Hello everyone …….for your grt support love and encouragement ………………… it really helps me write more ,………n sorry for making you wait ..sorry i was stuck in work …………..so here is the most awaited epi …. full of excitement and romance …………………hope ypu all will like it ………….
So here it goes ……….
Lin for previous chapter
Chapter 18
Recap: ragsan love confession…….
Now its finally evening… The most awaited evening for our love birds…..
Sanskaar Comes inside the house and finds it all dark….
Sanskaar: o no… Y it is so dark?? Oh no… ( he slaps on his forehead) Don’t tell me sanskaar that u hv forgotten to pay the electricity bill….. Now wht will ginu think abt me??
Funny tune plays in bg…
Suddenly lights are switched on and sanskaar’s breath gets stuck for a moment……
The hall is decorated beautifully… Not the whole hall but tha dining area…. With heart shaped balloons and candles….
Sanskaar Comes towards the table and sees a beautiful chocolate cake ? over there with ” my love ” written on it…. Sanskaar is overwhelmed to see all this… Tears form in his eyes…
Sanskaar: ginu…. Where are you??
He goes to kitchen but doesn’t finds her. He comes back and is mesmerised to see ragini there in a peach colour frock with open hair looking beautiful as always…..
Ragini’s dress – http://maworksstudio.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/07/beautiful-casual-long-dresses-qs1i9ukf.jpg
Sanskaar is mesmerised to see her….
She sings…
Ragini: Dheeme Dheeme Ye Dil Mujhse Kehne Laga
Neeme Neeme Tere Saaye Mein Yeh Rehne Laga
Dheeme Dheeme Ye Dil Mujhse Kehne Laga
Neeme Neeme Tere Saaye Mein Yeh Rehne Laga
Chalne Laga Chalne Laga Chahaton Ka Yeh Sama
Khilne Laga Khulne Laga Ek Naya Aasman
Milne Laga Woh Rasta Jo Tha Apne Darmiyan
( she comes near him and sings the song looking deep into his chocolate brown eyes ……………..her just enjoying her melodious voice ……….she roams around him while keeping her hands around his shoulders …………………………)
Main Hun Main Ya Nahi, Ya Main Gum Ho Gayi
Hoo..Ohoo….
Main Hun Main Ya Nahi, Ya Main Gum Ho Gayi
Lagti Hun Main Nayi, Ya Main Tum Ho Gayi
( she holds his hnd an takes him to the beautifully decorated dining area and back hugs him … e also smiles at her cute gesture……………)
Dil Mein Hai Tu, Dil Mein Hai Tu
Raatein Bhi Teri Hui
Sochu Tujhe Puchun Tujhe Baatein Bhi Teri Hui
Tu Bhi Ho Ja Mera Jaise Main Ho Gayi
( she then comes forward …. takes a heart shaped balloon .. kneels down lifts her hands with the balloon and proposes him ………………..hes awestruck at her actions and looks deep into her big twinkling eyes filled with love ……………..)
Sanskaar: Jabse Jana Tujhe Jaan Mein Jaan Aa Gayi
Teri Sansein Mujhe Jeena Sikhla Gayi
Jabse Jana Tujhe Jaan Mein Jaan Aa Gayi
Teri Sansein Mujhe Jeena Sikhla Gayi
( he makes her stand AND they share a beautiful love waa eye lock,………)
Chalne Lagi Badhne Lagi Dheemi Si Dhadkanein
Ban Ne Lagi Sajne Lagi Bigadi Si Kismatein
Dil Khila Is Tarah Aakhein Bhar Aa Gayi
( he then takes her hand and keeps it on his heart and signals through his eyes to read his heartbeat …….. its dhak dhaking very fast ………… he winks and she blushes … he takes her in his soft embrace and kisses her forehead …………)
RAgini :Jhilmilane Laga Khilkhilane Laga
Hoo..Jhilmilane Laga Khilkhilane Laga
( she releases from the hug and opens a near by drawer and brigs something for him ………)
Chand Sa Banke Tu Sapno Mein Aane Laga
Kehne Laga Rehne Laga Hai Tu Meri Hi Gali
Ghar Banane Lagi Hun Main Bhi Wahi Kahin
Dekha Hai Khwab Jo Sach Sa Lagne Woh Laga
( she shows him a beautiful photoframe on which i love u was written and a very beautiful picture of theirs was framed …….. sanskaar looks at the frame and then at her with teary eyes … he immediately pulls her and gives a slight peck near her lips ………….. she blushes like a red tomato and hugs him tightly ………he kissed her on her forehead and hugs her more tihtly …………………….
Song ends …)
Sanskaar goes towards her.
Sanskaar: ginu… All this??
Ragini: did u liked it??
Sanskaar hugs her.
Sanskaar: I loved it ginu….. First time someone is doing this much for me after my papa….. I’m so lucky yrrr….. I’m missing him ginu….
