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Episode:12
Episode starts with naksh talking to mishti!!
Mishti:Bhayya!!please…
Naira:mishti…
Just then suwarna comes,
Suwarna:Children,come on come inside…we have to discuss an important thing!!
Naira:What Aunty?
Suwarna:come first!!
They go inside,
Dadi:karthik and mishkat come sit beside me…Naira and gayu even you!!
They go and sit beside her…
Manish: Now, we want to fix date for your engagement..
Kaira and Miyu gets excited!!
Karthik catches Naira’s hand [nobody notices it]
Naira feels shy!!
Dadi:we want to fix it as soon as possible so we called pandit ji and asked…
Bhabima: ji..announce the date…
Dadi:its Day after tomorrow!!
Akshara:what? Day after tomorrow!! No..we have to do lot of work..
Dadi:Akshara it’s just for sake of our children’s happiness!!
Akshara:yes Ma !! that’s why I’m unable to refuse it!!
Naithik:Okay!!then we will leave?
Singhanias and maheshwaries:yes!!
They leave and mishkat and karthik spend time with family!!
After some time they go to their rooms..
Karthik calls Naira..
Karthik:[on phone]Heylo..naira
Naira:hey..karthik
Karthik:reached?
Naira:yes!!long back
Karthik:I’mexcited naira
Naira:karthik..kya after marriage I’ll have to come there and stay leaving this house?
Karthik:Naira? Whats that question? Yeah you have to..
Naira:No karthik…I’LL miss them ah lot..
Karthik:and I LOVE YOUah lot Naira!! Iss ghar mein aapko ussab logo ki kami mehsoos nahi hone denge…
Naira stays silent..
Karthik:Naira..there?
Naira:[cries]yeah[in low voice]
Karthik:Naira… you are crying?
Naira:[still cries]Noo.
Karthik: don’t lie…
Naira:karthik…I’m happy but I don’t want to leave this house…okay now Bye gnyt!
Karthik:okay!!bye!!gn
They both end the call karthik thinks about Naira where as naira laughs…
And gayu who over hears the conversation come to her..
Gayu:Naira? why are you crying?
Naira: di who is crying?
Gayu:you..
Naira:no..
Gayu: you were telling to karthik right?
Naira:ha di!! Nahi toh what should I do…now a days he is not talking to me much!! So if we do like this he will just think about me and talk to me and spend time with me…you see he will come here tomorrow morning for sure…
Gayu:Nairaa!! Carry on I’m sleeping bye!!
Naira:bye..
Its morning;
Karthik thinks about Naira and get ready to go to her..
Koushik thinks of uniting karthik and mishti…he get an idea!
In singhania sadan;
Naira gets coffee for akshara and naithik!!
Naira:ma..have it..
Akshara:what happened toyou? Why didyou bringtoday?
Naira:just lyk that..papa take it..
They like the coffee..
Naira:mumma…shall I ask you one thing?
AKhara:ask naira..
Naira:did you also feel excited about your engagement?
Akshara:ha naira bahuth..
Naira:toh mumma aapne kitna shopping kiya?
AKshara:ah lot..
Naira:[shouts]then when should I do… come on take me to shopping..
Akshara:oh that’s the matter you brought coffee today…naira its your engagement why will we not do…lets go now..i’ll get ready in 10mins…
Naithik:no..akshara ask designer to come I’m not going to come with you to SHOPPING…
Karthik comes and greets every one..
Naira signs to gayu..she laughs..
Karthik:I’ll take them no sir…
AKshara:idea is good but..you naira and gayu so for shopping for all the others designer is gonna come..
Karthik:chalo tike then I’ll call mishi bhai and koushu also …
AND CALLS THEM…
They agree..
Akshara:arey take mishti also..and go varna mar dalegi voh..
Naira:ha ma..
Mishti comes down and go out…
Then a courier boy come and give her some parcel..she see some sorry gifts..
Mishti[to herself]wow bff…iunderstood that I really mean you a lot… come on patch up karegi aaj..
She gets inside and go to Karthik:
Mishti:Bff….I’msorry…
Karthik gets shockd and also glad!
Karthik:thank you mishti and don’t be sorry…
They hug eachother…Mishti go from there as karishma called her..
Karthik:I think naira convinced her…
He see naira coming and hide behind the wall…
When naira come he catches her hand and drags her towards him he kept his hand on her mouth so that she couldn’t shout..they have a romantic eye lock
He removes his hand…
Naira:karthik,you? Leave me anyone will see..
Karthik catches her shoulders…
Karthik:Naira… you are my to be wife I have every right on you…
Their faces come closer
Naira take a long breath…
Karthik comes more closer..soon their Lips met!!
That was a passionate kiss..soon they release it and naira hugs him tightly…
Karthik:I love you Naira!!
Naira:I love you too Karthik!!
They release their hug and karthik turns her..Now naira is wall facing and karthik behind her…
Naira stretches her hand and karthik puts his hand over naira’s
He kisses her shoulder and she turns towards him…
She see LOVE in his eyes… and he too…
Naira kisses his cheeks and their lips met again…
Soon they release ..
Naira feels shy and goes away from there…
Mishkat and koushik come and Kaira,Miyu and Mishik leave for shopping..
Karthik and Naira were still shy….They both sit silently.. thinking of that moment and a smile come on both of their faces…
Soon they reached the shopping complex… three pairs go to three different shops..
Naira:karthik….
There was some added feeling in her voice…
Karthik:yes!!
Naira:what should I take?
Karthik: a lehenga?
Naira:good idea..
Karthik is still in that mood only…he gazes her which makes her feel embarrass
Niara:Karthik..stop!!
Karthik:what?
Naira:nothing..
She selects some dresses and say that she will try them and come…
Now karthik goes back of her and Naira doesn’t notice it…and nobody others even…
Karthik and naira are in trial room..
Karthik hugs her from back..
She gets shocked seeing him..
Naira:karthik..you why did you come?
Karthik:I cant leave you alone naira…
He kisses her she hugs him… and pushes him out…
Karthik:ouch!! Thank god no body noticed..
Naira: [laughs]Nautanki!!
She tries the dress and feels it is perfect…
They pay the bill and come out…
They see mishti and koushik waiting..
Koushik:your shopping is over?
Karthik:yeah
Mishti:where is gayudi and jiju?
Karthik:lagtha hain iski shopping katham nahi hui hai…
He signs naira…and feels shy…
Precap: Engagement preparations!!
GUYZZ HOW WAS THE EPISODE…I CAN WRITE EMOTIONAL AND FAMILY SCENES BUT IAM NOT VERY GOOD AT ROMANTIC ONE…BUT STILL I TRIED…
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18 Comments
Excellent part waiting for next part
thanks
osam
thankyou
It was awesome…love it
thankyou soumya
thankyou mihi
Awsome
Great work 🙂
thank you vrushy!
Amazing!! ??
thanks!! di
Amazing di. I want the next one fast
tysm!!!deepika <3
No queries lasya!!good and great try… if try you can improve so no problem..
and you are showing each and every relation and bond between them perfectly… i just love it!!
i and my sister both will sit and read your ff and we imagine its really perfect!!
my sister love your ff waiting for next part …..
thankyou shreya!!thanks for your sister too!!
Cool…
thanks