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TITLE : From Scintillate to Swara
TYPE : One Shot
AUTHOR : Stella
GENRE : Fantasy+Comedy+Romance
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I always knew that love would come find me someday
But never did I know that it would be you who was headed my way
You caught me off guard and took me by surprise
But you simply captivated me,
The same way you do when I look into your eyes.
~ “When Love Begins” by Florence
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Let’s begin with a question…!!
What’s the similarity between water and human desires…??
To answer this difficult question, I would like to use just a single sentence with only five words and that is:
“They both have no ends”
No matter how much you give, both water and desires try to reach out for more than what’s given to them…!! The more you’ll give, the more they will occupy…!! This is how every human in this world is; with endless desires…!!
And no difference than others is Sanskaar- Sanskaar Maheshwari…!! A person having tons of desires but no such intention of working to fulfill them all…!! All he ever wanted is just to sit idle and gorge over his father’s money…!! So, what’s the thing that makes him different from others…?!! Its his habit, or whatever you might wanna call it, of blaming God for everything wrong that happens in his life…!!
~ His father kicked him out of the house… God’s fault that he made his father so heartless…!!
~ His girlfriend dumped him… God’s fault that he gave no brain to the girl he dated…!!
~ He gets his toe hit against the table… God’s fault that he gave humans the brain to make a table…!!
~ He lost his job… God’s fault that he made his boss so rude and manner less…!!
Unbelievable, right…?!!
So, all in all, everything that happens in his life is God’s fault because there is hardly anything good that has happened to him…!!
But this all changes when God could feel his ears bleeding because of his cusses and accusations, and He decides to summon Sanskaar to His court in the heaven above…!!
One night, Sanskaar sleeps and reaches his world of dreams trying to find some absolutely beautiful, elegant lady over there, but instead he finds a door in front of him…!! A little confused, as he turns the knob of the door, an entirely different world welcomes him…!! The darkest of the dark skies holding numerous stars in its palm forms a canopy like structure over his head…!! Clouds of various colors could be seen revolving all around the place and passing by…!!
Amazed by his entire surroundings full of shimmering and glittering stars, Sanskaar moves forwards but stops abruptly as the sky starts parting away as if giving way to something…!! And soon enough a huge ball of light enters calling him, “Sanskaar…!!”
“What the…?!! Who called me…??”, Sanskaar looks around in a haste and stops when his eyes land on the light ball right above his head. “Who are you and how do you know me…??”, asks Sanskaar narrowing his eyes…!!
“I’m the one whom you blame for whatever happens in your life”, answers a streak of light coming out of the ball…!!
Sanskaar thinks for a while before a smirk starts appearing on his face, “Aahh God…!! So, finally you decided to show me your face.“
“Well technically, you are not seeing my face…!! All you can see is a ball of light”, answers another streak of light.
“Yeah, whatever. But why did you call me all of sudden…??”
The ball shines brightly before descending down and settling in front of his face, “I want to ask what’s your problem. Why do you blame me always…??”
“Because you are the reason for all that is going on in my life”, Sanskaar answers folding his arms across his chest.
“How come it’s my fault if you are not paying any attention and you hit your leg against the table”, asks God in a calm voice.
Sanskaar shoves his hands inside the pockets of his track pants and says, “Now don’t make excuses. I know you have some special issues with me.”
“I think you are mistaken Sanskaar. I love all my creations and I love you even more because you are my special creation.”
Sanskaar gives an unbelievable look to God and says, “Stop joking around. If I’m that special to you then… umm… why don’t you give me a gift which you have never given to any human before.”
God gives a small laugh, “If that’s what you want, then just name it. What do you want as a gift…?!!“
Sanskaar gives his surroundings a quick glance before making up his mind for his gift, “Give me a Star.”
“A Star…?!!”, the shock in God’s voice could be easily guessed.
Sanskaar smirks at the huge glowing ball, “Yup. A Star…!! So, give it to me.”
“Alright. Which one…?!!“
Sanskaar scans the sky once again and smiles as he finds a star glittering and shimmering more than any other star in the whole heaven, “That one”, he says pointing towards the star…!!
“Are you sure you want that one…?!! If you want, you can choose another…!! This one is a bit… difficult to handle”, God asks him for the first and the last time.
“Now, I want that one only”, Sanskaar answers in full confidence.
“As you wish. I’m giving the Star to you for two months but keep one thing in mind if you hurt it in any manner or if you try to send it back before two months, you’ll stop complaining and demanding from me and if you are able to win its heart by the end of the two months, you can have it for your entire life”, saying this God throws him back, out of the door he came from and then he looks at the star, “You know what you have to do.”
“Yes Big Boss”, saying this the Star, Sanskaar selected, falls down from the heaven straight towards the Earth.
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The next day Sanskaar opens his eyes to the sound of the buzzing alarm clock and finds himself lying on the usual side of his bed in his one room rooftop apartment, but deciding to sleep a little bit more he turns off the alarm and rolls on the bed towards the other side…!! But no sooner he turns, someone kicks him in his guts which sets him flying off, down from the bed.
As soon as his butt kisses ‘Good morning’ to the floor of his room, he opens his eyes in shock only to find a beautiful girl cladded in shiny full-length white gown lying on his bed peacefully. Her long silky black hair lay sprawled up on the entire pillow. Never in his life Sanskaar had seen such a beautiful girl. Her long eyelashes trying to kiss her high rosy cheekbones and her full pink lips look more inviting than even a full cup of hot chocolate in a chilling winter night.
