Thanks for amazing comment in last part,
Merry Christmas to everyone, may this Christmas bring lots of happiness in your life, and have good relations with everyone………
I replies to each commentor in intro part so you guys can see your comment reply
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story starts with a girl sitting in room, it seems that she is in deep thinking, layer of pain is easily visible on her face which she can’t hide ………
GIRL POINT OF VIEW
It is being one month of my sister death, but till now I didn’t got to know about my sister real culprit, don’t know who is that person…….
I know how much I did struggle this one month to know my sister real culprit but, alas! I didn’t found real culprit till now, these rich people are really too much cunning, may be they give money to police people but now i can’t live like this, I have to take major step, I can’t sit like this, I have to do my work to find my sister’s death real culprit……
Now I should talk to Namish police spector.
GIRL POINT OF VIEW END
GIRL REACHES TO POLICE STATION…………..
Namish- hey, ragini you here.
Ragini- yes, now I can’t wait for your all processes, I really want to find my sister death culprit as soon as possible..
Namish- but why, we are doing our work
Ragini- I have seen your work but please as a friend, please help me to go in modeling world
Namish- what??
Ragini- yes, I don’t have any other option.
Namish- its ok but it is not safe there.
Ragini- I don’t know anything about safe but the flame of revenge which is flawing inside my heart will not end till I do my work…..
Namish- its ok I will talk to any modeling people to take you in there company..
Ragini- no, I want to go in your brother company.
Namish – have you gone mad, do you know your sister is killed in his company only..
Ragini- yes, this is reason I will go there and day after tomorrow is modeling week of walking on ramp so I will go there,
Namish – its your wish, you know very well me and my bro lucky, we don’t have much good relations.
Ragini- I know its ok, bye
Namish – ok bye,
Ragini turns and smiles, now real culprit get ready, your end time is very soon…….
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Other side, girl is shown changing filea and burning them in one office…….
Room was dark but the her face was visible in burning flame, she is swara.
Now we can clearly see her smirking and devil smile, while speaking something………..
Hahahah, now I created more stuffs of misunderstanding, and now I am going more closer to my work, what I am thinking is going on in my way only, but only few days, just dew days remaining to end this whole drama and that day my mission will be completed………..
Really this world and maximum people only believe what they have shown but they don’t see the real devil faces behind the most good person, this is biggest mistake of world and the person which is able to see these real faces, that person will only come in top in any of the field, this is biggest reason of death of models and business people,
Haha poor people not able to recognize the worst face of their beloved ones, really according to me, we can trust our enemy but not our beloved ones, this is biggest mistake done by people and they face problem. …………….
But what to do, I am doing my work, now see what all new twist will come ……………………
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Other side, lucky goes to his house .
As he enter in house,
An old age women shouts, stop there …….
Lucky- aah
Woman- stop there only, don’t enter in house.
Lucky- ok dida..
Dida brings aarti and do his aarti,
Now my son enter in house.
Lucky- oh, dida why you always do like this.
Dida- because I want to protect my son from each evil spirit, and I want you feel good everytime.
Lucky- ok dida
Dida – you know very well your mother gave me you as my responsibility, she is watching us from god’s house, its my work to complete each responsibility, I don’t want that she feels that I am not caring you.
Tears of sorrow flow from dida eyes to remember about lucky’s mom.
Lucky also gets teary eyes and both hugs, I know dida, but don’t know why my mom is died this much early,
Dida- don’t know beta, that was decided by god, we can’d do anything.
Lucky- yes , but dida you filled to emptiness of my mom and dad from my heart.
Dida kisses on his forehead, speaks playfully, oh my drama queen started her melodrama of nineties serial crying type.
Lucky smile, dida you
Dida – yes I am, now get ready, I will bring food for you..
Lucky- ok dida.
PRECAP- sanky intro, raglak meeting
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A/N
How was part..
Aha what is your point on swara character.
