So, I finally came with chapter 1:
In a normal middle-class household, an old woman is reading the Quran. The woman is Shayonti. Faraz comes there.
Faraz: aapka teeno ladli Abhi tak utthe nahi kya.
Shayonti: utthe hai, aur teeno aapne aapne kaam karne ke liye gye hai.
Faraz: sach mein
Field
A girl and her friend are flying kites
(Picture blurry hai but bear karoππΌππΌ)
The red dress wali girl runs fast and jumps onto a stack of hay.
Mustafa: Afeeza rukkkkkk!!!!
The red dress wali girl turns, her face is revealed. It’s Afeeza.
Afeeza: main jeet gyi! Ab Chal mujhe teen handiya rassgulle khilwa
Mustafa: Yeh fair nahi hai! Tune toh bhaga
Afeeza: Toh rules mein toh yeh sab nahi tha
Mustafa: phir bhi!
Afeeza: Iss khel ke har niyam humne char char baar padha hai.
Mustafa: haan haan, tu toh bohut zyada hi padhaku banrahihai
Afeeza: Matlab Kainat Di ki ekdum opposite
Other side
A girl is dancing
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=h6lHUn20J5g
(Deepika ki jaga Anushka ko samajh lo)
In the middle, a tsunami π comes. Kainat wakes up from sleep.
Kainat: tsunami koi bachaooooo!!!
She stands up. All of the students laugh at her.
Teacher: Kainat! Tum har test mein C paate ho! Aur ab soraheho, Sharam nahi aata kya?!!
Kainat: sorry teacher saheba
Teacher: Main tumhara class participation marks mein 0 dungi
Kainat: kyaaaaaaaaaaaa?!! Please nahi
Teacher: tumhe tumhari behen Suhaira se sikhna chahiye. Vo topper hoke pass hui hai humare college se
Kainat(mumbling): Di yeh sab kaise karleti hai
Mashjid
A girl wearing a white hijab π§π» is seen praying among many people. They do Sajda, The girl’s face is seen.
Government Mahila college
Class ends, students go for break.
Kainat: Di yeh sab kaise karleti hai?
Yasmine: mujhe kya pata?
Kainat: Haan Haan Tujhe toh kuch pata nahi!(sarcastically)
Kainat: Ab toh ghar jaakar hi puchh naa padhega.
Somewhere
Afeeza and Mustafa are lying on taken on a wheel gadiΒ
Mustafa: haan tu jeet gyi, par ab yeh bol ki hum teen handiya kiddhar se lekar aungi?
Afeeza turns
Afeeza: mujhe pata hai jaane ke liye
Sana’s Sweets
A girl is seen ordering workers to do their work. A boy comes there
Boy: Itna bhi kya hai ki tu itna preparations karrahihai?
Girl: Manik, itna sawal mat ka-
“Suniye”
The girl recognizes the voice and turns, her face is revealed.
Sana: Afeeza!
She hugs Afeeza
Afeeza: Thank you didi, didi kya aap mujhe teen handiya rassgulle desakte hai?
Sana: Kyun nahi?
Sana gives her 3 matkis of rassgulla. Afeeza is about to pay, but Sana stops her.
Sana: I don’t make my sister pay*Afeeza looks on dumbfounded*, and you are like my sister.
Afeeza: Even I’ve never met anyone like you
They hug.
Mustafa: Afeeza Chal, do bajgya!
Afeeza: Oh! Teri, Itna jaldi! Chal Chal chal!!!(Reminds me of chol chol kobita by Kazi Nazrul Islam)
They both go out.
Sana: *chuckles* these two will never change
Worker: madam kaam hogya
Sana: Haan theek hai
Sana and Manik leave to deliver the order.
Precap: more intros
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Exactly 608 words, actually I had this lying in my drive for a week, so I decided to give it.
Goodbyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
~Samaila
4 Comments
Amazing start. Kainat dream and Vashrit intro was nice and interesting. Others are also lovely
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Wow! Itβs awesome you are writing on KUDCA (I can say one of my favourite series, but hoping to not drag that Veer – Amrit drama and also give some more importance to Vashmay) It was excellent at beginning.
Coming back to your ff, it was very well written. Looking forward to your story.
Thanks