Fan Fiction

Shades of Avni………… a Naamkaran TS

hi guys I wish you liked the part 1. so here is the link for part 1 of the TS
guys as requested I will be writing the dialogue in the language spoken by the character first then I’ll translate it. if the dialogue was spoken in Hindi, first it I’ll be written in eng and translated it to English and vice-versa.
TS part 1- http://www.tellyupdates.com/shades-avni-naamkaran-ts/

so here goes the part 2

Avni: what’s all this Rahul. I’m warning you just.. leave me… I said leave me Rahul… Tarun… will you leave me or no……..

Rahul: come on Av why are you getting hyper….. come on babes have some water…

Avni: plz stop this drama Rahul. Or else………

Rahul: or else wat haa. Wat…..

Avni: sorry Rahul I gave u enough chances but I think you want this to happen

She kicks him on his face with her legs and due this action Tarun let go of her.

Avni: I said u 2 leave me. Now ur bad.

Rahul: Avni……………

A small fight takes place and Avni smacks him to the ground.
On the other hand Bebe and Swetha will be awestruck seeing Avni in a dabbang style.
And during this fight Avni was in casuals i.e. pencil jeans exact till ankle length and a casual top with sneakers.

—————–FB———————–

When Avni wontedly spell juice on her and slipped to washarea with her friend
Bebe: Avni puttar saaf hogaya?
(Avni did the stain get cleaned?)

Avni: Bebe almost 2min
Whatever it is lets talk later. First (looking towards Anaita) shall I

Anitha gives her the same saree(actually it isn’t a saree but a long skirt which looks like a saree) she is wearing with a jeans and a top
Avni slowly slips to the washroom and changes.

Avni: Anu my slippers.

Anu: yaa here
She removes hers and wears Avni’s sandals which she was wearing.

Avni: cool then ill catch u guys later.

Saying this she goes near Bebe and Swetha .

——————–FB ends—————-

Swetha: O My Gods… whats just happend.

Avni: actually mummyji, Bebe in our collage we had 2 groups 1 toppers and 1 avengers. Actually it is averagers but the group changed it to avengers. We all are of toppers group we would excel in some or the other and were average or poor in some. And they were average in all. The problem araised during a physical competation these groups developed rivalry between each other. And this attack is because of that. Actullay us din(on that day)………….
She was going to continue but suddenly a van came and pulled her in and left(actually she is Abducted)

Bebe: Avni puttar…… Swetha jaldi se Neil ko call kar. Jaldi…
(Avni…. Swetha call Neil urgently. Be quick….)

Ali: Bebe jab vo ladke aayethena tabhi meine Neil ko call kardeya, vo aatahi hoga
(Bebe when those boys came during that time only I called Neil, I guess he might be on his way)

Bebe: sab kuch itna jaldi hua. Muje sir me dard horaha hain aab
(everything happend so quick my head is aching)

Swetha: Bebe cheleye andar chalkar thodi der rests kijeye aapka pains chalajayega
(Bebe come lets go in and sit and take rests then u may get relief from ur pains)

On the other hand in the van

Avni: whats all this leave me

Lady1: ma’am its us

Avni: what??????
R u guys out of ur mind

Lady1: ma’am u had a imp. Meeting sooo we couldn’t do anything except this sorry ma’am.

The van stops and a big office is showed with full glass.

Inside every1 were saying GN to a women. The women is showed to be Avni.

Inside in conference hall

Prakash: Neil better wait for a while mostly u might get.. a.. c..a..ll….
I’ll call u later bye….
(Avni enters the conference hall and Prakash is awestruck to see her. He comes to know that she is the owner of the best company of the year Avsha group of companies with whom he came to made a contract)
After the meeting When every1 almost left

Avni: Mr. Khanna

Prakash: haaa

Avni cs whether all left or no

Avni: papa I’m sorry Maine ye sacch asp sab se chupaya hain. Mein asp sab ko batana chahati thi par…
(papa I’m sorry i hid this truth from all of you. Actually i wanted to tell u all ppl but…..)

Prakash: Avni puttar NP. First call Neil he is so worried about you.

Avni tries to call Neil but in vein.

Avni: papa Neil is not lifting his phone just a min i’ll change and come. Then v’ll go home.

