Welcome back , Guys!! Once again Zuha here , not with my Asya FF , the new one , for Sahil and Sehaan??Anyway , I will be posting Asya one today itself that is my promise??As I have given you the introduction , so here is the Ep.1
Hope you all enjoy it , tell me through your precious comments??
Episode 1:
A small house is shown, a beautiful girl, wearing a white salwar kameez is seen reciting Holy Quran, she finishes reading and raises her palms for supplication , and says , “Ya Allah!! 20 yrs have passed and my parents’ murderers are not punished for their sins , today is a very painful day in our lives , Please don’t let me break down as I have to support my family.”
The girl says , Ameen!!! And her face is revealed , she is none other than our beautiful Sanam.
A girl is seen holding a rifle in a big ground , all are shouting , “SEHER , SEHER!!” She points towards a man upon him an apple is placed. She fires and it hits the apple. All clap.
Judge , “So this year the winner of Rifle shooting is none other than Seher Asad Ahmed Khan!!!!”
Yes the girl is our Seher.
She receives the gold medal , the mic is given to her ;
Seher:This award is dedicated to my late.parents, Asad Ahmed Khan and Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan. I know they are not between us , but they live in my heart , I know they are seeing me and will be feeling proud of there daughter. I don’t like to give nor like to hear long adresses on stage but today my biggest aim came true , and the whole credit goes to my Badi Ammi and my sister , they are my pillars of support , they are not here but still Thank you Guys!!
She leaves the stage.
At Sanam’s place……
The bell rings , Sanam opens it , it is Seher.
Seher hugs her tightly.
Seher:Sanam , Sanam , I am so happy , I won!!
Sanam:Congrats Sunehri!!
Seher:U know na Sanam I hate that name. Anyway , I am not in the mood to fight , where is Badi Ammi?
Sanam:In her room…
Seher:BADI AMMI!!!
Dilshad comes and says:From this noise I can easily tell that our monsoon has come.
Seher rushes to her and hugs her:Badi Ammi!!!
Dilshad:I know,you won!!
Seher:How do you know??
Dilshad:Because I know my daughters can never loose!! A mother knows everything.
SehNam:Awwwww….
The girls hug Dilshad!!
Seher:Badi Ammi you promised that you will tell us the biggest truth behind our parents’ death on their 20th death anniversary and today is the day.
Sanam:Please Badi Ammi , we want to know who was behind our parents’ death.
Dilshad:TANVEER!!!
A FB is shown;
It is SehNam’s b’day , AsYa are very happy.
Asad:Mrs.Khan , My princesses will go on me.
Zoya:Be quiet , My daughters will go on me!!
Asad:Ohhhhh….But why?
Zoya:Because I am their mother!!
Asad:Like ways , I their father.
Zoya:But Paradise lies under mother’s feet.
Asad:So you mean to say , that Hell lies under father’s feet.
Zoya:I don’t know about others but maybe under my fire ball hubby.
Asad:Very funny!!
Zoya:I don’t care on whom they go on but they should grow up to be good humans as well as a good muslim.
Asad:Insha Allah.
Zoya:Do you want any 1 quality to be in any of our daughters?
Asad:Yeah!!
Zoya:What??
Asad:Rifle shooting!!
Zoya:Rifle shooting??!!
Asad:Yes! I always wanted to know Rifle shooting but I was not able to , so I want one of my daughter to become a rifle shooter.
Zoya:Not bad huh!
Asad:What about you??
Zoya:Well issi baat pe aik sher arz hai , Irshaad!
Asad:Phewww!!!????Irshaad!!
Zoya:Toh arz kia hai,
Main hoon best , meri shayari best ,
Main chati hoon beti meri bane shayar world’s best!!
(I am best , my poetry is best!
I want my daughter to become a poet world’s best)
Asad:Wah , wah Zoya Wah!!
Zoya:How was it??
Asad:Shayari? Mind blowing , my mind seriously blew.
