Naiya is shocked to see Durga Agarwal on TV. ” Gopi is Alive? Trishna, Paridhi and Gaura baa tried to kill her? Why did they not tell me about Durga?” Naiya was confused. Naiya goes downstairs. Sona is setting the plates on the table.
” Hello bhabi, do you need anything?” Sona asks.
” No! Where is saasumaa?” Naiya shouts.
” She is watching TV in her room.” Sona replies.
” That woman busy relaxes while we do her work! I’ll teach her!” Naiya shouts, she barges into Rashi’s room.
” How dare you enter my room without knocking!” Rashi yells.
” How dare you not tell me about Gopi Modi being alive?” Naiya shouts. ” Switch to Star News.” Rashi puts on Star News, news headlines show the attempt assassination of Durga.
” I am sorry, I forgot to tell you…” Rashi says.
” Why are you not doing anything about her? She is roaming around as Durga Agarwal and you are sitting here watching soap operas.” Naiya shouts. ” I won’t let this happen.” Naiya storms off.
In the morning, Kajol secretly meets her dad Molu. ” Dad, I have a interview at Agarwal Industries. Mom will never let me join the family business so I want to join the Agarwal business. Please? It is a great opportunity. Don’t tell mom.”
” Fine, I wont tell your mother but you must promise to give your first salary to me. I will tell your mum that you have gone college.” Molu says.
” Thank you papa.” Kajol hugs her father. Naiya is listening outside the door and thinks to herself that she will teach her daughter a lesson for disobeying her. Kajol goes off the office, whilst Naiya follows her.
Kajol arrives at the cabin of Durga Agarwal. She knocks on the door.
” Come in.” Durga says. Kajol enters the cabin.
” Hello, I am Kajol Modi.” Kajol says.
” Oh yes, you have an interview today.” Durga says. Durga thinks to herself that she is Molu’s daughter; Durga was relievied to see such a good girl. She hoped all her grandchildren were good.
” Shall we start the interview, maam?” Kajol asks.
” Sure. So tell me your strengths and weaknesses.”
“My strength is my intelligence, my thoughtfulness and sense of integrity. I am a hard worker, I believe in determination. My weakness is that I lose confidence at times and that hinders my progess.” Kajol replies. The interview goes on… Durga finally announces that Kajol has got the job. Kajol is so excited.
” Thank you so much maam!” Kajol screams. She runs out the cabin and walks down the stairs, she comes accross her mother. ” Maa?”
” So you lie to me you are going college but you are here at a interview?” Naiya shouts.
” I was going to tell you…” Kajol says. Naiya slaps her and grabs her hair.
” Don’t try and fool me. I heard you conversation with your father.” Naiya shouts. She drags Naiya all the way down to the bottom level, beating her and thrashing her. She slaps Kajol repeatedbly. Kajol cries a lot, her face is bleeding and full of bruises. Naiya tries to slap Kajol once more, but Durga grabs Naiya’s hand and pushes Naiya. Durga comforts Kajol and then looks at Naiya.
” What kind of mother are you!” Durga screams. Naiya looks and is shocked to see Durga.
” Gopi Modi?” Naiya says.
” Oh you are delusional like your whole family. I am Durga Agarwal, not Gopi Modi!” Durga shouts.
” You are Gopi Modi! Do you feel sorry for your grandaughter, hence why you saved her?” Naiya taunts.
” I saved her because she is my employee and I won’t let anything happen to her. You understand?” Durga warns.
” What are going to do? Kill me, like you killed your own mother in law?” Naiya says. Durga thinks to herself that Naiya killed Kokila herself and she is blaming Gopi Modi.
” If you harm Kajol again, I swear I won’t spare you. Get out of here before I call the police!” Durga shouts, Naiya leaves. Naiya is outside and phones her goons. Her goons come.
” Burn the building. I want everyone in there to die.” Naiya orders. Her goons understood. Her goons disguise as businessman. After a few moments, the businessman set fire to the building. Everyone runs out.
Durga is in the toilets and sees smoke as she enters he cabin. Her whole cabin is on fire and she sees unconcious Kajol on the floor. She picks up Kajol and takes her to the lower level- the firemen grab Kajol. Before Durga gets out, a massive fire explosion happens and Durga is trapped. She screams for help, but nobody comes.
Ahem and Mansi are in a car. ” Ahem, look that burning building!” Mansi says.
” It is the Agarwal building. Our rivals, that will teach them!” Ahem gets happy.
