Hello friends.
Here is it.
A hotle is shown.
A office is shown . A boy is siting in chair. He is none other then our sanskar.
San to mangar: ok m going.
Man: kk sir.
Here at outside of hotel a gal is shown coming out of car. She is none other then our swara.
She goes to recption.
Rep: yes mam how can i help u.
Sw: i want a roam.
Recp: sorry mam at this time no roam is free.
Sw: aa ok. Is there any hotle near by .
Recp: no mam.
She was about to say something when a voice come from back.
“doctor swara”
swara turned back.
Swa: sanskar.
Ss it is sanky.
San to recptionist: give her my roam.
Recp: k sir.
In other side
here a gal is stading at road. Caring two bags.she is ragini.
She goes to a boy.
Rag: will u tell me this address. Vo m from village. Come here to do study
The boy is none other our laksh.
Lak: u can go by this bus. After 3 stops. U have come down from bus. U will be at indira road then take tax
before he could say anyting rag speaks wait.
Rag:wait say again.
Lak:u didnt undersand anything come with me.
R:but ur work.
L:no prob
r:but
l:dont wory
rag smile at him lak also smile back
swasan side
@san roam
swa: sanskar arent u angry with me.
San:how can i angry with u. Did u accpect ur love nw. See m change.
Sw: idot i naver make saw ur look or statas.
San: i love u.
Sw: i love u too.
Sw: nw leave it m hungry.
Sa: what u want to eat.
Sw: chicken fry..
Sw: give food.
San: ha ha.
Raglak side
lak take rag into bus
here his colgue saw him and start to tease him.
Abi: aj office se chutti li bhabi ko ghuma ni ki lye.
Lak: shut up. M helping her to go her sis plce.
All: aaa.
Lak: shut up.
Saing this he goes near rag
swasan side
san is crying..
And remambaring their love story and separation.
Fb-
san was traviling by bus. She sees a sit near a gal. Gal is none other then swara.
He sit near swara. After sometime. A boy come near him.
Boy: plz will u give the sit m not felling well.
San: ok.
Saying this he get up from sit. The boy sit near swara and start to talk near swara. AT very soon he crosed his limit. He held her both hand taigtly and came near her lip. But he fells a kick in his bump. Ss it is sanky. He then kick him in his face. Then drag him out of raning bus. Then comes near swara. Our swara start feel for him. At very soon she hugs him n crys. Sanky also start to foll for her. Both hug each other . Swara starts to share all painful n happy talks with him. Then they teases each other. Swara pull his pant sanky some how mange. Then he tickle her. After pasing many happy time san speaks: i like u.
Sw: i also like ur helping shade.
San: oh really.
Sw: ha.
A track is pasing. The cloth of truck flew from there n foll on bus’s glass. Whats next. It lost the balance N crush with onther.
Black.
Other side
lak: take rag to his sis.
Rag: goes inside without saying anything.
Lak smile at this.
After some days.
Nw rag fells something for him. Tries to be smart stylish bold.
Lak also fell for her. Its frist time that he is felling diff.
Once again she comes to bus for going office.
Lak is also in same bus.
Rag is moving fowrd. She crused with someone.
Rag: hey lacky.
Lak cocked with her voice.
Lak: hi.
R: hello n sory for not saying u thanks that.
L: no wellcome. If u accpect me as ur frnd then no sorry no thanks.
R: oh ya.
They both sit n chitchat.
A red car of yung group is driving rushly. Come in front of bus. The bus lost the conrol and crush with other other.
Black.
Swasan side
fb continues-
@ hospital
swara is sitting in chair in band aid in head and hand. Dnc come from ot. Swara rush to him.
Sw:doc how is sanskar.
Doc: sorry but he sleeps into coma.
Sw: no doctor it cant be hapend plz u check again.
Doc: sory but it is true. Saying this doc leave while swara crying.
