Hello my sweeties!!!! First of all a very big wala thank you to you all……guys one thing I wanna say that actually not I m not a very good writer but you all are a very great readers because if a reader can’t imagine the story then its of no use …….and you guys receive that very well and are very good at imagining!!!!! So a round of plause for my lovely readers!!!
Now this is my first OS as till now I have wrote only fs/ff but finally I tried for a OS and I will try to present my full story in this one shot !! This is only for u all….actually I was really crazy for writing but I fulfilled my interest with older stories …..now this is just for you!!! Also today ie 26 November is my little bro’s birthday!! So its a treat for you all.plz don’t skip seeing long one !
So let’s go………
This is Sanveer +Kanchi + Swaveer!!! Sanveer and swasan friends please once siding your fandom read this …….and if you all like it and commented I will surely write sanveer is if you all want!!! This is initially based on qismat os but with my touch …..hope you all will like!!
Now story starts-
A girl is seen sitting in a bus trying to call someone but it turns futile ….she is in full bridal attire!!!
Flashback-
Same girl is running for catching her bus which has started to move in pink kurta with white jeans her hairs are flying in air …..she is looking quite tensed……a boy in bus offers his hand…….she hold his hand and land on him eventually!!
Girl- thank you so much!!! If my bus would have been left than I would have been late for college!!
Boy- pleasure is mine!! BTW hello I am Veer malhotra!!
Girl- hello I m Sanchi mishra!!
Veer- oh Sanchi….even I am having my first day…..wait you are same Sanchi…savitri devi music school’s champion!!
Sanchi- well yaa!!
Veer- oh that’s great….so where you are going??
Sanchi- am going in MR University for my graduation!!
Veer- same pinch….I mean I m going there too!!
Sanchi- thank god now I won’t be feeling college like alien planet!!
Veer- same here!!
They talked for whole journey and came to know that they have really same likes and dislikes!!
Sanchi- hey …college came….thanks again for giving your hand!
Veer- won’t mind to give forever!!
Sanchi- trying to flirt??
Veer- well …..you aren’t flirt type girl…..you are a love type girl!!
Sanchi blushes!!
They go to college!!
In college-
Sanchi sits with a girl!
Girl- hello I m isha negi….future Bollywood star!!
Sanchi- hello ms superstar ….I m Sanchi! Friends??
Isha- for this I was waiting otherwise all other students are quite strange!!
Both laughs!!
Time passes on….Sanchi and veer came very close ……..they develop feelings for each other. Isha and Sanchi too became besties…..isha used to act as cupid for sanveer!
Result day-
all passed with good marks ……..sanchi was singing sensation of whole university!!
Veer takes Sanchi to a place ……….
It was a beautifully decorated place ……..(same as sdch)
Veer- Sanchi you have given me reason to smile …..reason to live ……..reason to care ……reason to be kind……..you have taught me meaning of life!! Will you be this reason forever?? Will you marry me??? I love you!!
Sanchi was in tears ……she was unable to speak!!!
Sanchi- I love you too veer!!
Both hugged each other!!!
Timeskips-
Veer- Sanchi I have to go to my home for few months….maa is really ill ……I won’t be able to talk you for few days!!
Sanchi- its OK veer ……maa comes first…….take her care!!
Veer kissed her on forehead and leaves!!
3 months later-
Sanchi and veer are unable to talk for the long span….
Sanchi’s pov- veer you went saying for few days….but it has been 3 months …..where are you?? But my love for you is same ….I know there would be some reason!!
Ashok(Sanchi’s Chachu/uncle) – Sanchi tomorrow you are having your marriage!
Sanchi- what??? But chachu I can’t?
Ashok- enough….I am not asking …I am ordering!
Sanchi- Chachu I can’t marry!
Khusboo(her aunt) – wah Ji wah!! We feed you …..nurtured you and you are saying us no!! We can’t hold your burden for more time!
Sanchi cries!!(don’t miss special scenes in b/w lyrics)
Qismat badaldi vekhi main
Ehhe jag badalda vekheya
Main badalde vekhe apne
Main Rabb badalda vekheya (x2)
Sab kujh badal gaya mera
Sab kujh badal gaya mera
Chal jar hi javangi
Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya
Main te…
Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya
Main te mar hi javangi (x3)
She tries to call veer!!
