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Rishto ki Dastan (Part 10)

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Hello people…I’m back…I hope u r liking my story…..my previous episode’s comments reminds me of Samjhota 1..I was bashed badly….People I have two requests
1)Criticism is accepted…but criticize the story for improvements and not the writers..
2)U don’t have any right to bash readers…

I guess my ff is the only ff where people bash each other…someone said that I do this couple drama for comments…really? Is that my fault that people r commenting?And bashers themselves r increasing my comments..they r dragging such topic that r creating controversies…none of u know me personally..then y r u saying that u hate me?For this story?If u think that these things will affect me then that’s your misconception….I guess I’m the worst writer here…I was really hurt by the comments..many of u suggested me to take them positively..now u tell me how do I take comments like I hate u Eva and Eva is autistic positively?This won’t make any improvement in my writing but just discourage me…..I did not write for part 2 days because I was hurt…seeing bashers bashing everyone who wer supporting me….

I’M REALLY SORRY….MANY OF U TOOK MY STAND AND WER BASHED INSTEAD….So lets go for this episode…

The epsode starts with…
Swara comes to the office…Sanskar smiles seeing her…Swara goes to her place…
Laksh is in his cabin..he is thinking about Swara…he is founding Swara everywhere..just then Swara comes to hs cabin..
Laksh:Okay Swara..I know u r not here..but I’m seeing u everywhere…..i know u will disappear soon…
Swara:Sir..I’m here…
Laksh:No u r not..
Swara:Sir I am…
Laksh:Okay fine then if u r here then hug me…will u?U won’t cause u r not here…u r just my imagination….
Swara:What r u saying dir?
Laksh:See I’m correct..u r just my imagination..
Swara hugs Laksh…
Laksh is shocked and speechless….Swara breaks the hug…
Swara:Now r u sure that I’m here?
Laksh nods innocently..Swara gives him a file and asks him to sign…Laksh is about to sign when she stops him and asks him to read before signing….
Laksh;U read it right?Thats enough for me…i trust u..
Laksh signs the paper and Swara leaves from there…Just then Sanskar asks Swara to come….Swara comes with him..
Sanskar:Hello everyone…I wanted to share something with u all…I want to introduce u all to my fiancé
Everyone smiles…
Sanskar:So meet my fiancé…Swara Gadodia….
Everyone starts clapping…Laksh comes there and asks everyone or the reason for their happiness…
Sanskar:Lucky..i introduced my fiancé to everyone..and..
Laksh:Bha..where is my would be bhabi?
Sanskar:Areh u know her…..your pa….as in Swara…
Laksh looks at Swara…he stands speechless…..Swara gives a fake smile….
Everyone goes and congratulates them..and then get back to their work…Laksh calls Swara to his room..
Laksh:So Miss Gaadodia..or should I call u bhabi?
Swara;Swara at office and bhabi at home simple..(Sarcastically)
Laksh:U think everything is a joke?
Swara:What joke?
Laksh:Nothing..
Swara is about to leave when Sanskar comes there…
Laksh has tears in his eyes…
Sanskar:U crying?
Laksh:No