But before he could do anything, she opens her big doe eyes looking at him. Sanskaar, getting a little bit confused, asks, “Who are you and what are you doing here?”
“You don’t remember what happened last night…?? You are the one who brought me here”, the girl looks at him without blinking even for once. Getting a huge shock from her statement, Sanskaar starts mumbling all to himself, “Holy Shit…!! I lost my virginity to a girl I don’t know and now I don’t even remember. Sanskaar, what have you done?”
The girl gives him a weird expression, “Okay…!! If you are going to talk to yourself, then I’m going to sleep. Have a great shimmering ahead”, saying this she pulls the comforter over her head. Sanskaar pulls the comforter back, “Oh hello…!! I don’t know you and you are supposed to leave.”
The girl glares at him before pointing out her long slender finger to him, “You…!! First of all, you made me travel such a long distance just because of your stupid wish and now you’re not even allowing me to rest.”
Sanskaar gives her a slightly nervous smile seeing her anger, “Relax…!! Relax…!! I was just wishing you a good morning.“
“What’s a morning…?!!”, she asks him rolling her finger back. Sanskaar looks at her as if she has lost her mental balance, “Morning…!! The one you’re seeing right now. Light and light everywhere.” The girl looks around before the realization strikes her, “Aahh…!! Downtime…!! In our place we call it uptime and downtime, that’s why I was a little confused. Anyway, it’s time for me to rest.”
“Who the hell sleeps in the morning”, Sanskaar shouts all of a sudden.
“Have you ever seen any ‘Star’ up during this hour? ”, she shouts back in the exact same tone.
“No, I haven’t. But… wait… what…?!! Star…?!!”, he looks at her with eyes and mouth wide open, “You’re kidding me, right?”
“Now, don’t give me those expressions. You only asked God to give me to you”, the Star says rolling her eyes.
“I don’t believe this. So, it wasn’t a dream which means nothing happened between us. Hahh, great”, Sanskaar smiles taking a sigh of relief. The Star gives him a naughty smile, “Oh wow…!! You are the first being ever who is happy even after meeting me. Now, since you have already woken me up, come on ‘Pretty boy’ get me something. I’m hungry”, saying this she walks out of the room leaving behind an utterly shocked Sanskaar who feels like ripping all his hairs off his head, unable to believe that it is actually happening…!! It wasn’t just a dream at all…!!
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Sanskaar reaches the kitchen and finds her already sitting on one of the stools. “So, what’s your name or do you want me to name you…?!!“, Sanskaar asks her opening the fridge and trying to act normal no matter he is freaking the hell out from inside…!!
“No, I don’t need you. I already have a very glittery name, Scintillate.”
“Scinti… What…?!!“
“Sci… inti… lla… te”, she repeats her name again but this time a little bit slower.
Sanskaar takes out an ice cream box and places it on the island of the kitchen, “Scin… ti… whatever…!! Ughh…!! No…!! No…!! It’s too long…!! Not going to work.”
She glares at him, “Don’t you dare insult my name. It’s the best in the whole Kingdom of Sparky Skies.”
Sanskaar raises his hands in surrender, “Alright…!! Alright…!! Why are you getting angry…?!! I’m just saying that since you are going to live here for a while, why don’t we give you a new name, like… umm… Swara…!! How’s it…?!! Isn’t it beautiful…??“
“Swara…!!“, she thinks for a while before smiling, “I think I like it.”
Sanskaar smiles in relief, “Actually, you look very young. What’s your age?”, he asks her taking a sip of water.
“Hmm…!! I’m quite young…!! Just four thousand three hundred and fifty one years old”, answers Swara having her entire concentration on the fancy looking box in his hands.
Sanskaar spits out the mouthful of water the next instant, giving out a shriek full of shock, horror and astonishment, “Four…!! Four thousand…!! And you still think that you are young…?!!“
Swara shouts back keeping both her hands on her ears, “Aaaa…!! Why are you shouting…?!! Of course I’m young, there are many of us who are millions of years old.”
Sanskaar stares at her, “Yeah right. Why don’t you eat this then”, saying this he opens the lid of the ice cream tub. Swara looks at it with such an excitement as if it’s the most wonderful thing in the entire universe, “What is this…??“
“Ice cream”, Sanskaar replies.
“Why would you scream…?!! I’m not doing anything”, asks Swara with confusion etched all across her face.
Sanskaar mentally slaps his face before looking at her, “Not I scream. It’s… Ice… cream…!! Ice is ice and cream is cream. Ice cream.”
“Then give me both”, Swara replies back almost instantly.
“What both…?!!”, asks Sanskaar putting a spoon inside the bucket.
“You only said, you are giving me ice and cream. Then give me both and whether the one you are holding is ice or is it cream…?!!”, she asks gleamingly pulling the ice cream bucket towards herself.
“Seriously, I don’t believe this”, he starts banging his head against the table whereas Swara keeps looking at him with eyes full of pity, “Tch…!! Tch…!! Tch…!! Look what have you done to yourself. Gosh, why are you humans so confusing?”, saying this she picks up the ice cream bucket and walks back straight inside the room.
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After a few days…
The night has already fallen and is about reach its peak. Sanskaar lies down on his bed and just as he is about to slip into his dreamland he feels something, or precisely someone, poking his arm…!! As soon as he opens his eyes, he literally jumps out of his bed in horror…!!