4 years passes. Swara is a medical student. Swara take care of sanskar n fully love him. swaras parents fixed marrige with sahil and her broter’s marrige with kavya. Swara run with the help of his brother and ran Both. But sie got the news sanskar is out from coma n leaves. San after kowing swaras care sanky fully foll her. But when he knws about swaras marrige he thought to not break the marrige. Thats why he ran. Leaving a thanks and i love u later.
Raglak side
lak brings rag hospital.
Doc cant save rag frm sleping into coma. After 4 years rag come back frm coma nd ran.
Swasan side
fd end
san comes and sees her crying.
Sanky wipes her tears.
San: plz forgot past let start new.
Swa: about bhai.
San: he will get her soon.
Swa: sure.
San: sure.
Both hug each other.
San calls someone.
After some time a gal come.
Swara is shocked to seing her.
Sw: ragini.
Ss full was past.
Rag: swara.
Swa call lak n told him to come right nw.
After a while lak come runing.
He is taken aback to see.
Lak: ragini.
Rag: laksh m sorry.
Lak without saying anything hug him.
L: i love u.
R : i love u too.
Swa: huh besharam ki gang.
Raglak blush.
Sa: see someone are blusing.
Sw: love u all.
4 give group hug.
Nw rag is a famus journalist n lak ips officar.
Plz cmnt
64 Comments
How manies are bangli. And how manies watched bojhe se bhoie na movie. Think that accdient side like that. Even indians too can watch accdent side. Cz there are no bangla talks. I dont have much strenth to write that part. After all i didnt sleep 3 days after seeing the movie.
Oh god!!!…room=roam, status=statas, remembering=remambaring, colleague=colgue, tightly=taigtly, seat=sit, officar, pasing, foll……hell…wat was that???
Thanks anu di for ur sagetion. Will defenitly try to improve.
nyc
Thank u vyshu.
Yuys swara is thinking about past not sanskar. And ragini is going clg not office. Raglak side also past.
I cant give much detail in os. So soory.
And ya swara is surjury doctor and sanskar is business man.
nice
Thanks but plz dont give fake happiness.
I am a bengali
I have watched bojhe na shey bojhena movie
And the os was nyc
Hey laddoo hifi. I know there are so many spellicing mistakes but then too thanks.
Story is good… M. Getting confused! That’s the problem.!
Hotle=hotel, naver=never! Taightly=tightly, lacky=lucky! Officar=officer! Fowrd=forward! There are more!
I corrected these things for u to understand! And learn English
Ok di. Thanks for ur help. Now i will surely improve my english.
Ok di. Thanks for ur help. Now i will surely improve my english. Really i write hotle naver taightly. Oh god if my father know’s about it he will defenitly kill me for doing mistakes in small thing. Thanks di for helping. If write this at exam shit then m gone.
M so sorry for giving this os. Really really sorry. M a school student. I cant give propare word. Thanks anu for watching the my mistake. I only write ff for making improve in my english. M not college varsity reading girl. So plz forgove me. It is my mistake to write this os. So plz readers no need cmnt by giving fake hapiness. I acpect it is a wrost os. Ok so need to coment. Thanks anu. I will not write any os. Naver . Naver ever. Good bye to all.
Hey dr dont feel bad…… you did this for improve ur english knowledg……soo thers nothing wrong in that……proud of u dr…..
Thank u di. M happy that i got many teachers. Now i will not stop to desterb all.