Sanskar:tell me the truth…
Laksh looks at Swara..
Sanskar:r u sad cause she is going to be your bhbai?U hate her so much?
Laksh:That’s what I can’t do bhai..i can’t hate her…..cause I love………..
Sanskar:Lucky?
Sanskar:Swara….u even love…
Swara:Sir…
Swara looks down…
Sanskar;oh so u both love each other..
Sanskar has tears in his eyes…still trying to hold back his tears…
Laksh:Bhai..I’m sorry….
Sanskar:U idiot..y r u apologizing?U loved someone…that’s not a mistake….I’ll go and talk to mom dad..u both deserve to be with each other…u both love each other….u will be together..that’s a promise…
Laksh:U r sacrificing your love for me?
Sanskar:Laksh….she is a nice girl…and this was an arrange marriage(he is lying)
Laksh:That means u don’t love her?
Sanskar:No….
Laksh:I’m relieved then..thank u bhai..
Sanskar leaves from there
Laksh hugs Swara…Swara feels irritated but still pretends to be fine…
Swara leaves from there..and meets someone…
The unknown person:Our plan is working…
Swara:ha….thank u so much..u r helping me in this mission…without u nothing would had been possible
The person:I’m happy to see Sanskar in that state..
Swara;Why?As in u don’t have any personal rivalry with her..right?
Person:no no..i’m just helping u..after what he did to Ragini…he deserves it…
Swara:I don’t know why I feel that Sanskar is the wrong person…i mean…i don’t think that he will do something like that….i planned of leaving him on the marriage day and marry his brother..so that he feels the pain of losing love….of being betrayed…….but he….he got to know everything today..i could clearly see that he loved me…he was in pain…but he…he backed up….just because he got to know that we(swalak) love each other…the person who respects the word love so much….can he betray his own love?
The person:No no..u don’t know him….he has 2 faces….he is not innocent..he plays with everyone”s feelings..
Swara;u r Di,Laksh and Sanskar’s college friend….u told me the truth..so I came here to take my revenge…thank u…

Precap:Who is the person?
Hint:I introduced that person in my story….

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  2. Bisha on

    Ore baba! I forgot. Sriously! Haha Eva another breathtaking wonderful chappy. And yes, you don’t have to be sad for we the supporters of you will keep on supporting you no matter what. And Niti, Kriya, please don’t misunderstand me. After all we are on the same line- fans of Eva and will support her come what may. So let’s just put our hands together and say HIP HIP HURRAY! 3 CHEERS FOR EVA THE GREAT! LOL. Eva you are a very strong girl. I never said such abusive words should be taken positively. I really pity on those abusive bashers. But see you will have bashers. U just keep on writing such wonderful chappies for your fans. Eva Rocks! You are such a sweet sis. I really wish I could meet you. Lol. Are you on wattpad? That would be fu. And keep writing..

    • Niti on

      Sorry Bisha…I was too rude i guess…and yes Eva…u r amazing….i was surprised to see your comment and replies..u asked me not to taunt anyone for his or her english……that stupid idiot called u autistic..without reason..when i answered her taunting her for her english, u asked me to stop cause u didn’t want her to feel embarrassed ….hats off to an outstanding personality like you….that’s another reason why i read your ffs..BECAUSE OF U…and yes Bisha u r right..EVA ROCKS!!!!!

    • Bisha on

      Thank you so much Niti for understanding me. EVA ROCKS!! And thus is also for Eva that our misunderstanding cleared. Right?

    • Niti on

      Yeah..because of her only our misunderstanding is cleared and now this bechari is facing all these things which she doesn’t deserve…

  4. Anjali on

    god…. no idea who it could be….

    Vidhi, Niti, Ashish…
    Too good Eva!

    Pls post soon. And people who think that Eva is autistic or whatever, FIrst learn the true meaning of the word. Then try writing a ff urself and see how comments are given. Don’t u ppl understand that there’s someone else out there who’s actually hurt by all this? You think that Eva’s a fictional being or what?
    She’s a human being.
    So at least out of humanity, Pls don’t criticise her. As she herself has told, Question her writing, not her.

    And Eva, Don’t worry. Your readers will take care of themselves. But I’ve had enough of this bashing. If they start again, I swear I’m gonna get soooo pissed off… I’ve seriously had enough of this..

    I swear, I dont know how you are so strong. It’s one thing when they don’t like ur work… But when they criticise you.. God…
    Anyways, Love you and will always be there for you so don’t worry… 😀 😀

    • Bisha on

      U are very right Anjali. Yess like Anjali I too think now I am gonna lose my cool if I see any more abusive bashing. Bashers please Eva ko baksh do. She is really a young vivacious writer. Atleast dont comment on her ffs if you cant praise her writing. You reakly need to understand tge hard works behind any story that is being posted here. All of us take our time from our busy schedule and write just to fulfil our happiness, quench of writing and also try to make the readers happy. But we cant really make everyone happy. Try to understand that. Thank you Anjali.a big thanks to all the supporters of Eva who take her stand no matter what.

