__…Hey guys ridhima here…… once again to eat ur brains….??…..
Waise bhi this is a treat from my side to my new friends on my birthday….??……
Here we go
( this story takes place in history in the era of kings nd all do keep that in mind before reading happy reading)….
A royal palace is shown…..
A perfect land outside a big garden wid different colors of flowers nd the garderner watering them…..
Birds chirping everywhere…..
This is the most peaceful royal area of the country…..a small area bt filled wid happiness, love , selflessness……
Ofcourse it has to be that way bcz it is governed by the most humble king in the history who always thought of his people his country……
He is none other than our KUNJ…..??….
Girl’s pov….
“Wowwwww……” i exclaimed wen i saw the palace decorated for todays party….
‘Twinkle…..its not yet completed we have to go in the temple tooo’…. reema said from behind….
She is a kid of 14 yrs working in the palace….
Uffff…… all the poor people who can not afford anything on there own are given work in the royal palace…. i was also brought here at the age of 12 bcz my parents died…??….
Bt this place give me everything…. friends, relations…. nd my sujata aunty who cared of us more than our mum…..
Today there is a party in palace bcz today is our king’s birthday…..??…. nd we all are decorating the palace…??….
It feels so good to prepare smething for those people who have given u a life…or a reason to live….
“Twinkle diii lets gooo….preparations are still left….nd after that we have to get ready for party”…
Reema said wid sparkling eyes….. she loves parties…
Hehe…twinkle stop thinking nd lets complete the preparations…
Thinking this we left to temple nd started the preparations…..
Tym passes….nd we completed the preparations…..
I was going out….. ooooo shitttt…!!!! The king is coming this way….
We all bowed our heads in front of him….nd he passed by our sides…. ooo goddd..!! He is sooo cute….???…. haww..???…tw stop thinking all this he is king nd u r jst a slave….
I found my eyes moist while thinking this….
Yes i have loved him from the age of 12…. when i saw him for the first tym….bt he is a king… he never saw us….nd why will he…?????…. stop being selfish…..
Wid this i left to my room…i found my friends getting ready for party bt i denied them as i was in no mood like every year…. by this tym they are being soooo stubborn…
I lost at end nd here i m getting ready now…..
Uffff……
O god this veil (burkha type)….. i m nt able to breath thru it….bt huhhhh this is a compulsion for every girl…. ergggghhhh….. let it be i will nt g.. bt this reemsa he is blackmailiing me…. emotional blackmailer…….
Girl’s pppov ends…..
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King’s /kunj’s pov………
“Awesome…” this words escaped my mouth wen i saw the palace decorated likke a bride… it feels soo good to accept love of people.
Vaise bhi more than me these ppl are excited for my bday….??….. i jst love seeing happiness on there faces…..( so nice king…. i m in love wid this king….???)….
Now here i m standing in the hall…..looking happiness of my people….
“Kunj happy birthday” dad wished me nd hugged me…. i said a thank u…. nd hugged him back…. after tht i departed myself…. nd everyone cme forward nd wished me…..
“Wow….sooo beautiful” i murmered on seeing smething infact smeone….. her eyes….???… she cme forwards nd wished me nd i jst forget to respond…. i was soo lost in her deep eyes….i saw these eyes for the first tym in lsst many years….. may be she is new here….
She left bt i was lost until a cute baby voice interuppted me…..
A cute child handed over me a gift nd ran from thier…..
I saw the gift nd was shocked to see my small statue made up of sand…..it looks sooo good…. i asked sujata aunty to keep it in my room carefully…..
Nd i again started searching her….her eyes….
Kunj’s pov ends……
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Twinkle’s pov…….
O god!!!! He liked my gift…he said sujata aunty to keep it inside his room….i m feeling as the luckiest person on the earth….
I gave my gift to rishi to give it to king as i myself was not able…??….
Bt its okk i m happy as he got my gift nd he liked it tooo…??….
O w8…!!!! Is he coming towards me…no this is not possible….he is a king why will he cme towards me….i lowered my head… bt i was forced to seee upwards wen i saw a hand coming towards me…… i saw him standing jst before me…. nd the hand was his…??….
” will i get pleasure to dance wid a beautiful lady…??” He asked me….he is sooo polite…??…..o god wat….???…. he asked me for dance…???….
Hw cud i…??? I tried to refuse bt his eyes nd his face takes away my thinking capability nd i unintentionally nodded in yes….. o shit!!! Wat i jst did….??? Its okk tw let it be… its jst a dance….