But no use.
On marriage day-
Some ladies are making sanchi ready as a bride but Sanchi’s face is pale…..
Ho qismat badaldi vekhi main
Ehhe jag badalda vekheya
Main badalde vekhe apne
Main Rabb badalda vekheya
Tu aakhri umeed meri
Tutt kite jaavin na
Lutti hoyi nu ve Jaani
Lutt kite jaavin na (x2)
Ladies- baraat came!!! All runs to see barat!!
Sanchi goes near window ….she is shocked to see the scenario!!
The groom is giving money bag to ashok!!!
Land slides under Sanchi’s feet!
Main jhooth badalda vekheya
Main sach badalda vekheya
Main badalde pathar vekhe ne
Main kach badalda vekheya
Sab kujh badal gaya mera
Sab kujh badal gaya mera
Chal jar hi javangi
Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya
Main te mar hi javangi (x2)
Sanchi- no I can’t be sold to someone……sorry Chachu but I have no other option.
Sanchi runs from window!!!
Fb ends!!
In present sanchi is sitting in bus trying to call veer!!
Driver- madam your station had come….
Sanchi comes outside of bus ….she moves toward veer’s home…
Je lod nahi ae hun meri
Mooh te mere bol ve
Maang na salhaan jaake
Par lokaan kol ve
Je dena ae te dil naal
Saath devin mera tu
Je rolna vi ae te fer
Changi tarah rol ve
Sanchi reaches malhotra mansion!!
Watchman is not allowing her to enter but she enters …..veer comes outside…
She hugs him tightly!!
Malhotra family comes outside …..an and separates them and takes veer inside ….
Sanchi too follows-
In house all are scolding veer while veer is trying to explain…. A girl in red saree with chura is standing near veer with her eyes rolled down!
Sanchi’s eye lands on a big photo frame which gives her thunderclap!
It was of veer and same girl written over-“veer weds swara”
Sanchi’s world stopped…..?????
Veer and swara came near her!!
Swara- sanchi ki please forgive me……..but I never want to take your place!
Veer- sanchi maa died…..her last wish was my and swara’s marriage…..
.I know I don’t deserve forgiveness……… But
Sanchi- happy married life……take care of swara….she is really sweet!!
Saying this she leaves!!
Main chann badalda vekheya
Taare badalde vekhe main
Haaye lod pehn te duniya ‘ch
Saare badalde vekhe main
Sanchi is walking aimlessly on road……..all people are staring at her cheaply!
Sab kujh badal gaya mera
Sab kujh badal gaya mera
Chal jar hi javangi
Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya
Main te mar hi javangi (x3)
She goes in a temple nearby and sits ……
She let her outburst and cries hardly and sits near a pole…….
A boy with guitar on his shoulder is standing near her….
Sanchi turns back!!
Boy- excuse me…….I know we are strangers but you are looking really upset…..it is said that if we share our pain with strangers it becomes less…….u can ….
Sanchi looks but turns again
Boy- hey I am not a bad guy who eyes girls …….and this is temple ……..I usually don’t visit but if I have visited today maybe so that I can be way to lessen your pain
Sanchi- my Chachu sold me ….my bf married someone else for a reason…….now I don’t know what to do……I want to die!!! She cries.
Boy- I think we are on same boat….
Sanchi- means??
Boy- I was a hit singer once……..in my childhood my maternal family raised me…but abused me ….I left house and tried my fortune in singing …..but after being superhit I flop due to one bad concert….thanks to contract and ill health ……my girlfriend whom I loved immensely ditched me…my maternal uncle and aunt forcefully did my. Sister marriage for business deal….and now I am running a small music studio trying to bring my colors again…..
Sanchi- aj dard ki dard se mulaqat hui hai…..ye dard milayega zaroor!!(today pain has met pain…this will lead definitely)
Boy- BTW I am kabir kapoor!!
Sanchi- I am sanchi Mishra.