    • Anjali on

      Please don’t thank me bisha…. I’m not doing this for me. I’m doing this bcos its not their right to criticise ppl. I agree with you. It take so much time just to write one chapter. And she’s done her utter best… These people don’t understand that. Now more than anger, I feel hurt and sad by all this.

      Anyways, Telly updates, When ur gonna review every comment, Then y can’t you stop the basher’s comments? Please try to do this. It will make this a whole lot peaceful.

  5. tanu on

    don’t b sad Eva …in logo ki baato ka bura mat maano n just do best …yeh log ragini KO psnd krte h or kuch swalak n swasan KO inhe kahani se zyada characters pasnd h ….I m also swasan fan but story also matters that’s y I read it ….u r gud writer ..n don’t mind of anyone ‘s bad words ….

    • reader on

      Tanu 1 question for u….do u hate d character ragini or tejaswi or both?
      don’t bash me bcos u might think me as a ragini fan but m both a fan of tejaswi and helly n amazed at their acting skills at such a young age….so if u don’t mind pls answer my question?

    • Niti on

      Is telly updates your property that we need to take your permission to write a comment?Eva is stupid…and u r ILLITERATE!!!!

    • tanu on

      mene ragini swalak n even swasan …I m swasan fan phir b mene sbhi fans k bare me likha Jo Eva KO bash kr rhe h chahe vo ragini swalak ya swasan fan ho …ragini n teju both r my favorite too ….sorry if I hurt any

  6. Anjali on

    Sorry for the long comment…

    BTW I saw ur comment in my chapter… To change ur logo, Go to this website…

    https://en.gravatar.com/?logout=1

    Press sign in using wordpress and then give ur email address and make a password.
    After that, Go to wordpress settings, where you can change ur profile photo…
    Once you choose the pic it’s done.

    While commenting, you have to choose the email id you used to create this account. otherwise the pic wont appear.
    Hope this helps… If it doesnt, Tell me… And ill help u

    • Anjali on

      Thank you so much for the concern divya… But I think I know exactly what I have to do.. A person has asked me for help and I will try my best to help her.

      Umm.. So u created ur id right??
      Now in the bottom middle. There will be wordpress settings saying change ur password, change ur profile pic and all.. .Then u choose ur pic, crop it and then it will show a page saying manage gravatars

      in that you have to select ur pic again and confirm that u want it for this email id… Then it will ask for rating. give the g rating. now try commenting.. It should work

  7. Abdul hafiz on

    First of all,’shuvo noboborsho’.Amar jonno tumi best.Tumi amar smiley queen.Tai please onner kotha shune nijeke hurt korona.By the way,it’s awesome.Ami jani mysterious person ta ke kintu bolbona.Bcz I love secrets.
    #be happy
    Spread smile

    • Eva on

      Shubho noboborsho to u too…and yes…ekhon ami oo karo kotha shunbo na….btw u can reveal your guess…..
      U too be happy…..

    • Siyali on

      U go and read them na..why do u even visit this page?Just because she includes swalak even in her ff…u r comparing her story with other’s ones…Its Poonam’s opinion..why r u poking your nose in this?

    • Nidhi on

      Oyeeee selfish Eva ki bacchi…tu kyu dusro ke mamlo meh apna tang ararahi hai?Koi kam nehi hai kya?Why r u writing your own wish in other’s comment as a reply?

    • djiej on

      First look at your self Nidhi, what are you doing? The same as her, why are poking your nose in between, badi aayi “selfish Eva ki bachchi”

    • Vishakha on

      hahaha and u r copying Nidhi….poking your nose,feet,hand and everything in between 🙁 :0 DJIEJ…

  10. Bhargavi on

    Hai Eva, this was an wonderful update. You are such a great writer and I don’t know why others can think in other way as you have such a talent that with your words you made me to read your stories and no to miss even a single one. Yours is the only ff I will be reading keep aside my interest in the pairs.
    Eva don’t mind about the bad words . In life we will face such as some would be there to discourage, but don’t feel bad yar. We all are here to support you. We love your ff. Take care!!

