged his cushion and slept smiling.
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“Rachu stop doing that” screamed Kabeer trying to stop Rachna who was splashing beach water on Kabeer. Kabeer glared her and started chasing her. At last he grabbed her hand and dragged her to him and lifted her in bridal style. “Kabeer. What are you doing? Put me down” screamed Rachna but he did not budge. He neared the beach and dropped Rachna in cold water and burst out laughing looking at her. Rachna huffed and dragged him holding his hand. He stumbled and fell in water. “Now laugh” said Rachna showing her tongue. Kabeer held her elbow and dragged her close to him. Rachna jerked and looked at him who was very close to her. Her heart started racing due to his closeness. Kabeer neared her more making her blush. Rachna turned to leave but Kabeer held her and turned her and she landed on his chest. “Don’t over think Mrs Khanna. I know it’s public place” said Kabeer in Rachna’s ears tickling her. She blushed and hugged him. And he patted her head keeping his chin on her head.
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“Shraa what are you doing?” asked Varun to Shravanthi who was walking in the balcony. “No nothing. Just wasn’t feeling sleepy” said Shravanthi rubbing her shoulders. Varun went inside and brought a shawl and covered her with it. Shravanthi who was collecting herself from what just happening looked up at Varun and they lost themselves in each other’s eyes. “Life doesn’t give second chances always. I’m glad I got one . And a beautiful one” said Varun in his mind. His tightening grip on Shravanthi’s shoulder brought her to reality and she lowered her gaze which brought Varun back to world. He dragged his hand back and sealed them in his pant pockets and stood beside her. “Come with me” said Varun forwarding his hand to Shravanthi. She looked at him confused. He nodded his head smiling. She grabbed his hand and he walked to terrace. “This is my and Gini’s favorite place” said Varun standing at a corner of terrace.
“It is beautiful” said she smiling looking at him. “Thank you” said She and Varun turned and looked in her love filled eyes. “For what?” he asked confused. “For everything. For coming in my life. For including me in your life as an important person” said Shravanthi. Varun could not meet her eyes. Somewhere he felt guilty that he did wrong with her or he is still doing wrong with her. Ragini’s words seemed so true. Shravanthi leaned her head and supporting it on his shoulder. Varun looked at her with null expression. He wasn’t sure about his feelings yet. It may be love or may not be. He did not wanted to hurt her by building her expectations. “I know you need time Varun. And I don’t want to suffocate you in this. But I will wait you to accept me as your wife” said Shravanthi to herself and closed her eyes controlling her tears.
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“What is this?” asked Ragini when Nitin handed her a gift box. “You check it after you go home” said Nitin and placed it in her bag. “That’s not fair” said Ragini pouting. Nitin kissed her hair and asked “Now fair?” Ragini just held his shoulder and leaned her head and looked at the dark sky smiling. “Nittu. Why does we say moon is beautiful even when it has so many spots. I never found it beautiful” said Ragini. Nitin smiled at her childish question. “That’s actually a tough question” said Nitin. “So my questions are always tough. You know nobody can answer my questions” said Ragini feeling proud. “Let me try to answer” said Nitin and acted as if he is thinking. “Hmm tell me one thing. If a person doesn’t have eyebrows how he will look?” asked Nitin. “Weird. Very weird” said Ragini. “Why. Those are also facial hair right so if someone removes it they should look beautiful” said Nitin. “Because even if it is ugly it is one of component necessary in our face. They are part of our face” said Ragini. “Exactly. Like that those spots also are part of moon So it looks beautiful even with its spots.
Beauty doesn’t always means facial appearance. It means appearance of your soul. Moon is beautiful because after we get tired of fighting with Sun’s hot rays it gives us calmness. But that doesn’t mean sun is bad. Moon gets this calmness also from Sun only. You might get bad from others but it is your soul’s appearance which makes you give good to others” said Nitin and caressed her hair. “Ohhhh. You also started speaking philosophical? from when?” asked Ragini looking up at him. “From the time you landed in my life like a blessing” said Nitin and turned to look at the sky tightening his grip on her shoulder. “Nittu…” said Ragini ready with her next question. “Shhh. Enough of tution classes for today” said Nitin stopping her. “But” said Ragini pouting. “Please Babu. I really want to enjoy this silence with you” said Nitin. Ragini nodded her head and looked forward and closed her eyes. Nitin touched her head with his head and smiled widely. One week looked like a lifetime for him without expressing himself to Ragini.
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“Mumma was really so dumb” said the girl who was sitting in front of Nitin chuckling (Reema Sameer Shaik). “Nitara” said Ragini entering the room where Nitin was narrating his past life to his 13 year old daughter. “Oops Mrs. Roy is coming” said Nitara biting her tongue. Nitin smiled at her widely. “You did not sleep yet. How many times I have told you. Don’t be awake this late” said Ragini holding her waist. “Sorry Mrs. Roy. Dadda was telling me story. I was so engrossed I, forgot to look at the clock” said Nitara biting her tongue. “Sleep now” said Ragini making her sleep and covered her with the blanket. “Now Nitara ke paapa get going. You are spoiling her really” said Ragini glaring Nitin. Nitin pouted like a kid and headed to his room sad. Ragini chuckled and followed him.
