Hey guyz …. Thanks guyz … Without ur support I would have not crossed 100 + comments ….. And I’m extremely sorry … Becoz I posted this epi 5 times … But they didn’t post …. I messaged tellyupdates … They said that my file contains virus …
So I have to type everything from first …….. And coming to the episode ……… In this epi … Both rehan and aahil will fall for seher and sanam ……. Hope u all enjoy this …
Enjoy the episode
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Scene 1
Forest 10:30pm
Aahil and sanam both comeback to the hut ….. A mechanic is fixing there car…….
Aahil remembers Kashish’s words asking whether he loves sanam…..
Aahil : (remembers her words and shouts) NO!!!!!! I don’t ….
Sanam : (looks at him puzzled) wh what????? What u don’t …. U said something right?????
Aahil : (tensed) voh …. Actually nothing (funny tune plays)
Sanam : fine …. I’m tired I’m going to sleep…..
Aahil : fine…..
Sanam goes and sleeps …….. Aahil still thinks about Kashish’s words and he thinks about that incident when he’s running behind the ambulance saying sanam ….
Aahil goes And sits near sanam ……… He holds her hand and smiles ….. (Junoon BGM plays )But he leaves her hand and says
Aahil : (says in low voice as sanam is sleeping) what’s happening to me????? Sometimes if I’m with u …. I’m getting tensed a lot becoz of u……..If I’m not with u …… I’m tensed about u …….. And if ur hurt …. Why my heart is paining ???? If ur not with me …. Why my thoughts are connected with u?????what is this madness ???
He again thinks about the ambulance incident ……… (Junoon plays)
Aahil : (stares at her face for a long time and smiles and thinks) if I see her … I’m unable to stop myself from seeing her…… Don’t know why but…. This have not happened with me …..
Naa malum hai naya ehsaas
Eh naya ehsaas kya rang dikhayaga
Ethni bason mein aaj peheli baar ehsaas hua hai
Ki iss seeneme bhi ek dil hai
(Don’t know what feeling is this ….. But what will this feeling lead my life to????? After many years I realised that even I’m having a good heart)…..
Sanam is sleeping ….. While sleeping she gets a bad dream ….. She shouts ….
Sanam : no ….. No !!!!!!
Aahil : (tensed) sanam …. R u alright ….
Sanam : (still shouts and cries hugging aahil) no …. Plz don’t leave me and go plz ….!!!!!!
Aahil is taken aback when she hugs her(junoon plays) he then hugs her….
Aahil : Ohho … Don’t worry I’m always with u ……..
He then makes her sleep ….. Sanam holds his hand while sleeping ……. Aahil seeing that smiles ……
The mechanic comes and says to aahil that the car is fixed so that they can go now… The mechanic leaves …
Aahil : (thinks) thank god … The vehicle is fine now ….. Now we can start but…..
He sees sanam sleeping
Aahil : she’s sleeping peacefully now …. How could I disturb her ???? (Junoon plays)
As sanam is holding his hand …. Without moving he sleeps ….
Scene 2:
Aahil’s residence – guest room….
Seher is searching for her diary which rehan took it silently …….
Seher : ya Allah …. Where have I kept???? I usually don’t give it to anyone and no one knows about the diary then ??? Only rehan knows about it but …..
Rehan calls her and she picks up the call
Seher : rehan … I’m already in tension …. My diary is missing I’m searching for it .. So don’t disturb me …
Rehan : (smiles and kiddingly asks) r u searching for that diary in which u wrote the article “all alone tonight??”
He takes the diary sees it and smiles…
Seher : (in angry mood) so it’s with u huh??? Now give it back to me…
Rehan : arey … I have to read it fully … And by the way I’m not in a idea to give it back…..
Seher : come to guest room give it to me right now…
Rehan : hey … Ok relax … Fine …
Seher cuts the call … Seher gets a call from Dilshad …
Seher : assalam walekum badi ammi
Dilshad : walekum assalam …. Seher …. Here the function was good ….. We would be returning to mumbai in 7 days … So don’t worry….
Seher : wow that’s gr8 badi ammi …… Ok it’s too late khuda hafiz badi ammi …
Dilshad : khuda hafiz …
She cuts the call ….
Rehan is standing in front of the door and he heard their conversation …. He silently goes from there and eye the diary and smiles ….
