Hello guys….I’m back with the last part…..so…first of all…BIG THANK YOU FOR ALL THOSE WHO SUPPORTED ME TILL THE DATE…..AND ALL MY DEAR SILENT READERS….pls…..don’t feel bad bcuz I didn’t reply individually………..and guys keep supporting and commenting…..and…
Sorry for the typos….and guys forgive me if u find any stupidity in this……….
Ok now…..let’s get back to the story………
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“Look..I don’t have time to waste ok….just sign it and leave…..” Sanskar said annoyingly looking at his new Rolex Submariner…….
Sahil:….but….I don’t understand one thing…..why chachu need to do this….I mean…
Sanskar:hmm…I’ll explain…. for losing the deal…Maheshwaris have to pay 150crore to Malhotra Industries….and for that…Maheshwari property right are now being transferred to me…and I’ll pay them the compensatory amount…..simple….(to dp)and I’ve already said…I.don’t have tge whole night to wait….
Dp without saying anything signs the papers…
Sanskar:(with a small smirk..)…aww…mr dp…I didn’t tell naa…actually I’ve changed some clauses in this….(sees his confused face)….now as this “will” the 40%of Maheshwari properties are in the name of my mother…and the rest 50% in name of Sahil Maheshwari and Krishnaprasad Maheshwari…..10% goes to the trust I own…..
Dp and vp: nooooo….that’s not possible…….
Sanskar:(devil bossy smile).. Everything is possible Mr Maheshwari…….so…(standing in front of dp) how does it feels when everything falls off ur hands all a sudden….
Dp:(shouts) u blo*dy cheater….(raises his hands to slap)
He was jerked by Ram…who was staring at him in anger..
Ram: Don’t dare to raise that again to my son…. If u will see thae worse of me….
Suju(bursting all her frustrations): And remember…we will never forget anything…so don’t make us forget our values….
Kaveri:ayyy….
Sanskar:(dangerous tone)Don’t raise ur voice….its my land….now…(cut by seema)
Seema:(fake tears)but Sanskar…..how can u cheat us….
Vp ( acting):…beta…we are a family….
Sanskar( sarcastically): really…..we r a family……wow…what a joke……
Suju:wow mr Maheshwari…u know well to change ur plate….but don’t forget we very well know ur all these fake acting…and what did u say….(looking straight at his eyes,crossing the hands across her chest)..did I just say we r a family….do u even know the meaning of family Mr….. It’s a place where one feels safe….someone feels they are being protected….but….(angry) Where the hell did this family thought go when me and Sanskar were in tears….when u all used to torture us…..where did this family go when u tortured my son till he fall unconscious…… U know what….u people don’t deserve to be even called human….(towards kaveri)…u eas the one who always called him to be fatherless and a curse to family right…so..hear carefully Mrs Kaveri Maheshwari….to be a good successful person some doesn’t need a surname or good family background…all required is a golden heart which understands others feelings too and most important….the values….and I’m dam sure my values have not failed….or now u would be in streets now….and one more thing..(to seema)..u wanted To know with whom I slept so that he was born….so see…. (moves towards ram) meet Ram Kapoor….(to dp and vp) he is the same man who I loved and still loves….and the same one who u people kept captivated for two years….and stabbed and left thinking he’s dead….
Ram:bus…sujatha…calm down….it’s past….leave….
“Sorry sir we are late” all turned to find…police??
Maheshwaris look confused seeing police there….
Sanskar: all..no..perfect time….(signals nikhil)…inspector…these are the evidences….and remember all doors should be closed perfectly…..details of all the illegal activities done by dp and vp are in these….(hands over ine file..)
Inspector nods and moves to dp and vp….: U r under arrest Mr Maheshwari…
Dp and vp:….what….noi….why….
Ap looks shocked…..
Kaveri :Sanskar…..we are sorry..
