Hello guys!! Here comes next shot. Sorry for not giving yesterday.
Sanskar Ki Sanskari Swara(SwaSan fs)
Shot 9:
Recap: shomi asked sanskar to divorce swara.
Maheshwari house:
Swasan Room:
Sanskar enter inside the room. He is totally blank not knowing what to do. He sit on the couch and lie his head at the back.There is darkness in the room as he didn’t on the light. He lied there with closed eyes for half an hour thinking what he should do. Then only one idea came in his mind he thought something and took his mobile out from pocket and dialed the call. Soon the person received
Sanskar: hello laksh
Laksh: ohh sanskar how are you?
(Laksh is Sanskar’s college friend and the only person with whom he is in contact with in India)
Sanskar : I m not fine yrr
Laksh: why what happened??
Sanskar: I will tell you everything but plzz firstly can you meet me.
Laksh: okay come to hot coffee cafe.
Sanskar: fine I will be there in 10 mins.
Sanskar left to cafe.
Hot Coffee Cafe:
Sanskar came inside and saw laksh sitting on one table. He went near him and said
Sanskar: hey laksh
Laksh: ohh hi sanskar u came take seat. Tell me what happened.
Sanskar: you know I got married to Swara.
Laksh: ohh yes so how is married life(winks)
Sanskar: don’t ask I m in big mess.
Sanskar told everything about his engagement with Nikita and then everyone get to know.
Laksh: ohh god this much happened. Now what u want me to do?? pacify Swara.
Sanskar: that I will do just tell me is there any hall nearby which I can book for few hours.
Laksh: but why??
Sanskar: I will tell later first tell me.
Laksh: yes there are many. I can book now also.
Sanskar: okay do that now and then come with me.
Laksh: I m not understanding anything.
Sanskar: u will understand just come with me.
Sanskar and laksh went from there and book one small hall. It’s size is almost equal to room only.
Evening:
After setting everything laksh left from there and sanskar called swara. First time she didn’t received, he called again but still no response. He kept on calling till she received. After getting annoyed Swara picked the call.
Swara: now what???
Sanskar: swara plzz listen to me once.
Swara: say
Sanskar: plz come to xyz hall I want to talk to you.
Swara: I m not coming now what you want to do?
Sanskar: plzzz plz one last time its request plzzz
He keep on pleading her and finally she have to agree only.
Swara: okay fine but last time.
Sanskar: thank you sweety
Swara: what???
Sanskar: nothing I m waiting come fast.
Swara: okay
Swara cut the call and went to shomi.
Swara: ma I have some work so I m going out.
Shomi: okay but come back before it get dark.
Swara: hmm
Swara went out and took the cab and left for the Hall.
XYZ HALL:
Swara came out of the cab and payed the driver and move towards door of Hall. She didn’t found Sanskar anywhere.
Swara: where is he now?
Then only her mobile beep. She saw Sanskar’s message.
“Open the door and go inside”
She signed reading it and went inside.
Its pitch dark inside. Even the door got closed.She got scared
Swara: sanskar u are there??
Lights got on in the whole room. Swara
got astonished to see that on the front wall it is written
” I m sorry Mrs Swara Sanskar Maheshwari for hurting you”
Her eyes got wet seeing the decoration which Sanskar did for her. She really felt special for the first time. But still it hurt to remember what he did.
Sanskar only closed the door and now is standing at back of her.
Swara turn to look other side when she saw sanskar standing at her back.
Sanskar smile at her.
Sanskar: thanks for coming
Swara: what is all this??
Sanskar: swara I just want to say what all is there in my heart.
Swara(confused): means
Sanskar: I m not here to force you to forgive me or going to ask you that come with me but I just need one chance. I accept I did wrong but atleast let me rectify my mistake.
Swara: what you want me to do?
Sanskar: I m going to USA tomorrow and shekar uncle has stopped supporting my company after I broke the engagement with Nikita so company is going in lose so I have to manage it. I just need your support. My parents are not even talking to me and they are right at their place. Just I want you to be with me, be in contact with me. I really need someone beside me to encourage me and make me feel that yes someone is there for me and who can be better than my wife.
Tears are flowing from both of their eyes.Swara really felt he need someone. She was shocked to see him crying infront of her.
Sanskar(sniffs): I don’t have anyone swara and I just need your support. Will you give me one chance. You have to talk to me on phone so that I can share through what I m going with you plzz. After six months I promise you that I will come and take you with me. In these months I will gain your trust. We don’t love each other till but for the sake of our marriage plzz.
Swara felt truth in his words. Everyone deserve second chance and when he want to rectify then she can’t be that heartless. She just have to give one chance.
Swara: okay I m giving you one chance.
Sanskar got happy and wipe his tears. He hugged her tightly
Sanskar: thank you so much swara.
Swara(whisper): plzz don’t cheat me again.
Sanskar felt like someone stabbed him she don’t trust him and why she should trust after what he did.But he is determined to gain her trust.
Sanskar break the hug and cups her face
Sanskar: I will never do that again promise.
Swara smiles at him.
Sanskar take out ring from his pocket and forward to Swara.
Sanskar: I know you will not wear vermilion and magalsutra so as symbol of our marriage wear this.