He is abt to cry… ( he’s not a cry baby but he got a bit emotional coz he was missing his papa)
Ragini: sansku… Now pls don’t cry… Otherwise I’ll also cry…
Sanskaar: no no… Pls don’t cry… I’ll also not cry…. ( he wipes his tears) look…
Ragini: that’s like my sansku…
She pulls his cheeks.
Sanskaar: Chalo now lets cut the cake…
Ragini ( thinks) hawww… I hv done so much… But he.. He has not done or bought me anything for me ….. Koi ni ragini.. He must be busy na… Its okay….. ( to sanskaar) Yeah come…
They both go to dining table.
Ragini: lets cut it…. I’m so hungry…
Sanskaar: bukkhar!!! One sec lady bheem…..
Ragini: sansku… Now wht??
Sanskaar: just close ur eyes na….
Ragini: okay..
She closes her eyes and he goes behind her, takes her in his embrace and puts a beautiful heart shaped diamond ring ? in her ring finger with s and r inscribed on it……. Ragini opens her eyes and is awestruck to see such a beautiful and precious ring on her finger. She turns towards him.
Ragini: sansku……
Sanskaar: ginu… Wht u thought haan?? I’ll not bring anything for u??
Ragini: no….
Sanskaar: chodo…. Did u liked it.??? I brought it while coming back…
Ragini ( hugs him tightly) : I loved it sansku… Its so beautiful… ( releasing from hug) but it must be expensive na…… Sansku don’t give me expensive gifts… I’m not used to them… Wht if ___
Sanskaar ( putting his finger on her lips): shhssss….. Ginu.. Now u r ragini kapoor, my wife, my life…. Now u don’t need to see the prices of things…
Ragini: but…
Sanskaar: no but vut….. u liked the ring na…. ( she nods) that’s it….. Now Common lets cut the cake….
Ragini smiles. Then they both cut the cake.
Sanskaar makes her eat… Some of the cake is still there on her lips.
Sanskaar: won’t u feed me??
Ragini: of course ji!!
She cuts a piece and is abt to make him eat but he denies.
Ragini: wht??
Sanskaar: I want the sweetest part of the cake….
Ragini: sansku.. … Every piece of the cake is same with same ingredients then how……..
Sanskaar: i’ll hv the sweetest only…
He moves towards her.
Ragini: sansku..
Sanskaar: shssss…….
Sanskaar moves towards her lips and looks straight into her eyes as if asking for the permission…. Ragini closes her eyes in agreement..
Then sanskaar takes her upper lips inside his mouth and licks the cake from it. Ragini shivers by his actions and tightly holds his shirt’s collar. Sanskaar sucks her upper lips slowly and slowly. Ragini calms down a bit and starts responding. Sanskaar slides his hands on her waist and and brings her closer by holding it tightly. Now there is not an inch left between them. They are kissing passionately. They are saying everything through their gesture.. They are expressing their love for each other… Ragini is holding his hair and he’s holding her waist tightly so that she doesn’t fall.
Romantic tune plays in bg.
After almost 10 mins of their kiss sanskaar broke the kiss due to lack of air but didn’t move aside. Ragini’s eyes are still closed.
Sanskaar ( cupping her face): ginu…..
He said softly while caressing her cheeks.
Ragini without saying anything hugs him tightly.
Sanskaar: ginu….
Ragini release him from the hug but is not able to meet his eyes due to shyness.
Sanskaar ( making her look up by putting his finger on her chin): ginu… are you okay??
Ragini ( looks at him with teary eyes… She’s overwhelmed with his gesture, his care): I’m… I’m fine sansku…
Sanskaar: r u sure?? I mean… I kissed you for the first time na….. Toh… Actually…….. I mean to say……….
Ragini: sansku… I’m alright… N u hv all right on me….. I love u sansku and I trust u more than myself…….. No one has given me so much love, attention, care in these 23 yrs… Which u hv given me in this one month…….
Sanskaar: ginu…. Ur speech cut, copy and paste…… Bas 23 ki jagah 24 kar do………
Ragini hits him on his chest and and both laughs…….
Sanskaar ( taking her in his embrace): Vaise I must say… The cake was really very very sweet and yummy….. I would love to have more……..
Ragini blushes and burry her face in his chest…….
Ragini: sansku….. Pls…..
Sanskaar: wht pls?? It was my first kiss with u…. So ____
Ragini: wht do u mean by first kiss with me??? ( she moves away from him) That means u hv kissed other girls also??? Tell me….. How many girlfriends did u hv??? Tell na……
Sanskaar: okay… Wait baba…. Let me count na…..
Ragini looks at him, shocked.
Sanskaar: ummm…. First one was neha then Sonia then rhea… N yes that Rina…. Umm many more yrrr I’m not getting all the names…. N if I start counting the names know…. Whole night we’ll be sitting like this only……. Voh bhi kya din the………..
He looks on dreamily… Ragini is so angry and shocked…
Ragini ( shouts): sansku ke bache… I’ll not leave u……
Sanskaar Comes back in his senses and sees his lady bheem becoming actual bheem.