Sanskar:who told this is for what u people did with us… There is still some scores to be settled…
Dp:..what are u talking about……
Ram(moves to Laksh who had turned serious):..so u don’t know….. Mr Maheshwari….I guess…..u has memory loss….just think clearly….
Ragini:Laksh….what’s all these…..
Laksh:( moves to them…with anger and hatred filled voice…):…..do we need a replay to remember mr…..did u really forget it….(crossed his hands to chest)…just look straight at my face and say…..(shouts seeing their expressionless faces) I’M ASKING YOU SOMETHING……ANSWER ME…..
Sahil moves to the inspector and takes the file and looks at them shocked reading it…. Seeing him samrat too came and read the file….he was standing speechless….
Laksh:… (continues) I said answer me….Mr…..
Dp:…(fumbles)I ……don’t……kn…know….
Laksh:….really…..my face doesn’t remember u someone…..??? Or…is it bcuz killing was ur hobby….???
Swarag( shocked as it was the first time they are seeing Laksh this angry..): Laksh/lucky….
Laksh:(to swarag showing his hands up) stay away ok….don’t interfere….(to samrat)…u know samrat….I’m international champion in judo and karate…but still I didn’t hit u back….(samrat looks him in wide eyes)…u know why….bcuz somewhere I deserved it…..bcuz….meeting ragini…talking with her…..my love confession….all was my blo*dy plan….(ragini stumbles..swara supports her)…my blo*dy plan to be noted by the Maheshwaris…..but I was wrong…she was an innocent soul and I couldn’t break her heart like that…. I wanted the fall of these (pointing to dp and vp) two …..
Ram:still I feel guilty….for not saving the one who saved my life…. It’s only bcuz of him I’m alive and its bcuz of me he’s not in the world……..
Swara:Sanskar……what is going on….pls explain…..
Laksh: I’ll….. My dad was the solo witness when they were stabbing baba(Laksh calls ram baba)….he tried to save him….and they saw him…. We moved out of city soon….baba was with us as he had noone…and we became like a family…… 5 yrs later they found us…..now they had two reasons…one witness of their previous crime and business rivalry…..(turning to dp and vp)…u didn’t see two people seeing that all helplessly….(shouts)…U PEOPLE BURNED MY WHOLE FAMILY INFRONT OF MY EYES…..MY MOM…DAD….MY SEVEN YEAR OLD BROTHER…. AND U STILL DON’T REMEMBER…. JUST LOOK AT ME…
Sahil:…(to vp) is this true dad….(on getting no response)….I didn’t think u people are this….. So……now…I’LL MAKE SURE U TWO GET THE HARDEST PUNISHMENT AND IT’S MY PROMISE….
Samrat:chii…dad…..shame on u…….
Sanskar:inspector….pls….take them…I don’t want anymore drama in my house…..
Police leaves with them….
Ap: (to Sanskar)….beta…I’m Sorry….I didn’t even stand for u…not even once when I knew u were right….. Ok….I know we don’t deserve ur forgiveness….but….ok…now….let me take leave…..
Suju:…but..bhabhi….
Ap: Adharsh have his own house sujatha…I think he knew about them earlier….and he told me last day that we are gonna shift there…..and that is not Maheshwaris heredity property….so we will shift there asap….(to Laksh)….beta….I know what he did what something unforgettable and unforgivable……but….don’t fill hatred in ur heart….it will only destroy u…..and if possible forgive me….. I didn’t react seeing his deeds….
And she goes out with adharsh and pari…..