“What the hell…?!! Why are you shinning…??”, Sanskaar asks Swara moving as far as possible away from her, trying to confine himself in the farthest corner of his bed, seeing her entire body shining so brightly that it could be blinding if looked at without blinking even for once…!! Her eyes twinkling just like a five year old child who got his favorite candy, most beautiful of all the beautiful smiles playing on her lips and her silky long hairs now have a silver glow. She smiles looking at him before asking, “What was that in there which looked like ice and cream but was different from last time…??”
“No seriously, why are you shining…??”, Sanskaar is still pretty shocked seeing her. Swara rolls her eyes seeing his expressions, “I’m a Star, Pretty Boy. Shining is what we are supposed to do.”
“Yeah right…!! How can I forget that my dream has recently changed into a nightmare…!! But what are you doing here…??”, he asks her trying to calm his rapid heartbeat.
“What was that…??”, her excitement is back within the fraction of a second.
Sanskaar looks at her giving a genuinely confused look before realizing what she is asking, “Aah that…!! It was Vanilla Choco chip ice cream.”
“Vanilla Choc… Choc… what…?!!”
“Vanilla Choco Chip…!!”, Sanskaar smiles looking at her cute efforts for pronouncing the flavor. “I like it. I want more…!!”, Swara immediately jumps on the bed sitting just in front of him.
“But I spent all my money in stuffing your face with those different flavors. I don’t have anymore.”
“Then make some money for me”, Swara orders leaning towards him. Sanskaar feels like banging his head against the headboard but soon drops the idea as it would cost him extra money and all in all it would be his loss only.
“We don’t make money. We earn it”, Sanskaar makes a futile attempt of making her understand but soon the boulder hits him back. “Then earn some money”, Swara orders him like a princess.
“Great…!! I will go and earn tomorrow alright. Let me sleep for now”, saying this Sanskaar tries to sleep again but Swara insists on having the same flavored ice cream then and there only, literally dragging him down from the bed…!!
“Aahhh…!! Go away”, Sanskaar screams jumping back on the bed and putting a pillow on his head closing his eyes. But as he opens his eyes again he finds Swara holding her palm next to her ear. “What are you doing?”, Sanskaar asks her.
“I’m calling God to tell him that you want me to go away.”
“No wait…!!”, Sanskaar shouts pulling her hand away from her ear but shouts again, “Damn…!! Why…?!! Why are these buttons on your palm…?!!”
Swara pulls her hand away from his hold, “We have a technology much advanced from you all. We don’t need to carry all those numerous gadgets with us like you humans. So, are you getting me ice and cream then…??”
Sanskaar looks at her and then thinks about the last hundred rupees note lying in his pocket before deciding, “Let’s go. Looks like I’m going back to work from tomorrow onwards.”
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Sanskaar takes Swara to an ice cream parlor and gets pretty surprised seeing a few people there even though it’s almost midnight. Getting her the desired flavor Sanskaar turns towards the cashier to pay but as he looks back at her, he gets the shock of his life as the tips of her hair start shining again. Sanskaar immediately runs and stands right behind her trying to hide her hair with his chest.
“Swara…!! Stop…!! Stop…!! Stop…!! For heaven’s sake, stop shining”, he whispers in her ear.
Swara could feel her feelings going haywire and her heart beating crazily as she feels the warmth of Sanskaar’s chest against her back, “I can’t help it…!! I shine even more whenever I get happy.”
“Do stars, too, get happy and angry…?!!”
“Why…?!! Do you humans have the copyright of emotions…?!! You can’t even imagine what happens when a Star gets angry…!!”, she glares at him narrowing her brows.
Sanskaar surrenders, “Alright…!! My mistake…!! But stop getting happy.”
“I can’t do that either, Pretty Boy”, Swara replies still concentrating more on her ice cream.
“Stop calling me Pretty Boy…!! I have a name…!! Why can’t you call me Sanskaar…?!!”, he asks her wishing to hear his name once in her voice.
“Nope…!! Pretty Boy suits you more”, Swara chuckles enjoying another bite of her ice cream.
“Alright, then let’s get out of here first”, saying this he wraps his arms around her and runs outside. But as it is said that ‘a house built on a hill can’t be hidden’, much the same way ‘is a human capable enough of hiding a shining star’…?!! No, right…?!!
And that’s when Sanskaar’s biggest enemy, Pratyaksh, who happens to be an insane scientist cum researcher with just only one evil desire of ruling the whole world, notices them and smirks looking at his minions, “Looks like Mr. Good for Nothing has got something really precious in his hand. Don’t you think that every precious thing in this world should belong to me”, saying this he laughs looking at their retreating figure.
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It’s almost the end of two months and during this while both of them have come pretty close. Even though, Sanskaar couldn’t name what he feels for her but somewhere down in his heart, secluded in the farthest and darkest corner, is a wish that, someway or the other if he could stop her from going back. But neither he couldn’t bring up the courage of asking her nor he is sure whether he has won her heart or not.
Above all this, one thing that he wanted most is to hear his name in her voice, no matter if it’s for only once. Yup…!! She still calls him ‘Pretty Boy’ only, saying that it suits him more than any other name.
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It’s Swara’s last day on Earth but still Sanskaar is unsure of what her decision would be. He is debating with his inner self only whether to ask her to stay or not, when the doorbell of his apartment rings.
Thinking who could be it, he opens the door but gets shocked on seeing Pratyaksh smirking at him. Sanskaar tries to close the door back again, not because the person standing at the doorstep is his enemy but because of the fact that he is perfectly capable of hurting Swara and in no manner Sanskaar could put her any sort of danger.
