Thnq sooooo much for the sweet cmnts frnds……. i replied to all ur cmnts…..
This is the end of Academic year.
Students (sarish & sriti) busy in studying…….. semester exams r coming soon…… model exams r going……
Sara: krish….. finally I came to final year to my PG. somewhat feeling flowing in my heart….. hope I’ll miss this clg…..
Krish: mmm ya surely miss this clg n me too…..next marriage only na…..
Sara: don’t u have any other topic..? shut ur mouth n read.
In ABC clg sriti is reading….. but she misses piya very much…… omg y u r doing this? Atleast u can done all ur dramas after our exams na….. I think sahil uncle wont let piya to write exam too…..
@ Happy home.
Viv pov: today I’ll propose her…… that’s pakka…..
Appu: what r u thinking vivaan?
Viv: vh….. actually I want to tell u one thing….
Appu: what?
Viv: voh…… i….. i…..lo he stopped by hearing shouting of orphanage ppl. It seemed some problem.
Vipu rushed to front side of home. n dazed to see the scene…….
Appu: hello…. Whats this? How dare you…..?
A man: look mam…. Don’t create any scene…… let us to do our work. (some officers came there with pokren to destruct the home)
Appu: no way….. who r u to destruct my home?
Officer: look mam…. We have papers……
Appu saw the papers…… papers slipped from her hand……
Viv: what happened appu?
Screen shifts to road
Saran is in signal. Sarish too stops in same signal in bike just near to saran. Saran sees sara n calls her but sara didn’t bother abt it….. green signal…… all vehicle started to move…… he continuously calling.
Krish noticed saran n stopped the bike in corner. Saran too parked his car in corner.
Saran: sara what happened to u? y r u avoiding me?
Krish: what? avoiding?
Saran: haan now a days she is not calling me n if I called also she cuts the call.
Sara: if one person cuts the call regularly means they don’t like to attend the call n not interested in talking to that person.
Saran: what r u blabbering? Just tell straight. U know how lonely I’m feeling?
Sara: u deserves it……. u hurt piya…… u should suffer more……. How could be soooooo cheap……. I never thought u’ll step such low…….
Saran: u r talking abt me….. abt hurting piya… do u know what u r doing?
Sara: what?
Saran: did u never hurt krish? U know na he is loving u……
Screen shifts to happy home
Viv: what happened appu?
Appu: home…. home is in some others name……
Viv: what? But u told home in ur name….
Appu: haan…. I don’t know….. she rushed to office room n searched property papers but unable to find it……. she sobs……. I lost everything……..
Vipu comes out……
Appu: sir plz don’t destruct this home……. something is wrong sir… this is my home sir……
Officer: look mam…. I’ll give u oneday time……. Do whatever u want but tmrw surely we will destruct this home. they left from there.
Appu sat on floor lifelessly
Scene at saran n sara.
Saran: did u never hurt krish? U know na he is loving u…….
Sara: don’t talk abt us ok…… I know he loves me more than himself……. I’m his world….. I know….. but I never cheated him in name of love…… I never told him I love him n I never left him.
Sara: but u….. u know how deep piya loves u…… I know….. I know…. U r her world….. u destruct her dream palace…… u collapsed her life…… u ruined her happiness….. u snatched her freedom….. education is most important thing in girl’s life….. bcoz of u today she is not able to go clg….. me n diya maa not ready to see ur face at all……
Sara: krish…. Start the bike. She left from there.
Her words stabbing saran’s heart……. He regrets…….
Saran pov: I really miss u…… I really missing my happiness…….. I’m really sry piya….. when u was with me….. my mom, my sis, my happiness, my satisfaction all were with me…… but when u left me…. everything left me……. u gave everything in my life but….. in return I gave u pain only…… I’m coming to u piya…….
@ happy home
Viv: appu plz….. don’t give ur faith……. We can do something……
Appu: what we can do…?
Viv: see property paper Xerox in our hand…… n we know the property was in ur name….. from register office we can find some clue…..
Appu: u r ri8…… lets go….
Both went to register office
Screen at gupta mansion
Saran enters into gupta mansion……
Dhruv n sahil: how dare u to enter in my home?
Saran: I want to see piya
Dhruv: how dare u……. I never let u to meet piya……
Just then piya comes from upstairs ……
Sahil: piya…. Get inside.
Piya abt to go saran stops her way…..
Saran: piya ….. plz….. just 5 mins I want to talk to u…..plz…..
Dhruv holds saran’s collar…..n shouts get out…… while piya looks at sahil.
Sahil: dhruv usko chod….
Dhruv: kya?
Sahil: I said leave….. let see what he going to talk……
Saran: thank you uncle.
Saran: piya….. I know I hurt u…… I’m really sorry…… I know the word sry cant rectify my mistake but still I’m sry…… I never meant to hurt u…… I just thought to hurt ur dad only……
Piya gives stern look
Saran: I never thought ur absence will affect me…… really….. I LOVE YOU PIYA.
