Sajna ve twinj ff part 14
Twinj room
Kunj playing with his cute daughter kanasu while twinkle not in room suddenly kanasu started crying as she was hungry
K – shhh dont cry my love y u crying he searched milk bottle to give her but didnt found
K – twinkle told she kept it here only no then where it is? N where is she ? Its been 1 hr now she is away from baby she ll forget everything if she meets her friend let her come today baby papa scold mumma k u dont cry she cried for some min twinkle came to room
T – arey kanasu baby y u cry hungry? I kept milk bottle na kunj
K – where twinkle angry tone
T – he…here only i kept kunj n search here n there while baby crying still
K – idiot now stop searching it n proving that u kept it here only leave it for now ill talk with u abt that matter later now take baby n feed her n haa afterwards come n meet me in angry n rude tone
T – bowing head down okay
Twinkle took baby in her hand baby became silent when she sense twinkle touch
T – chup hogayi meri gudiya abhi dhud dethi hun smiling at baby n also at kunj who was looking like angry bird
K – stop smiling now u careless girl when u know baby cant stay away from u then y u go away ha she cried for much time today for u now dont speak anything n feed her twinkle mode in yes n started to feed baby n after tummy got filled baby trying to sleep on her lap
T -slowly kanasu kanasu baby plz dont sleep now only na play with me plz so ur papa not scold me if u r awake plz na baby n i kept feeding bottle here only na putting my milk i know she wont drink other so i kept ot here only then where it gon now kunj wont leave me save me baba g while kansh also slept within no time still twinkle sitting with sleeping baby
Kunj came in room n looked at sleeping baby
K – she slept right then place her in cradle or on bed what u thinking huh are u thinking u to escape from me
T – no i was above to come to u kunj she place baby in cradle kunj held her wrist n took her outside room n close door so there voice dont disturb his daughter sleep
K – you told me you come back in 15 min so i allow you to go but you vame late n in hurry u didnt prepare milk for baby too
T – kunj vo vo was bit late im sorry bu i prepared milk kunj when u r in washroom i told u na i kept it on table only
K – it wasnt there na twinkle you forgotten may be
T – no kunj im telling the truth i kept it there only
K – ha ha k them im telling lie yes rwinkle it was there only and i drink it right
T – kunj y u saying like that im not saying u r telling lie but im also not telling lie
K – shut up loudly stop behaving careless like mahi you started to behave like her you are arguing with me
T – kunj why yoh take di name now what she did now? N im not careless i told u i kept it meane i kept i dont know where it gon suddenly
Mahi came there n saw them fighting n smirked
M – twinkle
T ‘ yes di
Kunj rolled eyes
K – i n twinkle are busy in our conversation u r disturbing us
T – kunj….u tell me di
M – sorry for disturbing n twinkle i came here to give u this feeding bottle back thank u for it u care about my baby a lot u were going out so u prepare milk for my baby n placed in my room uv feed him milk ehen baby hungry so he didnt cry
T – yes i prepared for both babies n y thank u for it di he is like my baby only to me
K – you gave bottle to him but not to my baby twinkle
T – no i said u i kept there only kunj
K – leave it its waste of time to talk to u n dare u twinkle dare u go away from baby even for min now then see what ill do to you
M – why you scolding twinkle like this huh even you have resposibility of baby not only twinkle y u scolding twinkle n y u won’t allow her to go outside oh twinkle now i get it y u cancel movie plan that day bcoz kunj didnt permit u
K – look who is talking about resposibility you cant take ur resposibility n u speaking abt me huh leave it n yes i didnt gave twinkle permitiin to go outside yes its true its for baby n her safety i look for first who are u to tell me that n plz dont spoil my wife also like you got it
M – leave it twinkle you be ready today evening @6 we ll go for shopping n we take babies too
T – but di i can’t how i can take baby with me for shopping its not good they ll cry if there is crowd
M – arey no there ll not be crowd come na plz
T – oh…but
K – twinkle bit loudly you not going anywhere got it
M – arey…see twinkle thats what im telling you kunj controlling you everytime why you ask for permition from him its your life na not only now before baby also rules like come home before 8 n all y u listen such
T – its our life di not only mine kunj care for me so he told like that he never controlled me what u speaking kunj smiled listening to twinkle