“Now you are being romantic.” said Nitin when Ragini hugged him from his back when he removed his shirt. “What to do sometimes you look irresistibly handsome. I can’t control myself Mr. Roy” said Ragini and placed her head on his shoulder. Nitin held her hands and touched her head with his head and smiled widely closing his eyes. “What about planning a baby bro for Nitara?” asked Nitin dragging her near and making her hands encircle his stomach. Ragini blushed lowering her head. “I should consider this as yes?” asked he in her ears tickling her. “She is all happy alone Mr. Roy. Now stop trying your luck and time to sleep” said Ragini looking up at him. “I love you” said Nitin. “I love you more”said Ragini dragging him more close to her and closed her eyes placing her head on his chest and smiled widely.
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“Arjun” screamed Shruthi from the washroom. Arjun rushed to the washroom scared. “Shru what happened?” asked Arjun worried. He neared Shruthi who was sobbing looking at something in her hand. He cupped her face worried and asked “Why are you crying? Did you got hurt?” Shruthi looked up at him and nodded her head. “Then why are you crying?” asked Arjun cinfused. “I’m I’m” struggled Shruthi to speak. “Say it clearly Shru. You are scaring me” said Arjun. “I’m pregnant” said Shruthi and smiled through her tears. “Thank God. You know I got scared like…” but then Arjun realized what Shruthi said and looked at her widening his eyes. “Are you serious?” asked Arjun holding his hair not able to control his excitement. “Who jokes in such matter Arjun. You are really impossible” said Shruthi annoyed and tried heading out. Arjun stopped her lifted her and twirled her in air and screamed “Oh my god. I can’t believe this. I’m gonna be Papa. OMG” said Arjun screeching like a small kid. “Arjun put me down. I’m feeling dizzy” said Shruthi scared. “Oops” said Arjun and left her down. “What happened?” asked Ragini and Nitin entering their room as they heard Arjun’s scream and headed down. “Nittu. You are going to be Mamu” said Arjun holding Nitin from his shoulder. “Really?” asked Nitin excited and ran and hugged Shruthi who was blushing. “He became Mamu. Why is he hugging Shruthi? How do you know that he became mama?” asked Ragini confused. “I think Manny’s effect on this girl. She has become tubelight” said Arjun hitting playfully on Ragini’s head. “Oye Dumbo. Shru is pregnant” said Nitin turning to them smiling through his tears. “What?” screamed Ragini and closed her mouth. “After marriage everyone had turned Siyappa queen in my life except Siyappa queen herself” said Manny entering the room rubbing his ears.
“Shut up Manny” screamed everyone at a time jerking Manny. “Okay okay fine. But tell me at least why are you screaming Ragu maa?” asked Manny confused. “Senior ji good news” said Ragini jumping. “No Ragu. So soon I cannot, I mean we cannot give you good news so soon” said Manny shy. Everyone hit their head as they knew what will be Ragini’s next word. “Why?” asked Ragini. “Now tell her” said Suhani dragging Manny and whispering in his ears. “Wo Ragu maa. Wo” struggled Manny. “What good news?” asked Rachna entering the room along with Kabeer. “First time in life I appreciate your timing Siyappa Queen” said Manny in his heart and sighed. “Rachu… Rachu…. You are gonna be bua. Shru is pregnant” said Ragini holding Rachna and twirling her. “What?” asked Rachna excited. “OMG I’m feeling dizzy. Stop Gini” said Rachna holding her head and stopping Ragini. “OMG you are also giving good news” said Ragini widening her eyes. Kabeer chocked and started coughing listening to her. Nitin immediately approached Ragini and closed her mouth stopping her from further blurting out and took her away from them smiling weakly at everyone. “Sachi. I feel really pity on Nittu” said Kabeer looking at them. “Hmmm” said everyone looking at them. Ragini turned her face angry and Nitin dragged her and hugged her to console her and Ragini cooled down and hugged him encircling her hands around his stomach and closed her eyes
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“Ohho how can I forget. I should open the gift Nittu gave” said Ragini searching her bag. She opened the wrapper and found a book. “This Nittu bhi na. I’m running away from studies and he is gifting me books only.” said Ragini hitting the book to her head. A chit fell from the book and Ragini picked it and read. “Dumbo all the books don’t have study material always. Open it and read it” she read the note and smiled nodding her head. She opened the first page and found her photograph and a globe around it. “My world” was written in bold below it. Ragini caressed the handwriting smiling and opened the next page.
