Hi I just wanted to try this……..plzz do tell me if it is bore…
The Sun rose in the east filling the world with happiness and giving everyone a hope for a better tomorrow. The flowers in the garden smiled at the Sun’s rays falling over them. There was a cool breeze to wipe out the dark images of yesterday. Overall it was a pleasant morning. It was a kind of day when people preferred being out of doors, especially in the garden soaking their skins with Sun’s heat, rather than being indoors.
A house comes to our vision. It is something which catches our eye. With its well maintained garden filled with flowers of different colour, it has a certain charm. It reminds us that whatever dark phases you had in your life there is always a dandelion of new hope. Hope that our life will have a colorful phase.
Though the house filled our hearts with joy it did not radiate happiness. It has a window that opens to the beautiful garden. It is adorned with curtains in green (signifies hope). Peeking through the curtains that are now fluttering in the soft breeze we could see a young man in his mid twenties lying on the bed fast asleep unaware of the changes that happened around him. He has very handsome features and a face which you will not forget so easily. He is that handsome. But his face lacks happiness happiness and it reveals his agony. He has his eyes shut tight and he is tossing his head on the pillow trying to ward of the dream that had crept into his sleep. He had been seeing this for over a week now. Suddenly he woke from his slumber screaming: “ Radhika……………….”
So how is it?????? I thought to walk through the trodden path which Arjun took to get back his life Radhika………plzz tell me whether I should write more of it or should I stop here ??????
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Its nice, u should write more. ?
thanks a lot Mini………..
Hii my assthu……loved it…..u know even I wanted someone to show Arjun’s struggle to get Radhika back…..darling amazing plot….but I want rads to be rude…..i hope this z continued from the day rads left arjun… m I r8?????plz plz plz do update soon assthu….. Loads of love….tc???
Hey my cutie pie…….happy that you liked it……..Rads may not be rude…well I dont know….I’ll try to post as soon as I can…………
Thanks for the reply assthu…… Now tell me wen z the next one I can’t wait to praise my assthu again…… Love you dear…..
I don’t know dear………….but I’ll try to write and post sooon………..most of the times I simply waste my time by watching TV………that’s y I’m not regular…………love u dear……….
Aasthu..it is nice dear…u described morning perfectly..epozhm parayunnathu pole ee scenes okk really kanu nnathu pole thonni..waiting to see Arjun walk through d right path for his love..tc dear
thanks ammu chechi…………mrng scenes really kannunathu pole tonne enno paranjappol othiri santhoshamayi………………..love u….tc………..
Aasthukkutty..nk thonnunu resultnte karym orthu tnsn undenn…dont b tensd..ma lil sis..
chechike ariyilla ente avastha………….enikk pediyavunnu………..mark kuranju poyal enikke clgil admission kittila…….atorthe tension aakunnu…………..
Aasthu..i dont knw what 2 say…nthayalm nalla collgl thanne eng lit. Adm kittm..njanm inganok thannayrnu karuthyath..pne aasthu vnte writing style kanumbol aryam ethre talentd aanennu..
Thanks chechi…..ente result ennanu varunnath………………nallatanengil njan parayam………………and thanks for the comment on my writing style…………..love u……….
hey ammu chechi………….enikke 87 percent und………….happy aanu bt sad coz I din’t get the expected mark for maths ……athiu kuranathukond ente total percentagum kuranju……………pakshe physicsinu expect cheyatta mark kittiyatil othiri happy aanu……………..2 days njan evide undavilla……….njan oru resedetial coursenu pokuvanu………………..bye……………..love u………………thanks for the comforting words…………………..chechi padikunna clg etha ???tvmil aanenu ariyam bt name ???????? wich year ??????
Oh..congrats dear…its a nice percentge.nk 85 aayrunu.pinne doubl valuatn allayrno?reval uation kodukan pattila lo?degreeyk ernaklm clgs thanneyano udheshikunne?njn ippo 4th sem aanu..xams in june. Pls check fb dear if u can.
chechi ente msg ???????? njan fb chck cheythu……….
Aasthuu..nte msgs kittiyille?can you come online today after 6 pm.
Aasthu wow wow wow what a suprise but why so short it’s like putting a chocolate cake infront me and telling me not to eat it. I want more post soon my darling. Loads of love ????
well I din’t kow whether you guys would like it…..so I thought instead of boring you guys I would write a short one………….happy that you liked it……..you know what di ?? you put me in the clouds……love u…………….
I love u too my dear ???