But before he could close the door, Pratyaksh and his minions push the door open, making their way inside.
Pratyaksh smirks looking at him and sits on the couch, “My…!! My…!! Look how hard he is trying…!! I told you that he has something precious…!!”
Sanskaar fumes out of anger seeing him talking about Swara, “I don’t think you are invited here Pratyaksh.”
Throwing his arms on either side of the couch, Pratyaksh makes a fake sad face, “Now…!! Now…!! Is this a way to greet your long time college friend…??”
“As far as I remember, we have never been friends”, Sanskaar replies back.
Hearing all the commotion and sounds, Swara comes out of the room. Pratyaksh looks at her and exclaims in fake excitement, “Look…!! She is here herself…!!”
He gets up to go towards her but Sanskaar shouts, “Don’t you dare touch my girl…!!”
“I don’t think she is a girl, Mr. Maheshwari. Normally, girls in our world don’t shine, do they…??”
Sanskaar gulps audibly but tries to maintain his calm, “I have no idea what you are talking about…!!”
“Yeah…!! Right, right…!! How can I forget that your little brain went out on a vacation long ago and has now refused to come back”, Pratyaksh smirks and stands stuffing his hand in his jeans pocket, “Okay…!! Let me make it easier for you by coming straight to the point. I have an offer for you…!! I know that… she is not a girl, Sanskaar. I want you to give her to me, so that I can find out what exactly she is and for that I can give you whatever you want.”
Sanskaar scoffs at him, “Not even in your dreams. Unless and until I’m alive, I won’t let you lay a single finger on her.”
“Then how about we finish you first”, saying this he takes out his gun pointing it towards Sanskaar, but the next moment something changes his mind and he removes the gun back saying, “Tsk…!! If I’ll kill you then I’ll lose my dearest enemy. And for sure you’re not going to tell me whatever I need to know. Then how about I confirm it myself…?!! If she is a girl then I’m sorry well in advance for what’s going to happen; and if she’s not then I don’t think so that anything will happen to her”, saying this he points the gun towards Swara.
Before she could understand what’s going on, the trigger is pushed and the bullet hits Sanskaar as he runs and takes the bullet on him instead trying to save her…!!
“Sanskaaarrr…!!”, and there she says his name for the first time in last two months as he falls unconscious in her arms but not before giving her a small smile.
“It’s… beautiful…!!”, Sanskaar says in between his breaking voice.
“What…?!!”, Swara couldn’t believe everything as a lone year escapes her eyes.
“Hearing my name… in your… voice… It’s beautiful”, saying this he closes his eyes falling unconscious completely.
Swara looks at the almost lifeless body of Sanskaar in her arms and then at the people standing in the apartment. Never in the four thousand years of her life, she felt such a pain that she is feeling right now seeing Sanskaar in such a condition.
Lying his body on the floor cautiously, she covers him with an invisible layer. And no sooner see does this her anger bursts out. Her entire body, even her eyes start turning red and her hair start growing longer emitting flames. Everyone standing in the room gets horrified because that’s something they could have never imagined.
“Now see, this is what happens when a Star gets angry…!!” Soon, all of them could feel their skin and flesh burning and could see their end approaching towards them. So, in order to save their lives, they all jump out of the already open window…!!
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A few hours later, Sanskaar is still lying unconscious in the emergency ward of the hospital whereas Swara is sitting on a chair holding his hand and resting her head against the side of the bed. All of a sudden everyone else in the hospital other than Swara, falls asleep as a huge ball of light shines above Swara and Sanskaar…!! Swara raises her head whereas Sanskaar is still unconscious.
“Scintillate…!! It’s time for you to return to your own world…!!”
“But how can I leave him in such a condition and I think I like Swara more than Scintillate now, Big Boss…!!”
“Looks like you have made a decision. But you know that if you are going to live on Earth slowly and slowly you’ll also start becoming vulnerable just like humans. You’ll also get hurt and feel pain besides having all your powers.”
“If he is with me, I think I can overcome all”, says Swara tightening her grip on Sanskaar’s palm.
“Do you think that you can tolerate him for that long…?!!”, asks God in a humorous way.
Swara gives a small laugh and says, “I think it’s the other way around, Big Boss…!! And you are worried about that…?!! Whereas I’m worried about all the ice and creams of this world…!!”
A streak of light falls on Swara’s head as if giving her a blessing, “Bless you, my child…!! You fulfilled the purpose for which you were sent. You actually knocked some sense in this person. And remember, you can return back whenever you want.”
Saying this the light ball vanishes once and for all…!!
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After a few days both Swara and Sanskaar are standing in his apartment looking at the Stars…!!
“Why didn’t you go back…?!!”, Sanskaar asks her curiously.
“Because I couldn’t leave you in such a condition…!!”
Sanskaar smiles and looks at her, “So, that means I succeeded in winning your heart…!!”
“Maybe…!!”
“Don’t I deserve a prize. I did something almost next to impossible”, says Sanskaar giving her a naughty smile.
“What do you want…?!!”
“This”, saying this he pulls her lips in a soft tender kiss. In a flicker Swara’s eyes widen and she could feel her heart beating at a rate of a hundred light years per second, threatening to break out of her rib cage anytime, and she shines the way she never did before…!!
Sanskaar pulls back and looks at her. “What was that…?? I’ve never felt this way before”, she asks him with an expression which could be called a mix of shock and amazement.
