Here NILASH back with the next shot. Okk today be prepared before reading it because it contains a bit more of emotional torture today. So all the best. The link for the previous parts:
shot 1
shot 2
shot 3
shot 4
SHOT-5
“I don’t know why am I again drawing it, it’s twenty seventh picture of yours” Om said to himself when sketching out Gauri’s eye lashes he continued “hmm… can you imagine twenty six picture done in nine days….. you know whenever I sit down with the drawing pencil from nowhere your face appears in front of my eyes and I give it a shape”. He completed the picture and kept it aside. “You love her right?” Shivay asked. Om noticed Shivay was standing at the door and was listening to whatever he was speaking. “No.. nope… of.. off…course not” Om said with a stammer. “Hmm..” Shivay opened the Drawing book and continued “how many pages does it have?” Shivay questioned raising his one eyebrow “approximately I think around fifty” Om replied pressing his eyes “That means half of the pages are filled and you would have tore minimum of ten pages while drawing so you can make around ten more portraits of her in this” Shivay replied while counting the pages. “Ohh… Mr. Calculator Singh Oberoi…” “Anika… but why her voice is sounding like this?” Shivay asked to Om while Om pointed towards the door.
Shivay looked up and found Meghna standing at the door step. Shivay could not control his anger and threw the drawing book on floor and walked upto Meghna with full rage rather tadi “from where you listened the name?” Shivay asked. The anger was clearly visible on his face; his voice trembled “I asked from where you heard the name?” Shivay repeated the question. “I… actually…. I thought….”Meghna tried to explain but got cut “I am asking the same damn it” Shivay again asked banging his hand on the wall “You… you.. you were calculating…so.. so the name sriked… it just striked my brain” Meghna completed “Just never dare to call me by any other name” Shivay walked away from there pushing Meghna aside.
Om followed him and is stunned to see what he saw. “Shivay stop it” Om cried. “Bhaiyaa please stop it” Rudra also cried hard as he also followed Shivay. “No.. she can’t be back like this…. No she can’t” Shivay said and hit the wall. He was continuously hitting the wall and repeating the same. OmRu came near him to control him. “No Shivay… she bhabhi… she… she is not going to come back…. For you..please understand” Om hardly spoke with a dilemma of spilling out the truth or not. Shivay stopped for a second and asked Om “for me…?” “Nothing bhaiyaa… please stop your hand is bleeding please…” Rudra requested him. Shivay whose hand was already bleeding due to continuous hits again started to hit the wall hard. OmRu tried every possible way to stop him but failed. At last Rudra called his bhabhi “Bhabhi… please come… for god sake please here bhaiyaa…..” Shivay snatched the phone and threw it on the floor. Anika on the other side sensed something is really wrong. She wanted to go to Shivay but then decided to call before she take any step “Om what happened?” Anika asked being worried “ Bhabhi Shivay… he was continuously hurting him I don’t know what is going in his mind but he… he is not okay… now only you can control him… please come” Om answered “But Pinky aunty….” Anika said “She is not at home… rather no one is at home please come” Omsaid and hurriedly cut the call to save his phone from death.
Anika was in dilemma and looked upto Gauri, Gauri nodded her head as she understood the matter and sent her to Oberoi Mansion. Anika came almost after three months. All the lights were off, she did not understand the reason. She directly heeded to Shivay’s room. She was totally shattered to look Shivay’s hand bleeding, while OmRu is trying to bandage him but he is not letting them do that. OmRu got up and left the room as soon they saw Anika coming. Anika went inside and silently sat beside Shivay. Shivay could not resist more and hugged her and started to cry just like a small kid. She was patting his back and brushing her hands through his hairs. Shivay kept his head on her lap and was still sobbing. “why are you crying my bagad billa?” Anika asked controlling her tears “Only your bagad billa…. Why you left me?”
Shivay questioned getting up from her lap. “I…I can’t say you the reason” Anika said going away from him. Shivay was smarter than her and quickly held her wrist to stop her. He got up and stood behind her very close. Anika could feel his breath on her shoulder. She was loosing herself to him. Soon Shivay was to back hug her but his injuries grabbed Anika’s attention. Anika freed herself from his hold and went to take the first aid box from bed side table. She came back after some time. She first aided his bleeding hand and planted kisses over every injury. Shivay was looking at her and tears were flowing down from his eyes.
Anika got up to go after all this but again felt a tight force on her wrist. “Can you please give the night to me?” Shivay asked her very cutely making sure that Anika should not refuse. Anika who also badly needed him nodded her head in a blissful yes and hugged Shivay tightly. Shivay too reciprocated. He planted a small kiss on her head. He was about to grab her lips but Anika refused and Shivay agreed. After so long the room felt as it got back its essence. Anika sat while Shivay lay on her lap. Anika was brushing her hands on Shivay’s hairs so that he falls asleep soon but Shivay was staring at his wife so that she does not leave him alone again. An hour passed like that and sleep took it’s turn over Shivay’s stubbornness.