Zoya:Uffooo!!My wish.
Asad:I just wish she does not bring pain in her husband’s ears by her shayari. I know how it feels.
Zoya hits Asad slightly , they hug.
AsYa were in their rooms , when Tanveer enters and stabs them.
Zoya:TANVEER!!!
Asad:What did you do!!!!
They writhles in pain.
Tanveer:Today my madness won and your love lost!! Hahaha???
Zoya:Love is eternal , it never looses!
Asad:This is your loss , not ours!
Tanveer stabs them again.They breathe their last breath and die after confessing their love.
Dilshad runs and escapes with the girls.
FB ends.
All are teary-eyed.
Scene shifts to a big haveli.
A boy is seen getting ready , wearing white shirt , blue panta and a blue blazer , he shouts , “Rehaan!!”
A dashing boy comes who is none other than Rehaan.
Rehaan:Ji Aahil Bhai!
Yes , the other handsome hunk is Aahil.
Aahil:Are ammi’s bail papers ready?
Rehaan:Yes , bhai!!
Aahil:Good , I am so happy , finally Ammi will be back after 20 yrs! Nothing should be lacking in the arrangements!
Rehaan:OK bhai!
Aahil:Rehaan , except for , ”Ji Aahil Bhai!” , ”Yes Aahil Bhai!”, ”OK Aahil Bhai!” , ”No Aahil Bhai!!” can you say anything else.
Rehaan:Sorry Aahil Bhai!!
Aahil:Look again!!C’mon I am your bro. Man!! Anyway , I have to go , I have work!!
He leaves , Rehaan thinks , ”Aahil Bhai , I can not give answers to your questions , I also want you to hug you tightly and want to say how much I love my bro. but I can’t! I am sorry! Somethings are better the way they are!!
Scene again shifts to SehNam’s residence.
All are crying , the TV was on , the news of Tanveer’s release was on , Seher in rage switches off the TV , and throws the remote.
Seher:Tanveer you are dead!!
Sanam:I won’t spare you Tanveer!!
Scene shifts to Police station….
Tanveer comes out of PS and thinks ,”Today I am free , now look how I will rule over whole Bhopal. , just wait and watch what I will do”
Bilorani plays.
Episode ends……
Precap:Aahil decides to throw a party as Tanveer is back , Sanam enters their as event manager while Seher as DJ…Now the thing is how the 4 individuals end up together….
Hope you enjoyed. Tell me via comments?
25 Comments
Awsm start…..loved it……
Thanks Kriya!!
Really nice zuha loved it now there are is one more sehaan and sahil story! Awesome
Thanks Sarah!!
Wow zuha what a start love it I wish they showed it like this in real Qubool hain
Thanks Joyee!! I am happy that you liked my idea!
Awesome. Just loved it.
Thanks Alisa!
Wow super my little sis!!! You’re indeed rocking this fam fiction!!!! I loved the first episode already!!! Hope they used this idea on the actual QH.
Anyways good luck writing next epsiode.
Lots of love
~Nusz
Nusz dear did you read my 27th episode ??? If yes what’s your feedback dear 🙂 .. Please do leave a comment and there’s a surprise for you , zuha Sarah in my next episode 😉
Ohhhhh……I will be waiting for it then!! Did you read my last part of KKB FF?
Omg really thanks sum love you ??? so ummm when you are gonna upload the nxt ep and pls sun check my ep 20 bcz i have commented you asked for help right you can check !
Thanks Nuszz , I am happy that you enjoyed my FF!! THANKS FOR APPRECIATING MY IDEA!! UMMMMAAAHHH!!!
Zuha it’s mind blowing my bestie sahil ff too rocking
Thanks Sunehri , my bestie!!
awesmome…
Thanks.
waitng for asya and huyaan tho…
I have posted it?
Amazing… Awaiting your next episode!
Thnx , I will post it soon?
nice post
Thanks Maya dear!
nxt epi plz…
Insha Allah!