M – pov what is this they both fighting but see how twinkle takes kunj side to create rift between them i throwed milk bottle which is in twinj room for baby so that she get scolding she got but also not telling bad thing abt kunj
M – so youbare not coming? Okay atleast for dinner
T – dinner
K – twinkle nowhere means nowhere did u get it damn it twinkle coughing
K – why coughing ha are you okay? Worried she sneeze too n make innocent face
K – acha eat ice cream right thats why i wont allow you to go outside alone you cant rake care of yourself twinkle n you he looked at mahi then said excuze
K – come with me now he placed hand on her shoulder n took her to room while mahi fuming in anger looking at there bond
Twinj room
K – careless twinkle cant you take care of yourself now see you got cold n see bit fever too
T – sorry kunj achu achu oh i eat 1 ice cream only baba achu achu
K – i know its not one now drink this milk then this tablet right now n ill get tasty khada for u baby twinkle making faces
T – kunj khada no na im fine kunj achu achu
K – shh kunj made her to drink khada too while twinkle complained n making faces after she took chocolate then drink it fully both went downstair with baby
T – kunj give her to me n i see there i kept lunch box for you to have in office stressing word office
K – arey office ha i forgotten only see n twinkle what i was telling is its already 12 so ill go from tomorrow no worries ill work from home
T – no need of it daily u do this only kunj now go otherwise ill tell papa g (kunj started doing business in sarna empire only as he buyed all his fathers property back from surjith n heis doing good in business )
K – you are so mean twinkle how can i be away from you both you allow both babies to be with everytime but not me
T – now dont tell me you also want to sit on my lap like them
K – good idea baby we will try it you always sit on my lap today we try different k why should girls have all fun
T – hahaha good joke now go to office
K – im hungry
T – okay after lunch u going otherwise ill call papa g then see u get nice scoldings
Twinkle serving lunch to kunj n usha helping her
U – arey kanasu beta u looking so beautiful baby smiled at her dadi
U – twinkle did u feed her food
T – ha mummy g i feed her milk now after some min ill give her baby food
U – haa beta n kanasu see this ur favourite pickle
K – maa not now she is sitting on me she ll not let me eat choti siyappa queen gandhi hey
U & t- kunj….let her do what she wants to meri pothi/beti hey while usha put some pickle on kunj playe baby tell kunj to keep it in her mouth n she also feeding her father making everything fall on him n she putting food not in his mouth but in every other possibe place twinkle bebe usha laughing looking at kunj state
Kunj left for office all ladies having lunch bebe looking at mahi angrily thinking she will not help them even in work but comes to eat lunch correctly on time n cant take any responsibility
M – twinkle go and get some more hot paratha
T – haan di k n was above to go leaving her lunch in middle usha n bebe looked at each other face like how mahi treat twinkle like her servent
B – twinkle first you finish lunch mahi go n make paratha by yourself
U – haan haan twinkle looking so tired n kunj telling me you are not well twinkle but also doing instead of taking rest mahi u cook paratha for you n twinkle u complete your lunch hardly you get time for yourself
T – its k bebe n mummy g im fine now
B – we can see that now sit quitely mahi stared them angrily n cooked for herself
Baby crying in mahi room tanvir missing kunj n twinkle mahi not letting them to come near tanvir baby forcefully her so called love now but he dont want that now when he needed it most she didnt gave him love now showing love to him so he will get attached to her but that not happened in twinkle love n care there was maa ka mamatha filled in so baby liked her even kunj n uv they gave him love by heart not by mind like if i do this baby like me the love coming from bottem of heart is what worth to love back
M – shhh plz baby see your toys its new one you like it na plz dont cry see take thisbut he throwed that toy
Twinkle in her room with kanasu they heard his cry
T – why Tanvir crying this much n i cant see hi like this but di dont like if i meet with him what to do she cuddle with baby mahi comes down with baby anitha try to calm him down no use then bebe took him but also he didnt stop
B – wait he ll not be calm like this let me call twinkle puttar twinkle..twinkle came down with baby usha took kanasu in her arm n twinkle take tanvir n rub his back he became silent everyone shocked