if someone is telling u ur spelling mistakes its not for that u stop writting its their way to encourage u by correcting ur mistakes and don’t think they r rude they think u as ur own so they told u if they don’t think as their own they never correct u or may do bashing comment don’t take it wrong way u know even i do so many mistakes and my di’s correct me and even today also i think that because of them my many mistakes in typos get corrected because of them and u know u write it for improving urself so why u fear of that comments if we fear of falling did we stop walking no if we have fear of speaking wrong vocabulary did we stop speaking no so why because because of typo mistakes u stop writting i gurantee u if u write like this and keep writting one day may u became a famous writter we don’t know what is their for us in the coming days so why because of a small mistake u stop writting everyone who r famous today face such things but never stop so why u want to stop and u writeby ur own for ur happiness so why u care for such small things and yup one more thing whatever happen in the journey may u face many problems difficulties but one day u will achieve what u want and yup sry for giving such a long lecture don’t take me wrong and if i hurt u sry for that also and plz never stop writting may someone is waiting to read them so for them don’t stop and for urself also and don’t get demotivate by a small comment they also try to help u by correcting ur mistakes so just keep that in mind and next time u will do better than this and plz write for urself and sry sry.. ……. …. for keeping u bore and giving u such a long lecture sry but yup never stop writting its a request
Di thanks for giving advise. Ur talks are priceless word to me. I nave think like this. Yes solve this they did not tries to hurt me. U know at this age we have many fellings like extra happiness, extra sadness, extra angrar. Yes ur right if we scered for folling down then we cant stop walking. No its not long lecture its a costless gift to me. M not bored. If u write more i would happy. Thank u very much. Or me kaha si hurt ho.
ur welcome and its my pleasure that u got to my words meaning and don’t get bore and its thnx for praising me so much and its just a simple talk to u for not stop writting and continue and u got it this age means teenage how old r u??
Di i will not stop any writing at cost. Again thank u for advise. M a teenge girl. My age is 14 yrs only. Thanks for saport.
ur welcome and now stop thanking me again and again i don’t do such a big thing that u r saying this thanku again and again even i have to thanku for giving a lovely story and i am also also teenage girl i am 15 only ?
Samaira… Dont feel bad… Its good to write… By writing u can improve your english… And be happy… It was good! Try to take everything as compliments… Be it good or bad!
No di i didnt mind.will not try to take all coments as compliments i will surely take them as compliments. Thank u di.
samaira ur storyline is fantastic…..but try to improve the words….there r few mistakes in words but otherwise it is a beautiful story!!….
And guys plz plz dont angry at me. Plz m angry at no one. Haltej and anu dont think me rude. Thanks. M happy that i got many teachers. Heltej dear thank u very much.
Hey sammiee do write.. i thought typo errors.. we can from mistakes only… so keep writing..
We can *learn from mistakes
* we can learn from mistakes
Thank u di. ( r u di or bhai)(lol) ok so i will not stop writting. Will take the help of gogle and reders to hai na. I will not stop destarbing all. Ok.
Samaira… Dear! Do write… Dont get upset over my comment! Sorry.. If u felt bad! ๐
Do write…! ๐
Di its ok . M upset that i beheve so rude sorry. There are some reasons will tell later.
Samaira di
Listen to me
Shall I speak in bengali?
Acha lemme speak in Eng only
See….we all know that bengalis have problem in speaking English and Hindi, don’t we know?
The story of bojhena shey bojhena is very beautiful.
See, I am younger to you, but I’d like to suggest something.
Firstly check the spellings from google and then write, this will save u from humiliation.
Secondly, proof read ur work. Check for mistakes and give broader explanation.
Bass! What else?
This is all that you’ve gonna do.
Never stop writing Samaira di.
We learn from our mistakes.
Theek aachhe?
Bujhechho?
Kono dino lekha likhi chhadbe na
Nahole aamra ki kore dekhabo je aamra baangali, hain?
Btw, which grade r u in? I am in 8th.
At first laddoo no di. M not samaira i m just only samaira. If next time u said di na i will not talk to u.
… U know what i am reading this coment repeting. Thanks for abvise. My very big prob is i do not read what i write. Ok will start to read ofter writting. Correct banglies are weak in hindi english both. Kento amra dombar patro noy. Amra ja chai tai kori.
Ok so lekha likhi charbona. Thomar bhalo khotha mone rakh bo.
Plz nothing is big and small. Bigger can also learnt from smallers.
Ar thomi khothai parthoko karcho. 1 bochorer choto boro.
Now comes about class.
I know u are planning to insult me right.
Thats nothing. But plz dont laugh. I know after reading which grade i read surely a tooth will come. Dont laugh. Heshe bangali ke domiye diona.