Rehan : if my prayers are true ….. Then Allah won’t let u go away from me (ishq dua ishq khuda plays) he then calls the news paper editor and says something….
Scene 3:
Next morning – forest …
Sunlight falls on both sanam and aahil ….. Aahil wakes up and sees sanam …. He smiles seeing her hand is still in his hand … He tries to get close but stops and thinks….
Aahil : (thinks) what r u doing???? What has happen to u??? The feeling which i hate the most … Why have I started to feel it ….. I have to control it …. He remembers last night sanam hugging him …….. (Sad junoon plays) ….
He then takes his hand from her and leaves sadly ……
Sanam wakes up …. He searches for aahil …
Sanam : where’s this Bewakoof???? He left me alone …. Idiot….
Aahil comes with his car…
Aahil : oh madam … Come the car is fixed … Let’s go …
Sanam : thank god …. Come on let’s go …..
Both start …..
Sanam : I want to talk to about something which happened last night ….
Aahil gets tensed and thinks that she’s asking about last night …
Aahil : (tensed) u were in concious at that time ….
Sanam : (puzzled) of course …. And I know … I reacted too much when u slapped me….
Aahil : (relieved) oh … Then u r talking about this huh??
Sanam : yes … Why r u asking this????? Did anything happen after we came from nautanki ???
Aahil : voh …. Nope …….
Sanam : I’m feeling like to hear a song ….
She puts radio …… Pehela nasha plays…. Aahil is tensed
Aahil : (thinks) yaar …. I’m already tensed about my feelings and now situation song ….???? Plz help me …. (Says to sanam) plz change the song ….
Sanam : why ???? I love this song ……
Aahil : plz I request u …
Sanam : fine….
She changes the song …. This time dil hai ki manta nahi plays
Aahil : (tensed a lot and thinks) yaar yaar!!!! I’m going to break this …… Another situation song…… (Says to sanam ) sanam plz switch it off.
Sanam : this time u listen to me …… I’m going to listen this fully …
Aahil : plz plz plz …
Sanam : no way …….
Aahil : Plz stop!!!! Ur behaving as if ur my w… (He’s about to say wife) (junoon plays)
Sanam : as if I’m ur ???
Aahil : voh ….. Erhh ….. Nothing …….. (Thinks) everybody are making me made ….. Especially this jalli (junoon plays)
They both reach home…
Scene 4:
Aahil’s residence – hall
Seher and rehan are waiting for sanam and aahil ……
They both (sanam and aahil ) enter …… They both aren’t talking with each other …… And they go inside ……
Seher and rehan stare at them
Rehan : seher … Do u know what happend to them ??? Why both are not talking to each other …….
Seher : definitely something would have happened ……. And by the way where’s my diary????
Rehan : voh …. I’ve give it afterwards … Bye ….
He leaves from there ….
Seher : what happend to him ???? God alone knows (funny tune plays)
After refreshing ….. Aahil is in balcony drinking coffee thinking about sanam and smiles ……Rehan notices this and goes near aahil and says ….
Rehan : aahil bhai ….. U r thinking about sanam …. Right????
Aahil : (doesn’t notice and says) yeah…..
Rehan smiles …. Meantime aahil notices this and says…
Aahil : voh … I was thinking about our deal in London ……
Rehan : (smiles) huh ??? Really???
Toh arz kiya hai…
Heere me heera ho to usse kehte hai kohinoor….
Heere me heera ho to usse kehte hai kohinoor ….
Sanam ka naam lete hi aahil ke chehere pe aata hai noor…….
Aahil : rehan….
Rehan : u love her ????
Aahil : again!!!!!! Same question I’m hearing since night ….
Rehan : I know bhai …. U r in love …..
Aahil : no
Rehan : yes
Aahil : no
Rehan : yes
Aahil : no
Rehan : no
Aahil : YES!!!!! (Junoon plays)
Rehan smiles and aahil is surprised by his words…
Rehan : finally boss ….
Aahil : but …. What does she think about me ??????? And rehan u know that this is my first time ….. I tried to control but I’m unable to …….
Rehan : don’t concernedrate on that bhai ….. U just think how to confess it …. And now come on let’s eat breakfast …..
Aahil : fine
Scene 5:
Breakfast table
Aahil , sanam , tanveer , rehan ,nazia and shazia are having parathas ….. Aahil and sanam are sitting face to face …..
