Saaya(Shadow) Part 5
Aman could not find Maya in the gym.So he walked out of the gym to check if Maya was in the same location or not.
Maya was standing on the road to catch the taxi.Strangely no one was there.
Roshni appeared behind her.
She smirked thinking:I erased everyone from this area.So that no one will come to save you.Your end is near and you will be out of Aman’s life.
Roshni’s eye balls turned yellow.
She moved her hands towards Maya’s neck to choke her to death with an evil smile.
Aman came from behind and pulled Roshni backward.
They both hid behind a tree.
Aman held her shoulders tight:What were you going to do Roshni?Were you planning to kill Maya?
Roshni said angrily:Yes.
Aman was shocked:I never expected you to stoop so low.I thought you were a sweet ghost.But you are an evil soul which we see in movies.
Roshni was shattered.
Aman went near Maya.
Maya was surprised:Aman…you?
Aman:I thought I will pick you up.We will go home together.
Maya:That’s so sweet of you to come here to pick me up.Since you came here let us hang out for some time.Ooty is so beautiful and romantic.
Aman:Ok.
Aman messaged Veer that Maya is with him and they are going on a date.Veer was relieved.
They both got inside the car.
Aman:Where do you want to go Maya?
Maya:First to an ice cream parlour.
Aman:Are you crazy to have icecream in this cold weather?
Maya:It’s fun to have icecream in cold weather.
Aman:You are crazy.
They both giggled.
Maya stared at him:Crazy for you.
Aman and Maya smiled.
Aman Maya were having icecream.
Suddenly Aman was shocked to see Roshni near by.
Aman:You?
Maya looked at the chair.
Maya:To whom are you talking Aman?No one is here.Have you gone mad?
Aman thought:So Roshni is visible only to me.
Aman just smiled:I saw a cute kitten passing up.So sweet.Smooch.
Maya:You feel like kissing a kitten?Are you mad?
Maya:I don’t like you kissing even a kitten.You can kiss only me.If you want to kiss,kiss me.
Maya looked at him romantically.
Roshni could not tolerate it.
Aman:Maya..I told you..wait till marriage.
Roshni was relieved that Aman did not kiss Maya.
Maya:You are really a gentle man Aman.
He smiled.
Roshni thought:I will give you a small dose.Don’t think you can enjoy icecream date with my Aman.
Roshni put ants in Maya’s icecream with an evil smile.Aman was shocked.
Maya:Yuck.So many ants here.You brought me to such an unhygienic parlour Aman.We should complain.
Aman:No need Maya.Let’s leave.
Maya:Aman..this is health related.We should complain.
Aman:I told you Maya..no need.
Maya:But Aman…
Aman grabbed her hand and walked out.He turned back.He saw Roshni smirking.A victorious smile was seen on her face as she spoiled Aman Maya’s Ice cream date.Aman gave a disgusting look to Roshni.
Aman Roshni met at the terrace.
Aman:What is wrong with you Roshni?Why are you troubling me?
Roshni:I can’t even imagine troubling you Aman as I love you.I troubled some unwanted people in your life.
Aman lost his temper:Who are you to decide who are wanted and unwanted in my life?Veer and Maya are the most wanted people of my life.Veer is my best friend and Maya is my fiancee.An orphan like me have only them and some close relatives.I know that you troubled Veer also.I don’t know why your friend ..the ghost dog Rocky is angry with Veer.It bit him terribly.You are angry with Maya as you are jealous.You think that Maya took your place in my life.But why the hell are you angry with Veer?
Roshni said angrily:Yes,I am angry with Maya as she took over my place in your life.But I am not troubling her because of jealousy.And Veer…I don’t even want to talk about him.
Aman:Whatever…I will not let you harm them.
Roshni:However you try you won’t be able to stop me from doing what I want to do.
Roshni flew up to the sky angrily.
Aman:What will I do God?
Roshni met a woman.
Roshni:I feel sad that Aman is misunderstanding me.I got violent only because of my love for him.Aman is only mine.Right?No one can love him more than me.
She:Roshni…Aman cannot be blamed.So one can forgive anyone who tries to harm his fiancee and brother.Aman loves Maya.
Roshni got angry in a moment:No.Aman should not love Maya.I cannot stand it.Aman should love only me.
She:Roshni…be calm.If you kill Maya you will not get Aman’s love,Aman will only hate you.What you should do is..tell everything to Aman without hiding anything from him.
Roshni:How can I tell him?I have no proof.When Rocky hurt Veer Aman blamed us…he misunderstood us because of that Veer.
She:You need to clear the misunderstanding.Then Aman won’t misunderstand you for hurting Veer.But proof…
Roshni:I don’ have proof.But I will punish everyone who entered Aman’s life forcefully.Only I should be there in Aman’s life.No one else has right on Aman.
Veer went near Maya:Maya…I need to tell you something very important.
Maya:Not now bhai.I have to go out now.I have an appointment in the beauty parlour.
Veer:But Maya…
Maya:I have to get ready.Bye.
Maya walked away.
Veer:Here the life is in danger.But she is more interested in beauty treatment.
Maya came back from the beauty parlour.When she entered the compound itself she got surrounded by fire which shocked and scared Maya.
Maya:How did fire form here?
“I caused fire here”.
Hearing the voice Maya looked at that person.She saw Roshni there with a shock.
Suddenly Aman came there running with Veer.Aman was shocked.
Aman:Maya…
Maya:Aman…save me please…
Aman looked at Roshni:Roshni..I beg of you..please don’t do anything to Maya.
Roshni:No Aman …I can’t obey you.Sorry.Now you will feel upset.But time will heal your painful wound in the heart.
