Hi dear readers & silent readers, thank you for your constant support throughout the journey of my first thriller fs. A big thanks to Fenil bhai, Niya di , Reeba di, Anuradha, Pavithra, Mansi( Naina0411) , Nandni, Janavi, Fatmi, Veera di for your lovely comments . You guys always encourage me…..Thank you so much for your kind words . I already told u that these are ten shots but I combined last two shots as I am already late in update, so decided to give two shots .
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Recap – Naman know about that Ratri hide her identity
He is shocked that how he misunderstood a person. He never think that she has intention like that. He compose himself though he is broke that his love betray him.
Naman : Can u tell me the ward no. of Megha mishra.
Receptionist told him & he move toward the ward. He enter & saw her who is lying on bed . His hatred increased for Ratri after looking her condition. He sit beside her & place his hand on her hand.
Naman : I promised u that I will not spare her. She have to pay for this.
A drop of tear escaped from his eyes while he is not still believing. He leave from there & move toward her house . He reached at her apartment but the door is locked.
Naman : How is this possible ? She didn’t come in hospital & not in the home, then Where is she ? I searched u from any corner Ratri . You don’t hide from me .
He punched hard on door. He called someone & asked to trace her mobile number . When he get to know the place he informed police.
On the other side , Ratri enter at a dark place . She feel someone behind her .She turned & find a guy . She hardly slapped him. He is shocked & fuming in anger.
Boy : Are u going mad ?
Ratri : Shut up ! Don’t dare to say a word more.I never thought that u are so cheap. You tried to kill Megha.This is not in our plan. I only want that she confessed truth that’s why I planned this but u spoiled everything.
Boy : Oh….You misunderstood me . I don’t do anything. Everything is according to u.
Ratri : Am I looking fool to u . If u don’t do anything Varun , then what the hell is this.
She throw a white pouch on his face.
Ratri : No one know about this except us. Firstly , I thought that maybe Megha scared a lot & that’s why she jumped from terrace but u mix this hallucinogen drug in her water. Give me the damn answer.
Varun : Listen to me …..I mix this & thought she become died but still she is alive. At least, She also get to know that how it feel when someone hurt u & leave u alone .
Ratri : You lost your mind.It didn’t mean that we kill her .I only want that she should be arrested for her crime. If she done wrong , then it didn’t mean that we become like her.
Varun : I don’t need your philosophy. How should u forget that What she had done with our parents. She killed them & I am not fool like you who want play hide & seek with her. What are u thinking that she accept if u trying to scared her. You don’t know that u tried from last two years to make her believe on supernatural powers & still u don’t do anything. You are only useless .
Ratri : Stop your nonsense . You forget that was only accident & she deserve to punished but it didn’t mean that u kill her. You also done a crime & I will tell police about this because it is also wrong.
Varun : Ratri, u are really stupid . You want to send ur brother in jail.
Ratri : No, I want to make arrest the person who is trying to murdered someone …….You are not at all less than a murderer.
He is hell angry & tried to throttle her neck. He remove his hand & she start coughing because of suffocation.
Varun : Don’t tried to over smart with me otherwise I will surely kill u. Police want proof & how do u get proof. You show this empty packet . How could u prove that it is mine but u know what I have proof against u . I already know that when u get to know about this, u will do this only . It is for my safety.
He showed her a video in which she mix hallucinogen in the coffee when Megha told her to make coffee for Naman & her . ( This incident in shot 4……hope u guys remember that).
On that day , she don’t want to give hallucinogen to him as he is innocent & she always want that he don’t interfere but Naman never take this seriously.
She is shocked while he continue.
Varun : That Guy Naman, if he also come in between our revenge. I also kill him in fact I think he get to know everything about us till now, so Why don’t I kill him.
Ratri : What are u saying ? You don’t do this ….he is innocent.
Suddenly, someone banged the door & he give signal to her to open the door. He hide while she move toward door . She opened it & shocked to see him at the entrance.
Ratri : Naman , What are you doing here ?
Naman : If I ask the same from you ? What are u doing here at this time.
Ratri : Actually…..I want ……( she stutter)
Naman : No need to lying….Let me told u ……You are here for hiding your crime.You lied about your identity & even u don’t tell us where were u on that day. What’s going on your mind & even I think u only attempt to kill Megha.
Ratri : This is only your thinking .I agree that I don’t tell about my identity but that doesn’t mean I am responsible for her condition.
He pinned her to the nearby wall.
Naman : Who will believe that u hide ur identity from me & ur best friend for what ….. nothing. What’s the need …..Tell me the reason. Let’s imagine that u are not responsible for Megha …..That spirit is your behind then why it’s didn’t kill u.
Ratri : Because there is no spirit . It’s my game to make Megha believe……I am only doing this. I am selfish person …. Anything else u want to listen.
He is angry now & tighten his grip on her hand which leave red patches on her creamy white skin.
Ratri : It’s hurting me…..leave my hand.
