Hai frds…. I m back with my 2nd part .. sorry for late guys…… I read all ur comments … but im in my hometown there is network is very slow… so I cant reply u back…but ur comments means a lot to me… tq so much divya…for helping me….I don’t wanna bore u guys further so starts with my story…
Prev- jiju saali marriage…. After marriage they moved to kolhpur
Next morning –
Sanky went to station . swara arranged home according to her wish and also took care of saakshi in well. Around 1:oo pm she washed all clothes went to tarrace with saakshi…
when she reached there she starts her work… womens of apartement enquired about her…
lady1- hello…. Who r u..? we never see u here..beore..? r u new?
Swara- yeah… I m swara… she is my child saakshi..
Lady1- she is so cute……which room?
Swara- hmm on 103…
Lady2- oh …. U r that bulette rajs relative?
Swara-!!!!!!!! Bulette …!!
Lady2- that police man….
Lady3- u r his relative…?
Lady4- he is so handsome…. I want him as my son in law…
Swara- what…??/
Lady1- hey… I alredy desided I want him as my BIL…. Pls… swara …. Can u ask him for my sis..? she is so beautiful…. She is only 23 now….
Swara- stop ….(closing her ears) listen ladies… he is my husband… I m swara sanskar maheshwari…. She is our daughter…
All ladies were shocked… seeing her.. she glared everyone and took empty bucket and saakshi with her…
After 1 month … (in this one month sanky bought new 2 bedroomed home)
Swasan situation was same… they r just stranger for eachother in home . and act as hubby and wife… but always have the silly nok-jok…. At start saakshi is not so free with sanskar… becoz of swara they both got the bond of father and daughter. Now only they used hangout for the sake of saakshi..
But one thing clear to sanky that his decision to marry swara is right…. She is perfect mother for his baby. Some where he started liking his saali… but unaware of his feeling… swara is bold…. Sometime talk rudely… but he know that she is good from heart….he knows something is bothering her… he decided to find out that and sort out her problem…. And wanted make her old swara…
Another side swara also come to know that sanky is not like other man . he is gentel man . but not ready to accept the fact … becoz she is alredy set her mind that men only know to break trust….
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One day
Its mid night till sanky dint come home…. Swara is so tensed …she is walking here to there in tension… don’t know why? She is feeling restless …. As a typical wife….
Swara- where r u? cant u come early? Atlest one call?…atlest he can pick my call naa… he dint care he is having a home there is he having a beautiful daughter and wife is waiting for him… hmm… (she dint understand wt she mention her for him)
Suddenly she heard door knok…
Swara- atlast… mr.maheshwari… how dare…(when she opened d door… she was shocked )
Sanskar is unconscious lying… his head is bleeding heavily …its tied by a piece of cloth ..he standing with support of constables …unknowingly a tear drop from her eyes….
Man 1- madam … voo… some goons were teasing a girl… he went to rescue infact he rescued her…. And he catched some goons ..but…
Man2- but one of their came behind him and hit with a rod…then too he fight with him and arrested but due to pain he is unconcius …
Cops placed him in sofa and left the place …his cloths were filled with blood strains… she starts to care his hair … and she took him to his room… she changed his cloths while seeing his face…. Washed his face … and did dressing for wond…. Sanky holds her hand tightly…her heart started to ache seeing him like this…….. she sleept there by sitting there only…
Next day
For d first tym our sweet couple find themselves so close to eachother… both opened their eyes at same tym….
Sanky- ahhh(holding head in pain)
Swara- is it paining so much…
Sanky- lil bit…
Then he noticed himself…
Sanky- my clothes…!!!!!!!!!!!! Who changed….?
Swara- (looking here there..)vo…
Sanky- you….!!!
Swara- no… no.. no …(closing eyes) ur frds….
Sanky- hmm…
Swara went near his door… but turns and said..
Swara- please take care …. Without u.. we r nothing… pls be safe… just remember in home there is some one in home and there someone is waiting for u….
They had an cute eyelock….
