Hi frds… I m back varu….missed me? Today I came with an os SAaLI BANI MERI DIL WALI….. plese If u liked the story line pls comment . it really encourage me to write more and more. And I will post my ff WHO AM I? SWASAN RAGLAK on 6th.
Character
Sanskar- a strict police officer lyk singum and also fun type guy…alredy married to swathi… and having a child name sakshi
Swathi- late wife of sanskar…loved him a lot… sister of swara gadodiay, innocent ,always get trap sanky fun trap
Swara- saali of sanky and sister of swathi… she is bold and practical…. Having a bitter past from that she hates boys
Story starts…
We can see a handsome guy sitting in tarrace wearing sherwani and seeing the sky with painfull tears
“y god..? y u did this? Did u jeolus of my happiness? First u snached my mom(ap)? I cried and dad composed me ….. I again started to lead lyf…then u give swathi in my lyf… it’s a tipical arranged marriage…. But eventually I fall for her innocence …..we r just starting our lyf…. U again snached her from me …. Leave me…. From my child.. who is just 2years….u snached her mom at this young age…?y…………… I hate you…….”he sit on his kness cries…
And now I again married … I made a sin… I snached someones lyf just for my selfishness… and that person is none other than my saalisaab.. swara….
He closed his eyes think how they got married
Flash back—
Swathi ,sakshi and dp in garden then sanky called her
Sanskar- hello madam, after u become mom u forgot ur hubby na….
Swathi- ji.. nahi…
Sankar- then give me a kiss
Swathi- wt? how? We r in kidder garden so many people r there .. I cant
Sanskar- I want
Swathi- (moving away from place)gave a tight kiss over phone
Sanskar- maza nahi aaya….
Swathi- app bhi naa…(then she sw a small 5year old kid on road…and lorry coming towards it astily…throw her mobile aside and went to save the baby in this she was died in this and saved that baby…)
Sanskar came there and saw his wifes dead body….. dp consoled him… they did her funeral…..
They send sakshi to gadadia mansion(swathi and swara home) after this sanskar become depressed… and also arrogant.. his naughtiness fades….
Ater 1 year… dp came to sanky….
Dp- sanky ….i know u loved swathi very much…. Dint u take care of last sign of swathi..
Sanky- hmmm?
Dp- I mean saakshi… she is light of our house
Sanky- I ll bring her once she become 6year old.. as u know we both were busy in our world ur in business and me in my duty… then who will take care her with love… if she become 6… then she will start to go school… it will be easy..
Dp- wt do u mean? If we leave her there she never agree to come here as she adjusted with them…
Sanky- then here who will take care of her ?
Dp- if u re-marry… then ur wife will take care of saakshi….
Sanky- dad please… not interested …did u marry when mom deid? No naa… then
Dp- ur a boy child… and ur at the age o 15 that time… u no need of mommy that much… as I was there…. But saakshi is girl.. she needs a mother in every stage of her lyf..a girl cant talk openly with dad…
Sanky- we can arrange maid for her
Dp- if she love her lyk a mom?
Sanky- step mom can never love lyk mom
Dp- true,,, If I found a bride who tc of her more than lyk mom… then?
Sanky- impossible… if so then I ll marry her… but one condition
Dp- (with happy) wt?
Sanky- u have to clarify that girl ….that… she never be my wife,,,.. only mom to my child
Dp- (in tension)ok
After 2months
Ater this conversation dp again calls sanky and informed that he found a peract bride for him…sanky shocked….
Sanky- who is that girl?
Dp- patience my boy…. U promised me that if I find u ll marry…ur marriage is next Sunday come soon,… and one thing I can promise that that girl is perfact for saakshi and also for u..
Cuts the call(sorry I forgot after his wifes death he feels suffocated in MM so he took transfer to Kolhapur)
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When I came here I come to know that my bride is none other than my saali saab… sister of swathi….
She is quite bubbly… I never seen her shying…. She is bold… she also used to talk about her crush in clg days….but don’t know wt happened after her finals she become rude…hate mens..except me and her dad…. They tried so many times to do her marriage and every time she will breack her alliance . then how can she agreed to marry me….?…
In all these my second marriage done with my saalisaab… now I m here … today is my first night with my second wife…sounds akward na… but its reality…. I have clear her tht I cant give her any wify right….and she is just mom of my saakshi….
He went towards his room …. In shaking hand open the door and find saakshi sleeping in the middle of decorated bed….it shocks me… then I heard door opening sound from bathroom… and I saw shona coming out with night suit….but something is missing … wt?
Yeah got that mangalsutra and sindoor… but kept quite…..
Breaking the silence she said in her bold attire….
Swara- sorry …. For dispointing u…. don’t take this wedding as serious….. I know that if I denny dp papajis offer he will find a another bride for u……if she brain washed u with s*xy attire…. U will nod ur head whatever she said…. And u guys neglect saakshi…. And she have to bear stepmom torture…. So that’s y I married…to save her… I m here as her mom….not as ur wife…understand….
Sanky shocked with her bold attire…
Swara- haan and listen… I m her maasi.. means maa jaisi… If u try ur frdship drama here then..
This is it for sanky
Sanky- hello… I m seeing .u r talking non stop… even I married to or her only…. Wt s drama haan…
Swara- don’t act lyk inncent… 1st rdship then love …. I read so many story like this….