Nice… Continue plz
thanks roshi……………
Yaar I am so sorry I wrote soshort comment… Actually it was midnight and my battery was just 2% lol…. And my charger is not at my bedside but i really wanted to comment …so just…
And lemme tell you I loved your narration !! If its first try then seriously loved it! Lookingforward 🙂
thanks Roshi………I’ve always loved to write narration coz its something whichI like and I think I’ve got some talent to write…………….and don’t be sorry for the short comment….short or big you had commented which itself is a great thing coz encouraging sme1 is really gud thing……………….love u…………TC……
My dearie… 🙂 🙂 thanks for being so genuine
Hi really nice. So yes u should continue. The way u described d morning was too gud. And I would love to c arjun s through ur eyes.
glad taht you liked the morning description………….I’ll continue………….
OmG!! You should definitely continue this story! It’s so beautiful and the way you narrated it is exceptional!! I’m your fan already! Plz update soon!
oh Jade , I’m very very happy reading ur comment…………I’ll try to post sooooooooon………..
I love it. Please continue
thanks Kavina………..I’ll continue…………
It’s really amazing dear 🙂 🙂 🙂 pls do cont 🙂 🙂
thanks suga…………..your comment pushes me to write more…………love u…………
Is this the same aasthu dear or another aastha…totally new pack…Arjun pain or in panic??? Or nothing like that m dreaming only…plz continue…update soon?
hey Rosie di…………its me……the same aasthu………………happy that you liked it………..well Arjun is in pain……….coz Rads went away……………..
Yes, please continue. 🙂
I’ll continue……..thanks for ur support………..
Wow aastha….good start…..go on buddy…..n dont stop….its a good 1
thanks chetta………..
Chetta means? Do you know ech other???
Roshi chetta means big bro…….and I personally don’t know him bt I know abt him through chats………
Ohh!!
Continue without any second thought!!
thanks di for ur unconditional support……………..
Hey aastthu dear..good start pls gohead…thanx another story…love u ..tc..all the best for good result…stay blessed..
thanks Susi.,……….
Please do continue dear
I will surely continue……………
Hey Aastha very nice thought….please continue…will love to read it …load of love 🙂
thank you di……………….happy that you would love to read it……….
Roshni iam sorry for replying..chetta is a malayalam term which means elder bro..
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sweetheart
the writing what u had started here is serene
totally I like the way you portrayed this story
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Nice character of arjun here dear
Lovely I never knew you write so awesome I loved it dear
do post next part keep smilijng aasthuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Once a friend always a friend
nishuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu I’m smiling now tension free for the first time this morning reading ur comment……………….coz tday my results r coming……..it was supposed to come yest bt they posponded it……………..I never tot you would comment………and I feel as if I’m in the clouds………………love u a lot and lot…………….ONCE A FRIEND ALWAYS A FRIEND………….
hey aasthu just get to know about ur writing so I came
as i said before Once a friend always a friend.
hey aasthu check enemies from childhood there also I gone and share my heart.
love u dear all the best for results and I am on cloud 10 that I can reach you now in your own home your own page
love u aasthu tight hugssssssssssssssssssssssssss keep smiling
Once a friend always a friend.
love u aasthuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
hey check enemies from childhood too
I got there to read and comment
love u aasthu and all the best for result
keep smiling
Once a friend always a friend
Omg ….nishaaaaaaaa. …where were you honeyyy????????…I missed you sooooo sooooo soooooooo muchhhhhh. ….how many msg I left for u….u haven’t replied to any of them….plz reply now n let me with you and aastha and alll my lovely friends. …I wrote a short story on my mom…My Super MOM – Happy Mothers Day (OS)….plzzzz read it n let me know your feedback. …here is the link…
https://www.tellyupdates.com/super-mom-happy-mothers-day-os/
Love you soooooooo muchhhhhh my sweeeeeethearttttt musical friend. …muaaaaahhhhhh lots of hugs n kissesssss. ..
hi di…………sorry for the late reply………I had gone to a class…………I have good results…..bt I’m sad that I din’t get the expected mark for maths…..but then agai happy that the mark I got for physics was unexpected………………….thanks for the wishes…………..I’m going for a residential class for 2 days……..so I wont update or be here for 2 days………………anyway I’m very happy that I got to chat with u after a long time………….di are you there on FB ??…………. love u……………….ONCE A FRIEND ALWAYS A FRIEND………………………….tc……………..
Awesome, wowwww lovely aastha….it’s very beautiful start …arjun’s struggle for rads very nice plot…n your narration MashaAllah. …very beautiful. …plzzzz continue dear. …I’ll be eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh 😉
thanks a lot di………..
It’s soooooooo awesome
thanks…………….