Suju:…I think all should leave…it’s quite late now…
Kp: but Sanskar….what was the need for transferring thia properties in our names…..are u kind of payings debts…..it’s not needed beta…
Sanskar: (coldly) if u people think this as paying debts…then I’ve no objection…. And somewhere it is a kind of paying for ur love towards us u showed….(sahil and kp were about to say something)…I know in that house only u for cared little about us….what just think what is the use of this love and care when u didn’t express it on time…. Hmmm…I know when I used to be sad sahil bhai,ragu and ansh all came to me hiding…but bhai u were not there when I needed someone’s support….u didn’t stand for me even after knowing that it was samrat who did that….. (to samrat)…and samrat….even if I forgive you for what u did with me..I’ll never be able to do that for what u did to lucky today…..bcuz(to sahil ansh and kp) within last 5 yrs he gave the love and care I didn’t get from u in those 19 years….yeah more than that….I know he consider me as his lost brother….not just by words but by heart….. Ahhh….leave all these…
Seema:I know our apologies won’t give u the lost days…but Sanskar…I’m Sorry….for everything…(suju and Sanskar looks emotionless)..ok…we gotta go….come ragini,ansh…
Kaveri(acting):sorry from my side too…I’m happy that u are successful….but see blmy own son is a zero..and……
“Just shut up” all were angry hearing kaveris new act….and they heard someone bursting out….it was Samrat…
Samrat:juat stop ur acting mom….all here clearly know u r acting….u r not sorry for what u did…but is still jealous….and ur this jealousy and greed made me useless….yes…(to Sanskar)…I was jealous of u Sanskar….bcuz u had a mother who was always there for u in all situations….who cared for ur dreams…..which I didn’t have…..(to kaveri) It’s u and dad made me like this….made me away from my siblings…. U always said to score more than Sanskar…always made me do the things I don’t like…me and Sanskar were in same class…..if he was first then let me remind you mom….I was second….but rather than looking at my win u two always compared me with him…..and when he got admission for mba and I didn’t, did u ask why I scored less at the exam….no….u guys were fighting to scold me…did u guys even think at least once about my dreams…..(to sujatha)…I was jealous of Sanskar when u encouraged him to chase his dreams and never follow others words otherthan ur heart…..and I changed myself bcuz mom and dad loved their reputation more than me… I was jealous of him bcuz somewhere I felt my siblings are more attached to him and not me….( to sahil)…bhai u know in childhood I was afraid of lightening….and I asked u to sleep with me….but when I saw u going to Sanskar while he was sleeping…..I got angry….and…remember…when u,ragini,ansh and Sanskar…all used to share some time together….there was someone at the door waiting for ur one call…but u never even once noticed it …….and all these made me think that if he goes out of our house my problems will be solved….but I was wrong….problem was my own parents….
And he storms out
All were silent….
Sanskar: bhai….ragu…ansh…go to him….(to nikhil) nikhil….make sure ask reach safe…it’s late everyone…..so…
All goes out silently…ragini goes out hugging Sanskar and swara who decided to stay back and didn’t look at Laksh who was looking at her sad……
After all left… Ramtha left towards their room…afterall they are meeting after a long time…Laksh too leaves to his room thinking of ragini…. Sanskar looks at swara who was staring him……
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Maheshwari mansion……
We can see smarat looking something…. He was holding a diary……he turned the pages and looks at the drawings…
Page 1: drawing of two boys teasing another who was teary eyed…(hmmm…the sad boy was Sanskar)
Page 2: another boy scolding the two boys…..
Page 3: one woman(kaveri) and a man (vp) yelling at a kid (samrat) showing a report card….
Page 4: Sanskar, sahil ansh and ragini sitting together and a head peeping inside at the door..
Page 5: a small cute girl sitting on a tree branch…. ( Swara..)
Page 6: Sanskar sitting in the garden sadly..(remember his first meeting with swara,Sanskar eas in the garden sadly bcuz dp scolded him badly)..and samrat hiding near him peeping out with two chocolates….
Page 7: kaveri scolding again comparing him with Sanskar…….
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And many others….. Sahil came in silently and sat near him….
Samrat:will Sanskar forgive me Bhai……
Sahil:……
Samrat: I know he can’t….I’ve did a lot…
Sahil:….(slightly tapping his head)….pagal…if u wanted to join us why didn’t you come….why did u wait for someone to call u…..
