Hi guyz…. Sorry … Actually I posted this twice but I don’t know why they didn’t post it yet …. So I’m posting this again…… And today I’m going to show only sahil scenes …….. I hope u guyz will enjoy this episode …… Janvi , Roma where r u guyz ???? And I want to say something …. I want to recreated all olden movies hit in my ff…… I hope u r reading it…..
Scene 1
Forest – 8:30pm
Aahil holds her face and says
Aahil : I thought … I lost u forever… And u r here…. If u would have been in that ambulance …. WHAT HAVE I DO IF I LOST U!!!!!!!!
Sanam eyes him tensedly and pushes him …..
Sanam : (tears) I just came here for a walk ….. I even asked u to accompany with me but u refused and what if I have been in that ambulance … What bothers u ????
Aahil : (in rage) of course it bothers me damn!!!!
Sanam : why ?????
Aahil : becoz … (Junoon moment ) now u come with me ….. As u didn’t return …
Sanam : as I didn’t return ….
Aahil : I ate the another watermelon …
Sanam : (in rage) what!!!!!!!! I told u not to touch then why….. I thought u r a good friend but …
Aahil : arey listen to me
Sanam : (still in rage ) really???? I have to listen to u huh???? U didn’t even let me speak and u even slapped me …. I thought u were concerned about me that’s why I didn’t say anything …. But u …
Aahil : just a matter of watermelon …. Why r u making it a serious issue???? Ok aim sorry….
Sanam : no … I won’t forgive u…. And by the way …. I came here becoz …. My friend’s father is conducting a nautanki here in this place …. So I thought that we can atleast get help from him…. That’s why.. The place is 6km away from here…..
So I’m going there ….
Aahil : oops…. I’m extremely sorry ….
Sanam doesn’t listen to him and she starts going angrily……
Aahil : hey wait …… The place is 6km away and ur going there …. That too walking ???
Sanam : (while going she shouts) yeah …. I’m going there … If u want u came or else go and sleep …. And I won’t forgive you ….
Aahil : yaar …. Iss jalli bhi na……
Aahil thinks what to do????? He rents a cycle from a shop and goes near sanam….
Aahil : hey jalli .. Stop ….
Sanam : oh god !!!!! Now what problem??????
Aahil : (stops the cycle near her) come on let’s go there …..
Sanam : no thank u …. I’ve go by myself ……
She starts going….. Aahil looks at her and smiles…
Aahil : hey jalli…… (Goes near her and gives a kiddish smile ) plz come…. I rarely use the word plz ……
Sanam : (angrily) what’s ur problem?????
Aahil : u know what sanam….. We are in the forest…… That too… Now it’s night …. So dark….. What if an animal comes and….
Sanam : say clearly….
Aahil : and by the way the place is 6km far away from here and if u go by walking it will almost take 30-50minutes…… If u come with me in this cycle we will go there in 10 minutes…… So u decide….
Sanam eyes aahil….
Aahil : your wish…..
Sanam goes and sits at the back ……. Aahil smiles and starts driving it……
Scene 2:
Forest – 8:35pm
Sanam : I’m still angry on u (funny tune plays)
Aahil : (smiles lightly) I didn’t ask u whether u forgave me or not????? By the way I don’t know how ur badi ammi managed u …. Hats off to her…
Sanam : (what the hell like expression ) excuse me …. Can u plz concentrate on driving? ? R u driving the cycle for the first time???? Drive properly …
Aahil : hello… I won a gold medal in a cycling competition when I was in 12th …..
Sanam : oh really ???? It’s hard to believe….
Aahil : I will drive very fastly …. That to without holding the handle bar….
He leave the handle bar while driving sanam gets scared….
Sanam : what the hell r u doing?????
She hugs aahil ….. Aahil smiles (junoon plays)
Aahil : hey why r u getting scared ….. I won’t let anything happen to u ….. I promise….
Sanam : uff…
Aahil : and by the way ….. U r hugging me for a long time …. I’m not able to concernedrate ….. So can u plz take it (funny tune plays)
Sanam realises that she’s hugging aahil and takes the hand…… Aahil smiles….
They arrive at the nautanki ….
Scene 3
Nautanki – 9pm
Aahil and sanam both arrive at nautanki ……. Sanam’s friend kashish comes there …
Kashish : sanam u r here …..