Rehan gets a call and he goes ……
Aahil : (thinks) oh god …. How to propose this jalli????? What to do????
He then sees a full paratha on his plate and sauce near him …..
Aahil : (thinks) chal beta aahil ….. Let’s convey this message through paratha and sauce ……
He writes I love u in paratha with sauce …. He then signs sanam to see that …. Aahil gets up and takes the plate to show to sanam ………Before sanam sees that …… Rehan comes an collides with aahil and I love u paratha falls down (funny tune plays)
Aahil : yaar …. What have u done ????
Rehan : (says silently ) sorry bhai …. It was just an accident ….
Aahil : (says silently) but my I love u paratha fell down right ??? (Funny tune plays)
After sometime…..
Rehan is taking food for seher … With flowers , chocolates , juice , fruits etc…
Aahil notice this ….
Aahil : (kidding rehan) ah haan ….. Rehan where r u going … And to whom r u taking this food
Rehan : (OMG I’m caught reaction ) voh … Bhai … I’m … Erhh …. For no one …. For No one I’m taking this food (funny tune plays)
Aahil : really???? Ammi completed her breakfast … Sanam , myself , nazia , shazia and u too completed ur food ….. And who’s left ….
Rehan : (I’m gone reaction) for whom am I …..
Aahil : (comes to know and kidding rehan) oh ohh ……. U r taking this food for seher huh?????
Rehan thinks : I’m dead.
Aahil : (kidding) really …. U guyz have become very close …. And by the way when did u start this food job rehan …. Say say….
Rehan : (oh god reaction ) nothing like that bhai …. We are just friends….
Aahil : (takes the flowers from the tray) best friend voh bhi aahil bhai … U didn’t give me anything till now …. And for just friend ……… This much??? (Funny tune plays)
Rehan : bhai … Plz plz …. She might be hungry …. And now only she started to talk with me ……
Aahil : did u say I love u???
Rehan : (gives a look ) no ………
Aahil : then go and say …….
Rehan : fine ………..
Rehan goes to seher’s room …… Seher is writing a article ……. Rehan is decorating the table ….. Aahil watches everything from outside ……. Rehan takes the juice glass and goes near seher ..
Rehan : seher ….
Seher doesn’t notice him…
Rehan shouts : SEHER!!!!!
Seher gets scared and shouts …. Rehan accidentally pours the juice on her diary ….. Aahil laughs (funny tune plays)
Seher shouts at him badly and rehan closes his ears and comes out …
Aahil goes to him and says
Aahil : saying I love u is a easy job huh??? U did like …. A person comes and stand in front of a door and says I love u ……
(He laughs again and again )
Rehan : don’t laugh at me ….. Even ur unable to confess to ur love miss. Jalli and laughing at me …. Atleast I tried to say …. Voh bhi face to face ….. But u bhai … 1st time ever in the world a person is proposing in paratha …. U r a darpoke (He laughs)
Aahil : excuse me ……
Rehan : aahil bhai …. Before laughing at anyone we have to see ourself …. So first get tips and go and propose …
Aahil : see …. Within somedays I’ve propose this jalli ….
Rehan : same … I’ve propose seher ….
The both give hi five and says mission starts ….
The screen freezes on their faces…
Precap : a client from London comes to aahil’s house ….. His face is shown …. Sanam and seher are very happy after seeing him….. He refers himself as ayaz Ahmed khan …… Sanam goes and hugs him …. Aahil is jealous …… Seher’s article is printed in news paper with her name in it …….. Aahil asks sanam about something …..
Plz leave ur comments and feedbacks guyz …. And sorry again ….. And guyz I’ve use real qubool hai scenes also …… And plz plz silent and regular ones plz do comment
107 Comments
Oyeee hoyeee my bestie ! Awesome !!! Loved it and especially the Paratha part literally proposing with a paratha , OMG!!!!????
BTW good episode and keep going loved it and you too…..
Thanks zuha
Wow this is amazing. I can’t even explain. I really enjoy reading your ff. Keep up the great work. And thank you for commenting on my ff. Please do comment like always and tell your friends to read my ff too so I can improve better In my story like yours.
Btw I can’t wait till episode 19. I just love your story :>
Thanks nuzs
Nice Awesom Amazing what i m say it just not good but excelent u must be a writer in future i like this very much
Thanks priya tripathi
love it yaar…..
