AN : This Short Story is actually an adaptation of Malayalam movie “Pavithram . ” I thank Jasmine Rahul who suggested me to write on this movie featuring Abhigya . Well I got inspired from another movie “Bro Daddy” which also bought the same theme of “Pavithram” but in a different way. After seeing both of them I got inspired and have put changes at my own way of imagination and hope my readers will like it. This one is specially dedicated to Jasmine Rahul.
Main leads
Abhishek Mehra & Pragya Arora
Tej Mehra and Mrs. Jhanvi Mehra [ Parents of Abhishek aka Abhi]
Shekhar Arora & Vedashri Arora { Parents of Pragya Arora}
Ramesh Khanna [Loyal Driver of Tej Mehra who always stands with him]
Aliya Mehra [ Younger sister of Tej who is money minded, a model not less than any vamp ]
& The main character who is going to play the major twists is none other than Rhea . Her introduction will be given in upcoming episodes.
The story begins
AT PUNE
Panditji :You need to perform the final rituals of your parents Abhi. They passed away almost 18 years back and as a son you should show some respect to the dead persons.
Abhi : Shut up, Just shut up. How dare you said that my parents are dead ? I know bomb blast happened years back at which many people got injured, many people lost their lives. But my parents ……I didn’t get any official information about them. They left home because of the circumstances . I myself went the spot and registered missing file at the police station. They searched a long but they didn’t find my parents. And what they bought to me was burned scattered pieces of dresses which my parents were wearing while leaving home.
Panditji : Police submitted the evidence and as it’s a blast obviously their bodies might be burned and have become ash. So it’s clear
Abhi : Did I asked your opinion, Panditji ? I respect you because you are a priest and I called you here to perform puja for the well -being of my parents . If you dare to say anything wrong about them then I will forget that you are a priest .
Panditji : Shiv- Shiv, Hey bholenath Please show your mercy to this man and let him get some sense.
Abhi ; Khanna , Send him out, right now.
Khanna : Panditji you got your Dakshina , won’t you. Please you may leave .
Panditji : Jay Shiv -Shambu. May Lord Shivji bless you Abhi.
He leaves.
Abhi leans in armchair and recollects the past incidents
FLASH BACK [ BEFORE 15 YEARS, YEAR 2007]
AT LOYOLA COLLEGE, MUMBAI
Principal : I asked you to bring your Mom because your dad was out of station . And what is this ? You are with your elder sister ? There is a limit for fun.
Jhanvi laughs, Abhi stares her as an Angry bird
Principal : Did I said anything wrong ?
Abhi : Of course Sir. She is my mother, not my elder sister.
Principal : Really ?
Jhanvi nods her head
Principal : Mam, you looks so young . Please don’t get me wrong. I am sorry.
Jhanvi : Actually Tej I mean Abhi’s dad and I got married at very young age. We were just 2O years old when we got married. We both did a love cum arranged marriage and after marriage only we did our post graduation.
Principal : So interesting
Abhi : Excuse me , did you called my Mom here to hear her old filmy love story ?
Jhanvi : Abhi what’s this ? When two elders are talking why are you interrupting in between them ? It’s too bad.
Principal : Yeah Mam. And see kyaa haal bana ke rakha hein aapke bete ne ? Khud ko Tere naam Salman Khan samajhta hein kya ?
Abhi : Uncle, don’t feel jealous
Principal : What ? You called me Uncle ?
Abhi ; Toh kya aapko Dadaji bulaon ?
Principal : See his attitude , Mam
Jhanvi : I am sorry Sir. He is just like his Dad. The same style, swag
Principal : Aapke college time pe yeh hair style huwa karta thaa kyaa ?
Abhi : Mom used to over act sometimes. Don’t mind Sir. And sorry if you felt bad as I called you Uncle. I won’t call you Uncle again.
Principal : Enough. Stay silent. Jhanvi Mam, see how your son is behaving . This is the problem. I called because personally his class tutor reminded that Abhi who is good at studies have scored less marks at the last semesters. Moreover a girl named Pragya Arora , B.Sc First Year Chemistry had put a complaint that he had done ragging at her.
Jhanvi : What’s this Abhi ? You teased a girl ?
Abhi ; Mom when I joined college my seniors ragged me and that’s what I am doing because now I have become a senior. And I didn’t teased her, just made fun of her.
Jhanvi : Abhi Be serious . Fun, Enjoyment all are okay. Even though some times you score less I knows that at final exams you will focus on studies and will break all records. I have seen them from your school days. But ragging a girl is not fair. I won’t forgive you for this. First go and say sorry to that girl . Then only you will get an entry to home. Otherwise you are suspended both from campus and from home.
Principal : Very good decision Mam. Big claps to you. Aap Principal kyun nahi ban jaati college kee ?
Abhi : Toh aap kya karoge ?