At home(khanna mansion)

Neil is shown moving here and there in the hall

Neil: DD pata lagao kisne Avni ko kidnap kiya hain. Pata nahi kyun par i feeling ki ye sab Dayavanti mehata ne kiya hain.
(DD find out who kidnapped Avni. Don’t know why but I have a strong feeling that all this is done by Dayavanti mehata)

DD: haa sirji kyun ki vo ladke tho Bhabhi se pitkar vha kyud ki eelaj kar rahe the, aur bhabhi ka sirf ek hi dushman hain vo mehatas, tho shayad yun logon ne he kiya hain
(yes sirji cause those boys were bet so badly by SIL that they were curing themselves and moreover SIL has only 1 villan in her life and i.e. mehatas so i too feel it might be them)

Just then Avni and Prakash enter the house

Swetha: Prakash ji…. aap Avni ke saath…???? aap Avni se kaha mile
( Prakash ji…. ur with Avni…???? where did u met her)

Before Avni or Prakash could say something Neil came and hugged Avni.
Tu nazm nazm sa mere
Honthon pe thehar ja
Main khwab khwaab sa teri
Ankhon mein jaagun re
Tu ishq ishq sa mere
Rooh mein aake bas ja
Jis aur teri shehnaai
Uss orey main bhaagun re
Haath tham le piya
Karte hain vaada
Ab se tu aarzoo
Tu hi hai irada
Mera naam le piya
Main teri rubayi
Teri hi tto pichhe pichhe
Barsaat aayi, barsaat aayi
Tu itrr itrr sa mere
Saanson mein bikhar jaa
Main fakeer tere qurbat ka
Tujhse tu maangun de
Tu ishq ishq sa mere
Rooh mein aake bas ja
Jis aur teri shehnaai
Uss orey main bhaagun re
Mere dil ke lifaafe mein
Tera khat hai janiya
Tera khat hai janiya
Nacheez ne kaise paa li
Kismat yeh janiya ve
Oh mere dil ke lifafe mein
Tera khat hai janiya
Tera khat hai janiya
Nacheez ne kaise paa li
Jannat yeh janiya ve
Tu nazm nazm sa mere
Honthon pe thehar jaa (x2)
Main khwaab khwab sa teri
Aankhon mein jaagun re
Tu ishq ishq sa mere
Rooh mein aake bas ja
Jis aur teri shehnaai
Uss ore main bhaagun re

Avni got away from Neil and assured him that she was alright

Avni: Bebe, mummyji, pappaji, Neil muje aap sab se kuch bahut important baat kehana hain.
( Bebe, mummyji, pappaji, Neil ive to tell something very imp to u all ppl)
Actually half truth pappaji already know but i want u all 2 know everything about me, i don’t want to hide myself from u ppl.
Bebe, mummyji, pappaji, Neil I’m the owner of the Avsha group of companies, and I’m also a lead dancer in my collage + i have taken Police training even though i didn’t join ive taken.
These were the only things i hid from u ppl and i couldn’t digest without telling u guys. so…..

Bebe: Avni dar ne ki kya baat hain. Aab tho mere tillu ko 1 level up takkar dene wali bevi mile hain.

Neil: bebe………..

After that day Avneil didn’t have any secrets between them nor they hid any thing from each other.
After a week Avneil left for honey moon…

Tumse hi milkar toh
Dil dhadakta hai
Tum saanson jaise ho
Aisa lagta hai

Pehli dafaa jo hone laga hai
Pehle huaa na kabhi
Mehsoos dil ne jo bhi kiya hai
Lafzon mein keh doon abhi

Pyar ho, jab pyar ho
Har baar ho tumse hi
Pyar ho, beshumaar ho
Har baar ho tumse hi

Tum jo nahi thhe saath toh
Tanha sa tha dil ka safar
Be-khwab hi soti rahi
Jagti rahi meri nazar

Aa paas mere palkon pe rakh doon
Jitne hain sapne sabhi
Honthon pe mere khulne lagi hai
Khwahish thi dil mein dabi

Pyar ho, jab pyar ho
Har baar ho tumse hi
Pyar ho, beshumaar ho
Har baar ho tumse hi

Tumpe ruke, tumse chale
Lamhe mere ab toh yahaan
Raahein meri tumpe thami
Ab hai mujhe jaana kahaan

Tum bin chalun toh kadmon se mere
Yeh rooth jaaye zameen
Ab zindagi mein kuch ho na ho par
Ikk baat hai laazmi

Pyar ho, jab pyar ho
Har baar ho tumse hi
Pyar ho, beshumaar ho
Har baar ho tumse hi

After a few months Avni became pregnant. Avneil had twins (1boy, 1 girl). And they always had a happy life after

*dayawanti was hang to death during Avneil”s honeymoon.

Sorry for the late update guys. I wish u liked the TS. If u guys liked or not plz tell me by ur reviews and comments
———-luv u guys
—-LuvIBN

Share
Published by