“Maa says God ji blesses us when we pray to him. I can’t tell you how much he loves me. I must be his most favorite. You know why because he blessed me with you when I was not even believing him. And I have no prayers left after I got you in my life. You came as an answer to all my prayers” read Ragini and saw a photograph of her Naming ceremony where Shekar was telling her name in her ears and Janaki sitting beside him.
“As I was just curious to know. I asked how was your childhood with Shekar papa. He narrated me some funny and some emotional incidents of your life. Funny like how you used to jump with happiness while walking with lighting shoes. And emotional like your first day in School. How you cried and tortured all the teachers. Then Radhu maa came in your life who like a mom consoled you. She is just like a mom to everyone” she saw a photograph of her first day in school along with Radhika. Ragini smiled through her tears caressing the photo.
She turned the next page. “Then you met your Kaan Khajura, bandar, langoor. Ha ha ha. I know you never call him with his name. But he became your best friend. Nobody can understand you the way he does. He can sense your emotions even before your mom or second mom can sense and even before I can sense. You are so lucky to have your Chimpanzee in your life”
She saw the picture in which she and Varun were dressed like charlie chaplin for a fancy dress compittion in their colony. Ragini placed her hand on her mouth to control her excitement. She turned the next page.
“Like this you became an integral part of Tej uncle’s life. Let me tell you his secret. He loves you more than Varun. And he said not to tell this to Varun or else you know he will roll on the floor crying” She smiled remembering how Varun used to cry rolling over the floor whenever Tej used to tease him saying he loves Ragini more. She saw a photograph of her and Radhika’s family together where Tej was glaring Varun as he pulled her choti.
“Then came Ani as Pankaj uncle got transfer. Then Shekar Papa’s best friend also shifted here as Rachu the super possessive shadow of Ani could not stay without her. And Rajinder uncle have to take transfer as Rachu threatened him by not eating food. Ani got instantly mingled with you but Rachu was so possessive about Ani she once pushed you from stairs as you hugged her Ani. You got stitches due to it on your elbow and still there is mark of it. When everyone asked you about how did you get hurt? To save Rachu you lied that you slipped from stairs and Rachna along with Ani became part of your gang” she smiled and caressed the photo in which all four of them were standing in their school uniforms.
“Then your Pakiya Kaaka came in your life when you all started depending on Public transport. He had shared almost all his happiness with you people like when you people were in 7th standard he gave sweets of his marriage, then birth of his daughter Krishna. Then her first board exams result and etc etc” she looked and found their group photo with their conductor uncle Prashanth. And Nitin’s selfie with Prashanth Kaka. “I must say he is cool dude. As I told him your name he just welcomed me with his warm and friendly smile” read Ragini. “You seriously met Prashanth Kaku OMG” said Ragini and turned the next page
“Then your little sweetheart Ketu came into the world. Janaki maa told me how jealous you were of him. But as time passed he became your shadow, who fought with you in front of you but always used to miss you the most when you were away from him. You and Shekar Papa in one team and Ketu and Janaki maa in one team.” She looked at the picture below in which she and Aniket were singing holding the virtual mike made of book and Janaki and Shekar closing their ears annoyed.
“And this page is dedicated to your first and last crush “Mr. Salman Khan” You were so mad about him you forced Ani, Rachu and Radhu to watch “Mai aur Mrs Khanna” where he has done only guest appearance. Gosh they still curse you for making them watch Sohail Khan. Ha ha ha “ Ragini frowned and found her photograph outside the theater beside Salman Khan’s poster of Ek Tha Tiger movie. She kissed Salman Khan’s photo.
She opened the next page
“Now one more important person of your life entered. That is my stupid sister Shru. I just wonder being so close also how were we unaware of each other. When she was nervous to enter class on her first day in college and before I came to console her I saw her walking inside the class with a girl who was holding her shoulder while entering class. And that was you, I don’t know why I felt bad that I could not see your face that day. Shru kept saying your name around me so many times but alas I never knew the name I was ignoring some day will stop my heart beat just with its mention”. Ragini blushed reading it. She looked at the picture below in which she and shruthi were holding Soldering gun and looking at it weird. She laughed and opened the next page.
“Then came the day when you got to stay away from your home for 10 days for the first time in your life. And more than you; Papa cried. Then Manny sorry your senior ji came in your life. I could never understand how easily Manny mingled with you and made you an important part of his life. You both played tricks to impress Ani. And she lost to your pranks also and fell for my tubelight Manny and she also became tubelight Ani” Ragini chuckled remembering her and Manny’s plans in camp. She looked down and found her and Manny’s photo in which they were acting like Amithabh Bachan in front of Suhani who was glaring them. Ragini nodded her head smiling and turned to the next page.
“Then you met Ishan as you were in first aid team. And he became your Ish bhai and bechara fell in love with Radhu when he saw her with you in the camp. So you have been acting as cupid in everyone’s life. So like this your second mom and second Papa’s love story started”
She found a photograph in which Ishan and Radhika were kissing her both the cheeks. She smiled caressing it.