Ahem gets out and hears screaming of a woman in there. He recognises the voice of Gopi. He thinks to himself that Gopi is dead, that cannot be Gopi’s voice. Durga screams Ahem Ji, Ahem hears it. Ahem ignores the fire men and enters the building. Ahem is shocked to see Durga- Durga looks at Ahem. Both stare into each other’s eyes. Ahem walks to Durga, still shocked by seeing Durga. Durga faints and falls into Ahem’s arms. Saath Nibhana Saathiya song plays.
Ahem picks up Durga- recalling his memories of Gohem.
Precap- Durga says, for your rude behaviour, I will destroy your business Ahem Modi. Just like this building, Modi Industries will fall. Ahem tries to slap Durga, but Durga holds his hand and slaps him. She says how dare you raise your hand on a woman!
23 Comments
Now it’s Durga vs Ahem…. will Gopi succeed in punishing the husband she once saw as her master?
For the first time in SNS Ahem will become one of Gopis biggest enemies. In this fan fiction Ahem will be a villain who will aim to destroy the Agarwal Group of Industries. Durga will defend her family.
why?MAKE IT A LOVE STORY
But Ahem thinks Gopi killer his mother. He kicked her out of the house and he made fun of her in court. He married mansi and had a child with her. Doesn’t she deserve revenge?
She wants to teach Ahem a lesson so he understands how gopi felt soon they will unite
Make it as cool love story don’t make it as violent please…..
kajol joined agarwal industries.so nayya hit her cruelly.how ca n someone do that?ya…afterall its not her child,but vidya’s child she stole.But gopi saved her from Nayya.4 that nayya put the building in fire not caring that kajol is also there.merciless woman.Though in hatred gopi called ahemji.He got inside n the eye lock they shared,gopi falling in his arms was so romantic.Revenge of Gopi Ahem is fine.but make it passionate like 2day’s gohem track.and plz don’t make Gohem revenge track long n make Gohem one soon.
I don’t know guys I really wanted Gopi and Ahem as business rivals
Do you lot want Arnav and Khushi similar story Ahem has hatred for Gopi but then he falls in love with her?
A new fresh love story after the death of Gopi Ahem and Durga will hate each other but slowly they will fall in love.
Ahem will be shocked to know that all along Durga was really his Gopi. So if you lot want a love story ill do one
last time by mistake u wrote part 4 instead of part5.then why 2day u wrote part5 instead of part 6?
Sorry yesterday it was supposed to be part 5 and today was supposed to be part 6 I always get it wrong lol
I love it itso awesome can’t wait for next one
yes like arshi i want gohem luv story along with hatred
please dont make a love story they are too old make this like ek hassina thi where durga takes revenge from whole family and does not spare them please please please dont make a love story kill each of gopis enimies one by one and please bring radha fast with vidhyas child
That’s what I want to do but everyone wants a love story. There will be a love story track between Krishna and his lover- involving Komilika and her daughter.
Ahem and Gopi are too old for a love story now SNS has not seen a love story between other people it has always been Gohem and sorry akashy change of plans radha has not got vidya’s daughter but Naiya has- she exchanged Vidya’s baby with a dead baby.
However, Radha will come back. Radha has had plastic surgery, changing her face. She will look really young, same age as Meera and Vidya. Her name will be Kaushika.
Kaushika/Radha will be accepted as part of the Modi family- she will be played by Urvashi Dholakia from Kausati Zindagi Ki.
Kaushika/Radha’s daughter will marry Krishna but it turns out Kaushika’s daughter is as evil as her mother. Krishna will divorce Kaushika’s daughter and marry his lover. But Kaushika won’t allow that to happen. She will aim to destroy their relationship.
Kaushika means eternal darkness and evil- she is the final vamp in my fan fiction before I start a new fan fiction. She will be Gopi’s biggest enemy!
Radha will be back as Kaushika.
plszz make a luv story of gohem ..isaaq its nyc story bt i need a luv btw them as a story plszz if yew can
Guys Radha’s entry next- only a introduction to how she survived and everything- She will aim to make sure Durga never succeeds
how can Radha’s daughter marry Tolu’s son?they r 2 sisters’ children.Radha n Rashi r cousins.
Plz don’t say that gohem r too old 2 have a luv story.In serials age never matters 4 luv stories n in real life too old couples too have luv
Oh yh they are related that’s disgusting. Radha’s stepdaughter then.
jasmine I meant that SNS focuses too much on Gohem and not on other characters.