Confused or able to clear this puzzle,
Think think
Bye, take care
30 Comments
Awesome update
Totally interesting
So namish nd laksh r brothers
So ragini is going to join as a model in laksh’s company
What is swara saying
Eagerly waiting to see how will be raglak meeting
Please do continue soon
Nd merry Christmas to you too
I think swara knows who the real culprit is and she wants that truth to come out and reading her pov its clear the person is not laksh and now i m more sure its namish
And merry christmas to u toooo
I found swara character is positive may be some raw agent or something waiting for raglak meeting namish and ragini friendship is awsome
confused,..,…ahhh….hell confused…..lucky seems to be good nd swara.,…hmmm swara….dark character….i think…….
well hii….first time kisi boy ka fan fic dekha hai…nice….keep going
AWESOME
nice update , Ragini to enter modelling world?? I am interested , Swara seems to be a big mystery……..waiting for the mystery to unravel……….Loved laksh-Dida moments…….really cute……….waiting for next part.. Merry chirstmas……..May God Bless you…….Love you…….be happy……..
awesome
amazing
merry christmas pathan 🙂 ….welcome back..sry for nt commentng on prev. updates…amazng concept..story is awesome….waitng eagerly for nxt part..n thnx a lot for raglak ff..keeep rockng n stay blessed dr 😉 😀 love raglak 😉
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nice amazing superb excellent mind blowing u write awesome plzzz give more raglak and be regular don’t take too long gap bcoz now days raglak ff is very less plZzzzzzzz do favor on raglak fan plzzz love all raglak ff and writing missing raglak so only ff and ss ts are for us
Awesome Superb Fantastic
Loved it
So Ragini is joining in Laksh company
Very much Interesting
And regarding Swara’s character little bit confused and have also got some idea
So let’s see whether it comes true
Waiting for the next one…………….
Merry Christmas
Superb part nd merry Xmas
nice love raini
Awesome…
Merry Christmas..
Loved it dear… Plz update soon ?????
At first I am not able to understand Swara’s character anymore…Her character is too much confusing…This episode is good but Swara was talking like a mad girl…I think Namish or Laksh killed Kavya…Swara is not the murderer… She knows the truth and she is trying to reveal it…But her character is confusing…And Ragini is going to join in Laksh’s modeling company…Wow it’s superb and interesting too…And yeah Merry Christmas to you too…Anyways waiting for the next episode…Stay happy and keep smiling…
Nice may I know which character will play in namish police officer? Keep going
Awesome and really confused about swara’s behaviour
Interesting
awesome yar….swara s really mystery….i not understand her…laksh dida scenes so cute…waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…
I think the culprit is namish .I think swara knows something related to kavya death. But let’s see wat u have in mind . happy Christmas bro
Arrey bhai!!!! You clearly confused me yaar.but one question whether is doing good or bad…what a big twist is gonna come…I am just confused.but your writing is awesome keep rocking….I hope it will be interesting.. And it is interesting!!!! Take care keep smiling
At first Merry Christmas to u too..N d ep was wonderful..No words to say..Really its too much interesting..No 1 can beat u Irfan..U r jst awsm..N ur brain also..N about Swara’s character then I think she is mad..Isse zyada kuch nhi aa raha hai mere dimag mein..Kya karu aap ke jaise intelligent toh nhi hoon naa..Anyways u stay happy n keep smiling always..
Interesting episode and eagerly waiting for next episode
awesome loved it
fab and i think swara knows who killed her,cant wait for next part so post soon xx
Assalamu alaikum bro!! ????
Sahi kaha tumne puzzle hai mere liye.!! Hell hell confused!! Scratching my head!! ???
Waaah shabb nahii hai mere pass kyaa kamal ke writer ho tum!! ???
Jaldi seh next Ep update karo!! Mere bhai * cutting my nail * soch rahi hunn !!
awesome and interesting.
Impressive