SHADOW AND SPRING [ISHKARA FF FOR “SHOW SOME ISHQ” , BY Renima]
Hello friends, As part of the concept ‘show some ishq’, I got immense support from u guys…….. I don’t have words 2 thank u all……See , this was a combined decision made by all fans of ishkara, rumya and priveer …..I made a request here and am happy that many of us have responded and some have started also………My favorite is ishkara, but due 2 certain reasons I already said that it’s hard 4 me 2 write on them…… But one of my silent reader who use 2 trouble me whenever I writes on ishkara through pm demanded me 2 write on them…….Because she told that I should also participate in this concept as though I made the post 2 conduct show some ishq, am not judging any one and it’s not a competetion.. .. I don’t know what makes her 2 msg me always, some times even I scold her also, but she is so adamant and I was forced 2 write some thing for ishkara……..So sweety, I hope u are happy now….Share ur views through pm…….And my ishkara ishqies, even I don’t expected that I will be ever be able 2 write on them……
@ Art Hub
Omkara’s view…….
Almost 2 years have gone and u haven’t returned back…….Where are u, Ishana ???? [Om gently passes his fingers through ishana’s painting]U poured the beauty of colors in my life, u taught 2 me 2 stand with courage and determination…….Like a fairy u came and did all those wonders 2 me and I feel I brought my life back……..But then that dark night came and ………[Om recalls the incident]
Flash Back { @ Mumbai Police Head Quarters , 2 years Back}
Ranveer : Shivaay bhaiya, nothing is been confirmed……But according 2 police reports we have a doubt that the person who got murdered was ……..Well ,may be I can be wrong also……We got this white salwar and anklet from the crime spot…..
[Shivika received them with trembling hands ……..]
Anika : Shivaay……..This is ishana’s salwar and this anklet …….Om gifted this anklet on her birthday……….
Shivaay : Anika, tmrw is Om’s wedding ……..What will we tell him ???
Anika : This police waala will utter something and u are saying 2 believe it……..Nothing will happen 2 our ishana…….She promised me that she will come as my devrani…….This white salwar and anklet …..It’s nothing, it can be a prank played by mona 2 scare us…….Let me call her now…….Shivaay u give the phone 2 me………
“Excuse me sir”…….[ A police constable entered there and handovers a packet 2 ranveer]
Ranveer : U may leave now……[constable leaves , ranveer opens the packet and gets shocked 2 see finger ring and a purse ] Ishana!!!!………
Shivika : What ????? [shocked]
Scene shifts 2 oberoi mansion…..
Shivika arrives there and stares the whole home in a glance……Rumya were dancing near Om with full of energy , while prinku was busy in decorating flowers on stairs……… Jhanvi and Dadi were encouraging rumya with bigger claps 2 dance with more enthusiasm……Shivika stare each other’s eyes with teary eyes…….
Anika : All are so happy today, shivaay….How can we tell them what we find now is ??
Shivaay : We have 2 do this anika…….Pls …..[shivika hold each other’s hands, they slowly entered inside hall of oberoi mansion, shivaay hides the things behind his hand and stares every one with fake smile]
Dadi : Billu…….puthar……….Where is ishana ???
Rudra : Haa bhaiya, bhabhi…where is ishu bhabhi??
Omkara : Shivaay, what are u hiding behind ur hand ??
Shivaay : Nothing, Om………
Omkara raised from his seat and rushed beside shivika……
Omkara : So the great wall of shivay singh oberoi has started hiding things from his chote bhai…….
Anika : No, om……Why he will hide things from u ??
Omkara : Bhabhi pls, now u also don’t hide things from me…..What’s that ??
Shivaay :Nothing …..Om….It’s just……wooh…..wooh…..
Omkara : Show me , shivaay…….
Shivaay : I am telling u om, it’s nothing…….
Omkara : Shivaay, don’t be a kid…..Just give it what ishana has send for me…..
Anika: Om……Pls calm down……Whatever u are going 2 face now is……..
Omkara : What?? Bhabhi, shivaay….what’s the matter ??
Shivaay ; Om…..it’s ….it’s…..[shivaay places his hand on his chest and leans back on the wall]
Anika : Shivaay……Pls say something…Shivaay…….
Omkara : Shivaay……….[om and anika holds shivaay ] Rudra….bring the medicine immendiately…..