“Then your most favorite Kabbie bhai. Thanks to Rachu’s short term memory loss you had been to his house and became a beautiful part of his and Dadu’s life. You are his life and soul who came to bring him out of his lonliness”
She looked down and photo in which Kabeer was side hugging Ragini and Dadu from both the sides and kissing Ragini’s hair.
“Then Shalini maa came in your life.” she read and paused. “Dumbo you did not mention about you at all” said Ragini and continued reading.
“Shalini maa saw her daughter’s shadow in you whom she lost in similar condition. You gave her back the love she was craving for. You filled her life and completed it when you called her maa. Really you bring happiness in everyone’s life always. So with Shalini maa even Rajesh papa got his daughter back on Rachu’s engagement” She looked down and found her photo in which she and Rajesh had dressed up like chefs and were serving Shalini who was making weird face looking at the bowl in front of her. Ragini laughed looking at it.
“Did I forget someone?” read Ragini on the next page. “Yup dumbo” said Ragini and continued reading. “Arrey ha. My mom. Urf your Sasu maa”
“From the time she made your favorite Rava Ganji you have become her fan. And she in return helps you to torture me. Really Ragu I want to say you one thing today. Thank you so much. Because you brought that bright smile on my mom’s face which disappeared when dad left us. No no. I’m not crying don’t worry. Because you remember once you only said if we become sad while remembering people who left us they will never be happy. We should always remember them with a smile. So now I just talk to my dad looking at the stars and give him my bright smile. Mom was smiling but I saw her smile reach her eyes only when you entered her life. Uff I’m so jealous of you” she wiped her tear and looked at the photo in which Yashu was pulling Ragini’s ear playfully.
She laughed and turned the next page.
“So everyone in the list over? No? Who else who else? Ha ha ha. I know me only. I just want to include my journey so far with you in the last page so that it stays in your mind when you go to sleep. I know I’m selfish. But what to do you have made me one”
“Okay let me ask you question. If you answer that I will believe you love me more ok” Ragini smiled and said “Okay”
“Tell me what was the first word conversation between us and when?” read Ragini and smiled widely. She remembered her colliding with him in college corridor and said “Sorry when we collided in college corridor”
“I know you might think it is the day when we collided in college corridor. No dumbo. Our first word was when I said you sorry while I passed behind you in Bus while we headed to camp. Don’t you remember you jerked when someone touched your back?” Ragini remembered that incident and her eyes widened due to shock.
“You must be wondering how do I came to know it was you as I did not see your face. That time you wore the same dress which you wore on first day of college when you met Shru. I knew you are Gini about whom Shru spoke to me. I just wanted to avoid you as I really did not wanted to spoil my image of being a Vishwamitra of the college by noticing a girl.” Ragini frowned reading it. But laughed nodding her head and said “Dumbo” Then she continued reading.
“Then the day came when I heard you for the first time. You don’t know much I cursed myself that I did not lift my head a second before so that I did not miss you. But my bad luck you disappeared in the crowd leaving me restless. I searched you everywhere like I have lost most precious thing of my life. How to make you understand you are more than the most precious thing in my life. I saw you in Mall while you were trying the maang teeka and my heart just wished you to be the girl I was desperately searching for. Then on shru’s Volley Ball match I heard your magical voice again and realized that how much I love you and only you.” she smiled blushing and looked at the picture of her and Shruthi during the match when they were celebrating the victory.
“Then came the day when we became friends and then best friends. We danced on Fresher’s day Party, we fought, patched up and patched up others also. Then came the my most horrible nightmare. On the same day when I wanted to propose you. Yes you heard it right on your last exam that day I thought of proposing you, but destiny had other plans. I don’t wanna remember that painful phase so leave it. But one thing I realized that day. And that was I cannot live without you. My love, my madness reached a new level that day when I was just seconds away from losing you, from losing my breath. Ahh this is the only day I cannot erase from my memory how much ever I try.”
Ragini burst out crying when she remembered that horrible night.
“But I started believing in God and believed your word that God is not magician but somehow he did some magic and brought you back to me.”
She looked down and found her photo in which she was pouting and saying no to Radhu who was feeding her soup and all surrounding her and caring her. She turned the next page smiling.
” Then came Shru’s engagement day and the day I expressed my feelings for you. When you hugged me I really thought you accepted me. But it did not happen. My heart was not ready to accept that you rejected me. And it was right as always. You accepted your feelings same day all thanks to our Radhu maa’s super plan. And due to everyone’s struggle we are together today. Even Shravanthi who helped us to make you jealous did such big sacrifice for us. We are so lucky to have them in our life. All the people in our life” she nodded her head smiling and looked at the picture below in which Nitin was kneeling in front of her with a ring in his hand to propose her. She touched the ring he made her wear that day and kissed it.