B – kaha tha na mene
M – give my son back to me n snatch baby from her hand ge looked at mahi face n started to cry again she took him near dining table n telling him not to cry
B – mahi puttar dont make him cry na give him to twinkle she ll make him sleep then youbcan take him
M – arey bebe its my baby i can take care of him i dont want anyones help n u plz stay away from my baby twinkle
U – why u telling twinkle like that huh twinkle taking care of your baby from day 1 so now he adjusted to twinkle body heat n if some other tske him he easily identifies
M – but its mine
B – you would have thought it befote putting him on twinkle lap that time you busy with party n all right when he wanted you most but look at twinkle she handle both babies nicey n you not alowing tsnvir baby to come near twink from many days so see tanvir is sad he brcame dull he is crying for there love now dont make him cry im telling you hsnd him to teinkle n mshi u do house hold work which twinkle wss doing so youbbusy in work twinkle slone cant handle babies n work
M per bebe
B – keh detta tho keh detta twinkle and usha u both come with both babies to my room now only they both nod twinkle looks at mahi n ask permissiom to take tanvir while mahi give him in her hand fuming
B – twinkle see your baby how quickly she sits n crawl from here to there fastly n try to speak out some words n tanvir not so active like her always sweating n crying n sits silently you n kunj take him once to doctor his parents dont have time for him uv busy in office okay he has to go officethats k no complains abt him bcoz when he ll be here he only take his care n mahi leave she ll be busy always in her parlour n partying n i have doubt on her monthly she take baby to hospital only for check up or any other places
T – yes bebe ill talk to kunj about this n u also say him one time warned me one time clearly to not to enter in mahi matters dont know why he hates di a lot if i say something then he ll scold me n show anger on me
B – ha puttar
U – bebe my pothi so active in small age its because kunj and twinkle only they gave so much attention on her kunj use to teach her everything by playing so she learn quickly n twinkle too always spends time with her then automatically she become active parents are main for child they are its world what they teach they ll learn and does like that but poor tanvir his mo dont gave time for him n if twinkle take himbin that too mahi have problem
Tanvir looking at twinke
Ta – m….mumm muma usha n bebe looked at baby n then at twinkle twinkle said he says twinj as papa n muma
B – ha tho he is right na usha who gave him time n love for them ony he calling mua n papa after some time twinkle goes out with her babies
B- usha i think v should meet again that guru g there is some fact in his saying he said kunjs baby boy alive n looking at hoe environment i fee to go again n u know na he never tels lie n gives accurate future information
U – sadly but baby whatever he may tell the fact is infomront of our eyes that kunj son died infront of our eyes n went outside while bebe thinking something she remembered tanvir n he have same birth mark like kunj n in same place too n he resemble kunj sometime she knew how kunj was wgen he was small baby n looking at tanvir she feels like she is looking at baby kunj once again they are dicto xerox copy in cuteness n charm
Twinkle sitting in room with both babies playjng with them n mahi stuck in kitchen work bebe not leaving her
U – duffod mahi jadi jadi hath chala abhi pooja ki thayari bhi karna hey baar basr mobie kyu dekh rahi hey chod usse
M – g usha aunty see twinkle still in wait ill call her
B – no need of it she is with bsbies n she know how to complete her work you finish your work first arey vo anitha thu kaha chali phir se shopping thum saas bahu ko na koyi aur kaam dandha nahi hey kya chal mere sath pooja ka saman lana hey
A – g bebe chaliye n bebe vo jewellery for my potha to be put on pooja
B – haan g ye yadh aaya na patha hey mannu i already gave it to usha she ll divide it n give to both babies n usha give kanasu jewels to ywinkle n tanvir to mshi n mahi thoda dyan se rakho its very costly jewelery hamare waqth ki hey n babies should wear that
M – g g smiling slowly jewellery for baby uff itna sa hey usse jewelery n not for me huh n this black mailer ka bacha calling me again n again n huh what he think of himself i dont care abt him why i have to give him money he isscaring me like if i dont give him money he ll tell the fact to everyone that tanvir is not mine but twinkle kid he is only scaring me he cant do anything huh