Dhruv fears if piya will accept. Sahil n suman remains silent.
Piya; is this ur next plan?
Saran stunned by her question.
Saran: u can ask…… bcoz u suffered by me….. but now I’m not acting….. I really love…… he turns to sahil…… u don’t like me na……. ok…… except my jaan what do u want? My property? My business? Whatever u want I’ll give……. Hear my jaan means my piya….. really I cant live without her….. if u don’t like to give piya to me n u want to kill me then also ok…… but let piya to learn…… return her freedom…….
Saran touched piya’s heart again by telling “if u don’t like to give piya to me n u want to kill me then also ok…… but let piya to learn…… return her freedom…….”
Saran plz……. He falls in sahil’s leg……
Dhruv abt to say something…… but b4 that sahil: keep ur jaan with urself…….
All confused by his words…….
Sahil: keep ur jaan with urself…….here jaan means my daughter piya……
Happy tears escapes from piya’s eyes…… sahil noded yes. Piya hugged saran…….. sahil n suman felt happy to see them.
Dhruv: sahil whats happening here?
Screen shifts to apartment
Krish drops sara in home.
Sara abt to go….. krish: can I ask u something?
Sara with confused look: what?
Kri: till now I thought u never understand my love…… but while talking to saran I understood…… u know how much I’m loving u….. u know u r my world….. u know u means
everything to me….. still y r u not telling ur opinion? Y r u silent?
Sara is numb.
Sara really u want answer with teary eyes….. krish nodded yes.
Sara: I don’t know…… I’m in love with u or not….. really I don’t know…… the feeling in me is love or something else I don’t know….. till now whom I loves much they leaved me…… I’m not ready to loose u…. I cant live without u…… if I said yes time will took u far away….. if I said no u’ll go far way…..i’m not ready to loose,….. u want me in my life……
Krish is very happy……. He hugged her n she too reciprocated…….
Krish: hey buddu….. how u thought I’ll leave u if u said no…… I’ll never leave u….. it’s a promise……. LOVE U MY DEAR.
Sara: LOVE U TOO…….
He breaks the hug n wipes her tears…… just smile……. Normally its toughest job to see ur face if u cry…… u r looking most ugliest face in the world……. So plz don’t cry…..
Sara: u monkey….. she chases n he runs…….
Scene at gupta mansion
Dhruv: sahil whats happening here?
Sahil: sry sahil…… as a business man I can see more failures…… as a husband I can fight more with my suman…… but as a FATHER I CANT SEE MY DAUGHTER’S TEARS. From childhood I never raised hand on my child but in angry now I slapped my daughter…… I cant tolerate her tears anymore….. for these days she didn’t eat properly, slept properly……. Just crying……
Exact guilt shown in sahil n saran’s face.
Sahil: now saran came…… he only able to brought on her face…… now see how cute my daughter while smiling……. More over saran is not bad at all…… born n brought up in good family with good values. He wont break piya’s heart again….
Dhruv: I heard this is sweet phase of salty life…… but here really u turned good…… how u I too just like u…… I too turned good ya…… now no enimity……. No problem…….
All smiles happily……
Saran: don’t wry uncle….. u’ll see piya’s smile only…… if u see tears in ur daughters by cutting onion…. I’m not responsible…… bcoz ur daughter likes to cook for me……
All laughs at him.
Dhruv: if I see tear in her eye by cutting onion then also I’ll shoot u…… can’t u brought nicer dizer for ur wife……
Suman: is ur frnds gave that to me?
All burst into laugh…….
@ evening
As usual abhi is following sri…… suraj passes by that side n saw sri n dazed……..
Suraj: driver reverse the car……. He conformed is that sri…… screen goes black n white.
@ register office
Appu: what to do now…….registrar told this papers are original…… now I lost my home……
Viv: plz don’t accept failure…….
Screen freezes with shocking face of suraj n sad face of vipu
To be continued……………..
hope u liked the epi…… is in it?…….do cmnts frnds, di, choties…….. by urs loving Aastha.
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Lovely dr I will try my level best to comment till end
Ok dear. Thnq soooooo much for the first cmnt. Keep smiling ?
It welcome dr
Ur welcome dr & all d best for Ur exms
Hiii…astha akka…,semmaaaaaa roooocccckiiinnnggg epi….love u ????
Oh my chella kitty…… Un cmnt ah evlo miss pannen teriuma?….. Happy ? navarathiri holidays.
Awesome episode…..saran and piya scenes are emotional….in the epi,sahil is understand piya feelings….sahil idhukku pinnadi edho plan vachurukkanu nenaikkiran….saran sonna ovavaru sentences touching paniruchu…sarish love scenes are also super….but feeling bad for appu…aprm suraj and MSRRA kku ena relationu next epiyavadhu solliviya….i think appu oda intha situationkku abhi dhaan karanomo…waiting for next episode eagerly….keep rocking…stay blessed…then no tevar scenes…..next episode eppa update pannuva dear….