After this swara behaviour lil changed towards sanky…. She starts to to talk freely with him…. They were happy with their small family . now she started to call him by name rather than jiju… eventually she is forgetting he is her jiju…. They were happy…..
Nearly 8 months passed to their wedding……
Swara is doing some work… then…she heard the bell sound…
Swara- o god… today sanky came so early not bad…. I thought he will forgot that he promised saakshi to take park…..(again heard knok) coming…
When she opened d door….. she was so happy and hugs the person who s standing out………
Swara- omg… I m soo happy…. Such a long time…
Person-whole 3 years…. Did u ever try to contact….? No… after ur finals u totally forgot us….(in fake anger)
Swara- ragu ma… sorry.. I was so upset…..then… so…(with sad face)
Ragini- I know…. Leave all that…. (seeing her sindoor) ohh… u married and dint even inform…
Swara- I ll explain.. come first…
Swara tells how she married her own jijjis hubby…. And their relation ship status….
Ragini- oh sorry…
Swara- hey don’t be…. I m happy with my family…
At that time… sanky comes with saakshi lifting her in arms…
Sanky- look shona… I come in intime today…. So no fighting only party….
Saakshi- yesssssssss…
Ragini- sir aap… is this ur home?
Sanky- yes….
Swara- u know him?
Ragini- when I came to this city…. Some goons were behind me… they try to misbehave with me … then he saved me… (to sanky) tq so much
Sanky- no needed its my duty….how come u here?
Swara-(holding her) she is my bestie)
Ragini- I ll leave …
Sanky- if want ..! I can drop u..
Ragini- no needed .. im in this apartment room no 103…I saw swara in evening.. so came to meet her
Swasan- oh ok… take care… bye…
Now swasanrag bond got strong…
One day swarag were talking at that time sanky came but they dint saw….he is on door step
Ragini- u still remember him..?
Swar- whom?
Rag- laksh…
Sw- how can I forgot my first love?his betroyal…
Rag- u leave him lyk that?y don’t u punish him?
Sw- when he himself said he is not love me… I cant force him to love me ryt…. At that time I m so angry…. Now I dint have regret for that…. there is no meaning living with a relationship where there is no love… I understood it now….
Hearing this sanky felt some one is stabing… she thinks our relation is burden without love…she is ryt… she isnt love me.. me too dint love her… I m ruling her lyf…. I made her lyf hell… she deserve best life partener.. without listning urther he went out….
Next day sanky went to rags home and enquired about her past first she denyed then said…
Swara past———-
She is fun living girl of our clg… as u know she is bold….she never compromise.. I m lil shy and traditional girl… 1st day of our clg some seniours try to rag me … swara saved me… ater that we become besties we shared 1 room in hostel… every thig changed after laksh arrival…. He came to our clg for a blood donation camp…swara is interested but im afraid of injections… but she forced me…swara seeing him she felt love at 1st sight….
Swara- hi I m swara… she is ragini.. she is araid of suji… pls be slow…
Laksh- oh ok… don’t u afraid of suji..
Swara- nah… but be slow for me too
Laksh smiled for that……
Rag- no no… ahhhhhhh…
Laksh- slow slow… breath in out slowly…
Ater this she went to his clinic with me
Laksh- hi… u both… wann donate again?
Rags- no00000000
Swalak smiles seeing her
Swara- im here to propose u… so mr.dr.laksh malhotra…miss.swara gododiya loves u… will u be my liepartener…
Raglaks was shocked…
Lak- I liked ur nature… but I cant love u.. as I dint know u…
Swara –lets be frds … wt if in this frdship u fall for me….
Lak- (widened his eyes) lets see…
By this our frdship starts…. Swaras love is deepened strongly… she used go to his home… make dish for him… suji aunty is very nice… we used to celebrate there festivels… they treat us as family….
One day don’t know what happened…? I m bit ill so I dint accompanied her…ater retuning… she is crying bitterly… I never seen her lyk that….
Rag- swar wt happened?