Twinj room
Tanvir looking here n there in room n searching in room for someone
T – oye baby what you want ha what u searching take this ball while nattoeious kanasu got twinkle mobile which she hided from her she gave victorious smile twinkle got confused
T – now what happened to u kanasu
Ka – mum mumma showing her mobile n smiling
T – no no give it to me otherwise ill give u nicely showing hand that she ll hit her
Kanasu nodes in no n hide behind tanvir n shows him mobile they both with much force press button n it display kunj photo while looking at it tanvir jump in happiness n point his tinh finger at kunj showed twinkle n smiled then jump in happiness again he said pa
T – oh so you are searching kunj tanvir kunj went to office
While kanasu looking at them
T – kanasu whos photo is this do you know him she node in yes then say who is he? Kanasu smiling in nattorious way n said c..ch…chaduuu (sadu)
T – waw you also got to know he is sadu good baby wait ill tell this to your papa he will be very happy she dialed video call to kunj first he didnt receive then received after meeting
K ‘ oh siyappa queen what is colgate smile y u call so soon dont tell me you are missing your hot husband
T – bas bas not me but some other people missing u n here they are n shosed him babies kunj got happy both showing big eye balls to him n also touch mobie to touch him n giving shock expression twink laughing looking at there cuteness
K – hello babies namaste
T – tanvir n kanasu do namaste like this kanasu do na she did as twinkle told n tanvir didnt do twinkle made him to do n teaching himnhow to say hi
K – you both missing me ha i miss you too gave fying kiss kanasu made shy face n close face draetically making twinj laugh again
K & t – drama queen
T – acha kunj today ill give you party k our daughter gave me so much hapiness today i cant describe u in words
K – oh acha n u give me party what from my money only
T – our kunj
K – ha ha okay now tell me reason of your hapiness
T – ha ha your lovely daughter also calling you by your original name kunn looking confused twinkle said kanasu to say again
Kan – papa papa ch…ch..chadu (sadu ) while twinkle laughing like hell kunj who was desperate to hear kunj from her mouth but got this in return he glared at twinkle giving look like ill kill you
T – hahaha sadu sarna
Kan – chadu chadu n both babies laughing
K – shut up u all what hahaha kanasu ki bachi tujey tho mey dekhtha hun aa ke aur thu siyappa queen wait ill come n see you,you are so much happy na ill teach you lesson today wait you are spoiling my innocent baby
T – awww sadu
Manohar call him he said bye to twinkle n cut the call
T – babies lets go down someone looking at home unknown person he think something n saw twinkle n bebe coming to garden area with babies they sat there for sometime chit chating someone throwed paper balls inside n ran away
T – hey who are you? She shout but he ran away
B – why they throwed it here ?
Kan – vuuuu vuuu strugging to get down from bebe lap she made her to sit down she crawl down n took that paper balls in hand n put in her mouth trying to taste it
B – chi chodo beta gandha hey twinkle see her
T – chi leave it kanasu so bad you are everything u put in your mouth huh leave it she hold it tight
T – see if you dont give papa gussa karegey dekho he ll scold you shall i tell him now n acted like calling kunj n complaining about her she quickly left papers n nodes in no cutely tinkle took papers from her n above to throw it to dustbin but see saw something written in it so she opened it
B – key huva twinkle puttar
T – bebe isme kuch likha hey padthi hun
T – in letter devaki gave birth to krishn kanayya but for some reason krishna not grown up with them n yashoda became mother of krisha
B – ha ye tho khana ki kahani hey
T – haan now il read second one “That day your baby cryed a lot but its voice couldnt reach you the 4 walls of room know everything what happened with him but cant tell u whatever happening is not good baby needs you find him before something hapen to him save him from evil hands go and find the secret that happened between r walls what you thinking that you losted no you still not losted you have chance to get it but dont be late go and find it its yours dont believe your bood relatives they are not like what you thinking about them they are giving you sweet poision n dont think that here yashoda there to take care of khana in this case its not yashoda but rakshasi shurpanaki ”
T – what?
B – ye kya hey puttar ye hamko kyu leekh ke diya hey?