  11. Anu on

    Dear don’t feel sad. I never read ur ff but I know many people admire you here wholly and as a writer i think you should always take the positive things and neglect the negative things. Dont care about the bashers.

    And @bashers
    #SHAME
    Hiding behind ur real identity u r trying to discourage a great writer who takes hours to write this. I’ve no words for you all!

    Eva keep writing ♥ 🙂

    • Eva on

      Hahaha..this time 😀 :D..I HATE U TOO..and I’m the worst writer then why do u even enter my ff page?.Anyways..keep smiling and bashing….

    • Eva on

      Just one question for u SWASAN…If Sanskar would be in Laksh’s place today in my ff…then your dialogue be same?Would u say IF U WANT TO PAIR IT IN SWASAN SAY IT DIRECTLY…..never mind…no hard feelings for anyone present here…

    • selfish eva on

      eva even am smiling and bashing u even i hate u i will say it directly i want swasan will make it no na y r u saying if want say it directly u cheao am still smiling u said keep smiling and bashing

    • Vishakha on

      Selfish eva……u go to hell..u smile like a b****….u r cheapo number 1 commenting from different emails…

    • Pari on

      How is that Eva’s fault if someone writes in her ff page that she is Helly shah?And r u illiterate or something/Have u ever read any ff of Eva?She never asked for comments…i remember in Samjhota 1 when people were bashing her saying that she is doing everything for comments..she asked us to read..no need for comments…don’t bash anyone unless u know about her…

    • pavani on

      Tnk u darling for liking myff really iam very happy but I said it that day nd iam saying it today also iam really sorry if I hurt u plzzz don’t compare writers every one have their own style .nd one more thing if u don’t like her ff just ignore her ff y r u giving more imp to her by commenting.

    • meher on

      Cm’on guyz… they r on screen characters… y u feel hurt for pairing …. even m swasan fan bt i read ONLY eva’s ff irrespective of pair… cz her story is osm… grow up ! If u cant appreciate then plz dont bash… n y only eva… there are many stories where pairing are lyk ragsan swalak or whatever… bt do u go there n bash them for nt wring YOUR fav couple… no u dont… then stop it… doing so… if u dont lyk her ff fine.. u only go for pair… nt for story… I LOVE U EVA ur an osm writer…

    • Anjali on

      That’s enough..
      Pls stop telling that you hate her. When you know she never reveals the pairs and always brings a twist in her stories… When you think she might disappoint you, STOP READING HER FF…
      No one’s asking you to read her ff…

      Now you’ll probably just tell something about me. Idc…
      As long as I feel good about myself, I really couldn’t care less about ur comments. I have ppl and friends who support me in my ff… You don’t understand just how a writer feels when he/she looks at the comments. the sense of satisfaction, The thrill that ppl like it and the bitter hurt and disappointment when they receive personal hate comments…
      What’s wrong with you all?

      sorry for this. I know I’ve been extremely rude. But look at yourselves.
      I understand. You feel hurt by her way of writing. Then the solution is simple. Don’t read it. Or read it once she’s clearly stated her pairs. But don’t insult her. Give her suggestions to improve this story or whatever, but discouraging her is just cheap of you ppl..

    • Kayra on

      Hey Swasan…y r u after Eva?What has she done to u?I bet….if u read it further and see that its Swasan by any chance then u would be quiet…such a couple freak u r….hay!!!….bhagwan apko satbuddhi dey….

    • tanu on

      me to wants that ki Eva pehle hi pairs bata de taaki hume padhna chaiye ki nahi …bcoz generally me swasan fan hi padhti hu …lekin iska MATLAB ye nahi ki u hurt her …uski writing ka alag hi tarika h …plz don’t bash her ….