Sanskaar shrugs his shoulder, “I don’t know about your Kingdom of Sparky Skies but in our world we call it a kiss…!!”
Swara, “So, this is what a kiss is…?!! I heard some stars talking about this back at our kingdom and I always used to wonder how it would feel having…”
“God, you talk so much”, Sanskaar pulls her back again for another kiss but soon she pulls back and glares at him, “You started complaining again.”
“No…!! No…!! No…!! I’m not complaining…!! In fact, I love the way things are going in my life. So, since from now on you are going to live here only, I need to get some work for earning money.”
“I have an idea”, Swara exclaims almost immediately.
“What…?!!”
“How about we start selling the ice and cream thing…?!!”
Sanskaar face palms himself, “Oh God…!! Ice cream…?!! Not again…!!”, saying this he runs inside his room.
“Ohoo wait…!! I have even a better idea…!! Why don’t we start inventing new flavors…?!! You’ll make them and I’ll taste to tell whether they are good or not…!! Wait, Pretty Boy”, saying this she, too, runs after him inside the room…!!
Sanskaar jumps on the bed trying to sleep but Swara pulls him down from the bed. Sanskaar screams due to the sudden shock, “What the hell are you trying to do…?!!”
“First tell me how was my idea…!! Fantastic, right…?!!”, asks Swara excitedly. “Absolutely not”, Sanskaar replies almost immediately, “Seriously, there are so many other things in this world. Why can’t you eat them…?!!”
Swara makes an almost sulky face, “But I’m your responsibility. You need to feed me. I stayed back just for you.”
“Exactly there was no need of that. Your Big Boss should have taken you back. It’s all his fault…!!”
Swara shouts back, “Actually, it is His fault, he shouldn’t have sent me in the first place.”
There on the other side, up in the heaven God finally feels himself at peace and tries to get some rest. But His entire kingdom turns upside down when the cusses and accusations begin all over again; and that too getting doubled this time. And when He could not tolerate anymore, God decides to intervene in the matter Himself by going down to Earth.
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God: What are you both trying to do…?!!
Swara: It’s all your fault Big Boss…!! Why did you send me here…?!!
God: But he only asked for you…!!
Swara: But you could have sent someone else. He wouldn’t have even known the difference.
Sanskaar: Oh hoo…!! Look at these two…!! Planning to cheat me…!! It’s your fault, why didn’t you take her back.
God: But she only wanted to stay back for you…!!
Sanskaar: Is she the boss or you…?!!
God: I really wonder…!!
Swara: But I really like ice and cream.
Sanskaar: Ughh…!! First of all, it’s ice cream…!! It’s one thing…!! Only one thing…!!
He turns to look at God…
God: Now, why are you looking at me…?!!
Sanskaar: Remove all the ice creams of the world…!!
God: But…
Swara: (shouts almost immediately) No, Big Boss…!!
Sanskaar: Shut up…!!
Swara: You shut up…!!
God: At least listen to me…!!
SwaSan: (together) No…!! It was all your fault…!!
~°~°~°~
God literally slaps his forehead for committing such a grave mistake of bringing them together…
God: (to himself) Now…!! Will this fight ever have any end…??! Umm… I don’t think so…!! Ha ha…!! Looks like not only me but the entire world has to bear these two like this only…!! Forever…!! Because one thing for sure, these two are going to unfurl an ‘Eternal Love Story’. It’s always said that ‘The most beautiful love story is the one you expect the least’ and the love story of a human and a star… can anyone expect that…?!! No, right…?!! ??
====== THE END ======
Disclaimer: This story has been drafted purely with an intention of entertainment. The entire conversation between God and the lead characters is just for the purpose of creating a humorous situation and not for hurting anyone’s belief or trust. So, if in any case someone feels hurt, then please forgive me…!!
A/N
Hii everyone…!! So, this was my new OS…!! I know I’m not that good in writing when it comes to one shots and this might be the king of all the weirdest Swasan stories you might have ever read but I thought of writing something new and refreshing this time that’s why I have used a combination of Fantasy, Romance and Comedy genre. I, myself, am not very sure whether you all liked it or not but thanks for giving this story a try…!! It really means a lot to me…!!
Stars have always been a fascinating topic for me ever since my childhood. A few days back while resting on the terrace of my house and gazing at the stars, I got this idea.
I hope I was able to do justice with the theme and that you all enjoyed reading this ‘Triple Tadka Experiment’ of mine…!! Do tell me what do you feel about the story…!! Appreciations and healthy criticism both are equally invited but this definitely doesn’t mean I’ll tolerate any sort of bashing against my story as I worked pretty hard on this concept and I definitely hate it when anyone copies my work…!! So, I suggest we avoid that also…!! Let’s keep the conversation healthy and fruitful…!!
Love you all…!! Stay blessed and happy reading…!!
– Stella
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nice dear
Thank you so much Sri… ??
Awsm one Stella no words to describe wat u HV written
Thanks a lot helina…!! I’m glad you liked it… ??
Gdmrnng Stella dea
n may god bless u.n keep it up.n am new here so don’t knw any1
and the os is mind blowing
Good morning Isabella…!!
First of all, since you are new here…!! Welcome to TU..!! Thanks for your wishes and I’m glad you liked the OS… ??
awesome ??and very different..
Thanks a lot dear…!! I’m glad you liked it… ??
YOU ARE UNBELIEVABLE DI.
I CAN’T JUST BELIVE WHAT I HAVE READ.