Aftrr smetym the lights were dim nd we were dancing on the rhythms of the song….. o god he looks much more charming from near….awwwww…..??….
” u dance well” he complimented in between….
??…..
I m soo happy on hearing this…..
” Thanks ” i said…. trying to be normal… bt my heart was jumping on getting compliment…???….
Aftrr sme tym he twirled me….o shit…!!! My veil…. it opened i tried to handle it wid my hand…. as girls cant show their face in the parties is one of the rules… if this veil falls….
Nooooo…. i held it nd ran from their….. as fast as possible…..
“Tell me ur name before going…??” He asked….
Bt i was nt in the state to answer nd left the hall…nd reached my room….
Twinkle’s pov ends……
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Kunj’s pov………
“How is this possible….???” I said wen i get to know that even aftrr trying for one week….. our resources are nt able tto find a girl….
o god…!!! Hw they will found abt her…wen they have even nt seen her…??? Even i have nt…??….. wat magic those eyes did to me….. i m only thinking abt them nothing else….the whole week…
i was asking them to find a girl whom even i have never seen…??…. wat to do know…??….
i kept the thoughts aside nd started going towards the garden area for calming myself nd trying to forget those twinkling eyes….??….
i was walking on the grass wen i heard sme melodious sounds of smeone laughing…. my feet automatically turned towards the direction….
O god wat is happening wid me……
Why i m attracted to smeone eyes or smeone’s voice these days…..
Wen i was walking towards the direction lost in thoughts i bumped into smeone….
Now that smeone is hanging in my arms….
She has closed her eyes due to fear….nd i felt my heart skipped a beat on seeing her beautiful face…. sme strands of her hairs were covering her face i gently tried to tuck them to have a clear view of her….
Bt she came back to her senses nd departed herself from me….. she opened her eyess….o god the sme eysss….. she is the one….yes she is the girl….i love her….. i felt like dancing over there…
“Sorry….” she said bowing her head……
“Its okkk” i said nd moved further……
I so wanted to tell her that i love her…. bt i have to take care of my kingdom too….
So i need to think before chosing the queen of my kingdom……
Wid this i started following her nd asked abt her from maa nd papa…. they have always been cooperative… the status of people never affected them….. they agreed i was sooo happy….
Nd from sujata kaki nd all…i get to know that she is soo good nd kind hearted…. i know its weird a king following a girl…. bt all humans are equal…..
On seeing her i jst get to know that she is soo humble…. she treats everyone wid love…cares for all… bt wenever i go towards her she bows her head down….
Bt i always get attracted more towards her…..
Bt i dont want her to accept or reject me bcz i m a king….
I wanted to know her feelings….dont want to bound her in an unwanted relation…..
Tym passes…
Bt i never get to know abt her feelings she is soo good is masking them…or i m sooo poor in recognizing them…
Kunj’s pov ends…….
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Twinkle’s pov……
Dont know from soo many days i m feeling as if smeone is following me…. bt i m unable to find it…. bt i m nt uncomfortable wid the prescene i loved it somewhere…..
Today our king is going on a war….. aftrr settling a peaceful country…..still he have to fight wid other kingdom’s….. argghhhhh…..
Let it be….still he was looking soo cute when rani maa was doing his arti….i prayed for her victory….. nd for his safety…..
His eyes turned towards me….i immediately bowed my head….
It had been 30 days still our king was out on war…. still no news arrived….. this created the atmosphere of tension all around…..
I was working in the hall mopping the floor…wen i saw king coming inside wid the support of two ppl all covered wid blood… i found my eyesight blur due to a lots of tears…. i jst wanted to run towards him nd take his care….
Bt wid lots of difficulties i controlled myself bt still tears were flowing thru my eyes…..
All went towards his room….
Ved ji was sitting there….all were praying for the welfare of their king….. after smetym ved ji cme out from his room nd informed that the king is f9 now…… the cuts were nt deep…. bt my heart was still not satisfied i wanted to see him once….
I know i have to w8 till night….. like always….
Always wen king cmes back from fight i go to his room nd check if he is f9 from outside….
Finally the longest day passed nd night cme…..
I slowly tiptoed towards his room…nd saw him sleeping peacefully…. a slight smile appreaed on my lips seeing him like that…
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Bt suddenly he started coughing in his sleep…
I first hesitated bt then went inside the room…nd made him drink water….