Morning arrived soon and Shivay opened his eyes happily as he knew after so long he will be able to see his wife infront of him at morning. But the morning had different plans for him. He got up, he checked everywhere to find his Anika but she was nowhere to be found. He ran to OmRu and asked about her. “She went Shivay an hour before you got up”
Om said “But how?? I mean no vehicle was there that time then?” Shivay questioned to verify whether Om is saying the truth or not “I dropped her at her place at that time” soon a shattering reply came from Rudra’s side. Shivay looked at the bandage closed his eyes and remembered every kisses Anika planted on his injury. He kissed over the bandage. “Over Om…. Yesterday I tried for the last time to become bagad billa of Anika…. She came… but now this bagad billa is dead…..” Shivay’s stern words pierced his own heart but he continued “now only SSO will survive…. The bagad billa is dead” he hit the table at his side hard and went out from Om’s room. Rudra could not see his brother like that so he bursted out crying. “Rudra control…. Everything will get fine….i promise” Om assured him.
Shivay again became SSO and noticed the mangalsutra lying at the table. He took it in his hand and was about to throw it but somewhere in the middle he got stuck by some unknown force; by some unknown feeling.. he skipped the idea of throwing it rather he put it back to where it was. Soon his eye got caught on a note left by Anika. The note read “Shivay…. My bagad billa…. I left, that place does not belongs to me, the time I realized about your pain I went there to handle you but from now learn to handle yourself….. you will get much better life partner as compared to me. You can ask Meghna to marry you. She is the perfect girl for you…. Your no not yours only Anika” Shivay who was already prepared for getting back to SSO avatar tore the note. “Yes Anika you are right I must move on… yeah Meghna is perfect for me… and now I will show you how much perfect she is” SSO uttered these words. A thin layer of love formed in his eyes. But he was stubborn this time. He was up to something which no one knew. He was now prepared for his SSO avatar. He did his hair setting move and became ready as SSO.
I am sorry I know a bit more emotional. I was literally taken aback after writing it and reading it after completion. Sorry peeps if I spoilt your mood.
And the next part I will upload by Friday evening as I am going to my village for one day for my Grandma’s yearly funeral. Sorry for this as well. Please do post all your views.
55 Comments
Nilash dear, you made me cry..i am really crying…..????…..
And come back soon.
Arpita hey yaar sorry but promise to make you smile soon by posting O’bros.
Very sorry for such emotional torture.
Will surely try to go back soon
Superb update.
Thank You Friendso…. please stay tuned dear
Wonderful
Emotional and heart touching ?
Awww… thank you dear
Please stay tuned. And sorry for the emotional torture. Sorry
Uhh juzz made me cry..it was too emotional..will be waiting for Friday dont be late….
Sorry please don’t cry….
I will try to post before Friday. Of course will follow your order and I won’t be late.
Thank You
No need to be sry dr!! It was amazing…keep writing …
Love uhh dr!!
Thank You Lauren….
Please stay tuned dear
Love you too
Emotional and heart touching part….
Thank You Niriha…. sorry for this emotional torture dear. Please stay tuned.
Super
Thank You Charitha…. please stay tuned dear
Great update Ash
Thank You Winee… please stay tuned dear. My WINEE THE POOH…love you
When is the next update coming. Ash. You know what waiting for the update really sucks?. But still love to wait for all the awesome updates to come ??.And love you too
I will try to upload the next part before Friday evening dear. Please wait for sometime. Requesting please. I know waiting for the update is terrible but please.
Winee thank you so much. Love you dear
Are di .Koi baath nahi aaram se update Karona . Kisne apka gardan pakda hai jo itni baar please bolrahi ho. Mujhe koi problem nahi hai ☺☺. Ab bus tension free hojao . Good night ash
Thank You Winee…. kisi ne gardan nhi pakra hai hehehehehe
Okk aram se hi update karungi
Love you
Nice one my rocking girl… Rainy season is arrived in my eyes and also in ib orshivika life before it’s arrival time in weather forecast…
Awwww… Nikki dear I don’t know what to reply after this. Thank You so much for this. And I am very very sorry for that sudden rainy season dear. You will pardon me for that na??
Very bad di…you made me cry throughout the epi.
It was heart wrenching.
Bas i couldn’t talk much.
Sorry Madhu…. you know I was also very sad after going through it after the completion. Very sorry dear. Okk from next time will try to make every update normal. You will pardon me na???
Sorry di but was little disturbed after it.?
I’m now not angry with you.☺
Friday update pakka na??
Awwww… sorry holding my ears please sorry I made you that upset that you got angry on me….. sorry please please sorry.
Yup will try to post the next part before Friday evening. Sorry again dear.
Wow..Girl
Its really fantastic!