WHAT A STORY…
I COULD HAVE NEVER IMAGINED SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY.
YOUR TRIPLE TADKA EXPERIMENT IS THE KING OF ALL ONE SHOTS.
WOW YAAR ! I AM VERY HAPPY BUT CAN’T SHINE LIKE SCINTELLITE AKA SWARA.
Thank you so much dear..!! That was really very sweet of you…!!
I’m glad that my story was able to make you that happy..!! Stay blessed and loads of love… ?❤️
Wow yaar its awesome I loved it.I don’t have words to describe this story. U r really a great writer.love ❤ u yaar
Thank you so much AbrahamEzra for the love and appreciations…!! I’m glad you liked my story…!!
Loads of love… ?❤️
awesome
Thanks a lot anu… ??
Hello stella di good morning
And coming to the story it was simply fab marvelous awesome ans superb
Usually i dont read swsan os but dont know why i was attaracted towards this one and it was simply funny sweet and cute
Hii IQRA…!! Thanks for reading my story even when you don’t read Swasan os…!! I feel honored and I’m glad that you liked it…!!
Stay blessed and loads of love… ?
its an awesome,amazing, mindblowing, fantabulous os stella concept was different from all other OS.Love u soo much stay blessed.
Thanks a lot Firdose…!! I’m glad you liked it…!! That really means a lot… ??
Awesome
Thank you so much Simi… ??
stella???loved it dear…all the best for competition
Thank you so much dear for the wishes and I’m glad that you liked it… ??
The concept salute… Thinking capacity salute…. Kuddos to u my dear….this was the concept none can think or write ..hats off to u….
Amazing story line… Loved it ??????
Just wanna knw when will u update mitwa…
N Ha read ur interview… Was just fab ❤❤❤
Areyy baap re.. Itni tareef… ??
Ha ha…!! Thank you so much darling…!! To be honest, I was expecting you all to greet me with all the rotten eggs and tomatoes for coming up with such a childish concept… ?? but thanks for giving this story ur time and I’m glad you liked it…!!
I’ll be posting MITWAA by Friday or by Saturday…!! Actually, I have my exam on 7th may, so, need to prepare for that too…!!
Di ideas aur unke beautiful execution ki chalti phirti dukaan ho aap…
Honestly speaking Di this was such a cute story…
One can never even imagine a cute si love story of a heavenly body and a human…. Well I loved it a lot Di..
Awesome Dii… Love uh
Take care???
Thank God…!! Finally my name changed…!! Otherwise till date I was known as Pagalpanti ki chalti firti dukaan for cracking the silliest of the silly jokes amongst my frnds…!! ??
I’m glad you liked it Shreeyu…!! Loads of love dear…!! Take care… ?❤️
Hain u crack jokes also… Obviously, u do afterall Mitwaa ka Sanskar aapka hi toh creation hai..?
Huh but u always talk with me in a serious manner… ???? *pout
Ha ha… Maybe I was trying to build an aura of being elder to you…!! ??
Warna mere jokes se toh achcha khaasa insaan behosh ho jaye… ???
Huh…. Very bad Dii… M upset with u..? Dii Dii na rahi
Aww…!! Don’t worry sweetie…!! I’ll always be your di… ?? (don’t forget even though it was by accident but u are the only one of my readers who has seen my awards… ??)
It’s simply awesome dear…very beautifully written. Totally loved it. All the best for the competition.. 🙂
Thank you so much dear for your love and appreciations…!! I’m glad you liked it… ??
Also, a special thanks to you for informing me about this competition or else I wasn’t even planning to write an OS before completing MITWAA..!! So, if this story is here, then it’s all bcoz of you… ??❤️
Awww…that’s so sweet of you dear.. 🙂 n there’s no need to thank me…It’s all because of ur amazing stories that I like your work that much that I want a OS from you too. Keep rocking like this… 🙂 <3
That really means a lot dear…!! Thanks for trusting me and my writing skills… ??
Again thanks… Hahaha…enough of thanks haan..!!! Just keep writing n keep entertaining.. That’s what we wish.. 🙂 stay blessed n keep smiling… 🙂
nice dear
Thank you so much liza… ??
Thanks alot dea.may god bless u
No need of any thanks dear…!! We are glad to have you here… ?❤️
omg such an awesome story dear
no words really
Thanks a lot Sus…!! I’m glad you liked it…. ??
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Definitely this was weird and very, very, very different
It just flushed all the science that we have ever learnt done the toilet but this was fantastic
I was soooooooooooo fantasized
I’m grinning like a maniac and wish it was all true
This was sooooooooooooo cute
Only you could pull this off
That thing about human desires and water is true
And bechara God
“As soon as his butt kisses ‘Good morning’ to the floor of his room”- This has made me laugh like mad
My God, this is the best way I have ever seen someone describe falling on the ground
I’m still laughing hahahhahahhahahhahahahhahahhahhahahhahahahhahhahahhahahhaha
All the best for your exam
Good luck
Take care
The inerview was awesome di
*interview
Thank you so much Myna…!! Well, so bad of me murdering all the science theories being a science student myself…!! But actually that’s what the plan was… ??
I’m glad you liked the story…!!
Thanks for your wishes…!! Loads of love for you sisso… ❤️❤️
Stella…..!!!!! Muuhhhh ????????loved it dear….!!!!!! Awesome blossom…….!!!!!!! Don’t know from where you get such ideas….????? But because of those ideas we get beautiful stories from you…..!!!!!! So I thank those ideas…..!!!!!!!!Do continue soon with mitwa….. Will be waiting…..!!!!!! And all the best for your exam dear…..!!!!!!