Swara forward her hand and he made her wear diamond ring.
Sanskar(give another ring): make wear this so that I should also remember you are there for me.
Swara stare him for few seconds and made him wear the ring.
Sanskar: you don’t know how much light I m feeling now.plz don’t tell ma and dida or mom dad that we are in contact.
Swara: why?? And I don’t hide anything from my ma.
Sanskar: plzz they are hell angry with me and I m scared they will not let you talk with me. I will pacify them after coming back for sure.
Swara: okay
Sanskar: and always attend my call don’t ignore I may call you without any reason but just talk to me.
Swara: alright.
Sanskar take out big diary milk silk from his coat pocket.
Swara (excited): this is for me??
Sanskar(smiles): yes
Swara: how you got to know this is my favourite!?
Sanskar: I guessed only but it was right.
They both shared the chocolate and later sanskar drop swara at home as it was getting late.
Next day:
Night:
Whole day swasan didn’t talk to each other. At night sanskar is going to airport as he has flight. He informed ramta that he is going back but they didn’t talked properly to him. Before going to airport he wants to meet Swara once.
So now her is standing outside Swara’s house and dialed her number. Soon she answered
Swara: yes sanskar
Sanskar: Swara can you come out of your house I m standing there.
Swara: what??? If ma or dida will see then.
Sanskar: nothing will happen just come out.
Swara: hmm
Swara went out slowly as shomi and dida are in their room.
Sanskar is standing leaning to the car when Swara came out.
Swara: you are still in India I thought you must have gone.
Sanskar: huh! How can I go without meeting you. Now I m going to airport so thought to say bye to you.
Swara: ohh have a save journey.
Sanskar: thanks
Sanskar hug her and this time she also hugged back. How much happy he felt he just can’t express. After breaking the hug, he kissed her forehead tenderly.
Swara: call me when you will reach.
Sanskar: sure take care of yourself.
Swara: u tooo
Sanskar: bye and I will come back soon.
Swara: bye
Sanskar sit in the car and left to airport. Swara also went inside.
To be continued….
Precap: Finally swasan love story will begin.
How’s it??? I thought to give one chance to sanskar as he really want to improve. I hope you like this idea.
Now it will be interesting to know that how swasan will fall for each other living miles away??Let’s see
Thank you
Bye
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72 Comments
its really nyc dear
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superb
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Finally u updated NYC everyone deserve 1 chance to rectify their mistake eagerly waiting for their love story I don’t have patience that’s y asking u again n again pls jaldi post Karna. I love ur stories so much
Awww thank you so much dear will give next part soon tc
Awesome
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Awesome dear…waiting for them to fall for each other
Thank you so much dear will post soon tc
I’m waiting for this only…
Just wanna see Sanskaar making that shekar pay badly…
Thank you so much dear don’t worry Sanskar will teach good lesson to shekar tc
uugghhhh.. i love the way Sanskar tried to convince Swara..
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Awsm ?
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Nice one dear..!! Read all the parts in a go..!! It was really good dear..!!
But I felt that the Title is not complimenting the story..!! It’s just my view, maybe u have thought something for future that will relate to the Title..
Plz update soon waiting eagerly dear..!!
Thank you so much dear and regarding title Swara is Sanskari undoubtedly but the thing that doesn’t match till now with story is sanskar ki Swara just now their love story will begin then it will get related so kindly wait for it dear.
Thanks
Take care.
Loved it
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Awesome ????pls pls post next part soooon…
Thank you so much dear will give next part soon tc
Superb… I too believe in giving second chance Bt to those who are apt for it…
I really loved how u showed the truth which sanskar told that we don’t love each other by will fall for each other in future… Bt just need ur support… Superbly expressed….
Loved it ❤❤❤❤❤❤
Update soon
Awwww thank you so much dear and yupp they will surely fall for each other. Will post next part soon
Awesome…waiting for their love story to start…
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loved it so much dear
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Awesome
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Marsuuuuuuuuu u know what I loved the most in this story that SWASAN will fall for each other staying miles away I always dreamed such a cute love story for them and now you are fulfilling my wish thank you soooooooooooo much for that dear..
But just a small request please you extend this track a bit and show some cute SWASAN moments and like swara falling ill and sanskaar taking care of her through phone from this far ……
Please do it I’d you like it… post soon dear
Yup Neptune this is something, that I like. They would be far away still they will fall for each other???? so beautiful
Awwwwww thank you so much nepuuuu don’t worry I will give swasan cute scenes also will post soon tc
loved it❤
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People becomes lovers before marriage. Chup chup k batey krna. Ghar walo se batey chupana. But they r SwaSan they will do something different.
Kon apni he wife se chup chup k milta h, batey karta h?????????
Aww my cute Sanskaar made me and shona happy?????☺☺☺????????
Bus woh pyar k dhushman Shekhar kuch ulta sidha na kare?????
Areeee likhne ke bad mai b yehi soach rahi thi apni wife se ase kaun milta hai but fir hamare swasan unique hai aur forget shekar for some epi usko badme dhekte hai Thank you so much dear tc
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Loving it dear and I second Nepu…
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Awesome dear I loved it
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Amazing……
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Nice…….
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yeah no more hurdle plz
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