Samrat:leave it bhai….we have no right to call him back….let him enjoy his life with them…they deserve Sanskar’s love….not us…..hmm…it’s too late now go or else(teasingly) bhabhi will kill me for keeping u here…
Sahil smiles seeing his this play mode which he was seeing first time and goes out…..
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Sanskars house…
Sanskars room…….
Sanskar:now why are u staring me like this swara……
Swara: Sanskar…how did u ….I mean…..tumhari dad…lucky…
Sanskar: hmm……wo……when I reached Mumbai….u know it’s difficult to leave there without a shelter or job….and one day when I was trying to move out from there..on the way I was about to have an accident…..and lucky saved me…..and I saw papa…..and…. he saw moms and his photo with me…and we three started living together…..I started my business after completing my studies…..and…thats it…
Swara:….hmmm….
Sanskar: what hmmm…now we are officially engaged… (moves towards her with a naughty smile)
Swara:so….(sees his smile)
Sanskar:(holds her by waist) soo….do u think I own a kiss….
Swara:ohhhooo…..kiss…..not so soon Mr kapoor….wait karo…..
Sanskar:hmmm….not fair…….ok…if u don’t want it’s ok……
Swara(kisses his cheeks tight):happy????
She tries to run but Sanskar caught her and pulled towards him causing them to fall on the bed with swara above Sanskar…
Sanskar:awww…see …even u try to run….u come more close….
Swara:hmm….I love you…..(placing her head on his chest)
Sanskar(smiles): I know……ammmm…swara..I think u should eat less…..I have become so heavy yaar….
Swara:achha…..then definitely I’ll eat more and sorry Mr kapoor u’ve to bear me whole life….
Sanskar:I would love to….
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Next morning
Swasan were sleeping cuddling with each other……..sun rays kept on teasing them making then to wake lazily……
Sanskar(sleepy):..ahhhh…hmm..gud morning swara….
Swara:hmmm..gud morning….
Soon they came down and finds ramtha talking with a smile…
Laksh came there ready to go to college….
Laksh:mng everyone…(.All smiles)..sorry I’ve to be a little early today…Swara..u come with bhai ok. ….so I’m going…bye bhai…bye baba…bye aunty….
All except sujatha:bye…
They look at suju who was looking at the other side….
Suju(finds then staring her):..what…..ohh….I get it…why should I reply….he was saying bye to some aunty….not me…All smiles at her drama….she moves to Laksh and cups his face with one hand )..if u call Sanskar bhai and ram baba…then how I’m ur aunty…(chuckles)..i feel like an oldy hearing this aunty thing….and…(with a serious but love filled face )…..u too are like my Sanskar…so without any hesitation u can call me mom…..
Laksh smiles in tears remembering his mother…hugs suju and leaves….
Swara:I think I need to talk to ragini…..
Ram:hmm….I need to talk to her…Sanskar I drop her at the college…
Suju:.(teasingly).ram….why can’t u drop her at the college…i don’t want to be granny before their marriage….
Swasan:mom….
Ram:haha…suju…don’t embarrass them……
Suju:omm…sorry….Sanskar…drop her….
They left….
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“Ragini…there is a visitor for u..”a girl informed ragini who was sitting Lost in the library…
She nods and leaves….she reaches the visitors area to find ramtha…. Suju hugged her and she took blessings from both…
Ram:ragini beta…can we talk…
Ragini:..hmm..ji uncle…
Ram:..are u angry on Laksh…..
Ragini:…I….don’t know….
Ram:..I can understand ur feelings ragini….but think from his side too…he was just 5 when all those happened….and it was really hard for me to make him normal…it took years to recover…….and after Sanskar came…he really changed….I was happy seeing him…..