Kabir- so now you have two options- situation se bhag lo ya situation me bhag lo( either run or participate)
Sanchi- I want to participate!!
Kabir- great!!
Sanchi- but how??
Kabir- if you won’t mind and as I Google you are a YouTube sensation …..will you try your luck in my studio…
Sanchi falls in deep thinking……
Kabir- hey no offend ……and you are free…..actually I need your voice……but if you feel awkward then its OK!!
Sanchi- you would be thinking that I am thinking about society ……..no kabir….I m ready…and now I have nothing to lose even…..
Kabir- friends?
Sanchi- friends!! Both shakes hands!!
After 1 week of long struggle….
Sanchi record a song in studio which is really greatly received by the music producers.
Kabir too tried once again his luck an this time he got fruitful results!
At night-
Kabir knocks door!!
Sanchi opens- kabir what are results?
Kabir looks sad and enters house….
Kabir- we are offered screening music of tu zaroori movie by karan johar?
Sanchi shouts in happiness-
All studio members hug each other…….
Kanchi hugs each other in excitement but later realises…..
Kabir- let’s have golgappa party!
Sanchi- you too likes…..veer…..she stops…her smile fades….
Kabir- OK we will eat like veer used to eat…same taste….
Sanchi- OK ……I will go and change.
Next day-
Kanchi recorded their first duet for theme of movie
In studio-
Aisa laga mujhe pehli dafaa
Tanha main ho gayi yaara
Ho.. aisa laga mujhe pehli dafaa
Tanha main ho gayi yaara
Hoon pareshan si main
Ab ye kehne ke liye
Tu zaroori sa hai mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
Ho.. tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko (sa hai mujhko)
zinda rehne ke liye (zinda rehne ke liye)
Aisa laga mujhe pehli dafaa
Tanha main ho gaya yaara
Hoon pareshan sa main
Ab ye kehne ke liye
Tu zaroori sa hai mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
Ho.. tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko (sa hai mujhko)
zinda rehne ke liye (zinda rehne ke liye..)
Dhadke aankhon mein dil mera
Jab qareeb aaun tere
Mm.. dekhoon main jab bhi aaina
Haan tu hi roobaroo rahe mere
Ishq ki mauj mein aa
Aaja behne ke liye
Tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
aa.. tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko (sa hai mujhko)
zinda rehne ke liye (zinda rehne ke liye)
Tu zaroori..
Maangu na koi aasmaan do sitaron ka jahaan
Banja tu mera humsafar na mujhe chahiye koi muqaam
Dil hi kaafi hai tera mere rehne ke liye
Tu zaroori sa hai mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
Ho.. tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
aa hai mujhko (sa hai mujhko)
zinda rehne.. (zinda rehne..)
Tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko
zinda rehne ke liye
Tu zaroori..
Studio was sorrounded by the loud claps and shouts of praising…..
Kj- omg kabir and sanchi you guys are brilliant…. So is your tuning……I loved it and I have decided that my movie’s full music will be yours!! And other members you arrange instruments and effects perfectly!!
All were so happy!!
Kj- hey meet my stars who will be filming your songs…..isha negi and dev dixit!
Sanchi- ishu!!
Isha- sanchi!!!
Both hugged each other….
Kj- gr8 you guys know each other……OK you all meet excuse me!!
Dev and kabir greeted each other.
Sanchi told whole story to isha!
Isha- sanchi past has gone ….now live your present!!
Sanchi smiles!
Time passes on ….kanchi completed movie music along with other supehit albums …duets and singles!
They both have established themeselves on top. Desha who were dating each other were aware of silent love developing in between kanchi but both were unaware of it.
Music launch day of tu zaroori-
Desha performed on music and kanchi gave live performance.
The music was superduper hit and so was the movie .
Movie success party!!
Isha- dev we should do something to make them realise …
Dev- about their feelings!! But how??
Isha- I have a plan.
Isha goes to kabir and flirts with him………..sanchi feels jealous….
Dev did same with sanchi …..kabir fumes….
Kabir- he was flirting with you and you were letting him…
Sanchi- like you were wearing rakhi from her na…
Kabir- what the hell…..