Sw- he dint love me.. he just lyk me… he never loved me… he just played with my feelings…ragini… he love someone …… but still he make me stay in dark…. He don’t love me….(she trows all d things here and there) I hate laksh… I hate men… all use us as a doll.. they never care about our feelings.. I even hate u… stay away from me… becoz of u only…
Rag- cool down da… wt I did…
Sw- I hate this clg.. I hate this city…
She packed her bags went away…I think she changed her no… too…
Past end….
Sanky is crying. Remembering her situation at that time his heart pained…
Sanky- did u come to know wt happened there that day?
Rag- I asked laksh…
Past————-
Rag- wt u said to swara? How dare u to hurt her?
Lak- I alredy said her that… I cant love her…
Rag- u also said.. if u know more then u may
Lak- I may … I dint said I ll… I this period I fell for a girl… but I dint know that swara still loves me.. I always thought her as frd…even I forgot about her proposal… actally I love….
Rag- I m not at all interested.. our frdship is becoz of swara… wn swar is not here then wt use of our rdship… in my life I never wanna see u… u hurt my besti… I hate u
Lak- raginiiiiii(she run away)
Past end————-
Sanky- wt he is doing now? Is he married?
Rag- I don’t think so…. As I m with contact in suji ma…if so she definitely inform me…
Sanky- I wann talk to laksh…. Can u arrange…
Rag- wt? no
San-pls..
Rag-hmm ok
That same day evening
Ragsanlak
In a café…
Lak- hi ragini…
Ragini-(she just ignoed he got hurt)
Lak- u called me after such along gap… I m so happy
Ragini- sanskar husband of swara wanna talk to u… I m not at all interested
San- hi…. Can we make a order and then talk…
Sa- so …y u brak up with swara?
Lak- we never had love relation …. We r just frd… but she only thought more….
San- hmm ok… (he s talking calmly) can u tell me wt exctly happened that day?
Lak- “actually I forgot that she loves me its quite years passed to her proposal we trio just best frds.. for me atlest she is frd…she came to my home that day… I was in wash room… she came to my bed room …and saw my lady love pic on my study table and enquired about her… I inform her i love her more than any hthing… and she slaped me accuse me for breaking her heart… and playing with her feelings… and run away…..i tried to talk to her….i called her she dint pick my call…
Rag-and did u setteled with ur so called lady love..?
Lak- no she left me… before I propose her….
San-do u love swara now?
Raglak- wt?????????????
San- I want my shons happiness … If its lies on u .. I m ready to give her to u…. ur her 1st love… I know how it felt if our 1st love lost… I found truthfull in ur eyes
Rag- sanskar… r u made she is ur wife… mother of saakshi…
San- she sacriised her life for us…. Now its my turn to give her happiness….laksh do u accept swara? She loves u… her 1st love….. she only said na ragini there is no meaning living with a relationship where there is no love… in b/w us no love ….. y to tie her
Laksh- how can i? I cant forget my love… she might left me but she will never left from my heart… she is here.. always ll be there nothing going to change…. If I accept swara then too I cant make her happy.. I cant love her as I love my love…
Ragini- (with tears) who is that lucky girl laksh? U love her like hell? But she left u… poor girl… u r love is pure … u may be did wrong with swara… but u r love is beyond world… hope u get her soon….
Laksh- hope she realise my love …. And come back to me….
Lak- sorry.. my heart is reserved for her only….
San- its ok… ragini lets go….
On the way..
Ragini- u love swara na?
San- haan,….(realising) no .. I mean ..i …I love her as mother of my daughter… love her as a person… respect her….
Ragini- u love her so much….
San- no ragini… it doest matter now…. Now too she conder me as her sis hubby… she never gonna accept… I m happy with whatever the relation having with her…. She is my angle… she my sunlight to my life… I cant force her for relation
Rag – I got my answer…
Ater 2days….
Sanky came late around 10.00… and found home empty….and thins all were shattered here nd there… he was tensed .. he thought his rivals did something to his family… he cried loud loudly….
Swwwaraaaaaaaaaa… sakshiiiiiiiiii….
Then 1 bottel rolled near him….
Sw- shhhhhhhhhhhhhh… (low tone) why r u shouting sanskar..?