Principal : Oops!! Yeh toh maine socha nahi.
Jhanvi : Sir mein chalti hoon. Abhi say sorry to Sir
Abhi : I am sorry Uncle, I mean Sir.
Jhanvi leaves. Abhi thinks about Pragya.
AT GIRLS HOSTEL OF COLLEGE [PRAGYA’S ROOM]
Abhi enters to Pragya’s room through the back side of hostel . He finds Pragya involving in her studies
Abhi : Oye book worm
Pragya gets shocked to see Abhi in her room
Pragya : Tum yahan , Phir se. Warden, leela
Abhi goes near her and puts his hand at her mouth
Abhi : Shut your mouth. Don’t shout and scresm. I came to your room through the back side of hostel by putting a ladder . For knowing your room number I had to bribe that warden by offering 500 rupees which I kept for my expense. Any ways let’s come to the point. I came here to say Sorry. I didn’t mean to hurt you. Just that my friends were pulling me at the enthusiasm I ragged you. That’s all. I didn’t have any intention to tease any girl. I promise you.
He slowly kept his hand away from her mouth
They both looked each other’s eyes
Abhi : I am really very sorry for entering your room like a thief. But no choice was left for me as today at the college ground whenever I tried to talk with you, you was ignoring me. And you know what my entery to campus and home is based on your word only.
Pragya : What do you mean ?
Abhi : You just say you have forgiven me please before Principal tomorrow. Please .
Pragya laughs
Abhi : I am serious , you find it as so funny
Pragya : Okay, I won’t laugh. But seriously I was thinking you as an attitude wala stuff . But I relize now that you are soft spoken guy.
Abhi : Who told that ? I am not that much soft.
Pragya : Toh kya tum rough ho ?
Abhi : I….I don’t know.
Pragya : I will say my decision tomorrow at Principal Sir’s cabin .
Abhi : That means you forgiven me hey naa ? Yes or No ?
Pragya : That’ s what I told now. I will say it tomorrow
Abhi : Tab tak mein kahan jawunga ?
Pragya : Kyun ? Aapka ghar nahi hein ?
Abhi : My entry is banned . Koi baat nahi. Ek raat kee toh baat hein. Mein chala jawunga….
Pragya ; Ek second , let me open the side window. You can go through this one , I mean if you jump from here it will be at the garden of our hostel. Through that way you can easily go out.
Abhi : Oh So you do this adventourous task daily ?
Pragya : Don’t be over smart. If I will scream girls of other rooms will come here . Then you will face another blame for entering girls hostel at night time
Abhi : No, I will go this way. Thanks Pragya .
Pragya : No need to thank me Abhishek .
Abhi : Abhi, that’s enough. Abhishek Mehra is my official name.
Pragya : I know that. That’s why I give the complaint to Principal Sir. You may please leave
Abhi : Please think well. Good night, Bye
Pragya : Good night Abhi
As Abhi leaves, Pragya smiles
12 Comments
Nice update soon
Thanks a lot
When is your next update
Thanks a lot, please wait
Thanks a lot for your dedication. This ss is really a surprise for me.bcz you told me earlier that you will write this after completing your ff.but you started it now itself n surprised me.i liked abhi believing that his parents are still alive.hope they will return.i am surprised that aliya is abhi’s aunt here.i wonder whether she has any hand in the bomb blast.the principal mistaking janvi for abhi’s eldest sister was funny.each n every dialogue of the principal n abhi were very funny.i was laughing.cant believe that abhi had ragged pragya.i liked abhi apologizing to pragya.abhigya eye lock was romantic. Abhigya conversation was very cute.perfect pics.
Can you please add the song sreeragamo from pavitram for abhigya romance?
Well…when did you watch pavitram?
Plz post the next chapter soon.
As I mentioned I have watched both Pavitram and Brodaddy. Watched Pavitram last month and was thinking about the story. Recently watched Brodaddy as it’s on hotstar and while observing both of them I build up a plot on mind. As you was always asking thought to start it. Happy you liked it. I will surely add sreeragamo song as soon as their love story blossom in upcoming episodes. Please keep waiting. And now trouble some lives is almost at the verge of ending. Will be giving few more episodes only.
I have not seen Bro Daddy.is this the mix of pavitram and Bro Daddy?waiting for part2.if possible if you get extra time plz update your jabir shanki ff also.
Yeah this SS is inspired from both of them. Bro daddy is humour filled, Pavitram is emotional and from both aspects I am trying to bringing up a story here. Please wait , I needs time for updating articles.
Not the humour aspect…I am just asking whether the story is also inspired from Bro Daddy…
Not whole story , only little a bit
This is so good!! I know I’m a little late but still..this one was hilarious XD Abhi and principal’s dialogues were so funny and I’m suprised to see Aliya as Tej’s sister. Abhi-Pragya room conversation was really good.
Thanks a lot