Thanks sanam
can’t wait next epi…..
Wait re 🙂 I’ve post it I have to comeplete some more
How u guyz make ur ff even i also creat my ff plz tell me
Priya, you have to click summit your article at the very top of the page. , You can type the whole episode on word and then paste in the text box. Then you make a title and then you add your name, email, and then it says 1 plus 10-6 the answer is 5 ( Also it says please select you click ff or whatever it’s based on and also add a picture) That’s it.
Btw please do read my ff it’s called destiny vs love posted under qubool hai and give me some ideas too :> I can’t wait to read your ff if you’re making one.
As Nusz has already told u the method so I don’t think so I should be telling , but will read your FF for sure and a big thanks for reading dear☺
Yea dear as nusz said …
And nusz sometimes I’m putting the captcha correctly but they are saying it’s wrong …. q
And sometimes they arent posting sometimes this prob 🙁
Kabse wait kar rahi ti …… OMG aahil and rehan realized their love and that car scenes and aahil’s dialogue paratha scene and especially precap … good work dear
Thanks urbashi
Sunehri dear ….. hats off …. No words … I’m just mad about ur ff like anything
Thanks sonali
Mmmuhaaaa. .. sunehri u r the best … I should have become a writer …. I really loved precap and paratha scene … how old r u????
Thanks wazira
Awesome. .. I’m waiting for the nextepi and ayaz is coming right??? He’s gonna make rehan and aahil jealous 😛 kabab me haddi … namish is gonna play that role right … he’s perfect ?????????❤❤❤
Thanks adarshika
More that excellent sunehri. … came wait for the next epi … plz upload soon
Thanks simran
Fantastic episodes. … I’m really love all ur episodes. .. ur ideas are quite different …. and I’m waiting for the confession time
Thanks aroob
Nice dear … plz plz plz update room and love u loads
Thanks apeksha
That was fab …. precap I’m excited ?
Thanks ayesha
Finally aahil realised his feelings loved all scenes
Thanks zoya
Very nice episode … hope aahil confess his love soon
Thanks aalia
Marvellous episode dear and I’m waiting for sehan France track and I want to see both rehan and aahil jealous and ayaz and nazia together
Thanks kashish
Wow wow wow promo was fantastic and aahil was fab today
Thanks nafeesa
U r episodes are day by day getting interesting
Thanks mathanghi
Terrific taar … good job
Thanks Tara
Ayaz is the kabab me haddi. .. I’m waiting. .. yaar tum kamaal ho …. love u loads
Thanks vanshita
Interesting sunehri. … I have become a very big fan of your ff
Thanks nisha
Aweee sunehri!! Kya batau yaar..superbbb!!!!! Proposing in paratha?i remembered beintehaa…thank god finally aahil ko ehsaas ho gya ki he really luvs sanam….n luvvedd sahil sehan? Brilllliant bestie!!???
Of course yaar my friend suggested this idea and I too remembered beintehaa at that time …. Thanks
Aur after reading precap im reaally excited n waiting 4 next episode…great writing bestie?
Thanks re wait for sometime I’m trying to post …
hai….
i love it yar…..
by the way ayaz is sabam’s chachu’s beta right….
it means bro.. .
then y did aahil, rehaan feel jealous?
Hey … actually why they are feeling jealous becoZ sanam and seher don’t even consider that aahil and rehan are there … as ayaz returned after long time they are only talking and mingling with him .. understood??? Thanks Jasmine
Hey sunehri. .. I’m gauhar. .. I’m a silent reader of all ff’s ur ff is fantastic and u made me comment today … love this episode
Hanks gauhar
U r terrific writter sunehri …… I was a silent reader …….. Marvellous fantastic ….. No words u should have become a writer
Thanks farida
And 1 kind request dear plz update soon
Ok I’ve try 🙂
Sunehri yaar my mom took the call and saw urs and yamuna name checked all fb. And I vil not able to chat with I wanted to tell her but she doesn’t let me speak soooo
I know u vil understand
Incredible tremendous
And plz tell this to yamuna
Ok I’ve inform her too …
Oops …. it’s ok … we will chat in tellyupdates and comment always … it’s ok bestie … love u and thanks
My pleasure yaar
U r rocking day by day …… Fantastic …. Excellent performance sunehri
Thanks titli sarkar