Hey guys…Its Riana?…And i am back with my 2nd SS which is about Samar (Pratap hada) and Tanya (Helly shah)…I want to dedicate this ff to Jasminerahul…who suggested me to write an SS on Samar n his beloved…As we all hate that Mona darling???…So i am using her as a vamp character in my SS…Lets start…
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@MODI MANSION
MORNING
SAMAR’S ROOM
Monica is shown doing make up…
Samar wakes up…
Samar: Mona what r you doing??…pls switch off the lights..
Monica: Dont disturb me…momji told me that its the best time for making face pack…
Samar in her mind: I am tired of all this…there’s no fun in my life…Monica is a worst life partner…she is always ready to do makeup…she never spend time with me…
Samar sleeps somehow…
BREAKFAST TABLE
Samar comes to breakfast table…
Samar: Good morning everyone…
Gopi: Good morning Samar..
Samar: Jaggi ji…i can get the newspaper…
Jaggi: Its in the center table…
Samar: Okay thanks…
Gopi: Sita…where’s the fruit juice!!…
Sita: Abhi layi Kaki…
Kokila: Hey krishna bhagwan…i am happy that we got rid of that gaura…
Gopi: You r absolutely right maaji…
Kokila: She was about to shoot that day but…
FB STARTS
Gaura comes to modi mansion with her goons…
All gets dumbstuck!!…
Kokila comes running from jail…
Gaura: Aaj mein tum sab modiyo ka aanth karungi…
Suddenly too comes with gaura…
Gopi shouts: Gaura maasiji…you’re doing the same thing again…
Samar: I think i should call police…
Mona: Aaahhh!!…
Gaura: Ehhh…chup kar…aur tu…Samar call the police…i had bribed police constables they r now my puppets…
Bhavani laughs…
Bhavani: Aaji modiyo ke khatam hotehi…sita mere saath jayegi…
Sona: Noo…it wont happen…devar ji…you call commisioner…
Goons captures sona n monica…
Gaura laughs..
Suddenly…Jaggi comes from back n hits gaura…
Kokila tells the entire story to everyone that what gaura had done!!!…
All gets shocked!!…
Gopi slaps gaura…
But gaura tries to slap gopi n her gun falls…
Gopi hides behind bhavani..
Gaura takes the gun n points at gopi but Shoots bhavani…
Bhavani falls n dies…
Gaura gets shocked!!…
Sita gets relief!!…
Gaura was about to shoot kokila…
Gaura: Hahah…bhavani sorry…leken tu marne hi wali thi par ab kokila…kokila mare…
Gopi: Now watch…
She beats gaura with a stick!!…
Commisioner comes with police n takes gaura with them…
FB ENDS
Gopi: Uss din Gaura aur bhavani…both of them died…
FB STARTS
Gaura tries to snatch gun from inspector…
And shoots but the bullet hits pillar…
Commisioner shoots gaura n kills her…
Gaura dies!!..FINALLY…
Commisioner: Dont worry people…i will call it as a self defence case…
Modis relief!!!…
FB ENDS
Kokila: Krishna bhagwan ka lakh lakh sukra hain…that we found meera too…she went to Mumbai…but now she’s back in Suryavanshi family…
Paridhi: kakiji…leave all this…
Sahir: Happy that after that incident urvashi aunty too got cured!!…
Samar: I have to leave now…its an urgent meeting!!…
Monica looks on…
@MODI’S OFFICE BUILDING
A beautiful girl is shown came for interview…
Samar is in her cabin…
Someone knocks door…
Samar: Come in…
She enters…
Suddenly a breeze blows…
Her face [HELLY SHAH] is shown…
Samar looks on at her beauty…
Samar: Yes…how may i help u??..
She: Sir my name is Tanya Arora…i am from Ludhiana…you called me for interview as your PA…
Samar: Then sit…but interview session is completed yesterday!!…
Tanya: Whaatt??..
Samar laughs??…
Samar: Sorry sorry i was joking…
Tanya: Sir u r so jokus…
Samar: Jokuss??…whats jokus..
Tanya: aahh…Jokus means who jokes??…i cant call a joker!!…
He laughs silently…
She smiles…
Samar starts the interview…
Tanya gives the interview confidently..
Samar: Congrats miss Arora…you r selected!!..
Tanya: Thanks a lot Sir…my family will be glad to hear this!!…
Samar: You may go now…
Tanya: Thankyou…once again…
she leaves…
Samar in her mind: What a sweet girl!!…how cute…
@ROAD
Tanya is in cab…
Tanya in her mind: Wow…i got job!!…
Cab stops suddenly…
Tanya: What happened uncle??…
Cab driver: Madam…i think its a damage in car inner part…
Tanya: Okay…then i leave…
She gives him the fare n leaves…
Tanya comes into market!!…
Gopi is shown buying fruits with Sita…
Tanya: Wow…tasty fruits…
Gopi argues with the vendor…
Gopi: I will not buy this rotten fruits…
Vendor: Madam i know costly…but not too much rotten…
Gopi looks on…
Gopi: Noo noo…Sita lets go…
Sita n gopi leaves…
Tanya crosses them…
Gopi bag falls…
Tanya picks up the bag…
Tanya shouts: Auntyyy!!…
Gopi looks back…
Tanya: Your bag…
Gopi: Oh…thanks a lot beta!!…
Tanya: Its my pleasure!!..
Gopi: Wait a min…take it…
She offers her some money…
Tanya: Nope!!…i cant take this…
Gopi: You r so well mannered!!…okay!!..
Tanya: Okay bye aunty!!…
Gopi: Bye!!…
She leaves…
Gopi: Sweet girl…just like u sita…
Sita smiles…
@MODI MANSION
Monica comes to kokila’s room n closes the door..
