Hello everyone!!
Okay so I have written this long back!!
But don’t know why I didn’t posted it..
So posting it now..
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Okay so finally coming to update…
I read this story in my school library..It just came in my mind and I wrote it…
So as I read it in one of the Book so obviously this is not my plot… Credits goes to original writer…
I am just giving you a Riansh version π
So let’s start..
Riddhima:- Sejal I am very nervous..
Sejal:- you are nervous?
Idea don’t go..
Riddhima:- Are you serious..I have to obey mom…
Sejal:- so why are you disturbing me..you also don’t want to do and you want to obey your mom so only one solution to there…
Riddhima:- okay bye!!! What type of friend I am having π
Sejal:- Done now cut the call..
Call ends..
Sejal’s pov
So my best friend mom wanted her to meet a boy..sorry a handsome boy..for Marriage purpose..and she is nervous.. let’s see what will happen with her…
Scene shifts..
Riddhima wearing white kurti and orange duppatta (I am in love with this attire of Riddhima)
Was marching towards the venue..
Yes she was not walking she was marching she was hell nervous..
And finally she reached the restaurant…
She was searching for the boy..
When there was a tap on her shoulder..
Boy:- Umm… Riddhima??
Riddhima:- ye..s.Vansh??
Vansh:- yes!!
Come there is our table..
Vansh like a gentleman pull the chair for Riddhima had make her sit..
They were sitting and sitting only..there was utter silence..
Both were equally nervous..both were sweating..
When a waiter came..
Waiter:- Sir order?
Vansh:- yes bring two coffee…
After 2 minutes waiter came with coffee..
Waiter:- Sir sugar?
Vansh:- No!! Salt..
Everyone was shocked..
Specially Riddhima..
She break the ice and asked him..
Riddhima:- Salt in coffee??
Vansh:- yes actually I love it..I was born in a salty region (What I am writing π)
I mean sea region..so I love salty things..it reminds me my childhood..
Riddhima:- Oh!!
Author’s note..
This was there First meet…and they married each other..it was a arrange marriage but living 40 years with other..they have developed a great bonding and you can say they were in love but never confessed…
Riddhima everyday make salty coffee for him..and he was happy!!!
One day:- ( No jutta chapal allowed.dont know why I end up with killing..but as I said it’s not my plot so yay!!)
Vansh died due to health issues…
Riddhima was hugging her coat and crying..
Remembering their first meet to all that happened in 40 years…
She remembered something..
She went towards the cupboard and take a box it was wrapped beautifully..
Riddhima remember Vansh said you will open this when I will not close to you….
In that box there was a statue…of a couple and it was written salty Coffee….
And then she found a letter..
Letter:-
Sweetheart! you remember our First meet..
I was so nervous that instead of saying sugar I said Salt and I don’t want to spill the beans so I countinued..truth to told I never liked salty Coffee..I tried to told you but.. can’t..that was the first and last thing I hide from you..
I am sorry…but I feared of losing you. Now, on this death bed, I have nothing to lose. So, telling you, I never liked the taste of the salty coffee. what a strange taste. Having you with me is my biggest achievement in my whole life. If I can live for the second time, I still want you to be with you, even though I have to drink the salty coffee again for my whole life.β
A lone tear escape from Riddhima’s eyes..
She wiped them and smiled…
She exclaimed It’s sweet…
One day a little boy in a restaurant ask Riddhima…
Boy:- Aunty why are you drinking salty Coffee..how it’s tastes??
Riddhima:- It’s sweet like me!!(Boy must be thinking self obsessed aunty π)
It’s sweet…
The End..
It was a short one!!
Hope you like it..
Do comments and tell me your views..
91 Comments
First after a long timeπ₯³π₯³π₯³π₯³ππ
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I’ve read it severaj times before but you’ve made it humourous. I liked it
Thank you π..for you like it π
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Hamare school libraries mein to hame kabhi love stories nahi miliππ!
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No no we also don’t get love stories book..but that day Librarian was absent and the incharge was me and my bestie so..ππππwe took our choices book..it was not a love story book..it was a magazine π€§after a lot of research π§π
Humko toh allow nhi tha in library
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Wonderful
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Nice one
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Arey mast tha
But I think you will never drink sugarwala coffe alsoafter this salty sweetie story
Thank you!!
No I will coffee is my favourite π
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Very unique one..loved it…i also read so many story books in our school library ππnice oneβ€β€
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Yup library is meant for reading only π
Kyu jale par namak daal rhe ho yha to newspaper pdhna pdta hair π aur librarian bhi khadoos π£
Every librarian same…
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Can u please write an OS on school BF GF moments of RIANSH as couple, love in class and teasing frnds ππππ
A humble request π
Will surely try.. thinking to write such from Very long time..but do suggest me title I am very bad at that π
TEENAGE LOVE ππ
This title??
But please write this os π
Ya!! Will surely!
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awesome aayu
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Amazing story aayu β€οΈ loved it β€οΈ…thanks for the msg π
Thank you di…πππ
Mention not..
Salty coffee….ππ Riddhu ki fav bitter coffee vansh ki fav salty coffeeπ Bechara Vansh shaayad bp badkar margayi hogi. Itni salt kisine apni zindagi mei kabhi khaaya hoga. Awesome os aayuβ€οΈ
Yesππππ π π … Thank you β€οΈ
β₯οΈ….plz post RBTBU
Thank you dear for commenting..will now surely post it soon…
I don’t know why I’m cryingπππ right now.. Your all OS heart touching it feels that something had pierced my heart… Awesome…. Post more
It was not emotional…but I am really sorry for making you cry..Thank you so much β€οΈ..it means a lot to me β¨π..yes will tryπ¦ππ
I know but i dont know why I m crying π€§π€§
Sorry!!
Don’t be I know I m madπ€£π€£.. Aise hi roti hun….
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Woww!! We only have to read newspaper in the school library π π the librarian sucks π but missing school nowπ₯π₯
Yes we also have to read newspaper..but that was lucky day.. librarian was absent π.. missing school badly.. talking in library with sign languages missing them badly π€§π€§π₯Ίπ₯Ί
Those were the day!!!
Yaa π
Btw Thank you β€οΈ
Kis liye π€£
Wow ke liye π
Aap na jaan nisar song pr os bnana aapke wo best hotel hai β€ π
What a co incidence..I am writing on it only π connection β¨
Ha ha yeah Raabta song mein bhi hua tha π
Will post it by tomorrow.. really what a connection of mind..are you spying on me.??
Noo π π
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Hame library badi mushkil se le jate the. Fir udhar bhi zada tar unke samne read karo perfectly (ha woh baat alag h mera chance nhi aayaπ)
Par jab bhi padhne ko milta maza aata tha. (love reading)
Amazing os. Unique one. Tommorow i will do experiment of salty coffee ππ
ππmissing those days…
Thank you….
no, I did ππππWARNING DON’T
Superb os dii
Thank you
Awesome OS Aayu tum toh kasam Kah chukey ki tumhar haar OS mein Riddhima ya Vansh mein sey kisi ek ko Maradaynaa
Thank you di..no IT’s not like that….π
Awesome π
Thanks
Serial Killer aayu. Killed one of them β€
Breaking newsπ..Thank u
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Sweet story
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Awesome one…very cute of Vansh!! Salty coffee tasting sweetβ€
Post more dear!
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will post soon π
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