Thank You Neha…. please stay tuned dear.
Love you dear
Pls shuivika ko alag may kro. Pls pls pls.. their Jodi is perfect. Like a love bird.. pls director nd writer don’t do this. Shivay and Anika can’t be separated. We can’t see shivay in sso look nd can’t see Anika crying. Anika khidkitod look is best. Nd we want that Anika back..???
Tanu don’t know about the director and writer but in my story I won’t separate Shivika pinky promise. I know they are the best couple. Please dear don’t be sad. The separation track is ahead so please be strong to face it. Please a request from your friend. I am your friend na???
Tanu I promise you I will soon unite Shivika in my SS.
Please stay tuned up till that part.
Loads of love to you dear. Please don’t be sad.
Khidkitor Anika will be back dear please don’t be sad.
Loads of love dear.
awesome & emotionol chapter
update nxt soon
Thank You Aashi…. and will try to post next part soon. please stay tuned dear
AWESOME CUTE EMOTIONAL??? HEART TOUCHING MIND BLOWING SUPERB???
Thank You UF…. thanks a lot for this sweet appreciation dear. Please stay tuned dear.
Sorry for this emotional torture dear.
Di u nailed it.U r amazing writer.U write humour as well as emotional stories very nicely.Sry for not commenting in previous parts.I was not in tu page from one week.Now i m back so i will definately comment in your ff’s.Pinky promise.And how’z your studies going on?Man lagkar padh rhi ho na di.
Haan meri Mehak man laga kar padh rahi hu. Thank You… mujhe to laga tha mujhse emotional story to hone se rhi buy phir try kiya and bana diya. Choro mai apne humor me zyada mast hu. Humorous story bhi upload karna start karungi after my exam.
It’s ok dear infact I also remain absent.
And apni di ko koi sorry bolta hai kya??? Next time se no sorry.
Love you dear
love u to di.
Hey nilash,,
Ammazing update bt quite emotional..
Shivaay still want her bt his SSO ness….
Their convo was soo heart wrenching….
I think now its time for anika being jealous…
SSO weds meghna….
Waiting for next update.
Take care dear n come back sooon
Thank You Kanfi…. I know seriously an emotional episode.
Yup Shivay very badly wants her but now I hope SSO getting close to Meghna will be a treat to read. Let’s wait to see. And I personally don’t want Anika to be jealous but if my plot wants that will surely go for it.
Will try to post the next update soon dear.
Yup taking care. You also take care dear.
Love you
Ash… Now I m crying dear! No, don’t do this Ash. I can’t see SSO avatar again. Already I didn’t watched yesterday epi, I just read written updates only. Today it must be heartbreaking scene dear… So Plz I can’t able see Shivaay with that new devil(u know right, who is this new devil). No jealousy track dear! Waiting for next part dear. Sorry Ash, If u already planned this story, then continue as per wish.
Oops….no sorry, ok! Delete it from ur mind Ash.
Gayu not done….. see you are saying me sorry. Ok deleted that part.
No more SSO part will be there I promise. Just a bit of it for the revelation.
And how can I forget the new chudail. No be calm Shivay will not be there with the devil. Now happy dear????
Love you yaar for all your support and suggestions. Okk overlooking the sorry.
Love you
Amazing update
Thank You Alekhika….. please stay tuned dear
Heyoo Nilash di.
So yeah you gave me a warning still my eyes filled up. It was really very emotional.
Thank you so much for giving this wonderful part, I love emotional stories, very much and let me say yaa you nailed it again. Words are less to praise you.
Just superb, awesome, fantastic mind blowing, khidkitod, darwazatod and superbly marvellous.
Anika and Shivaay’s moment were worth watching. Loving how you are proceeding with the story.
Post the next part soon. Love yaa?
Not done Jerry you are now using my words on me only???
Thank You dear that you loved it. From now will try to post emotional story after completion of my ongoing ffs. Thank You so much dear.
Will surely try to post soon.
Love you too dear. Will read your ff after Sunday so get ready to register some more good words to your dictionary.
Love you
Okay I will be waiting for Sunday?
Superb n emotional too…. Interesting yaar… Excited for the next part
Thank You Sagithya…. please stay tuned dear. Sorry for this emotional torture dear. And will surely try to upload the next part soon
its amazing chappy dear/……..
loved it !!!!!
post asap……
tc…..
i used chappy… now ok 😉 😉
Thank You Pooja…. I am glad dear that you liked the chappy
I will try to post soon dear.
Take care
Yup happy ??
It’s Awesome & emotional epi dr……. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt…..
Till friday Tc nd Happy journy dr….
Thank You Bunny…. will try to upload soon dear.
Thank You for your wishes.
You too take care.
Love you
No Rumya part so bad but shivika scenes are awesome
Sorry dear for this but promise will be including Rumya parts soon. Sorry holding ears… please sorry…
stay tuned dear