She starts running behind him……
Ragini: i’ll not leave u… How dare u…….. N that pooja was saying me that u don’t believe in love… U hate girls……. How stupid was I to believe her…….. Wait now where r u running……
Sanskaar: ginu…. Forgive me yrr… I was joking…. Maaf Karde mujhe…… Look I’m holding my ears also……
He stands there itself. Ragini, as she was running fastly couldn’t put the break to her feet in time, crashed on sanskaar and both fell down on the floor.
To protect him from hurting, ragini keeps her hand behind his head. And accidently their lips brush against each other making them freez for a moment.
Ragini is over sanskaar and he’s holding her tightly… Both are having a beautiful love wala eye lock.
Soft music plays in the background.
Sanskaar( tucking a hair strand behind her hair): ginu….. Chodo yeh baatein purani… Aaao likhe apni nayi kahani…. ( leave all the old stories lets write our new story)
Ragini ( blushing): wht do u mean sansku??
Sanskaar: let me explain u…..
Saying this he rolls over her such that now Ragini is under sanskaar.
Ragini: wht are u doing??
Sanskaar: shhsssss ( keeps his finger on her lips and staring deep into her eyes) ginu… I don’t know when I started falling for u…. U know after that incident I started hating girls and love and all that…. In fact I hated friendship too… But then kavi, Pooja, arnav and khushi came in my life and everything changed….. But when you came in my life my life got a meaning.. U r very very special for me ginu…. promise me you’ll never leave me……
Ragini: never ever…..
Sanskaar then bends forward to kiss her… She also closes her eyes….
Then he slowly takes her lips into his and kiss her passionately…. Ragini also reciprocate and conveying that she’ll fulfill her promise…….
Her hands are roaming on his back and head while he’s just caressing her cheeks and hair…….
A soft romantic tune is playing in bg..
After 10 mins they break the kiss… Not due to lack of oxygen this time but because… The rats in their stomach were jumping coz they were hungry….
Sanskaar gets up and sees Ragini.. She has turned into a tomato…..
Sanskaar: ( sits beside her and holds her hand) ginu r u okay??
Ragini nods.
Sanskaar: then come lets go out for dinner….
He gives a peck on her forehead and stands to leave but she holds his hand.
Sanskaar: any problem ginu??? Why happened??
Ragini: I want to spend time with u… Lets make the dinner……..
She blushes while saying… Sanskaar gives a naughty smile to her.
Sanskaar: jo hhukum princess’!!!
He smiles while she blushes.. He gives his hand to her which she readily accepts…
Then they go to kitchen and starts preparing dinner.
Sanskaar sings a song to make the atmosphere romantic.
Sanskaar :
Pehla pehla pyar hai, pehalee pehalee bar hai
Jan ke bhee anjana, kaisa meraa yar hai…
( sanskaar comes behind her and puts her hands around her waist and helping her in cutting veggies… Ragini blushes…..)
( for the tune… Sanskaar makes ragini spin by holding her finger on the top while the food is being prepared…. Then sanskaar kisses her on her cheeks and eyes……. Ragini blushes)
Usakee najar, palko kee chilman se mujhe dekhtee, usakee najar
Usakee haya, apanee hee chahat kaa raj kholatee, usakee haya
Chhup ke kare jo wafa, aisa meraa yar hai
Pehla pehla pyar hai…
( sanskaar is doing sone work and ragini is watching him from the corner of her eyes and smiling…… Sanskaar sees this and sings the above lines…… While ragini again blushes….)
( for the tune….. Ragini revolves around him and keeps her arms around his neck making a garland….. And then kisses his cheeks and forehead…… Sanskaar puts his palms around her neck and is abt to kiss her when the cookers whistle blows and brings them back to their senses…..)
The dishes are ready and the table is set.
Sanskaar switches off the lights and blows two candles on the table to make it romantic……
Ragini is just smiling looking at his sweet gestures……
Then they have dinner… Both feed each other not breaking the eye lock for a minute also…………
Episode ends with smiling faces of ragsan…. .
Precap: raat abhi baaki hai mere dost…. ( night is still left)
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RICHA
130 Comments
lovely!
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beautifully written ….
I was imagining each and every scene
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It really means a lot to me!! ??
U r always welcome… When is ur next update dear!!!!
outstanding !!! loved their bonding n care n love for each oher .
next part soon pls ……….
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Super man? I mean WOW. Just wow. I loved it to the core. Seriously, you are so talented. Please give me tips to write romantic scenes as well 😛
Loved this epi ?
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It really means a lot to me!!!
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Updte nxt prt soon
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Sorry for not commenting on your previous ep. I was busy with my exams. And today’s ep was superb ??????????
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N its totally okay dear… N all the best for your exams!!
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I’m so glad to be part of this ff… As in as a commenter…. .. I just love this. ..
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Sooo romantic and amazing…
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It’s amazing dear… Waiting for next part…
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Lovely epi…. Keep it up!!
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Keep rocking!!
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U r most welcome dear…. Btw what was that song.?? ? The first one??
Is it from some movie??
No dear its not from any movie…. My frnd suggested so I put in…
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Its okay dear… No need to say sorry.. I’m glad u liked it!!