Aman:Roshni…I said no.If you don’t remove fire from here I will also jump into this fire and end my life with Maya.
Roshni was shocked:Such an intense love for Maya?She does’nt deserve it Aman.Only I deserve your love.Why don’t you understand it?
Aman:Stop it Roshni.Maya is my better half.If she is not there,I am not there.So if you want to kill Maya kill me also.I swear..I will end my life along with Maya in this fire.
Aman walked towards the fire.Everyone got scared including Nirmala who came there.
Suddenly Roshni opened her mouth and water flowed from her mouth and thus the fire vanished.Roshni also vanished.All were relieved.
Maya embraced Aman:Aman…
Aman:Don’t be scared Maya.Your are safe.
Maya:Aman…that girl…Who is she?
Aman:She is Roshni.
Aman explained everything to Veer and Maya right from the first meeting of Roshni till now.
Maya was in tears:Aman..I am scared whether that ghost Roshni will snatch you from me.Will she separate us?
Aman caressed Maya:No Maya.Roshni won’t be able to do anything.She cannot separate us.
Veer:But Aman…She is not a normal human being.She is a powerful ghost.How can we defeat her?
Suddenly they heard a voice from behind:I will tell you how to defeat her.
They looked at that person.Aman and Nirmala were stunned.
15 Comments
@Jasminerahul
Wow,this episode is super amazing. When roshni is about to kill maya, I thought aman is going to save maya by pulling her backwards but to my surprise he pull roshni to save maya. I like this as it was completely unimaginable for me. And when aman scold roshni for her attempt to kill maya, I felt really bad for her,but it was not Aman’s fault as he don’t know the real reason behind why roshni did this.
And the way Roshni spoiled the icecream date of maya and aman was really worth watching.
And at the terrace when aman scold roshni and criticse her for her attempt to kill Maya,it was really sad ,again I felt bad for Roshni.
And when Roshni angrily flew up to the sky and met a woman,the conversation between them was also worth watching. I want to know who is she??.
And when Maya got surrounded by fire and aman requesting roshni to leave her and says if she will not leave her then he also jump into the fire,and after hearing that roshni thinks maya doesn’t deserve your love. My excitement got high coz I really wanted to know when will this mystery revealed, when will roshni tell the whole truth behind her dead to aman.
And at the very last part where someone came from behind and says I will tell you how to defeat her ,really wanna know who is the person who came from behind,and why aman and Nirmalaji are stunned to see that person.does they know the person already?? So many question right now coz story is getting interesting day by day.
This time I really wrote too much,9f I write anything wrong plz pardon me??
Thnx for the update and waiting for the next update????.
I am really happy to get a reader like you.you are writing what you like in each chapter in detail which makes me very happy.thanks a lot.I love long comments.
other than roshan which pair do you like?
@Jasminerahul
Firstly thnx for liking my comment and other than roshan I think I like Piaansh from nazar??.
Hey Jasmine Rahul loved today’s update…..seriously when aman and roshani shouting on each other was very bad…..and when Maya surrounded by fire and aman asking roshani to leave her else he will also jump was seriously very sad n irritating….my excitement also got high to know what is the mystery behind roshni turning into a bad spirit and killing maya n veer… let’s see what are u going to present in the next episode….Hey if you ask me which couple I’d like other than roshan I will say avneil….please I request you to make avnil ff with at least 10 episode please….. a Very romantic one…..plz its a request n if you are having time so please consider my request
thank you very much.i am planning a samaina avneil ff.but let me finish the current ffs first
Ya sure…m really happy u considered my request…bt will u plz plan only avneil…plz
wow such a great episode!!!! i think “she” has given the correct suggestion, roshni should speak up everything before aman instead of taking wrong actions, roshni has become kind of obsessive about aman… aman i think understands that roshni is good… that is why when roshni was going to kill maya aman pulled roshni back saving her from doing the misdeed… i found the icecream date very funnny, and when the icecream got full of icecream… it was so dirty… yuck… but it was very good….i want to know who is the person whom seeing aman and nirmala ji got stunned… may be they know that person…, why not maya and veer… lets see what happens next… when aman scolded Roshni it was a little saddening… but he was not wrong… roshni should say everything to aman which will clear the misunderstanding… and all the readers will also know it… that day roshni had revealed half truth about her death… she should reveal it soon… and there is something special about the dog rocky…. i like your FFs very much please update it as soon as possible…
thank you so much .just loved it
Post the flashback soon!!!
thanks
Episode was awesome. ??No I am feeling like Maya and Veer isn’t clean .Roshni and Aman’s fight ☹️. I felt bad for Roshini. Aman is an orphan & How did Maya and Aman became so close ? Iam waiting for the next update.
thanks a lot.Aman and Veer are best friends.so being veer’s sister Maya n Abhi knew each other very well.in future i will show how abhi Maya fell in love .
Thanks a lot.Aman n veer are best friends n maya being veer’s sister aman knew her well.in future I will show how Aman Maya became a couple.
in the previous reply name error was there.hence I am re writing the comment
Sorry di. 4 me only u dedicated this ff and i myself is nt regular. H always read ur ff bt i dont have that much free tym to comment each and every epi. So whenever i am free i take tym 4 u alone. Even my mobile data has some problem dont know what happened. It buffers alot. I have complainted so lets see wat they say. Btw the ff was very heartbreaking. Roshan’s fight made me sad. Hoping that maya turns out to be negative so that aman believes on roshni. Usually all of ur ff has happy ending so i am curious how wil u unite a ghost and a human?. Waiting 4 d next update
thanks a lot.i am very happy that you commented.I was waiting for it.if possible comment on the previous chapter also.please read my mayra ss beyhadh pyar too.