When i was abt to leave he he held my hand….
“Wat are u doing here at this hour of night.???” He questioned…. i was finding sme answer to give me…bt nothing stuck my stupid mind…
“Ummm…mmm woo…” i was only able to make irritating noises…. bt his nxt words strted me….
“Do u love me…??? ” he asked… i was speechless.. was blank nd was shocked on his statement… how culd he ask me like this… a servant like me…. i again bowed my head down….
He stand from the bed nd turned me towards himself i was only seeing downwards…
He asked me again… i dont know wat to answer… bcz i cant tell him the truth nd lieing king is the biggest crime… the biggest sin….
“I…dd”. .. i was again short of words…..
“I love u”….he said simply …. wat he said he love me….. hw can he…???
” Hw can u love me…i…i m a serv(ant).” Before i cud complete my sentence he shushed me keeping his finger on my lips….sending shivers to my body…
” i love u…ur soul which is as pure as water… ur eyss which tells the depth of ur emotions….ur voice which is as melidious as a koel…. ur humanity…. the way u treats everyone….i loved u the first tym i saw u on my bday…. wanted to tell u how much i love u bt i didnt found u…. bt wen i found u i dont want u to accept me as i m a king…. dont want to force u…. bt today as u cme here…. i felt as u also love me….
For me status of the person never matters…. i always wanted my kingdom to stay away from these things….so kingdom involves me too…
All works are equally important…. each person has its own importance nd u r the most important person in my life…. I LOVE U…..i will not force u to accept me back…the decision is completely urs….” saying this he turns around….
Leaving me in tears…. i widout thinking further hugged him from behind….
“I love u too….i love u from the first tym i saw u…. ” i confessed finally….
He turned around nd hugged me nd i hugged him back….
“Will u marry me…???” He asked
I was again shocked… i nodded in yes nd hugged him nd he hugged me back….
Next day he told abt this proposal in house nd to my surprise no one seemed surprised while all were congratulating as if they know it….
Nd now today i m standing all ready in the bridal dresss w8ing for my king in the sme room which changed my life….his room..our room….
I m feeling as the most luckiest girl on this earth….. i m sooo happpyyy…..??…
I heard the sound of opening of door….. wid this my heart started beating faster…..
He cme slowly towards me as i can hear his foot steps…..
He stopped behind me…nd encircled my waist in his arms….. nd turned me towards himself…
I was looking down he lifted my face wid his finger…. i godd…again he is looking soo damn cute….??…(hehe main kya kron…mujje kunj lagta hi cute hai….mjhe cute lagega toh tw ko bhi lagega na…??)…..
Wen i was lost in his cutenes….i felt smething on my lips….then i realised that it is him who is kissing me…..o god….i m feeling so shy nd happy…??…. lots of butterflies in my stomach….
Bt he was kissing me…he wrapped his arms around my waist nd my hands went in his hairs nd started caressing it…. after smetym the kiss deepens ….we departed due to lack of oxygen…. our forheads were joined….
“I LOVE U”… we said simuntanoeusly…..
” u r the best thing happened to me..” he said to which i blushed….☺☺….I felt immense happiness in my heart….
Then again he kissed me….
He picked me up nd laid me on bed nd switched off the lights….
(Hawwww……???….lights off krdii…
Sry guys age ka nhi pta mujhe andhera ho gya…tum log kuch v socho….??)….
Twinkle’s pov ends……..
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Boy- oye kya kar rhi hai…????
Girl- bs kr kunj dimag na kha aa rhi hoon main…
Kunj- thank god baba g finally iski story khatam hui….
Girl- hawws kunj….
Kunj- kya tw…yyyyyyaar tu story padhte tym usmein ghus jati hai kya….?? (Yes it was jst ki twinkle was imagining themselves in the story…??)….
Tw- haan koi dikat hai kya… u know na i love to read love stories…???
Kunj- kitni love stories padhti hai thoda romantic bhi baan….kuch daya kr apne boyfriend pe….(makes a puppy dog face…)…
{Haye kitna cute lag rha hoga…??}…
Tw – acha main romantic bano romantic….
With this she strted hitting him wid her book…
Le mera romantic avtar…???….
Kunj runs from their nd tw runs behind him….
The screeen freezess….
THE END……….
guys plz do comment…..i really wanted to know hw it is….??? Plz plz plz……
Nd also tell me will u guys cme nd read twinj ff’s when tei will end…??