San- swaraa… wt is this…?
Sw..-(come near to him) give a tight slap ….how dare u…?how can u…?
San- wt?
Sw- u love me?
San- huh?
Sw-(cries loudly) ahhhhhhhhhhh u also only like me… no one loves me…
San- no no baccha… I love u…
Sw- really…. how much..?
San- where is saakshi?
Sw- how muchhhhhhh?
San- so much
Sw- no u r not mean that?(starts to cry) no one loves me……… not even my husband
She starts to cry while sobbing and goes to balcony…
Sw- y the hell I m living..? I will die…? My hubby don’t love me
San- (suddenly turns her)(cupping her face…he is in tears like some part of his life going away) I love u shona….. I love u… I really mean it…. Don’t leave me…. I cant handle anther breack up…. U r my life.. I don’t know.. when u become life,,,,.. u r my oxygen… without swara ,sanskar is nothing… I cant manage saakshi without u…. and u
Sw- then y u ask laksh to marry me?
San- that is… what! U come to know all that
Sw-(with conscious) yes….(ran behind him to beat) how dare u sanky to offer ur wife toanother man..
San- shona… stop… I (still running) I thought u will happy with him…
Sw- and wt about saakshi… u monkey … u donkey
San- stop… where is saakshi?
Sw-with ragu
San- ohh… ok.. u r drunk naa ? thenn
Sw- I was just showing u my acting skill 😉
San- hmmm… y u did drama?
Sw- to hear ur confession to me…
San- means u tooo
Sw- (shy)
San- do u love me?
Sw- vo …vo… haan
San- wt? I dint hear…(teasingly)
Sw- I love u mr.sanskar maheshwari….
San-sorry swara…. But I don’t love u… u r late …. I alredy in love with some one
Sw-(holding his collar) how dare u mr. maheshwari… having this much beautiful wife… how can u…?
San- sorry…
Sw- ran to her room cring
San- don’t u ask with whom?
San-with her ..?see her pic naa..?
San showing a pic… she is my lyf… my cute..lil arrogant saali saab…
Sw sees pic… its she itself… she hugged him tightly… and ur saali ji also love her jiju… I love u sanskar…
San- I love u my shona…
They hugged eachother……take dinner together…. For the first tym shona entered his room as wife…. They slept in each other embarrace…
Next day…..
At laksh hospital
Laksh is in his cabin.. reading about some case….
Person- may I come in..
Laksh- yes…(rise his head) ragini… come in … u here ..? r u ok? Any problem
Ragini- I cme here to donate my blood…
Lak- nice joke…
Ragi- I m serious… I wann sucide … but before that I wann do some good work… so
Lak- ragini(in anger) ….. r u mad?by d way y u wanna die…? Tell me I ll solve ur problem
Ragin- my mom dad fixed my alliance….
Lak-(closing his eyes)so wts d problem?
Rag- I love someone……. He is not at having the guts to confess it infront of me… then how can he talk to my parents…. So better I ll die…
Lak in anger holds her sholder…pin to wall
Lak- y u repeating the word…die .. sucide and all..? even u left me…(realising )I mean my love left me… ….then I try to die… no naa… if ur love is true.. he ll come to u for sure….
Ragini-(innocently)really….
Lak- haan(releasing from grip) by the way who is dat lucky guy?
Rag- dr.malhotra
Lak- sharath…
Ragi- no…
Lak- karan?but he is married
Ragi-no…
Lak- remaining(sees his board)laksh malhotra…
Rag- haan…
Lak- wt…?(happy tears) me…. U love me…?
Rag- but u love someone naa…
Lak-(cupping her face) no ragini…. Its u only …I love u…. from d day one..1st I thought its my attraction latter I come to know that u r my soulmate…. Without u laksh is nothing….
Rag-y don’t u tell it before…?
Lak- I wann tell u …. Then swara ..come to know that…she saw ur pic in my table….after that too I try to tell u.. then u hate me… so….i thought I can spend my life with ur memory …. I thought to orget u… but I cant…
Rag- I love u laksh….. I never thought somebody love me this extent….1st I dint belive to swara but now I m so lucky to have u laksh…
Lak- wt? swara ?