Thank you so much Deeksha…!! I’m glad you liked it dear…!!
I’ll be posting MITWAA soon…!! Maybe by Friday or Saturday…!! But I’ll try to get it done by Friday…!! Thanks for waiting and for your support… ??
Is this Miss Garuna Singh?
No? Say good bye to her from my side, and send her all my love, because I am dead after reading this.?
Present Ma’am… ??
And good bye’s not accepted…!! So, come back soon as after this you have to read the next episode of MITWAA also… ??
MITWAA!?
Arey! How can you post MITWAA without me commenting!! See, I am alive again!!??
Exactly…!! That’s what I was saying… ??
Beautiiifullllll, Amazingggg, Fantasticcccc and Aur kya kya kahoo Stella diduuu. Wah kya baaat hai. Such an amazing concept which is a been beautifully painted into words by you and the story of a star is been written by a star itself. The star of writing Aur plus point is ki naam bhi Stella which means a star. Star, star all around me ???. Chalo ab baari aayi review ki. Kahan se shuru karun. The starting was simple and I agree human desires and water none of them could ever have a end then it comes about our hero Sanskaar well he really is a unique creation of God and the way he complained about everything and balmes God had it’s own humour and uski is chik sae God has to meet his unique creation and then their nokh jokh was worth a read and laugh and then he wishes for the Star and then comes the entry of our Swara or we can say as Scintillate and the way she kicked Sanskaar and his butt kissed the floor Good Morning was amazing and usko paste hi I bursted into laughters and bechara hamara Sanskaar and then unki nokh jokh bhari cconversation and Swara having confusion and an overdose cuteness in the ice cream scene and her changing ice cream into ice and creame. Bechara Sanskaar kahan phas gaya and then the scene of their night moment and our Swara shining bright as a star and their conversation was a overdose of Awwweeee and that evil Pratyaksh made me angry that insane guy. Ab aayi baari the end of the 2 months and Sanskaar’s desire of hearing his name from Swara’s mouth and then the entry of Pratyaksh and his minions and how dare he think of having Swara. That idiot and our Sanskaar saved our Swara and Jake baad Swara ka gussa was really heart dropping. Sanskaar was now in hospital and then she is asked whether to stay or come and yippeeee she choose to stay and then then their kiss and it was really so beautiful Aur uske baad phirse unki nokh jokh about Swara’s out of the world idea and our then the trios nokh jokh ki baat hi kuch Aur hai and God ne sahi kaha who could have thought a love story of a star and human. A perfect triple tadka of fantasy, romance and comedy and han it’s weird but everyone in the world is weird and that’s y we are human because we rae weird haina. It was a really cherishing story.
Your review girl,
Andrea ( Ruroco )
Yeahhh…!! My official review partner is here…!! ??
Thanks so much dear for coming here and commenting on my story…!! It really means a lot…!!
Sometimes after reading ur reviews, I feel like : ‘Was it really that good or is the review better’…!! Thanks for making me feel special with ur reviews…!!
Loads of love… ??❤️❤️
Your Welcome diduuu and I am ur review girl to review dena is my duty. Agar mujhe uske liye kahi bhi jaana pade because ye review girl loves ur story and loves to giver her review on it but aaj kal I am kind of irregular and han sorry for taht but this one needed a dhamakedaar review????? and I know ki my reviews are awesome because the story is awesome and aap pehele se hi special ho mai kaha aapko special feel karwa sakti hun to a already really special peeson but I am happy ki my reviews do ??.
Lots Of Love to you diduu ???
Now what to say??????simply amazing and a very different and awesome story with mind blogging writing and I’m short of words. …
Thank you so much Praju…!! I’m glad you liked it… ??
OMGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!
DIIIII!
U rocked it yaaar !!!
I read it after I came after giving my maths exam. And was sooooo refreshing !!!!
What a beautiful and unique story
No words to describe!!#!
Sorry can’t able to give long comment
It’s okay dear…!! That’s enough that you found it worthy of ur comment…!! Length doesn’t matter… ??
Thank you so much for your love and appreciations…!! It really means a lot to me…!!
And I hope ur maths exam went well…!!
I can’t help but ask as maths is my favorite subject… ??
Same here I loveeeee
maths !!!
And yes it went really really awesome
Pleaseeeeeee post your stories on tu as I love ❤️ them and I don’t have a Facebook account ?? and my mom doesn’t approve of me reading but since I love ❤️ your stories soooo much I manage to read them ….. pleaseeeee if it is possible anyhow
That was really sweet of you Shanaya…!! I’m glad you like my stories..!! ??
And I already post all my stories on TU too…!! Right now, my ongoing ff is MITWAA – LOVE WILL FIND A WAY…!! ??
Omg..such a wonderfull amazing concept..by readng 1st part i thought god will give him some power like we seen in films..but its an entirely diff..concept..
story of a star and a human..fantastic story superb combination of fantasy+comedy+romance..
And d way u write is just superb..
Scintillate is such a nice name..
Scintillate to swara..vow nice..loved it alot
Thank u for writing such a good story on our lovely heavenly couple swasan..
When sanky said ice cream swaraz reply was superb. Why wld u scream???i m not dng anythg..Ice and cream..hahahahhagah dat was d most unique thng dat i read ever…
Its soo beautifull to see when swara shine at ni8..its soo beautifull to see right???