She tuned the next page where everyone’s individual photographs were glued.
“Rishtey – The relationships which gave meaning to our life”
She turned the last page and found a note glued. She removed and read it.
“You must be wondering how did I live without talking to you for one week. Like this I lived collecting beautiful pearls of your memory lane. And all thanks to each person who helped me to collect it. Yes it was like a lifetime as I have to stay without expressing myself. So I found this way to cop up with it. Don’t you dare to give me this punishment again. If you get angry just beat me how much ever you want. But don’t tell me to stop talking to you. I feel I’m living without my soul, Your and only yours dumbo” Ragini closed the book and hugged it. She sobbed looking up. “Why do you love me so much” said Ragini sobbing. Her mobile beeped and she read Nitin’s message “Because I don’t know other ways to live my life” She smiled and kissed Nitin’s picture in her phone closing her eyes.
Life was unfair for them. As Nitin said you might get negativity from all the sides but you should give positive vibes only to the people around you. They did not had favorable conditions but they did not back of from sacrificing. Ragini for her dad and Nitin for her. And in return Varun and Shravanthi came together to make their love successful. When you think about others instead of yourself someone will surely think about you.
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Someone please pinch me. I can’t believe I completed 50 episodes. Uff. And all thanks to you my dear readers, you have been my support system and such wonderful company. I actually thought of ending it in 10 or 15 episodes. But then it crossed 20 then 25 and then 30 and now 50. I’m feeling like I scored half century.
Do tell me your journey through my this first creation and to which character you feel more connected to. I have written poems and articles but never a story or fiction. This is actually first trial of my life in this field.
I know I have made you people cry most of the time and been a snail speed writer. Sometimes predictable and sometime unpredictable. Some good and some bad boring chapters. But you people have always encouraged me throughout. My first creation. It really feels great when you see your creation grow. I’m really sorry if I disappointed you people with this chappy. I wanted to make it special. But don’t know whether I’m successful in doing that. I really love you all for being there with me and tolerating my torture. I love all my readers. People who comment and people who don’t comment them also. Some surprise silent readers. Everyone has made this journey beautiful. Thank you will be small word to say. But I would say I’m blessed to have you people in my life. Advance Happy new year. I will meet you people next Friday with next update of Rishtey. Sorry if the chappy was not upto your expectations.
62 Comments
Moon description is awesome, amazing part
Thank you lovely ?
Its super awesome
Happy new year dear
Thank you so much Sindhu dear. Happy New year to you too. I must give all the credit to you only. Thanks a ton
Its awesome sally.I have searched my dictionary fully I don’t have any apt word to praise u and ur ff.last part was touching.congrats buddy for crossing 50 epi . from starting to till now every epi was awesome.
Yaa forgot to write moon description was superb .
U r a emotional queen.u just portray evey emotion perfectly.
U give importance to everyone in ur ff which makes it best.
More than raglak ragsan I love this pair and ragini and vidyut in deeshu ff.
I don’t wanna write big essay so let me stop it here are u gonna bash me for making u to read this comment.
Pinku thank you so so much for loving this pair so much dear ? and I love when you write such big comments so I loved your comment dear.
Omg deeee
I can say just one word
Nd it is u nailed it
I’m just out of words
U have showed all d story till now in just one single part
I can say proudly that it is my favourite story till now I read in my life
I’m just speechless
U just left me tounge tied
Thank you so much for making me too part of this wonderful journey by keep nagging you to update
Nd my favourite scene in this story is nitin cones to know that ragini is the one whom he is searching in Shruthi’s volleyball match
Nd next one is ragnit confession scene where ragini kisses nitin
I just love this part to core of my heart dee
U made it really special
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
Thank you so much Harshu. I really love your nagging and glad that you are part of this beautiful journey. Bingo they are my favorite too. Love you bacha.
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Aap ko mujhe jhelna hi padega kyunki aap be hi toh mujhe aise banaye ho nd love u 2 ,3,4,5 dee
Nd u r so special to me as u r my 1st friend here in tu so u r d most special person in my life dee
omg 50 epi congo dr fantastic epi best one was flashback scenes of their full journey emotional kar dia yaar just kidding but superb epi n in advance HAPPY NEW YEAR 2 u ,ur family n frnds
My dear Paul. Thank you so much for loving my story. Happy New year to you n your family and friends. I’m really blessed to have you in this journey thank you
mind blowing , amazing superb, aweasome
n a very HAPPY NEW YEAR
Thank you meera. Happy New year dear
PERFECT!! outstanding., u make me go crazy with tis ff. every charac is jus awesome. i loved the gift part scene which ragini reads..
Thank you so much abi. You have always forgiven me whenever I have ignored your favorite couple. Thank you for being there.