Rag-haan … she only said me about u…when I tell her about sanskars feeling….
Lak- they r together now…
Rag- yeah…. She alredy accepted him beore only…….that day he heard our ½ conversation actually swara fell in love before only becoz of sanky reaction she afraid to confess…. Yesterday they cleared their misunderstanding…
Lak- I m so happy for them…
Rag-then wt is the solution for my problem …?
Lak- I ll make understand to mr.malhotra and order him to come to ur home with his parents to ask ur hand…
Rag- pakka…?
Lak- pakka…
They hug eachother…..
After 2months….
Raglak got married….today is swasan 1st marriage anniversary
San- (in call) tq dad….. for orcingfor second marriage… dad I m in love with swara…. She too loves me….
Dp- I m so happy for u…god bess u both…
Raglak came to their home….
Swaragini in kitchen
Ragini- swara…I m thinking to take saakshi with me today…
Swara- y? rags I cant leave without her…
Ragini-.. aree buddu…. Today is ur anniversary… and I know u both till dint took ur relation to next step… so…u know na wt I wann saying..
Swara-(blusing)ragu maa..
Rai- omg someone pinch me… shona is blushing….
Swara-(pinch hard)shh….
Ragini- can I take ur daughter?
Swara- bring her tomorrow…
Ragini- ohh… so today night is …
Swara- (closing her mouth) u ….after marriage u become so shame less….
Ragini-swara…
Sanky went station …. Raglak take saakshi with them…swara prepare..herself ready to give her to her husband……
In night
Around 10.00
When sanky came house is beautifully decorated … he was mermised to see his wife with red saree with blak border… he freshened up and had their moon light dinner in balcony…
After that they danced romantically on geruva song….at the end of song he try to kiss on her lips….with equl desire she too came … but stopped in middle and pushed him
Swara- we cant do this…. I cant take di’s place in ur life.. no…..she run from room and locked in another room…..
She called shomi…and explained her everything….
Swara- ma now.. what should I do…?its wrong naa….to accept my jiju..?
Shomi- haan …. If u love him as ur jiji s hubby then wrong… if u love him as ur hubby its right….look ur didi is loves u both… she want ur happiness…. Sansky cant lead his whole life like this… see him as husband… live in present…he is a nice man….
Ater this swara again came to his room…. He is standing in balcony … stands near him…
San- sorry… I think I fasten… but I never give u her place… u made a very spl place in my heart…. If ur not comfortable than this relation than… we will be lyk before…. I ll not force u… don’t leave… I cant bear
Sw-(hugging him) I love u…… u r my husband….i m ready … plese make me urs…
Sanskar gave a shock expression… she smiles and kissed him on lips…. I love u sanskar…. U r mine…
That night they consummated their wedding…
The end….
Hope I dint dispoint u guys … I m not at all good writer I just tried…. Hope I give justification to all character… I m not good in writing romance writing… sorry if I not reached ur expectation…
Pleses put down ur valuable comments it mean s a lot to me….both +ive and –ve comments r welcomed
29 Comments
Awesome one
Tq tvisha….. tq for liking
Wow it was awesom
I can’t explain in words it was funny it was emotional and romantic also
Tq rosey …
it was very good story everything present in best amount
Tq aamias …. I m happy that u liked it
concept is some kind of akward and it’s different. but in reality there are many incident like that. u have given justice to every character. i’m must appreciate your great work. i think we will be able to meet u again with another different concept. keep continuing.
Tq dea…. I too inspired by real incident…. actually my mom and niebour Aunty taking about this (juju saali) wedding happened recently in our village…
Sure I ll come with different concept
Tc
Awesome dear loved it ? ? ?
Amazing!
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love it love it Varu.. ad thank div for upload it…
Tq mica. ….and I m so thankfull to Divya… without her I never gonna frds like u all
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Superrrr ending dear..Loved it.. Keep writing like this..
Take care
Keep smiling?
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Loved alot…