Sanchi- same here…..
Kabir- wait….why I am feeling bad?? Do whatever you want…he leaves
Sanchi- he is right ….why I am feeling bad?
Next day-
Kj calls the team again-(it has beenone year after kanchi’s met)
Kj- well after this much success of first movie of desha and music of kanchi I would like to make a second as well…..
All cheers….
As it was a short movie…….it finished within 6 months…
Kanchi were in love but didn’t wanted to accept
Dev- kabir how much long time you will take? Propose her!
Kabir- I loved disha and now……
Dev- you love sanchi ……..disha was your past ….your first love but sanchi is your true love …….your present …don’t lose her….
Kabir- you are right…….I will do it soon.
On other hand
Isha- sanchi veer was your past and he won’t come ……but you have to move on now….
Sanchi- isha …. You are right!
Some days later-
Kanchi were established singers of whole Bollywood as well as country!!
Kabir takes sanchi blindfold somewhere……
opens blindfold-
It was a beautiful big bungalow written kanchi mansion over it…..
There was a beautiful garden and a fountain in centre after the Outgate …..kanchi enters inside …it was beautifully decorated ……..
Kabir kneels on his knees-
Sanchi you are my lucky charm …….my sunshine in rainy and winter weather………my shade on sunny day……. beat of my heart……….my everything…… I want to make you mine forever….. Will you agree for kanchi forever?
Sanchi- for you I am your lucky charm but for me you are my not only lucky charm but my qismat! I want kanchi forever. I love you.
Kabir- I love you too.kabir picks her in his arms. Clapping sound comes. It was music studio team and desha .
Kanchi exchanged rings!!
After one week kanchi’s grand wedding held in Bollywood style …… Kanchi was given best couple title by all magazines of Mumbai and they were announced as lyrics and tune(Sur aur taal).
1 yr later-
Kanchi mansion
Kabir- sanchi do it fast ….we are getting late for Delhi …..we have to go to my sister’s baby name ceremony.
Sanchi- coming in 2 mins.
Kabir- which clock you have….means according to that 2 hrs is equals to 2 minutes.
Sanchi comes in red saree with black border looking ?????….kabir was mesmerized to see her but he himself was looking so dashing in black tuxedo.
Kabir- if you will look so amazing then I would think of second honeymoon instead of name ceremony.
Sanchi- flight will leave…..let’s go.
Scenes shifted to Delhi
Kanchi enters the house….
A couple was sitting in Pooja …
Priest tell which name would you like to give?
Couple- sanchi!!
The couple was swaveer ……sanchi was shocked ….same happened with swaveer.
Swara- kabir Bhai!
Kabir- shona!! Both hug each other.
Veer- sanchi!!
Kabir understood whole matter but didn’t react.
Swara- sanchiji meet junior sanchi!!
Sanchi hugs the baby and kissed her….baby smiles.
Kabir and veer greeted each other.
Veer- sanchi…..
Sanchi- veer don’t feel guilty ………..I am happy in my life….we were destined ….you have swara in ur destiny and I have kabir.
Veer- but we can be frnds¿
Sanchi- well yup but for my junior sanchi!
Swabir- oye we too are in this friend circle….
Veer- what say Jr sanchi?
Jr sanchi smiles.
Kabir- it means yes.
Four laughs.
At night-
Veer- swara thank you for always understanding me …….it is because of you that I am now a successful person and my life is full of happiness.
Swara- veer I got only kabir Bhai love but when he left home I got only bitter sayings……..but you fulfill all voids in my life.
Both hug each other.
Kanchi’s room-
Kabir was standing in balcony….
Sanchi- kabir!
Kabir- are sanchi !!! Are you OK?
Sanchi- I am fine perfectly……. Love you kabir!
Kabir- love you infinity….
Sanchi feels nostalgic… She runs to vomit…..
Kabir- sanchi!! Oh god …..I hope she is fine.
Sanchi comes outside..
Kabir- I am calling Dr ….you are so careless…..
Sanchi- OK golu’s golu papa.
Kabir- stop being funny……u r I’ll…..and….wa8t…what you said? That means…..
Sanchi smiles!!