Ok u know na ur banglies are aged. So m also will like them. Dont laugh. M in (dont show teeth) 7th grade. Hash la na. Hasho ami ki korbo. How is model test are going.
Oh send ur ffs link to me. I know u r not posting untill octocber.
But then to send i will read.
Haha thats spirit samiara.. keep doing. And im girl lol…
Nyc…
Thanks
Don’t feel bad, you know what when I had started writing you can’t even imagine how much mistakes I had made in that infact still I makes mistakes.
Just learn from your mistakes, I hope you will again comeback with new os.
Sry if you had feel bad from my any words.
Story was awsm,.,
Anni di…hello…u have any news of Prakriti?
No dear, I think she is busy in exam only. That’s why she is not coming on Tu.
Thank u anniya di. It gives much strenth to me. Thank u again. ANd what. Say again. I m not angry at u. U know di m so happy to get di like u. Try to come again. But it will take time. U bring my smile back. Hope u can smile every time.
awesome one and how they meet and how they fell in love and they wait for each other till 4 years really a nice os giving nice morals to help others true love will win and love can be unconditionable amazing ??
Nice oneโบโบ
it is bojhena shey bojhena rite
Awsm os dear. Yeah I am Bengali and I watched bojhena se bojhena film and serial both.It was one of my fab movie.In fact, ami eta download o korechi.You know whenever I saw the movie I used to cry???.I am from Bangladesh.I live in Sylhet and I also know you are also from Bangladesh. You live in Dhaka, right??
Oohoo. Ath bhalo lak lo. Ami sudhu 3 bar dhekhe chi. Thomi download o kero cho. Bhoy lage nai. Amar to 3 din ghom e hoy nai. Serial ta ami dekhi nai.
Thank u uma apu.
How u knows m from dhaka.
Shlyet nice place. Amar khalamoni ache shekhani.
Ok ami 2 jhon bangli pelam.
Dhonnobad uma apu.
Hey…dont stop writing…..but try to make extra effort to improve it…search for right words…take help of google dictionary…u may take extra tym but make ur work presentable…..start reading good stuff or maybe english newspaper to get a good hold on language…..starting to write with weak base is rather a bad option.
nice..learn from ur mistakes..and come back with another os..
I m a non bengali but i m born calcuttan and i also live in kolkata from my birth
So i know bengali but not too well cuz its my 3rd language in school
Awesome ep
Hey don’t feel bad..however mistake u have but ur story n concept was awesome..so need to feel bad..everyone does mistakes..but u should be happy that u could write a such a very very nice os..n yeah no need to stop writing for others
awesome
Hey it is some what similar to a Telugu movie called Journey.But with some changes.Good work
Heyy dear don’t feel bad…it’s not a big deal … it’s just a spelling mistake.. with time it will vanish..coz same happened with me.. u r a school study n writing OS,,,, it’s a hugee think as well as a huge responsibility towards readers… n u r doing it perfectly…never feel desherted…keep it up…n i loved ur OS…
Di di di thank u very much. U know its very helpul to me. Thanks. I will keep ur talks in mind. Thank u.
Sammy?? Tu Meri samuli hai na?
I have messaged you so much!
Reply asap!
Anyways os was awesome!
Correct the mistakes!!..
Sorry anisha di m not ur samuli. I knw u cmnt for her name. But then too thanks.
os was awesome never stop writing
Samaira dr its awesome….. Dont take the comments seriously dr….. They are just helping you….. So dont stop writing k…..
M so sorry for this beheve heltej and anu sinhg
Dont be sorry… Kiddoo…
Everyone do mistake…!
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Samaira girl!!!! Dont be sorry but if u really are then plzz do follow the advises….lets start hereforth…check the correct spelling for beheve…take help of very famous google baba and rewrite and make it a habit.
U r younger to me!!!
Haye re!!!
Aami shotti haash chhilam!
Aar tumi aamar ff podho?
Aww…that’s so sweet….