Ragini:..I know uncle…but….I’m not angry on him….I never can….I’m just….u know….he lost that bcuz of my family…and….it’s…..just….I don’t know how to face him….but I’m sure…if….the time we spent together was not his acting and if it was from his heart….he’ll definitely come to me….
Ram: hmm…I’m happy….I just wanted to hear this from u….now we are going…
Ragini accompanied them out….on the way they heard someone calling her loudly..
They saw Laksh rushing towards her….
Laksh :ragini…..I’m so…sorry….pls…let me explain……..it’s true I hated Maheshwaris…but….each second I spent with u wad beautiful….I…ragini…..that was not fake ragu….pls…believe….
Ragini:it’s ok lucky….I know…..u don’t want to explain…..
All college was looking at them….. We can see swasan coming inside…..All were keenly looking at the newly engaged couple who are today’s hot news…
Laksh:…..so ms ragini Maheshwari……I really love u…. I Love ur cute innocent heart……so…today in front of this whole college let me ask….ki….tum….
“Well u become my daughter in law ragini” sujatha interupts them making all chuckle….
Laksh:..mom……
Suju:.(teasing smile)….ok beta…continue…I’ll not interfere
Laksh:….ragini….if I tell u the truth….ur two brothers are very bad….(sees her frown face)…arrey…u know how they were practicing their martial art on me…hmm…that was the only time when Sanskar bhai became angry on me…when he got to know about my that stupid plan….but now on a serious note….as I don’t want to be the pray of their fighting skills….let me ask u…. Ragini….will u marry me…..
Ragini(smiles):….is it a question???… Always a big yess….. She hugs him…all college claps for them…ram and suju were smiling…..
“I guess someone is too fast than us” swara said teasing the lovebirds….
They broke the hug and looks at them smiling…
Sanskar: hmm….here we were smoking our brains to plan something to make these two together…..but…
Swara:yeah…they were a step ahead of us Sanskar…..
Sanskar:so dear brother and sister…..u should wait till ur exams get over….and till then only little romance allowed ok…
Swara: ok…now all set naa…(all nooks at her) I’ve something to pay of…(with a smirk looks at raglak)…remember dear friends….
Raglak looks each other nervously and sees Swara who was stepping towards them….
Raglak:…ahhhhhhhh……save me….no…save us….(and they runs within a second)
Swara(running behind them):..u idiots…stop….bcuz of ur stupid plan I was almost dead yesterday….stop u fools…..
Ramtha and Sanskar looks at them with a smile…..students too laughs seeing them running like Tom and jerry….all laughed seeing two jerries and one tom…..
The screen freezes on Sanskar’s smiling face that shows the satisfaction seeing his little world happy….
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Ahhhaa….thats the end………so guys….hope u like it….sorry if it didn’t come to ur expectations…. Now let me take leave…..and guys…..i think now I’ll come back only after may…hmm..u know NEET exams!!!!…so now…guys pls……pray for me…..and meet u all after may….
ByE….EvErYoNe….tAkE CaRe….. Keep smiling and be happy….. Love u all…
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Hiiiii ARsssss.. How’s u??? I read it now.. It’s mind blowing.. Loved it…All villains shocks,sanky rocks…Swaraginilak bonding is too good??…Feeling bad for Samrat??…Overall,too good ending.. Bole toh”full package”… Keep writing like this dear..
ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAMS.. ROCK THE SHEETS… I am waiting for the day when you will be back with new ff…
Take care
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… Thank u so much uma….. I’m glad that u liked this…… ??
Nyc
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Yes….I’m from Thodupuzha..???
…. r u also from Kerala…??? And thank u for liking this….
thante ts ne oru thanthonni chova by the way proper thodupuzhayano
but i liked ur version more
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awesome..loved it..all d best for ur exam..tc..
i looooooooooooveeeee this…all the best for your exam….
somehow.. feel pity for Samrat
end oh nooo I’ll miss it …
will you give epilogue… please….
awsum just loved it plz write another 1 if possible