Kan – m..mu ma pa…pa..papa
K – hi everyone n hello babies missing me so much
T – kunj
K – yes siyappa queen
T – see someone gave letters to us
K – how dare whoever it it dont they feel shame to write love letter tobmy wife n you giving me to read it bebe atleast you tell somethimg yar whobcan write love letter to my twinkle ill kill them
B – areybkhotte da puttar shanth ho ja vo love letter nahi hey
K – tho complaint letter hey kya iss choti siyappa queen ka kiska ka ghar me jake kisko marke aayi
Kan – oye oye c c ch ….chadu kuuuu (kyu)
T – chup first read it come lets go inside she took kanasu in arm n kunj took tanvir he was very happy looking at kunj higged him n held his collar tightly with his tiny hands
All family member present kunj read both letter all like what is this what is meaning of it n someone sweating badly that is mahi she thought its work of black mailer who calls her for money she is getting affraid now
Uv – arey yar ye shurpanki kaun hey
Kunj slowly in joke way teri biwi while twinkle heard him n shh him
M – a…a.marey you …you all na why taking this seriously twinkle put it in dustbin its just paper y u read it see simply u create problems tension dethi hey
K – why …a…are you…you .myou stammering mahi th …thand laga kya while kunj n everyone laughing
M – huh give me baby she try to snatch tanvir from kunj but he dont want to go held kunj tightly
Tan – davvvvvvvv ooooooooo screaming all close ears mahi above to hit him but uv held hand
Uv – leave him mahi its baby not toy to snatch like that let him be with them when he want he comes n how dare u to raise hand on him huh r u mad to raise hand on him if again u tey to do it then i have to raise my hand on you better dont do mext time while mahi ran to room from there
K – slowy how dare she to raise hand on baby acha hotha uv ne uska jorr sey lagaya hotha tho maja aajath hena tanvir while he smiled
Yuhi room
M – hello who are you ha why u sent letter to my home what you want ?
B..m – money maam 10 lacks
M -what
B..m – yes till tomorrow night you have time otherwise ill come to your room n tell everyone the truth
M – no no ill give
M -now money money from where i have to get yes jewellery of baby
To be continued….
Guys i have decided to stop everything here it self sorry fr disturbing you all with my boring stories which is not worth of any comments n likes yes my mistake that i expected comments n views from you guys i dont know why but peopke who liked cant comment its so hard right to write few words for comment im not telking those who have exams i know exam is important.im teling others in our busy schedule we have to write ff but no response seriously that much busy you can hit like n dislike but cant comment simply why i have to waste my time as well as yours no need right better i leave it.sorry if im rude but i too got hurt by your response so bye
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42 Comments
Awesome epi yarr
Please don’t stop
This is xam time na dear please try to understand
Epi was awesome
Loved it …
Eagerly waiting for next episode
Thank you dear
Yes i can understand its exam time but i told to others n ill try to post soon
Hii anusha
I have been a silent reader but ur episodes are really very nice i keep waiting for ur updates plzz dont end ur ff ???
Hi nysa
Thank u for comment
Silent readers comenting happy for it
K dear ill not end ff
Heyy pls don’t stop it like this… it is super cute and I always wait for your episodes.. this episode was soo cute.. but didn’t like the way Kunj behaved with twinkle in the beginning.. pls try and continue and post soon… please don’t end it.. love:)
Thank u so much dear
Sorry to be rude but for my hard work i didnt got response so got hurt
N sorry for kunj behaviour i made it like that because i wanted to show that kunj is very possessive n caring about his kid n he dont want his wife to be like mahi
N ill continue dear
Thank you soon much for posting
I was waiting for this for a long time
Episode was fantabulous
Kanasu calling kunj sadu…..omg I couldn’t stop laughing
Plz reveal mahi’s truth asap and let tanvir be back with twinj
Your ff is awesome
As far as for low response plz don’t get disheartened because almost every student is having exams including me
I understand that it hurts when u put so much effort and hard work to entertain us and then getting low response is really heart breaking but still plz don’t stop writing as u r amazing and so talented and I am saying genuinely
Ur ff is so marvellous
Don’t u dare say it boring
It is one of my favourite ff
And plz plz plz don’t stop writing as I seriously and whole hearteningly love and appreciate ur immense hard work and effort
Plz plz plz don’t stop writing. Its a big request
It has really become a craze for me as soon as I see ur ff I get so excited in fact I get on cloud infinity
Ur ff is really interesting
It has so much thrill and excitement to it that I just can read it in one go if it was a novel
Once again a big thankyou for posting and hopefully u will not end ur writing
Will be waiting for upcoming parts
Post soon
Loads of love anusha aapi
Thank u so much dear
N mahi truth ll come out soon
N glad u liked it
Ill not end my ff for u all ill try to post soon
Love u
Amazing episode dear….Kannasu is naughty same like her mother and Tanveer- feel really sad for him as he is not getting proper care because of that Mahi.
