People…as the name is Samjhota…..u all must have understood that its me Eva…..and about the couples….u know…I never reveal them….hehhe…now lets start this ff….
A girl is wearing a pink saree..she has mangalsutra on her neck and sindoor on her mang…she is sleeping…on the floor keeping her head in the bed…….Just then she hears a sound and wakes up…she is really scared…a maid comes there..
Maid:Madam…sir asked u too be ready for the party which is at 8pm….he will come and pick u up…
Girl:Okay…..
She hears her phone ringing..she picks it up…
Caller;Hello Swara di?
Yes,,,the girl is non other than Swara..
Swara:Yes Ragini bolo…
Rags:Di…..we have kept a satyanarayan puja at home…….its day after tomorrow….4 pm….will u come?
Swara:Wohh Ragini….i don’t think I can make it…
Rags:What di…..it has been a month since u have got married..and u didn’t come here…
Swara:Ragini…plz try to understand…i can’t come…..I’m busy….
Swara hangs up….and starts crying…
Swara:I’m so sorry….that I spoke like this to u……but whatever I’m doing is only for u….
Swara goes to the washroom and cries seeing some marks on her body…someone has beaten her like an animal….her cheeks look like someone has slapped her many times….she touches her wounds and cries…..
Swara:Kaha ho tum Sanskar? Why did u leave me?Plz come back….i need u…i can’t stay in this hell…..i need u…plz come back…..for your lady hitler……..plz come back and clear all these misunderstandings…….i have no complains or hatred against u……i don’t blame u for my situation but plz……u have to come….where r u?
The scene shifts to Ragini who is crying…
Ragini;Why r u doing this di? Why? Why r u behaving like a stranger to me?
Sumi:Beta…what happened?
Rags:Ma…di is not coming…she said that she is busy…
Sumi:Why r u crying then? She must be busy na……
Rags:What busy ma? that she can’t even come to the puja……
Sumi:Beta…don’t cry…I have some work at market……I’m leaving okay?
Rags:Okay ma…
Sumi leaves..
Rags goes near her cupboard and opens it…she takes out a pic and starts crying seeing it….
Precap:Who is Swara’s husband?Who tortures Swara?Why does he do that?
107 Comments
Vry vry happy that ur back again……
i dont care about the couples
but its jus that i love u n ur ff
Love u too Iqra? and thank u dear for liking my ff….
amazng start..seems to be very interestng..waitng fr ur nxt update eva
Thanks Harshita..and the next one will be here soon..cause I have submitted my writing..
Jamai raja ka bhi koi story banao plzzz koi
So sorry dear..but I don’t watch that serial
eva whats ur previous ff can u plz give me the link for it?
Dear…u can search my ff as Samjhota….Swaragini ka in the search box….if u don’t find it then tell me….I’ll give the links in episode 3 as i have already submitted episode 2……
Ok yaar I read it’s awesome!10 episodes are really nice
Thank u
Good as always eva…welcome back dear…
Thank u dolly…btw r u writing any ff presently?
awsm..mysterious start..waiting for nxt prt
Thank u Rakhi..
Nice interesting let’s see who’s the person
TQ dear..
Its fantastic as usual i love all ur ff thx for coming back
Thanks anamika..
Eva please make it SWASAN PLEASE PLEASE _/\_ _/\_ _/\_
I’ll think about swasan for sure dear…
Nice yar please update soon and I’m loving liveing your ff and welcome back please make swasan plccccccc
Thank u Shilpi..and about swasan..lets see..
Awsum…loved it…u r a eighth grader right? If yes..then di…I’ve read all your ffs..and all r mind blowing…keep writing..?
Yap…I’m an eighth grader…..and thank u Pari….
Hey Eva..! First of all, WC back… Then, wanted to ask when will u officially reveal pairs?? Well , bura na mano holi hai..! Sry for late wishes..! Hope they upload soon…BTW are ur exams over??
Krittika..i never reveal the pairs officially…not in Samjhota….at least….and happy holi to u too….my exams r over….
Rly nice one….but pls make it swasan pls…n cont u writing..its awesome
Lets see..if i can make it swasan or not…btw thank u…
You are an awesome writer Eva. Missed you very much. I loved Samjhota Swaragini ka. This one is also looking equally promising and exciting. You and are your ffs are mind blowing.
Thank u dear…
i am happy that u again started ur ff
its so mysterious
I love to read and write mysterious things…..
back with a bang…..full of suspense episode ..i loved it……..update soon
Thanks Newbie…
can i say something to u plzz can u write ff on ragsan like i hate u too
i mean not this ff other ff which is based on ragsan plzzz
Dear..let me get some idea…i will definitely write one on Ragsan…cause i guess….they r the most peaceful couple…who were never shown as a couple in the show….but i like their pair a lot….more than Raglak…..
Eva… I think I missed ur first ff… Which one was that?
Actually give all the names.. I’ll see which all I’ve read…
Btw I don’t know if you’ve read mine… Please dotry it if you have time..
And uk what… I’m so proud of you… Being so young, you manage to capture the emotions perfectly.. That is a gift srsly… That’s why ppl love you and your writings… All the best Eva!! Hope one day iget to read a fully fledged novel by you… 😀 😀
The name of my ffs r Swaraginiti ki kahani,I hate u too,Samjhota Swaragini ka,Manyata VS Ragini and Sanskar..Zindegi meri……and this one is the 6th one…..and plz tell me your ff’s name..i would love to read your ff..and your words r really appreciative….and about writing a novel…..u gave a so much respect by saying that……keep reading and writing dear..and plz tell me your ff’s name….cause I’m eager to read your ff….
Thnxxx…
I have read all except for the first one…swaraginiti ki kahani…
I’ll try that once my tests are over…
And I’m writing my second story now.. swasan mr maheshwari and i…
Previously I’ve written swaragini the path to happiness….
Do read it if you have time…
And its not about respect… being a bookworm and a writer , I understand the patience and creativity put into the story…
To come up with such new ideas and to show the emotions on the surface is not a task that everyone can do…
I’m talking only about me here, but I’m sure everyone might agree…
For me, as a reader, a good story is one that as you read it, you can picture it and understand exactly how the characters are feeling…
And I feel that in ur story…
And pls no words like respect between friends… I have complete confidence that one day I’m going to read novels written by u….
Sorry I’m going on and on, but I’m just so proud of you…. when I was in eight…I tried writing one…but I guess I was too immature to finish…
So yeah I’m really proud of you eva….
Btw where are you from??
And do read my ff if you have time
super start………dear anjalis ff is Mr.maheswariand I its awsme u must readed tat…..
Aww…so sweet of you maya… ??
Eva back with another amazing stry…
Ur ff swaraginiti ki kahani
I hate u too manyata vs ragini n zindagi was all my r favorite ff … This ffc too mysterious strt wow…i too like mystery …