I love varun and shru new love story plz give them more space everyothers story are same but there seems freshen one
Hey Anita. Yes dear. I will surely give them space thank you for the suggestion
For golden jublee congrates you a lot
Thank you dear
first of all a very very happy new year in advance to u
actually i also couldn’t believe that u had posted 50 i rechecked chappy no. heheheeh me being jagga jasoos i too can’t believe i readthis many chapter
this chappy was extra special bcz it had every character and it was was written beautifully especially that book part omg that was soooooooo sweet how u get such amazing ideas i must say u r really a romantic person hehehehheeh and ragini is such a cutiepie awwwwww pyaara baccha and nithin tooo hai hi best
from chappy to.till now u have always amazed me with ur writing skills but rulaya bhi boht hehehhe but chalo chalta hai
and my fav character is difficult to choose as all r my fav i like ragini nithin g ragini’s senior g radhika ruchika kabeer and everyother character
and i love the most the writer of this story hehehehe sry nithin
i just want to say i want ur autograph plzzzz hehehehe and thank u for making this year special with ur beautiful stories just love u a lotttttttt (sry farii jaanu love u the most hehehe)
Hehe jaanu i too love u d mostest …bt after dis update..i really wont mind if u love her lotzzz…coz shez ..shezzz somethng ahh!!i dnt have words to explain her…shezzzz EXTRA ORDINARY!! Jazzy ab main smjhi y u always complains dat she makes u cry!! Coz today litterelyyy she made me cry.. cry wid tears of happiness… sally my sweethearttt!!!u r realllly MAGICALL …believe me dr u r jst PERFECT!!love u soo sooo much(jazzy jaanu love u mostest okay u know na!) Keep going lyk dis grl!!!we are reallly lucky to have u wid us..u are one of d BESTEST writer .umaah!!! A big tight hug from me n my jaanu jazzy 😉 😀
🙁 mjhe bhul gai fari anti or jagga jaooo kattttiiiii
Or Api apni is chutki b autograph dedo na plzzzz *puppy eyes
are meri antii ki bacchi….maine kitne baar tujhse kaha hai tu to jaaan hai apni yaar rajnikant….tere bina main n jaanu dono adhooore hai…love u cho cho much yaar rajdhani xpress 😀 n sally ek autograph idhar v yaar 😀 u know na m ur big vala fan 😀
hayyyeee nahi fizoo tu toh meri sweetheart ha yaar
First off all Jagga jasoos I love you a lot ? for this beautiful essay he he he. Autograph ???? I have a better option keep guessing love you.
hrheheheh u r very bad sally u always do this i dont like suspenses lol
hehe jazzzy tu jitna suspense ko hate krti hai …utna he tujhe suspence milte jara hai 😀 …phle nidz ka n ab salllly ka v hahahahah 😀 ..jaan all d bst w
jaaan all d bst wid ur suspenses 😀 hehe 😉 😀
And you got to wait for your surprise till 2nd Jan as TU is not accepting any new article submission. That is really bad.
Hehehehe love u allll woooow lets celebrate new year partyyy here
Surpriseeeeeeee *asonished api api plzzz tell na wanna knw surpriseee yr
jaanu ab aap bhi aise karogi hehhehe and really mujhe neend nahi aati agar koi suspense bolta ha ????
fizooo where we will celebrate here only okkk meri jaanu ko bhi bulao apni cycle leke aa jaye hehehehe
Check my profile wall. ??????
i saw i saw u r talking abt new story wahhhhh can’t wait now
It’s outstanding update
Congratulations for 50th update
Nd advance happy new year
Thank you arohi. Happy New Year dear
yaar sally it is really amzing .mindlowing,fantastic ,fablous etc words r not enough to appreciate u.i’m very honestly saying that this my fav epi among all th epi of this ff really while reading this i went back day i read first epi of u r ff nd remembered every incident that made laugh,cry ,smile…..My fav characters in this is manny.suhani nd rachna.i love manny nd suhani a lot,i also love fights of manny nd rachna.abt this epi it is really awsme epi…u know by reading this one epi is enough to know the whole story if any new reader read it.i like the moon description is superb…nd i think the book which nithin gifted to ragini is the best gift that a friend or anyone can give to their loved once.sometimes i think it is too emotional yaar but after reading this i understand that emotions builts relationaships …..nd in this website ur ff is one which has very very long epi to read.last but not least ur an amzing writer nd i think emotional too.nd sry if say anything wrong these r my feeling abt ur ff nd if u feel plz forgive…Advance happy new year ……
Sri Sri Sri. I just love you a lot dear. I’m really glad to have you with me in this journey. I can’t express how much I wait for your comment. I know you love Manny and Suhani more than others but you have showered your love to others also. You are such a wonderful person. Full of positive energy. And I give the credit for this 50th episode to you because you suggested me to give equal importance to each pair and I’m continuing beyond 50 chappy is all because of you. Whoever RagNit pair lovers are here they should thank you.