Sanam : hey actually … (She introduces aahil to her) u know nazia right ??? He is nazia’s bhaijaan …. Aahil …. Actually we got struck in the forest …
Kashish : no problem …. By the way heer ranjha nautanki is going to start in 30 minutes … U remember right???? We have enacted this in our college…. And u played heer ?????
Sanam : yeah…. Now I’m tired
Kashish : U guyz better take rest ….
Sanam : thanks yaar …. She hugs kashish …..
Kashish’s father arrives there hurriedly
Kashish father : sanam beta u r here …….kashish beta … One big problem ….
Kashish : what problem Abbu ….
Kashish father : voh … The girl who was supposed to play the role of heer …. She’s not well so she said that she won’t be coming to act today ………
Kashish : what!!!!!!! But the play is going to start in 30minutes….
She then sees sanam
Kashish : sanam …. Will u act as heer?????
Sanam : what!!!!!!
Kashish father : how will she act???
Kashish : Abbu … We enacted this play in our collage …. She played the role heer…
Kashish father : oh really …. Sanam beta plz …. Plz or else the audience will insult us a lot … Plz beta I beg u ….
Sanam : ok fine uncle ….
Kashish & her father : thanks ….. U better come to makeup room …….
Kashish and her father leaves…..
Aahil goes near sanam and says
Aahil : sanam …. I’m sorry …
Sanam acts as if she didn’t see him and she goes to makeup room…..
After 10minutes she comes out in heer’s costume ….. Aahil is mesmerised seeing her (junoon plays)….. Sanam gets frustrated …
Sanam : again …. Mr.bewakoof …. This is ladies makeup room … U r not allowed …
Aahil : excuse me sanam …. I just came here to say sorry ….
Sanam : what did u say I didn’t listen properly…..
Aahil : hey listen to me … U jalli wali …..
Sanam gives angry look …….
Aahil : see … If I make a mistake I don’t apologise even to my sis and I’m saying sorry to u …. U r the first girl and I have said sorry many times…..
Sanam : hmm…… If u really feel sorry …. I’ve forgive u ….
Kashish : sanam come fast … Play is going to start ……
Sanam and kashish leaves…..
Aahil : alright … Cool …….. U have to forgive me jalli wali ….. Voh be in this nautanki stage…… (Quarrel tune plays) …… But how can I convince her?????
He then sees DDLJ and Hum Apke Hai Kaun posters and gets idea……
Scene 4
Nautanki stage…
Heer ranjha nautanki starts …..
Ranjha makes a entry and he plays his flute……..
Sanam makes entry as heer ……. And says a dialouge …
Sanam : math bajao e gaane ranjhe…. Math bajao …. Raat ke need toh cheenliya tumne … Toh din ke chayen bi lootega kya????
(Don’t play this tune ranjha … Don’t play this tune…. U have already robbed me of my sleep at night …. And now u want to steal my day time peace too???)
Crowd : everyone laughs…..
Kashish : (to her dad ) Abbu she’s saying the wrong dialouge…. (Funny tune plays)
Ranjha : (says to sanam silently) hey u r saying the wrong dialouge…..
Sanam : (silently ) oops sorry…..
Ranjha : (silently ) it’s ok I’ve manage….
Crowd : oh heer …. Say the dialouge?….
Sanam : oye ranjha …. Bajao apna gaane…… (Oh ranjha …. Play ur tune)
Ranjha : (thinks) yaar she’s saying the wrong dialouge … But fine what to do let’s manage …..
Ranjha starts playing his flute…… Meantime they hear a tuje dekha to eh jana sanam guitar tune ……
A guy makes entry like SRK …. He’s none other than aahil ……. The whole nautanki audience crowd laughs…… Sanam opens her mouth widely seeing aahil in SRK costume ……..
Aahil goes and pushes the guy who’s playing as ranjha and goes and plays the tune near sanam…… In a stylish way he extanges the guitar and flute with that ranjha….
Aahil : eh ranjha kya gaane bajayega ….. Thaliyan (what tune will this ranjha play …. Claps and applause)….
The whole crowd : (whistle and claps)
Kashish father : what the hell he’s doing….