Kabir pulls her and rotates.
Their happiness knew no bounds!
Sanchi- kabir this qismat is really strange na!!!
Kabir- but whatever happens is for good……..its all about qismat…….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????
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So guys done with it!! Please so comments for my 3 hrs hardworl….now my eyes are burning!! So bye bye. Pls comment!! Keep smiling!!!
19 Comments
Firstly wish ur small bro a veryy happy bday from my side….and today is my frnd’s bday also…..and tre OS padhne k baad mje lga hi nhi tu phli baar likh rhi h….i mean itnaaa achaaa tha ye…jitni tarif kru utni kam h….aur loved the bonding of all characters…..gn sd tc
Dear Abi, first of all happy birthday to your little brother. And about the ff, it was really nice. Though I missed pragya, it was ok. And the twist was really unexpected. Keep up the good work and do keep writing more os
Its was so amazing…… Awesome
So so beautiful and wonderful story abhi…………I love it so so nuch yaar……swaveer and kanchi are favorite pair thanks a lot yaar this outstanding and amazing story………love u dear…….
happy birthday to ur little bro
and this os is amazing fab mindblowing
loved it dear
Awesome one Abhi ??? well balanced ??? this reminded me of some other shows too. (Tu ashiqui & dil sambhal is zara) all 3 pairings are amazing dear!!! Loved It ???
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaamazing..
r u punjabi..this is the song and u gave a ver gud end to this..i m also a punjabi
U rock it again. Twist is mind blowing. U interlinked both the story in the end, it can only be imagined by a great writer like u. Ur 3hours hard work made my whole day. Luv u and to ur little bro also. Happy Birthday to ur little bro and dher Sara congrats to proud sister. Convey my heartiest blessing to him.
Wow! Fantastic.. No words to say. Beautiful Os.. Thanks a lot for accepting our request…. Thank you so so much… Take care….
wow wow wow abhi dear……..you nailed it yarrr…..superbb, mindblowing, fantastic….love it from bottom of my heart…..Abhi tu tere choote bhai ko meri tarf se khoob saarraa pyar dena..and yaa wish him happy birthday from my side…..enjoy dear…luv you…and thankyou for a great and sweet story….tc.
Hats off to this os.I just loved it to the core.??????
The way u described Sanveer nd Kaanchi’s first meeting is really appreciatable.
Especially the song in punjabi………took my heart?????
But dear i just want to ask a question………….when Saanchi was crying what Kabeer was doing in the temple with guitar.I mean who sings song or play guitar in Temple.Iknow it is one of the most silliest question par dimaag mein aaya toh pooch liya.
Luv u bahut saara???? nd don’t forget to wish ur brother ? Happy Birthday! from my side.
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Keep writting dear.????
Well dear Bhakti songs bhi to Gaa Sakta hai guitar le Kar. ?
This was amazing while reading i realised ots punjabi song qismat nd i thought that ur os might end as the song but you created a happy ending good one…..
It’s Fab dear. I liked the way you managed all the angles. Bye
Yaar abhi..it was damn brilliant and excellemt OS… YAAR TUNE TO KAMAL HI KAR DIYA…maaaazzzzzzaaaaaaa aa gaya.. and a warm bday wishes and blessings to ur younger brother..
Amaz ..mindblowing Os yaar..superb..kya kamaal dhamaal tha yaar ek os m kitne show ki yaad dila di..too gud..jo hua so hua..ant bhala to sab bhala..finally our kanchi meets..thats it…bye tc.post something new.one…lovv u???
Outstanding mindblowing perfect amazing u describes ot so perfectly the story was toooo gooooood
Abhi dear, kaha tha naa….100 se zyada aa jayega……..ab khud hi add karle….likes & comments ko………kya hua………hogaya naa………yaar, tu bekaar main hi tension le rahi thi……..teri jaisi khidkitod writer ke plot pe koi paagal hi comment nehi karega………..tu aise hi thodi meri inspiration bani……ek dum khidkitod, kamaal dhamaal bemisaal,superrrrrrrrrr se uparrrrrrrrr waala plot tha…….luv u meri pyaari si cute si witch……