Hello guys….
RECAP : intro of characters… Rudra’s dare to ANIKA….
ANIKA-no way I am going to that mansion.
GAURI-u guys know anika Didi is scared of ghosts.
ANIKA-thank u gauri.
GAURI-My pleasure.
RANVEER – then admit u SHARMA sisters are afraid.
ANIKA- ANIKA SHARMA and GAURI SHARMA ain’t afraid of anything. I ACCEPT THE CHALLENGE.
Gauri keeps her hand on anika’s shoulder. Anika looks on. Rudra jumps in happiness saying, ” I am going to meet on after one long year.”
ANIKA-om??? Wait let me take a wild guess. Is he ur second brother whom u rarely talk about?
RUDRA-Yes!!!
GAURI- What happened to him??
PRIYANKA- nothing happened to him. But the life has played a very cruel game with him. He rarely meets anyone. How on bhaiya was and how is he now. He has locked himself in a room. Never meeting anyone. We all feel very sad for him.
GAURI -What game has life played with him??
Ranveer starts saying, ” om is a sculptor by profession. He is second elder brother of rudra. He had a gf named riddhima. He used to love her a lot but she ditched him. Then a con girl named ishana came into his life and he started living again. But she to ditched him. On couldn’t take this much depression he started taking drugs.”
RUDRA-Kash we had taken him to a therapist.
When we knew on taking drugs we stopped him. Then problems in my mom and dad started to increase. On then had to engage swetlana.
ANIKA-now who is swetlana???
RUDRA- she is the root cause for the breakup between my mom and dad. Mom left the house and went. Dad started accusing o for snatching his happiness. We somehow found our mom and brought her back to home. Getting ditched twice, engagement to swetlana, prohibition from drugs, mom leaving house, dad accusing him, we didn’t realize how much pain and anger was in on. He started hating women. He locked himself in his room. For the past one year I haven’t talked to o. Hope he is fine.
Anika and gauri’s eyes were moist.??
RUDRA- OK just forget this. I will call saumya and ask her to make arrangements. Get ready tomorrow we r leaving.
The next evening they reach the village. A cool breeze blows. Anika smiles saying,” I am getting a good vibe.” A girl comes running.
GIRL-I am sorry. I was damn hungry so had to eat and come.
ANIKA- u haven’t changed saumya.
She hugs her.
SAUMYA – but y have u guys come here? I asked rudra but he wouldn’t budge to tell.
RUDRA -to visit the haunted mansion.
Saumya gets shocked. They all leave for the oberoi mansion. They reach the mansion. Rudra drops the bags on saumya’s foot and runs and hugs jhanvi. Saumya shouts. All laugh seeing this. They have a sweet reunion.
Guys I have finished. OK hey listen!! Actually I want ur true honest opinion towards my ff. I get a smile while read ur “nice” “update soon” etc… But I feel awesome happy when u guys tell ur opinions…. So please I need ur opinions… No matter if u don’t comment but I would love to get ur suggestion. So please … Love u guys….
13 Comments
No suggestion……..
Just perfect……..
Loved it yr…….
Post soon
Thank u
Gud but it will b nice if u give a little long update otherwise it is perfect
We don’t require suggestions for awesome FFS.
Awesome epi…nd ur ff is amazing…
I didn’t understand is Oberoi mansion the haunted Mansion?????
Anyway awesome update
Interesting story my friend. Wish you good luck. The topic is very interesting and I read this ff because of it.., great.., I have no words.. ? ??
It is interesting one dear..you connect your ff plot with the om situation is good…
Awesome…its going perfect…
Just waiting for next part
Great start! Your writing is quite enthalling. Waiting for the horror part to start and quite interested to see what turn this story is going to take.
Waiting for your next update! 🙂
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Awestruck!
Ohh man I loved it and it’s my opinion that let Anika make Om normal????
hey saashu….
this is amazing dear…
and what to tell u…
this is perfect dear…
I’m enjoying it a lot….
very interesting from my POV…