Kashish : Abbu … Let it be …. The crowd are enjoying right???
Kashish father : fine … Let me see….
Ranjha : (says to aahil ) u it self play the tune (funny tune plays)
Ranjha leaves ……
Sanam : ranjha … Where r u going….
Aahil : (throws his hat in a stylish way , takes the flute and says) bade bade desho mein, chhoti chhoti baatein hoti rehti hai señorita …….
(In big big countries such small small this keep happening señorita …..)
He then goes to sanam and says
Aahil : sorry ….. (Junoon moment)
They both have a eye lock……
In crowd a person says…
Person : hey heer (sanam) ….. Say the dialouge ….
All crowd : say the dialouge …….
Sanam shows stop signal and says …..
Sanam : eh señorita señorita kya laga ke rakha hai???? (What is this señorita señorita???)
All crowd: laughs and claps …
Sanam starts to go inside….
Aahil : oh heer (sanam) …….
Crowd : (to aahil) oh hero … U also do something ….
Aahil : (in stylish way removes his jacket and like how salman does in hum aapke hai Kaun he hits sanam with a sling shot ) (hum aapke hai Kaun BGM plays)
Whole crowd: (whistle and claps)
Sanam : (oops reaction and says to aahil) u idiot…
Aahil : (tries to hit her with the flute )
Sanam : (sees that and closes her face bit she finds aahil is in knees with that flute )
Aahil : (dramatically)
Hukum aapka tha
Jo maine na maana
Khatavaar hoon main
Na aaya nibhaana
(It was ur command
That I did not heed
I’m guilty
Didn’t fulfil ur wish)
Sanam smiles seeing aahil ……He gets up and sanam holds the sticks in this neck and goes around him
Aahil :Sazaa jo bhi doge
Woh manzoor hogi
Aji meri mushkil
Tabhi door hogi
(Any sentence u pass
Will be accepted by me
The difficulty of mine
Only then it will vanish )
Sanam : (smiles ) aap ne Hume gulel se kyun maara ????? It is bad manners ….. Agli baar kisi ladki ko maarne se pehele 2 baar socheye ga….
why did u hit me with a sling shot …. It is bad manners ….. Next time before hitting a girl … Think twice)
Aahil : (smiles) kisi aur ke soch ne ke fursat kise … Sirs aapse hi to gusthaki kar sakthe hai
(Who has the time to think of someone else ??? I can only be this audacious to u..)
Sanam : (smiles) kyun ??? Hum Apke Hai Kaun??? (Why? Who am I to u??)
When sanam says this dialouge whole crowd claps and whistles like anything….
A person from crowd : oh heer atleast forgive ur ranjha now….
Crowd : yes … Forgive him….
Aahil : thanks guyz …….
Sanam : kuch kuch hotha hai boss …… Friendship me no sorry no thank u !!!!
Everyone in the crowd five applause ….. The screen closes…….
Scene 5
Nautanki makeup room… 10pm
Kashish father comes there and stares at aahil and sanam
Sanam : voh … Uncle
Aahil : sorry … Actually she was angry with me for some reasons so….
Kashish father : (smiles) don’t worry … I won’t do anything …. U did a gr8 job actually crowd enjoyed ur act a lot …. That’s beta….
Aahil & sanam : (relieved) it’s ok uncle….
Kashish father leaves…..
Kashish comes there
Kashish : wow…. That was fab….. And that was a gr8 shock aahil …..
Sanam : I think we have to leave …. Aahil’s car is also damaged…. I don’t know how to return……..
Kashish : don’t worry ….. We have a mechanic here …. He will fix ur car …
Sanam : thank god….. And kashish where’s washroom ???
Kashish : there… Left side….
Sanam : thanks …..
Sanam leaves
Kashish : (goes to aahil and asks) aahil … If u don’t mind can I ask u something…
Aahil : of course
Kashish : do u love sanam…..
Aahil : (dumbstruck ) what!!!!! No way … She’s just my friend….
Kashish : but I don’t think u guyz are friends……
She smiles and goes….
The screen freezes on aahil’s face……
Precap : aahil’s car is fixed and they Both are returning …… Sanam asks something about something …. Aahil gets tensed……..