Sanky- wt?whatever our both goal is same that to give comfort to saakshi…. So from now I m only ur name sake husband… and u
Swara- name sake wife…but in reality I m only mom to saakshi…. Deal…?
Sanky-ok
Swara- now sleep on couch…
Sanky –excuse me its my room… u better sleep there
Swara –ok u sleep this end I will sleep that end ….
Swara p.o.v
She sleep facing back to sanky think her jiju become her hubby….
When I return from tracking with my frds … I got the news of swathi dead… I cant belive my ears… but that is bitter truth…. She is only one whom I can share my feelings…..i told only to her about wt happened in my final which make me hate men…?
At that time I got the responsibility of saakshi… only sign of my beloved swathi… as shomi maa is heart patient she cant run behind her and papa is busy in his business…I ound my sis in her …. I take care of her lyk mom……
One day papaji(dp) came and informed that he is finding second alliance or his son and he also found the girl.he came hear to take saakshi with them… my blood boiled hearing that how can he (jiju)think about second marriage? This soon … one year passed only..men always men… they want any one to satisify their inner devil…. Dint he even think about baby?
I directly enter in hall…
Swara- papaji….. if ur okay… can I marry ur son?
All r shocked…
Shekar- shona… its not a game… u go inside… when we bring alliances u rejected now u wanna marry ur jiju…?
Swara- haan… wt wrong in it…?
Dp- but I alredy found…
Swara- papaji… u really think that girl is suitable for saakshi… she may be suitable for sanky…I m her maasi…. Don’t u care for ur grand daughter….
Dp-(stading up from seat) shekar will u give me swaras hand for sanky? She will be the the best mom to saakshi , best bahu…. I like her straight forward nature… will u?
Shekar- dp ji… sure…
When I came to madapa I can clearly see his shock expression that he dint know about the bride…. When iwas about take pheras saakshi cried… so took her in my hands take pheras…when he is about to fill my hairline I remembered how I saw my jiju filled her hairline and how he make her wore mangalsootra…. I tear drop escaped …
Ater all this I came at the same entrance where once my jiji also stand with jiju….when I entered his room…..i can sense my jiji presence….
Its her room…which is decorated lyk a bride… 1st tyme I got nervous… seeing all these… how much brave may be I m… I m also a girl…how much can I fight with a man that too police man… one years lust …o m g….(guys I just try explain her fear.. its comman naa)
She remembers swathi conversation—
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Swara- jiji … how is ur night?
Swathi- wt type q is this? As usual(with blushing)
Swara- comman jiji …. U know wt I am asking…? How is ur irst night experiane?
Swathi- besharam … I m elder to u u cant ask me lyk that?
Swara- oho.. I m just 2 years younger to u….tell.naa wt happened?
Swathi-wo…wo(swara hearing exitdly biting lips) I m hell nervous… he came to me…. And said he liked me seeing my pic… and fall in love with me during ritual(fully blusing lyk tomoto) he asked me wheter I love him or not…..
Swara- wt u said
Swathi – I too said I love him…(closing her face in palm)
Swara- then ?
Swathi – besharam … nothing … go and study….(with fake anger)
Swara- acting to be sad…gets up walks towards door… but turns back… and said” but I kbow what happened” swathi gives look
Swara starts to dance..O SAARI NIGHT BESHARAMI KI HIGHT ,….OH SAARI NIGHT BESHARAMI KI HIGHT … EK TU EK vo AUR DIM DIM HUA LIGHT….
Swathi hits her with pillow.. swara teases her more and more and they start pillow fight”
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She smiles thiking about her old beautiful memory…. Reality hits.. and started to shake badly… one idea hits her… she take saakshi from dp room and make her sleep in middle of the bed…
She went for freshen up
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She slept after thinking all these
Next day
Its bright morning to swasan….
First sanskar wake up and flet some one grip on hand… and see that his hand is under swara and saakshi gripping it tightly,,,, he some how loosened and went washroom
Same day afternoon he was all set to go back to kolhpur to join…. Dp convinced him to take shona and saakshi….
They reach kolhpur…at night… he took them his home.. sorry their home… which is one apartment… she is shocked to see the home… its like bacholers home… in wild dreams also no one can imagine him as staying in that house.. the g8 sansakar maheshwari….
The home is lyk… while entering one hall in other end kitchen… only one room…room is big enough to stay 4 bachulers and another end bath room
Sanskar- wo…. I m alone na.. so I bought small home… I will buy 2bhk home soon…
They were so much tired becoz of journey they all slept quickly…
Next day…morning
Sanskar is about enter wash room… swara stops him..both holding door knob
Shona- I wanna bath first…
Sanskar- I want to go duty . after that u take… ur here only na..
Shona-ayyo… I have to make breakfast… I have to bring milk… there is no items in fridge I saakshi got up then… no I have to go first…
Sanskar-we will go for hotel today for breakfast….
Swara- its not hygienic… plese let me go till then press ur uniorm
Sanskar- shonaaaaa…..
Swara- jijuuuuuu….
Sanskar- saalisaab…. Jaane do…
After this 2min silence occur reality hits both of them
Sanskar breking silence
“I have lil work.. u go ….take bath first”
Recap- revalution swara past …sanskar tris to marry his saalisaab to another man who she loved in her college days…….ragini entry….