Monica: Well well well…now its time for the main plan…
She comes near the wardrobe!!…
And opens the wardrobe…
And finds out the Property papers…
Monica smirks n steals it…
Gopi n sita enters…
Sona: Gopi maa…what happened!!…
Gopi: We met a girl…she’s so sweet…
Sona: Really!!…
Paridhi: Come’on…gopi ben…no one is like Mona…she’s unique!!…
Gopi: You’re right paridhi!!…your mona is the most unique creature in this world!!…
Paridhi irks…
They laughs…
Mona comes out of kokila’s room..
Mona: Now i will be owner of this house..MONICA SAMAR MODI…after that plan B…i will throw out momji…barimomji…n others…first of all that sona…her kids…n that buddhi dadiji…
Kokila: Ohh really…
Mona: yah…
She looks n gets shocked seeing Kokila!!!…
Mona: Dadiji…
Kokila drags her downstairs…
Paridhi: Kakiji…what happened!!…
Kokila slaps Mona…
Mona: Dadiji…
Gopi: Maaji…what happened!!…
Kokila: Paridhi…look at ur DIL’s right hand…
Mona: No no…nothing is there momji…
Paridhi: Mona…show me…Huuuhh…Monaaaaa….
Gopi: Mona…you wanted to steal our property papers…
Kokila exposes mona n tells everyone what she heard!!…
Kokila: I cant believe this girl…
She snatches the property papers from her hand!!…
Samar hears all…
Samar: Whats all this!!!…
Kokila: Samar see this!!…
Samar hears everything…
Mona begs to forgive her but Samar throws her out of the house!!…
And closes the door…
Paridhi: But samar…
Samar: Mom u had selected this hypocrite for me…she’s so cheap…i will divorce her…
Paridhi gets stunned!!…
He leaves…
He comes to his room n closes the door…
He throws a flower vase n breaks mona’s photoframe??…
Suddenly he gets a call from Tanya…
Tanya: Hello sir…
Samar: Tanya…what happened??..
Tanya: Actually sir…sorry to disturb u…though i forgot what will be my salary…
Samar: You all girls r same naa…
Tanya: Sorry..
Samar: Rs.40,000…Its your salary…
Tanya gets delighted but offens too…
Tanya: Sorry but sir actually i stay with my dad who’s ill!!…
Samar gets concerned…
Tanya: He has Cancer…thats i wanted to confirm…
Samar: I am sorry for being rude!!…btw…dont worry for ur dad…he will allright!!.
Tanya: Thankyou sir…
Samar: I am ready to take your dad’s medical responsibilites…
Tanya: Are u lying…
Samar smiles..
Samar: I am not a liar??…
Tanya: Thanks a lot Sir…you’re a messenger from god….
Samar smiles!!…
SONG
Ho tohra saajan ayo tore desh
Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tohra saajan ayo tore desh
Soyi soyi palkho pe chalke
Mere sapno ke khidki pe aa gaya
Aate jaate phir mere dil ke
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya
Pyar ka… lafzo mein rang hai pyar ka
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar ve
Bahara bahara
Ke chain toh huwa farar ve
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve
Ho tohra saajan ayo tore desh
Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tohra saajan ayo tore desh…
SCREEN FREEZES on Samar n Tanya’s Convo??…
PRECAP-Samar meets Tanya’s father…Tanya’s father tells him that he needs a perfect husband for his daughter…Tanya shys looking at Samar…Monica makes a new plan to re enter modi mansion…
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12 Comments
Hi Raina….I love the this short story….Surprise you’ve choose Helly for Samar. Wow…lovely couple…Samanya……recall love it to the core…Bhavani and Gaura died.wow…awesome….I’m so bored of gaura drama on SNS. Thanks for this beautiful fan fiction. And the way Mona darling got exposed was thrilling.
Too much happened in only one episode….can’t wait for next episode. Mona as vamp….awesome choice…!!!
overall…episode was so awesome…!!! Update soooon..!!
Thanks a lot Shakaib???
You’re welcome di….BTW your profile pic is beautiful. Two teddies..so sweet.
Thanku…
Wow nice u introduced helly shah from swaragini as samars fiance good?
Thanks a lot Sid???
I like Monica as the vamp!
Thanks a lot Rani???
Samanya what a name…Loved it a.lot??good to know here helly is going to be Samar’s wife/girlfriend?loved gaura n Bhavani died on the same day and Meera too got found?Mona darling got exposed grt?by kokila herself…Wish Samar had slapped her tightly n her momji Pari too?loved samanya’s covo n the song?but yy it’s a SS n not a FF???Precap is cool…Update soon?
Thanks a lot Mansi???
I am so happy that gaura killed bhavani by mistake and gaura got killed by the police.Monica is so cunning to steal property papers.she was even planning to throw out her momji who trusts her blindly. glad that she got exposed and samar threw her out. surprising that you chose helly for samar.they were good as friends in swararagini.pratap helly picture you put was cute.Tanya as samar’s PA.Wow.her dialogues were so cute.samar Tanya phone conversation was cute.so nice that samar is going to take up her dad’s medical expenses.the song you chose as bgm was so beautiful .really excited for their love story.
Thanks a lot for dedicating this to me.I never thought that you will start this story so fast. nice surprise. happy that it’s not an os but a ss. can you tell me why you chose helly for samar?
Though i always liked helly n tejaswi…then i saw that pratap was for some episodes with swaragini…helly n his pair going good…Thats why i got an idea n i wrote this…Though its an SS i will complete it after some shots…Thanks a lot Jas???