Guys I am here narendran many knew I am writing many ff.. Now recent..
Horror story on(kkb,edkv,krpkap,vishkanya and matsh)..
Meri aashiqui tum se hi (ishveer forever)season-2..
Rettai Vaal kuruvi also…
Now.. I have already wrote a ff on IKRS..not one 4!! Vishkanya.. Many know me.swaragini.. I wrote love at first sight.
Now let us start……
Viplav:He is big scientist.. He invents many new things..
Dhaani:Wife of viplav but does not viplav to scientist but good husband
Sanskaar:He is rich person he is soo greedy of his brother viplav.. He loves her wife Swara alot..
Swara: She always.. Have a diff look at mirror. She loves sanskaar for his money..
Kunj:He is the best fighter in the world.. He is big boxer.
Twinkle:She loves kunj alot.. She always tells him to quit boxing.. But he does not.
Thapki:She is good brillaint girl and wife of bihaan
Bihaan:He runs a big hotel..
Apu:She is quiet girl infront of all. But she does all masti things at house. She is wide of Malay.she is vishkanya. Here..
Malay:He loves her wife alot.. He is big business man..
Now all are at same house.. So now let us start.. So this ff is just for 10epi!! So don’t worry.
Thapki:Comes to room and wakes bihaan.. .
Bihaan:What?
Thapki: Drink tea..
Bihaan:ok.. He takes it and smiles at her..
Thapki:What? Why staring at me?
Bihaan:He comes close and takes her ear rings and smiles..
Thapki stammers.. He gives her ear rings.. She smiles and hugs him.. He tells if I had knew this I would have got many things for u???..
Kunj comes near twinkle and wakes her up and gives tea.. She smiles and asks how is he? He tells fine madam.. Twinkle pinches his face. He tells oooo. She smiles and tells all fighters afraid of u.. But u afraid of me? Kunj keeps it aside and pulls her closer Sanam re plays…….
Swara smiles at sanskaar.. She thinks I thought he will get more jewels for me? But he always gets small things.. Sanskaar gets up from bed and holds her hand and hugs backside of her.. She smiles and hugs him and fumes..
Apu comes to house and gets ready for tiffin.. Malay comes there and hugs her and asks about her state? Malay smiles and kisses her hand… She asks him what r u doing? He shows something on lips and smiles.. She hugs him and tells u are sooo clever.
Dhaani comes to viplav with her baby.. Dhaani tells u are always here and not with me? Viplav tells I am doing my job otherwise we cannot get money?? Dhaani tells why not and tells him to get job from his brothers.. Viplav tells her not to advice her.. Viplav comes to dhaani and hugs her and tells her. To take care..
Precap:Viplav invents one machine.. Sanskaar sees this and tries to take it. But kunj and others stop.. All asks what is the use of this machine?Viplav tells secret.. But not time machine.. It is little diff.. So u have to wait.. All others smiles..
Guys hope u all liked it.. Kathy I made vishkanya even more popular now.. ?????Swara was greedy of money.. Don’t worry atlast u will see her positive side.. Sci-fi will be little bore.. But pls support me.. Don’t scold me.. Pls pls pls pls.. I am already writing horror story.. So this also I will write this.. Bye.
Credit to: Narendran
71 Comments
its really nice…☺
Thnx snoor.
Wow what a dhamaka start naru Bhaia awesome keep it up loved all the part here haha can’t imagine Sanky being greedy 😛
Thnx.. Will see how greedy leads to destruction..
Good start narendran..!!
I watch only ikrs.. Loved to see dhani and viplav husband and wife and with their baby 🙂 🙂
All the best
Thnx.. Arshadeep for the comment next epi I will put IKRS pic also..
Bdw where is viplav and dhani in cover pic??
Sorry. Next epi I will add their pic..
Ranaji u r a great writer. How can u manage this yaar that too with studies. It was a lovely episode. Plz post the next one soon. By the way how’s ur studies going on?
Nothing is impossible.. Akka.. It is good Akka. Thnx
Osm..pls update asap and want more twinj scenes if possible
Sure. I will give equal imp to all leads..
Hey ranaji good to see you in here again
Thnx salma.. For the comment..
Awesome….. I want d nxt episode right now plzzzz
Thnx mitali u r name is nice
which page you are writing rettai vaal kuruvi ff?
Here is the link.. http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Rettai+Vaal+kuruvi
it was awesome and superb
Thnx Fiona… For the comment
Naren y should we scold u ??? Ur fabulous writer…??? tnx for promoting vishkanya….??
Coming to the episode … Wow naren I think it gonna b one of ur best Story…. Each pairs conversation between them r fantastic…y viplav hides his profession to dhani ???must b suspense in it????…. I guess…
Thnx Kathy… U always comment many times on all my ff!!!!
Hey Malay coudnt kiss Apu in ur vishkanya ff so u made him do that here….???
*it here…??
I don’t know any other couple except apulay. It is good.
Thnx sarayu… For the comment
This kind of sounds like the film 24
No I have mentioned it.. Already it is not time machine track it is diff..
Superb yaar…….. Continue……
Thnx nagma??????????
Good start Ranaji. I know only Ikrs and Tpk.
what is vishkanya?
Hi porkodi…. Vishkanya…Ek Anokhi Prem Kahani Is a supernatural love story airs on Zee TV at 6:30 pm Monday to Saturday. It’s about a vishkanya ( poison girl)…. Aparajitha n her love for Malay …. N revenge … In history vishkanyas were young women used as assassins against enemies…. By kings….
Yes.. Porkodi.. Kathy I told u Na.. Many will join to watch our fav show..
Yes naren,,, ur right … Tnx….?
It’s awwauum yaar bt y only 10 episodes uh should write more bt really an awwsum plot ??
Krystal I need to go to school from 23rd so still that I can write ff..
Awesome, keep going…
Thnx maira.. For the comment
wah..what a start.. u are really awesome… sometimes i doubt how can u write so well… btw u r promoting vishkanya..very good.. 😛 😛 nd yes the story line is amazing…
i guess m becoming ur fan.. hehe 🙂 😀
Hey Tara my fav show… Vishkanya.
nice episode bro do what u want but also take care of yourself as u r my bro and our best writer
Thnx for caring for me????
its amazing….n twinj scenes u have written it so well…
Thnx… Hope u liked it..
super episode….you are the master of writing ff!!!!
Don’t blast.. Anyways thnx for the comment
but you deserve appreciation
sorry guys…my logo sudddenly changed…gave the wrong email id
ranaji you should explore different genres too…as you are so good in writing
Nice!
thnx anushka for the comment
naren loved ur imagination of 24 for vidhaani…….surya n nithya….viplav n dhaani?☺??24 nice movie na….i watched it before some days….
hey guys how much time to say this is not 24 story but little diff..uff
our naren got tired sho ahaid if they didn’t understand you leave them with time they will understand what you want to say
hey i don’t say about the story line watch , time machine etc etc…..naren
i just only tell u about the opening sequence of the movie is related to ur ff. am i right?
Are wah bacha u r a real bomb i mean in writing 4 couples together??if i would have been in yr place then would have confused for sure. Good??
i want to say the same that he is
just
what ever u want to say
Thnx renu for me also it gets confused some times but I manage it
sorry yar naren if it hurt u but i hope u will understand that u r my brillient and very very very intelligent brother sorry sorry sorry yar again
Why sorry??thnx..
Awesome 🙂
Thnx pallavi??????
Good start, good collab. All the best
Thnx Nancy.. For the comment.