    • Anu on

      Tell me if she is hurting your feeling then what r u doing….u r doing bwru gud job ha tell na….u r consoling her? U only care about your feelings have u ever care about others feeling,eva’s feeling..if u 1% humanity also na now or self respect then never bash her mid.ask her soory…..

  15. reader on

    M a silent reader n a big fan of ur all ffs…m really sad 4 those demented people bashing u unnecessarily, but anyways u shuld b proud of urself bcoz at such a young age u have amazing writing skills,so carry on dear n u r a beautiful person from heart…it is seen in ur comments…..
    Coming to the epi…it was awesome can’t wait for the next part….n gud suspense…..
    N 1 more thing i know u r a swalak fan….but 1 request if in ur next ff can u giv same importance to both swara and ragini or a little bit more to rags bcoz in serial they r not giving any importance to her n as i only read ur ff so…..itz a humble request but if u don’t want then no problem n 1 more question do u like ragini/tejaswi?
    Sorry if u felt bad but no hard feelings for u dear n sorry for writing such a long comment…..
    ur ff’s silent reader?

    • Siddhi on

      Shut up u nonsensical person….don’t u know how to behave? Khud ff likhegi na tu..toh I’ll make sure ki meh tujhe bash kar karke dho du….then u will understand Eva’s pain…and yes Eva is what? I really don’t care about what u wanted to say..but let me tell u what u r…u r a senseless,heartless,illiterate witch…

  22. Naimi on

    Nice epi n the most imp thing I like in Ua ff is pair mystery …we can’t even guess until n unless u want to say n go on dea avoid bashers

  23. Anu on

    Yaar how can u bashers hurt her….even I only read swasan ff..I have not read this ff fully but u guys doesn’t have any right hurt her……guys be mature y u bashers bejave like insane…u know how difficult is to write an ff..if u will try na nd then someone will bash u …..then only u will realize how it feels…..guys plz for god sake if u don’t like her writing then ignore it don’t bash…..she is fabulous write nd if u any problem y u comment ok she doesn’t tell about pair then what…its her wish this is her ff what’s your problem in that….in reply update even in fb there r many ff of different couples…..choose your favorite couple ff nd read them don’t bash her……u know without seeing or talking to her I can say she has a very gud heart

  25. Jhanvi on

    Hey eva don’t pay attention to this bashers. Dont waste your time on reading their comments.. You are a gr8 writer. This fact is not going to change ?? by their comments. btw where were ot this two days? I was like wth!! Why she is not posting the ff? Is she alright. And one more thing you are too confusing

  26. dolly on

    Awesome eva…i have read all ur fan fictions …u are a wonderful writer…
    And just keep writing like this…
    Waiting for next update…

    • dolly on

      And one more thing which i like in u is that u don’t mind whatever people speak about u…
      Just keep writing eva…i love ur ff…all ur twists are awesome…

  27. zuha (Asya fan) on

    Good dear and whosoever bash u do not take it seriously i read ur ff for the 1st time nd loved it , and especially for those who say bad about Eva please if u have problem with Eva keep them safe with you , and you have no right of insulting someone , just keep yourself in Eva’s shoe and think what if this happens with you and I myself write OS and FF’s ,so writers like when someone like their hard work coz writing is not an easy task , and we write for ourselves and for our readers who love reading and before saying to someone think twice , coz it may hurt and god dislike it……..

  28. Lee on

    Hey eva u r a very gud writer…
    Just keep this in mind ..
    That keep writing..
    logo ka kaam hai kehna ( bash karna ) agar ham ye soch ne lage ki lo kya kahenge to log kya kaam karenge….so dont bother ..
    Keep writing kyuki agar aise log hai jo jinhe tumhare ff nai pasand to aise bhi to log hinge na ki jo sirf rumhare liye ye page kholte hinge n while doing so they r hoping ke tumhe ff post kiya ya ni