Ahh!!!frst of all congratulationsssssssss for dis huge success..wohoo u crossed 50 bt i pray dat dis ff goes till infinity!!!
Frst tym in my lyf m experiencing d feelng ,which m going through now..i donno how to describe u yaar!!
Now i got to know y jazzy always complains dat u make her cry!!litterely dr u reallly make us cry…bt wid happy n pleasure tears..
Ahh!!d way u describe each n every scene ws beyound perfect!!u r soo talented tat i cnt even explainn!!
U r really aN unique creation of god dr!!
U know wt wen rags ws readng dat diary…i ws rememberng d past updates…how dis story started wid camp ..n how it proceeds….d feelng whch i experienced readng it ws magicall!!n u created dat magic dr…u made me…us… sooo attached to dis ff…litterelyyy u showed d real meang of RISHTEYYY…dis ff is far far far from any other ffs …some ffs were our fav..some are unique..some are interestng,sweet,etc…but dis…diss ff is beyound everythng…i dont have an appropriate word to put dis ff in a specific category …its a reallly veryyy beautiful ff…one cant get resist of it..u r really lyk a magnet…ur writng skill ur storiess attracts everyone towards u…
Dis story consists everythng-emotions,sadness,happiness,love,anger,helplessness,twists…everythnggggggg!!
It ws ..it is…n it wl b one of d BESTEST ff in history of TU ….Now i really lack words to say nythng…!!! At last i jst wanna say is A BIGGGGG THANKYOU to u …thnku thnku thnku sooooo much for dis marvellous ff…u nailed it litterelyyy !!!..dis story wl always b dere in my heart…m really spellbounded wid dis ff n u sally…love u soo much ..v r reallly reallly blesssed to get u…i wl always pray dat u get all d happiness in lyf…always keep rockng lyk dis sweetheart!! Happy new yr in advance dr..have a blissfull lyf ahead 😀 …keep smiling rockng shinning n stay blessed sweeety 😉 😀 love u so so sooo much!!! N always remember dat U R D BESTTTTTTT!!!! Umahhhhh ;)lots of hug n kisses 😀
My sweetheart fairy. A big big big thank you ? I m loss of words to say you thanks. You have been an integral part of this journey. Such a lovely comment I’m crying here with happy tear. I’m like blank how to react to you.
love u sooo much yaar sallly 😀 …u r reallly veryyy sweet 🙂 😉 …always keep smilng my dear 😀 ..dheer sara love tujhe 😉
Allah bless u 🙂
Uffff yrr Api itna ziada lambaaaaa updateeeeeeee ma prhti he rhegi n now i scratching my head to knw what to writeeeee first of all A Heartlllyyyyyuu congooooooo for ur half century woooow what a updateee Apiiiiii till now its the bestest updateeeeeeee u gave hehehehe u give all update fab but this one is special one uffff sooo sooo soooo soooo soooo soooo soooo wala proud offffff u Apiiii u r very very talented u r the first writer for which i dont have any words to describeeeeee ur ability u really made me speechless ur skillls were out of world not aliens Heheheh but honestly i have lack of words to praise u sachiiiii mai even i would have read boooks n do degrees also i cant b able tp praise u.. … U r the kajol of ddlj in writing u r the veeru of sholay…. U r the best best bestest u r my srk heheh talented srk bestest Apiii bestest sister bestest writer best best best n nowww as its scnd last day of this year soooo a advnc happy new year toooo u.. . May the upcoming year brings lots of happiness fun n talent’s to u may u live long life n stay blessd n keep smiling n always keeep smiling lots lots lots lots of love for my talented Apiiiiiiiijjjj love u shooo wala muchhh n a bigg huggy to u n keeep rocking as alwayzsss ms. Super talenteddddd queeeeen love u againnnnn n b happyyyy
Oye appppiiii u never evr gave a single boar chapppy dont u dare to say otherwise*glaressss and about fav character sooo its very difficult to tell cuz u describe each n evry character soooo beautifully that its vry rare to telll but my mostest fav is manny n rach Hehehe u knw why cuz i love tom n jerry cartoons eheheh n my superrrrr cuteeee nitz and ragu they are adorable n after that swayam varun shraa suhani kabbi ishan radhika arjun shruu suji n nitz mom shehkar janki all all sre my fav just bcz of u loved their bond u really give us meaning of rishtey which are unbreakabke love u my queeeeen n sorry for blabbering alotttt
I meant it in funny way chutki. Chorry I will not say it again ?????????????????
I’m just blank blank blank blank. ??????????????
So much love us Allah. I will die with happiness. What should I say? I’m just blessed to have you in my life as my chutki.