Oruthana thirundave Vidamatingala…… Avan unmailaye thirunditan…..abhi kum appu problem kum ends samandamum illa….. Ya saran dialogues r nyz I too liked. Story end aaga podula so Ella problem solve panradula busy so no more tevar. Only in climax. Don’t wry akka…. Vijayadasami varai daily posts. Suraj will be revealed on 18th epi. ?
nice
Thnq soooooo much teju dear.
Wow..wow…superb..finally saranpiya & sarish united???..i think appu happy home prachanaki abhi tha karanama iruppan…i’m still confused with suraj..pls reveal it soon dear..today epi sooo cute…saranpiya scene super..sarish too..eagerly waiting 4 nxt part dear..update soon…luv you..take care…bye
Yemma Ni ellam abhi fan ah?…… Ella pazhium avamela…… Nan avana negative kamichadu unmada…. But avlo mosamanava kedayadu…… Nalla paiyan da…… Idhuku pinnadi Vera aal iruku….. In 18th epi u’ll know it. Suraj too will be revealed in 18th epi. Sure… U can see my next update on tmrw morning. Love u too. See u bye.
Hey na abhi fan tha ma…summa ketten..nalake nxt epi update panniruviya romba santhosam..nee nethu ketturunthila na enna padikirenu na ipo tha pathen..na B.sc maths 2nd year dear..kk.bye
Awesome epi….Saran Piya scenes are so cute….saran dialogues ellame mindblowing…..sahil sudden na change anathu than shocking…vipu scenes are sad…i hope vivaan will solve all the problems…..feeling bad for appu … suraj than appu situation ku karanam nu ninaikkirean…..no tevar scenes…..keep rocking….take care….waiting for ur next epi….
Pethha ponnu kanla thanniya pakura alavku ends appakum dhairiyam illa akka. Adan changed. Idhuku karanam suraj um illai. Ha ha ha….you too take care ?. Ya saran dialogues r nyz. ?
AWESOME episode akka but feel sad for appu.waiting for next.love u bye.take care
Thnq soooooo much dear. Keep smiling ? bye. Tc
Adhukkula end ah…eppa intha ff end aha pohudhu dear…na nambittan abhi nallavan dhaan…and sahil also..
On vijayadasami akka.
So sorry for late reply. And superb as always of course. …..
Thnq soooooo much di ?
Yayyyy finallyyy saran except piya lovedddd thissss scene.. .. … Sahil n dhruv becme good finally happy?…… Feeling bad for vipu i think its abhi plan only… Hope suraj did nt harm abhigyaaa n great sara except krish love so cute they are n hope sooon everything got settled btw everyone n show tevar scenes too???
Omg….. Meri fizo bhada cmnt karthiya…..ya soon all will solve. Tevar….. I’ll try…..mmm Sarish n says ek hogai. Abhi….. He is not at all bad….. Suraj…. Lets see… What going to happen.
Hahahha thought to give u shock thats y wrote long n yup w8inggg
Vry vry Sryy….astha akka school la konjam works but unka Ella episodes um miss pannama padichiten….cmnt panna mudila…nanum unkala romba miss pannen….love u…???
Romba sandosam….. Busy time la kuda padicgiruka…… Ippo cmnt panrala that’s enough….. Keep smiling ? my doll.
awesome dear
Thnq soooooo much ammy dear.
Awesome saran piya part was rockng hope abhi also changrs soon love u?????
Don’t wry dear…. Soon u can see his positivity……. Tmrw abhigya spl…. Enjoy dear. ?
Awwww!!!!!lovely epidode dear…saran piya scene ws amazng!!!!hehehehe sara n krish r cho chueet…feelng bad for appu..waitng for sahil truth…bt asthu where is my ragzy baby??want tevar scenes…otherwise mindblowng update dear 😉 😉 😉 u always rocks dear..love u more den lotz..keep smilng sweetypie 🙂 🙂 🙂
Did u read previous epi? It was only tevar. Do read it. Happy u liked saya n Sarish scenes……. This ff going to end on vijayadasami. (11/9) so make ur self free n do read n cmnt….. ? ? ? love u dear.
Oh k sry dr…i hvnt raed prev. Part..k m gonna read it now nly…n wt???u r endng it so soon!!!y???n dnt wry m fully free till 13th oct(holidays u know 😉 😉 )k dr tc love u 😉
mmm dasara holiday…… njoy baby….. stay out of tension.
nice dear sorry for not.commenting these days
thnq soooooooo much bro. really missed ur cmnts ….. hope u’ll cmnt tmrw (tmrw last epi…. waiting for ur cmnt)