Acha okk leave all this nd do let me know that was this worth reading or i wasted ur tym….
Name credit: panchiii dii…diii….????….thank u sooo much diii…??
I miss u all sooo much….
Love u all…????
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67 Comments
It was just awesome
Thank u dear…??
Supppeerrrbbb…. Amazing.. I just loved it.. fabulous os…
Thank u sooo much dear….???
Superb riddhi!! Tei ke baad bhi ffs ka silsila jaari rahega…kyunki show mar bhi jaaye…tab bhi twinj ka pyaar zinda rahega!!!! Love ya?
Thanks dear…
Ok then i will continue my ff….
nd twinj ka pyaar is forever wala…???
Sorry riddhi…besharmon ki tarah i forgot to wish u…happy bd…in advance…for next year…kyunki iss saal i am late…i wanna make sure i am on time 4 next year????
Hehe….no prob dear……
thank u sooo much…????….
nd i will remember that u wishede first for mxt year….???
di aj apka birthday hain ?
Yup…..☺☺☺☺
HAPPY BIRTHDAY . MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS ON THE . Alaways Be Happy And Cheerful . Love U
Thank u sooo much dear….
love u 2..
wish u many many more happy returns of d day dear ridhi have vry nyc day on ur birth day always b happy make others happy with ur cute smile & talks i will pray to god dat u should get all happiness dat u in ur life & also dat u should reach d height dat u wish so my hearty wishes on ur birthday fr only u
Thank u soooooo much dear….
☺☺☺☺☺…..
God blesss u too???
Amazing… I looved it
And happy birthday to u…???
Thank u thank u…..☺☺☺???
Many many happy returns of the day! May God bless you always 🙂 .. coming to ur os it was amazing.. really loved it.. imagining kunj in royal attire was ???.. U know what.. when I first saw kunj(sid) in tv, my first reaction was “wow,he is soo cute”??.. and I will read ffs even after tei ends… keep writing more 🙂
Thank u soooo much dear…..???…..
Thanks….yeah he must be soooo cute…???….
Then okkk i willl try to write more….if u ppl are ready to read it after tei ends…??
Ridhs osum os
Thanks dear…☺☺
Many many happy returns of d day……. may god bless u and give u all d happiness cutu……. always b happy dear…… and now coming to d os it was superb,amazing………. loved it so so much……. love u a lot???????????
Thank u soooooooooo much di…?????….
love u tooooooo much more wala….?????
Amazing dear and Happy birthday to u ??
Thank u soo much dear….???
Happy bday my devil
Love u yaar
Obviously if u hv written means it will b awesomw I knw u so I am cmnting first now I will read love u muahhh enjoy
Thank u sooo much rosh….
Pehle jake padh toh fir pta chlega mera torcher….??????
love u toooo
Happy birthday ?????????❤️❤️? May all ur wishes and dreams cm true???????????????
Os is lovely. U write amazingly.
Frankly speaking after sids exit i left watching tei and I’ll always read twinj ffs. Bcz i love sidmin aka twinj. Nobody can take der place in my heart?❤️
Thank u soooo much dear…..
Okkkk then i will try to write even after its ending….????…….
Happy birthday Ridhima.?
A very well written OS.
Thanks for the return gift.
I’ll courier you the gift,
You courier the cake.
?
xD
Thank u soooo much ……
Okkk…..courier me the gift……
A cake for u…???……
Enjoy….???
ridhima di oh my god nhi nhi
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
di aap aisa kaise kr skte ho mee sath
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.aap hmesha merko speechless kaise chod dete ho
i mean wow di luvd it 2 d core
rona bhi aaya smwhere emotional
romantic
ahahhahaaaaaaaaaa
vahavahavaha
di luvd it so mch
n fir jab last mein pta chala ki it was all twinkles imagination a gr8 shck
haanhahann lga
kunki twinj stry mein unyt hue or dil mein bhi
osm di
while reading n infct jb khatam ho gyi tb bhi mere chere pr 100000000000000000000volt wala smile spread tha
oh god u r amazing di
trust krna iss bhn par
luv u
u rckd nailed it
Main aisa hi krti hoon meri baby…??…..
vaise itni zyada tareeffffff….i m speechlesss now…..nd blushing soooooo much…☺☺☺☺☺???…….
Thank u sooooo much……
love u toooo
di.btw u luk very pretty while blushing……
HAPPY B’DAY RIDHIMA??????