Api don’t u dare to say about dying *glaring n u deserve this love u r worth of it afterall my super talented Apiii
Sally after reading thz update….am really proud…am crazy fan of u….omg what can I say….today not today everyday u made me speechless but today u do beyond that….am blank dear…..what appreciate word I say to u Sally….that each and every word r not enough to appreciate u….u r beyond everything dear….what a update ya….whn i read the book part…it’s really emotional….am crying…tears r flowing out of my eyes….thz time it’s not a sad wala tears it’s happy wala tears Sally….i also don’t know how do you think thz much….After reading thz update…i also want a husband like nithin dear….but i tell am not like ragini….if I got husband like nithin means I try to like ragini….
_________________….what ever u want fill thz blanks dear…bcz am not getting any appreciate word to appreciate u…..so I give thz work to u dear…..thz s one of my most favourite besssssstttttt besssssstttttt besssssstttttt besssssstttttt update and ff dear…..u r best writer dear….hats off to ur writing and hats off to ur imagination…..
congratulations for ur half century Sally dear…..Each and every character r my favourite dear….no one character s less than another one….Every one r extraordinary character in ur ff…..
u r not disappoint us dear….u make us happy…u know one thing our Sally don’t disappoint others….she always gives her best….if again u say like that…i will kill you…..thz s one of the best special update Sally…..am blessed to see a writer like u….A big wala thankkkkssss to TU bcz of thz I meet u na…..and u too dear….A huge wala thhaannkkksss to u dear for thz wonderful update….u r unique one, master piece, great writer Sally….today I give u a shower of candies dairies dear…..love u alot Sally dear….A big teddy wala hugggg to u…..love u love u love u love love u alot dear….and plz give ur autograph to ur crazy fan dear….last but not least…Advance happy new year Sally….may God give all happiness and blessings to u and ur family….and fulfill ur all wishes…..God bless you dear….tkcr dear….
Asru. I’m crying right now reading your comment ahhhh. I’m just blank. I love you too sweetie pie. And a big teddy hug to you. I always say I’m your Jabra fan of your comments. I love your Candie shower. Thank you so so much dear
Ab mein kya bolu yaar…someone pls help me to put sme wrds here..sallyyy…u r an angel nd blessing in my life..u nd ur srory has bcm a part of my life nw…
I really dnt knw wht to commnt… m speechless….nithin is ……(no wrds)..m weeping here out of happinessss…. happpy new yearrrr myyyy loveee……..
Happy Happy New Year to you too my love. I’m just out of words for the love you have shown to me. You are a blessing in my life a friend whom I connect emotionally right from the beginning. I just have no words to say you thank you. But I have better way to say it. That I just love you ???????????????????????
Omg Omg Omg….. I just wanted to scream loud nd say that I love this ff beyond ur imagination. Collection of all wonderful moments as a diary. I loved it. It’s not just a story for me. I was living in it as a third person seeing them living their lives. It’s not that I love a single character in this ff, I love Manny Rachu Ani fights, rags Nitz love, radhu nd shalini as a maa to rags, Aniket,kabeer nd ishan as a best bro, varun as a best Frnd, shravanthi, Janaki ma, Shekar pa, Tej uncle, Yashu ma, Suji ma. I may have missed out few but each nd everyone are responsible for this emotionally beautiful Ff to come out nd touch our hearts. Take care dr.
U are surely gonna become a great author if u start writing it story’s as a book.
Wishing you a very happy new year which will fulfill all ur dreams nd give all happiness u deserve.
And you made me speechless right now. Ahhh is this the punishment for making you people cry throughout. I eagerly wait you to read my story coz you just grasp the emotion the way I wanna convey it. Even my mom will not understand me so much you know. You give me that great feeling that my writing makes you visualize the things it’s huge compliment for a writer. Thank you so much and a Happy New year
believe me it’s one of the best chappy and this ff is my all time favourite… you rocked it… it’s so emotional but I loved It to the core… your few chappy’s makes me cry but that is what should happen if your writing is touched to the readers heart and it every time happened with me your each chappy touched my heart I am not saying it just to say bit I really mean it… I don’t know how to appreciate you but you are really a good writer…..
love your ff and you loads ???
Happy new year dear…
I love you yaar ragzee. You always give me positive vibes and glad to know that my stories touch your heart. You have been a wonderful Co writer to me. I just have no words to describe how much your each comment means to me. Love you
yar seriously ur such an amazing writer
ok some how i think my character are like these 2 of them lazy and bhukar like ani i eat and sleep alot my favourites little bit dumb like ragu as i dont get the situations and blurt out something which embaras others
Thank you so much Lisa. It really means a lot. I’m glad that u could connect to those characters. You have been supporting me right from the initial days. I’m thankful to you.
congrats for 50th part. n this,is bestest part. omg this is awesome part I ever read. I love moon part I didn’t read such beautiful explanation of moon. ur imagination is extraordinary. n happy new year in advance.
Tishu. I was waiting for you to read the update. I’m really glad that I did not disappoint you. Thank you so much dear and a Happy New year
Outstanding update