While reading this i reach an entirely diff wrld where only lazy sanky ,shining swara and god present..its sooooooooooooooooooooo beautifully written..d way of ur writng style is superb..
It is my most loved fantasy story that i ever had read…
I rarely book mark d stories i read..but surly i m gng to bookmark dis stry..dat much i loved this story..
Plz write more stories on swasan
And post swasan mannat plzzz..
U wrote dis beautifull stry for os competition..if yes all d bst..nd i pray for u..
Love u
LOVE SWASAN
LOVE CUTIE HELLU..
Thanks a lot ami…!! I’m glad that you found this story so good and liked its concept…!! It really means a lot to me… ??
Thank you so much for taking out time and reading this story…!! And yes, I have written it for the competition…!! ??
But I think you are mistaking me for someone else as mannat is not my ff…!! Right now, my ongoing ff is MITWAA – LOVE WILL FIND A WAY…!! ??
really awesome???
Thank you so much kat…!! I’m glad you liked it… ??
Hi Stella. I m ur big fan. But this is first time I m commenting on ur work. Sooooooo sorry for that Stella.
OMG!! MINDBLOWING….OUTSTANDING OS…. HATS OFF TO U DEAR! Its fantabulously fantastic fantasy os……….
I m ur big fan dear. Ur ff TMRDH is one of my favourite ff forever. Its really close to my heart. But I never commented on ur ff. I m very very sorry dear. That time I m a silent reader. I guess YOU ARE MY DESTINY also ur ff, am I right dear?? But why do u stop that ff?? I loved that ff, that is different n interesting ff. You know what I always book marked ur works. Even I book marked ‘you are my destiny’ also. I really miss that ff dear. And MITWAA from the beginning I don’t know that mitwaa is ur ff. I missed many chapters then only I realised this ff is urs. Now I started to reading mitwaa also I completed 19 parts. Hope soon I completes prev parts and then able to comment ur next part.
Hii Gayathri…!! Thanks for the love and appreciations dear…!! I’m glad you liked my story… ??
And no need to be sorry for not commenting…!! I can understand…!! That’s enough that at least you liked TMRDH…!! The main motive of that story was to reach out to the reader’s heart… ??
And yes YOU ARE MY DESTINY is my ff…!! I haven’t actually stopped it, instead it’s on hold…!! After I complete MITWAA, I’ll be resuming it all over again with a few changes…!! I’ll be posting it from starting with a different title… DESTINY – THE THREAD THAT BINDS…!!
I’m glad you have liked MITWAA so far…!! I’ll be waiting for ur feedback and comment on it also… ??
Stay blessed and loads of love… ??❤️
Yippeee….. I happy for YOU ARE MY DESTINY will be back with new title!
And yes I will definitely comment on MITWAA.
Hi. Pehechana? No na(sulky face) ha ha ha. Excellent os. When one of the best writer cum gold medalist in human behaviour is writing a story so dat will b awesome as always. Total galaxy(our swasan world) is vry happy wid ur writing skill. Really star is always star. No need of introduction. I love the most 1st scene of d story. Complaing abt everythng. Lyk seriously? N end ice and cream. Really vry difficult to understand ice and cream. its 1 or two thing???????
Bt i have 1 wish pls update little princess n beautiful relation sn.
Hii Swarna…!! Thanks for the appreciations dear…!! But you are mistaking me for someone else…!! The writer of little Princess and beautiful relation is rini_Stella but I’m Stella… Writer of TUJHH MEIN RAB DIKHTA HAI and MITWAA – LOVE WILL FIND A WAY…!! We two are two different people…!! I guess she used to write with the pen name ‘rini’ but she changed it to rini_stella later that’s why you people are getting confused between us… ??
Hhhuuh garuna u 4got me? Hhuhh m sad vry sad bcoz u told me ur ffs name which i never expected. I admire u unknowingly 4m ur first ever ff mileya mileya. I read ur each n every ffs n os. Bt u thought i dnt know u. When u got gold medal u won’t blv i was literally jumping in my house. I have remembered ur every post. Ur outing to grand papa’s sickness. I love d most Renuka n u nt as a writer bt as a gd human being. I just thought u n rini stella both r same person. Sry n thank u.
Oh God…!! I’m so so so sorry dear…!! I’m feeling really guilty of hurting you…!! Actually, many people have been confusing between me and rini…!!! So, that’s why I mistook you..!!
That was really very bad of me…!! Please forgive me taking it as my first and last mistake…!! I can’t even think of hurting any of you in my dream…!! I’m sooooooooo sorry…. ??
And yes one more thing…!! One more sorry for not thanking you before for all the love and appreciations you gave me…!! ??
So, thank you so much for appreciations me so much and for loving me and my work… ??
Sry i also didn’t mean to hurt u. Sry. Fault was mine. After reading ur story also i can’t recognise u. So i will try to bcm ur die heart fan truely. So dat i cn recognise ur ff without ur name. Sure. Sry also. I know u r also disheartned . Sry. Keep smiling n keep writing
Now, should we end this apologizing to each other…!! Let’s forget all and be frnds…!! And don’t think that I’m disheartened, the only thing that worries me is hurting any of you… ??
Thanks once again and loads of love… ❤️❤️
And I’m glad you liked the story and it’s concept… ??
Fantastic….. fabulous os…..Unique thought stella….u just nailed it????
Thanks a lot dear…!! I’m glad you found it unique… ??