The OS was amazing ……it was very uniqie
Loved it
And i will surely read twinj ff’s even after tei ends
Thank u sooo much kruti…????????………..
i wll write aftrr tei ends……i u willl read….?????
Happy birthday ridhima!!?..iam glad ur back!!! The os was awesome!!!…n ya i will pakka visit tu n read ff even after tei ends..
Thank u dear….
yes i m back…???…..torcher saho…??…
Ridhima its jst awesome yrr …… Rlly ….. And yes i will read ff coz fr here only i got such amazing frnds………. :*:*:*:*:*:*
Thank u sana….
then if u will read i will write…???
it was so cute…n last part tho cutest…loved it …n yah I will keep reading ffs bcz these r nw part of my life n I can’t live without them…aur tum kya kehthi ho ise boring…agar ise boring kehti ho na than i will love to read this boring stories always… love u..
Thank u soooo much dear…. u have always supported me thanks….nd yes agr u r ready to bear the torcher…… then i m ready to torcher u…????…..
nd ff is really a gr8 part of our lives no one can live widoyt them….
love u toooo….
Firstly, happy birthday! Wish you all the happiness. coming to the os, it was amazing! Just loved the way you wrote. Write more 🙂
Thank u sooo much dear….
????……
u keep supporting i will keep writing….
Wow…u jzz rockd it!!!!it was superb….mind blowing …such a fresh concept…..luvd it to core??????
Write more of dese beautiful stories….
Thank u soooo much dear…..???
Happy Birthday Ridhima
I must say Two great writers share the same birthdate (You and Ria)
Loved the OS so sweet and the end Loved it
So we can conclude The month of September includes the birth of many great writers You,Ria,Ronald Dal and Me (Na not me)
Love you Have a great blast (Know I am late sorry)
🙂
Thank u dear…..
hehe…….. thanks for sooo much love nd comparing me wid such gr8 writers…..nd u do u write sme stories..????
Love u tooooo…..
if u r late then i m super late….???
I write 2 stories Tashan e revenge to sadda Love and My revenge made me meet My true love https://www.tellyupdates.com/tashan-e-revenge-sadda-love-episode-19-20-kunjtwinkle-happened/
Ridhi diiii(hope u don’t mind)
It was awesomeeee I just loved it and yeah I was a silent reader and I used to read school love n I just loveed it soooo much I felt soooo sad when u said ur leaving tu I was sooooo sad and when u came back my happiness knew no bounds and this one was amazing loved it and cont ur ff diii pls with twinj n tanshi plsss
Love u diii
And yeah happy b’ day diii enjoy n thanq for the treat
Thank u sooooo much……
finally a silent changed into a violent..
M glad to know u all loved me sooo much…???…. really i felt sooo lucky to be wid u alll….. nd i will love if u will call me ridhi diii….
love u toooo…
nd really thanks for accepting my bday treat…..
its ur bday??
HAPPY BDAY RIDHI DI::::::HAPPY BDAYY TO U:::
MAY GOD GIV U ALL HAPPINEDD U DESERVE:::::N KEEP U HAPPY:::
sorry bday end hone me only 45 min…left but i was busy i read it now…
it was unique 1
love story of a king n a slave…..aha…wow..loved it
Thank u soooo much dear……..
thanks for ur wishes…..
i undrstand sem are coming……
Thanks for loving this concept….????
awesome amazing fabulous cute epi
Thank u sooo much dear
its super amazing
Kunj as the King wooooaaahhhh
he must be looking so cute
Thank u soooo much dear….
ya soooo cute…????
Thank u sooo much dear….☺☺
love u 2..????
haha.. twinkle and her imagination.. so cute..
lovely story.. keep writing.. 🙂
Thank u soooo much dear…..
u keep supporting….i wlll keep writing….??
Happy Belated Birthday Ridhima di…
its really a dream bt tw imagination was lyk wow…i felt lyk it was real n so cute sa…n do write more love u…
Thank u soooo much dear….?????…..
hehe…..i also thought it as real….
love u toooo….
will try to write more
Ridhima !!!!!
U r a different piece
U just rocked
It was very nice , superb ,stupendous n interesting at the end when I got to know that twinkle was just imagining
Loved it yaar
Keep writing like this my dear ?
Thank u soooo much dear …..
m nt different piece…..m crack piece….?????……
Itni tareeff…..☺☺☺☺…. haye main sharma gyi …???….
will keep writing if u will keep supporting….