Naman : Really…..Do u know what is called pain…..Pain is that u give Megha for her whole life . Her life is completely destroyed because of you . How could u do this. Isn’t it hurting me. You broke my heart. I really hate me as I love the person like u. U don’t deserve my love even u don’t deserve my hatred.
She is shocked after his sudden confession & she don’t decide whether she is crying on her fate or Naman’s fate. He loosen his grip after he saw tears in her eyes. She is still in thoughts while his sight fall on his brother who aimed to shoot him.
Ratri : Naman…..leave me & move aside.
He don’t listen him while she come ahead of him & as a result she get shot & fall on the ground.He try to find out what has just happen in a second . He stand like lifeless & he sit on the ground after realizing . Varun is hell irritated by her action & aimed the gun on him one more time but police caught him.
He saw her lying in pool of blood. He placed her head on his lap.
Naman : Ratri …..Nothing can happen to u ….I am with u …..
Ratri : You want to know…..then listen , Megha accidentally kill my parents because she consumed alcohol. I just want to that she get arrested but we have no proofs that’s why I planned this ……I thought that she accept her crime after we trying to scare u…..I never want ur involvement but u still came in my life. That day , I was the one who mix drugs on your coffee & u both start hallucinating. It’s all my plan but it is harmless in my opinion but now I understand that revenge will taken from right path or wrong path…..its only create destruction.
His tears fall on her face.
Naman : Sshh…..Just keep quiet….You don’t need to give any explanation….I already called the ambulance & I know my love never dies….You don’t go anywhere …..
Ratri : My time is over but u are right love never dies because it is immortal…..I love u forever …
She said while a wide a smile on her face with tears.
Naman : I love u too…..But you are talking shit …..you can’t leave me like this….
She look at him & closed her eyes for lifetime . He patted on her face.
Naman : Ratri…..open ur eyes….I know u are kidding right…..please you don’t do this…..You are not selfish….How could u leave me alone…
He shouts her name & hug her tightly . Tears falling from his eyes & soaked on her pale face. He tried every possible way but she bye to this world.
THE END
At last I want to say that it don’t possible that you always with the person whom u love but love always remains. Everything die in the world one day but not love.
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Anyone want to throw tomatoes on me , then they are feel to throw as who like this stupid ending. I am really sorry as this is thriller & I don’t want to a typical happy ending. Thank you so much all my readers for your comments & likes. I really appreciate that u guys waiting for two weeks for my update. Sorry for such late update but I am not getting much time to write. Do comments & like/ dislike . Those who have still doubt regarding anything which I forget about the story, they are free to ask . Kindly ignore grammatical & spelling errors.Be happy & Keep smiling ?
Regards
Niyati ?
14 Comments
Aflatoon chappy.Totally shocked and surprised.Loved it and enjoyed whole story Niyu.take care stay safe keep smiling You ❤??
Thank you so much bhai for your comment…..Glad that u enjoyed whole story….You too take care… Love u a lot bhai ? ?
Fantabulous update…..loved it
Thank you so much dear….glad that u like this..lots of love to u ? ?
Oh my cutiepie its really difficult to describe boc iam really shocked ohhh what an ending i was not expected like this twist in the story bt u wow its amazing dear. keep writing dear
Aww……thank you so much di for your comment….Glad that u love ending & twist…..lots of love to u ? ? ?
Wow! ?
I loved this so much! ?
The ending was shocking but lovely!
Totally speechless! ?
Brought me to tears! ?
Please write more like this…
One question, when will you update Daastan? It’s ok if you haven’t had time to update it but plz do send me the link when you update it…I am waiting for it!
Love you! ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you so mansi for your comment….Glad that u love ending…..It really means a lot to me….Ya, will surely send u link when I update Dastaan my dear….how should I forget you….love u ? ?
Wow dear what an ending i was not expecting like this twist iam really shocked. Keep writing my cutiepie love u a lots.
Thank you di….love u too infinity times ? ?
Di, it was just awesome…. I loved it alot…
Waiting for another thriller like this… Love u alot… well done di…. Luv u alot
Aww…thank you so much lil sis for your comment….glad that u love this….ya,whenever I got time, I will surely think about another one….lots of love ? ?
Amaz mondblowing ending niyu.. Kya twist leke aayi hatts of to u..ab happy ending ki umeed hi nahi rahi sdch ko dekh k???.. U rocked we shocked??.. Lovv u sweety time mile to new start krna or abki sdch page per krna ho sake to?.. Sab intzaar kar rahe hain tere post ka.. Post cupid asap.. Bye tc.. Lovv u???
Aww…..that’s so sweet of you…..Thank you so much for your kind words di… Mujhe SDCH dekh kar ending ki bhi ummed nahi rahi…..they drag this like Sasural simat ka ? ? …. Whenever I get time….will sure write thriller on Kanchi….Ya, will sure post cupid soon….good night & sweet dreams di.. Love u ? ? ? ?