Hope u all enjoyed today’s episode … And by the way kashish I think u won’t mind if I use ur name in my ff ….. And I request all silent readers to comment and give feedbacks on my ff and this episode ……….
131 Comments
Thank you sanam ((: Yaar…..
U r always welcome
When I say thank you sanam it meas…. i am thankfull from my side yaar…..
Can we to be friends sanam?
Thanks year sunehri O just posted hope it arrives soon ☺
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Thanks year sunehri O just posted hope it arrives soon ☺ Named it Asya and Huyaan : A Delicate relation
Thanks gr8 zuha
Miss sunehri when vil u be active I’m waiting
Hey I’m waiting come on
This is amazing, I’ve always love sanam and aahli, I also love zoya and asad. I’ve written a story about Zoya and asad but their names are different it’s called Tia and Karan and there is different couples in it. So far I’ve read all your episodes it’s amazing and worked well. I hope you can read mine and comment some ideas too :> (https://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=destiny+vs+love+%28Thapki+pyaar+ki%29) This is the website
Can’t wait till the next episode of yours
Thanks nusz. .. stay tuned. .. can we be friends
Yes we are already friends and please do read my ff too :> it’s posted under qubool hai and please give me some feedback also there names are Tia and Karan instead of Zoya and Asad! And please tell your friends to read my ff so I can get some feedback and improve on my skills because your story is just beautiful. I can’t wait till the next episode. Sometimes when I get bored I read the story from the beginning all over.
Guyz I posted my episode twice but why they aren’t posting
Sorry for the inconvenience
Also keep up the great work Sunehri :>
Thanks nusz please comment always
I’m dying for the next episode plz update
Hey zoya I updated twice but I don’t know why they aren’t posting and they asked me to post it again
I am also 15 years sanjana..what grade are u in?
I think she will be in 10th grade
Yeah im in 10th..going 2 b in 11th soon!!:)
wow.. superbb sunehri.. today oly i read all ur episodes.. good going yaar..
Kalai u r back!!!!!!! Thanks
wen ll u update next epi sunehri.. i m waiting..
Hey I have posted but they have to publish
Sunehri …. I was a silent reader …. I now only read this episode …. Ur episodes are awesome …. Sahil scenes no words ……. And nice idea …… Waiting for the next episode
Thanks urvashi
Ur fan fiction is awesome …. I’m a silent reader …. I like ur way of writing …..
Thanks sonali jha dav
Wow wow wow …. Ur ff is superb …….. I Luv it like anything …. Yours is quite different …. I don’t comment usually but u made me to do ….. Love u dear can we be friends sunehri
Thanks wazira
Ammi !!!!! I will cry now ….. I posted the 18th epi thrice and they aren’t posting it yet!!!!! As they are doing like this I’m going to make that epi little big and post it early morning …..
Sunehri, you should email them. Cause sometimes they don’t post it for some reasons. If you talk to them through email they see it and do it hopefully. By the way I can’t wait for the next episode of your ff. and please do read my ff and comments some ideas so I can improve on my skills :>
Thanks nusz
Nice
Thanks dear
I don’t why my comment is not showing on zuha’s ff
Oh ….
No worries Priya , I got to know here that you read it thnx dear
Hey ,buddies lemme mention that we are friends so as a friend you all have to go and read my FF it is named Asya and Huyaan : A delicate relation!!! Do read and comment as welll
We all are reading it … It’s nice
I know buddy but I am receiving less comments
That’s gr8 I’ve read it
I request u guyz to read zuha’s ff also
Nisha do read and comment dear
And sunehri pls post the episode … where is it ???
Actually they are saying that it’s a technical prob as there is a virus in that file … So I have to type it from first … 🙁 don’t worry I’ve post it before afternoon …. Sorry guyz ….
I tried to post … I posted it 5 times … And tellyupdates messages me and said this
No worries sunehri…it will b posted soon??
🙂
No worries sunehri…it will b posted soon..??
Thanks re
Yippie …. This time they said that they will post
Thank God , you know what pal ppl were writing comments on my FF plz ask ur bestie to post it soon , how cute na?
Aww that’s so sweet
God when will the post … Every 3 hrs I’m checking. … plz post soon
Wait dear they will post. …
Finally they published it
Awesome episode, love you loads
Thanks roma didi