But what you wrote at the end of the episode that you are stopping to write- Please don’t stop, its a request- It is just because of the examinations going on that’s why the responses are quite low but please don’t stop writing. Your stories are not at all boring and I love each and every FF of yours. Let the exams finish then the number of comments will also go up.
Please write for those who are commenting. I really wait for your FF and love all your FF. I keep waiting for your FF.
Please please it is a humble request from a reader not to stop writing.
Please do post, will be waiting for your FF.
Thank u so much dear
Glad u liked it
Sorry to be rude i really got hurt so said like that dear but illl not stop writing for u all
Ill try to post soon
Love u
Nice epi
Thank u
Amazing
Tq
No yaar Anusha who said ur story is boring u know it is the most hatke story and kunj ka character is also the may hatke I loved this story plsssssss don’t end it exams are there so we are busy and after exams u would get many no. Of comments plsss if u leave TU then our twinj will not be remembered plsss don’t end it plsssssss and plsss post soon
Thank u so much dear
Glad u liked it
Sorry to be rude i really got hurt so said like that dear but illl not stop writing for u all
Ill try to post soon
Love u
Nice episode.
Plz expose mahi as soon soon as possible.
Post ur other ff my love my life my…
Thank u ill try to post soon
Please don’t stop. Your ff is awesome I love to read it.
Thank u for commenting
Awesome episode Anusha the most cutest episode . Hey Anusha sorry if we readers are hurting u but I try my best to inform other readers to comment .
U r the best u don’t need to prove urself
U r one of the best writer
U deserve the best
I like ur mujhe hak hai soooooo much
I know it will not sound good but u can write for those who love it ff please don’t stop writing
If u want time for writing u take it own time but please don’t stop writing
When all the writer says that they are not going to write anymore that hurts ur fan
It hurts the readers who like ur ff I know u guys takes a lot of ur time for writing the ff and we appreciate your hard work but if not for us think about twinj yaar in u guys stop writing twinj fans following will decrease
In last very very sorry if u r hurt by any of my words sorry Anusha if u felt bad but please don’t stop writing I understand u have exams u can inform us that u won’t write for certain week or a month but don’t stop writing I love u Anusha post the next one if u have time bye dear
Thank u so much dear
Glad u liked it
Sorry to be rude i really got hurt so said like that dear but illl not stop writing for u all
Ill try to post soon
Love u
Hey I don’t intend to offend you but seems like ur FL is having a wrong impact …..whatever it is but Kunj doesn’t hold the right to scold twinkle ….it is his equal responsibility …why can’t he make the milk ….it’s his baby too
This is a serious issue in many countries …women are put down by men
Again I know u dint intend that meaning but it’s giving wrong meaning to readers …and it’s like supporting this
Sorry to hurt you but I’m just being honest
Sorry dear but my ff not having any wrong impact yes its kunj resposibility to make milk for baby but dear i clearly mentioned thete babies til now drink only mumma milk n not other so how can kunj make twinkle milk he cant see his baby crying n he dont want his wife to become careless like mahi n if we authors write something like this we are not giving any wrong message to society n morever koyi ff padkey koyii aisha karega bhi nahi and not supporting too sorry if i say something wrong
Oh ok u told milk bottle so it was confusing ….n I’m sorry if I have hurt you but I was trying to bring out the serious issues
N impact Matlab sirf so karne Ke baare mein Abu hai but ppl lll think all this is right …u know some people have this dirty thinking like women should be covered ,women should not work n only they should take care of baby …Was trying to bring that out
Awsm episode..
Loved every bit of it…
Loved twinj babies????
They are so adorable…
And kanasu calling kunj ‘sadu’???hehehe..
And what u r telling that ur ff is boring??
Don’t dare to say it boring again???otherwise u will see the worst side of mine..
And u are not going to end this ff understood?otherwise I will murder u..????It will sound so good na that small sis have murdered her elder sis??
If u are going to end this then be ready,,I am ready too with a sharp knife and sword?
Yaa I am whitemailing,redmailing,colourmailing u…Dare to end my fvrt ff???then see…
Thank u so much dear
Glad u liked it
Sorry to be rude i really got hurt so said like that dear but illl not stop writing for u all
Ill try to post soon
N awww u kill me if i dont post im scared haha sorry to be rude dear but author didnt got response then we will be hurt right but decided to continue for u all
Heyyy!!! Plzzzz don’t end this ff yaar..
Ur ff is like a drug to me…Plzzz don’t snatch my drugs from me…
It’s my fvrt ff..it’s like a stress buster for me..
If u will end then how will I survive..????
And episode was so adorable..
Love both the babies????
Plzzzzzzzzzzzz don’t end ur ffs
Thank u so much dear
Glad u liked it
Sorry to be rude i really got hurt so said like that dear but illl not stop writing for u all
Ill try to post soon
Love u
Awesome
Loved it
thank u
plz yr don’t say like that. u r ff r not at all boring & plz don’t stop writing. I luv u ff & even waiting for urs other ff too.
plz don’t do this.many r having exam Thats why they r not commenting. plz plz plz ……………………don’t stop writing
epi was awesome perfect
luved it .
Post next soon luv u
Thank u so much dear
Glad u liked it
Sorry to be rude i really got hurt so said like that dear but illl not stop writing for u all
Ill try to post soon
Love u
The best episode yaar it’s so cute and the babies awww such a adorable.♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.
Tanvir aww poor soul ???dying for his mother and father love,,
Mahi b*t*h whore ???????.
Twinj fight so cute on milk ?????. And their understanding aw w????. And Tanvir he stop in his mother arms. Amazingly written. ????????????????????????.
I hope baby was fine. ???? I want to see twinj take care him and console him.
And I hope mahi truth come out. Baby girl awww.????. And please don’t think so about this don’t compare through comments that you are good or not. You are the best plz plz plz its my humble request to you even I got less comments but I know na that you all loved me lot . So comments comes good not fine whatever comes. I loved to write I’ll do it.
And comments on their personal thinking to do or not forcefully we can’t dear and where are here so we all good okay. ???????.
Who told you that you bad awesome yaar. When I see your post I’m so happy jumping so you can understand your value for me.❤️♥️♥️♥️. Plz post other one ff too want to see twinj romance. ??????????❣️?????.
Post soon love you dear
Thank u so much dear glad u liked it
n yes sorry to be rude dear what to do when I didnt got respose i told like that being hurt
but il comtinue for u all
N yes ill twinj romace too???
love u
Belated happy birthday dear
Aur plzzzzz apne ff ko boring mat bol tere ff mere fav. H aur me last kuch post pr cmt. isliye nhi kr payi kyoki mere exam h sry dear aur 16 April tak h
Superb mindblowing amazing fabulous fantastic episode dear
Sayad ab mahi ka sach samne aa jaye
Plzzzzzz post soon dear
Luvvvvv u
Thank u so much dear
Glad u liked it
Sorry to be rude i really got hurt so said like that dear but illl not stop writing for u all
Ill try to post soon
All the best for ur exams
Love u
Plzzzzzz u can’t do this to my fvrt ff???
It’s like a heartbeat to me…
Plzzzzzz don’t end it..
I love ur all ff and want to survive by reading ur ffs and want to die by reading ur ffs only.
U can’t end it like this plzzzzzz..
It’s a huge request from ur fan.
Episode was fantastic. I like when u show angry kunj bcoz I love kunj’s angry avtaar too????Love twinj babies???
Plzzzz don’t end it and try to post soon..
Lots of love❤❤
Thank u dear
N dont worry il not end it for u all
n yes i also like kunj angry avathar dear
Ill try to post soon
Awesome Amazing
Dear
Just please don’t end it.
I just love it and I’m serious
It’s one of the best mad my favourite
So I request you to not to
Hey plzz don’t end this ff
I Jst love to read this??
I’m fan of ur writing plzz don’t stop
Twinj story is really interesting
I’m requesting uhh plzz continue
Awesome…