Shivaay : I am okay, om…….[shivay finds hard 2 take breathe and slowly handover the packet 2 om]
Mean while rudy comes quick and makes shivaay 2 have the medicine in time…….
Omkara : Shivaay, u go and take rest……….
Dadi : Billu…..
Jhanvi : Shivaay I will call the doctor…….Before that I have 2 inform pinky and sakthi …..Both have went 2 pinky’s village…..
Shivaay : I am fine badi maa……..
Prinku and Rudy : Bhaiya…..[prinku and rudy hugs shivay]
Omkara : Bhabhi , what happened actually ??
Anika : Om……Pls open that packet…..
Om opens it and gets shocked 2 see blood stained white salwar and anklet, broken engagement ring, and a purse…
Omkara : Ishana……..Ishana………[Om screamed in pain and bend @ his own knees] Ishana!!!!! [om cries literally ]
Rudra : O………[rudy touches om’s shoulder]
Shivaay : I got a phone call from ranveer and when I went 2 police station he told me that a girl got murdered in the city and from the crime scene they find………
Anika : Om…….It’s not sure…….They didn’t get the person’s body till now..So it can be some one else also…..
Omkara : Where is Ishana ??? Shivaay, bhabhi I am asking u both……
Shivaay : We don’t know, Om…….
Sowmya : What abt mona and uncle ???
Anika : They are missing , police is trying 2 find them……..
“Om….Om…….How long u will keep 2 think abt her ?? Be practical……Ishana ……She will never come back” The voice made om 2 gain back his senses and it brought a kind of fire in his eyes……..Om turned back and stares Tej……
Omkara : Get out Mr.Tej Singh Oberoi…….
Tej : Om, my son…..I can’t see u living whole life in these darkness……..It’s time for u 2 make a change in urself……Don’t be so emotional…….Better u come and join my airlines company……..
Omkara : Mr. Oberoi……Have u ever loved my mom ??
Tej : What ??
Omkara : If u would have loved her from heart, then u would have never asked me 2 do this……
Tej : Listen , Omkara…..I know ishana’s death was unexpected and u have hurt …..
Omkara : Mind ur words, Mr. Oberoi….Ishana is alive…..
Tej : May be……But 2 years is a big time….If she is alive, then she should have come and meet u…… There is no idea abt her family also…..These middle class people are blo*dy cheaters only……Their intention was 2 utilize u and grab ur money only as u are an oberoi…….
Omkara : Mr. Oberoi, Just shut ur mouth…….U are crossing ur limits……..U don’t have any rights 2 blame ishana’s character, her family……Before judging others, just have a look on urself……..Have u ever realized the value of family ?? Have u ever show concern 2 mom ??? If we start talking abt cheating, unfortunately I have 2 say that my so called father is the first and biggest cheater who is staying as part of family, but breaking every one’s trust…….U are staying with my mom , but insulting her love and moreover u haven’t took the effort for ur children’s upbringing…….
Tej : Omkara!!!! [tej raise his hand 2 slap omkara, but shivay comes and holds tej’s hand]
Shivaay : U are not supposed 2 do this Bade paapa…
Tej : U are also not supposed 2 interfere between a father and son…….
Shivaay : I will do it, because om is my bhai…….And whoever will raise their hand before my bhai, he has 2 answer shivaay singh oberoi……..
Tej : Ridiculous !!![ tej release his hand from shivay’s hold and leaves]
Shivaay : Om…..[shivkara hugs each other]
Omkara : I can’t tolerate that man, shivaay…….
Shivaay : Calm down, my bhai…….By the way, today is the launch of anika’s cafe……Have u forgot it ??
Omkara : Not @ all……….I will come shivaay………
Shivaay : I will wait 4 u…..Come soon……
Omkara : Yeah….[om nods his head with a smile]
Om again stares ishu’s painting…….”Have u heard what shivay has said now…..Bhabhi is individually opening the cafe …….Once u said that u want 2 perform that day for bhabhi , won’t u ??? Om eyes went teary, he slowly took the painting from the frame and leaned over it……..Om closed his eyes for while……”
Flash Back……..
Scene – 1 { @ Art Hub, Exhibition }
Ishana : “Shadow never cheats, shadow never lie and shadow is the truth …..It shows that u are absolutely alone…….” [ishana reads the quote and stares the painting and finds the name] So it’s made by Omkara…….I see……[ ishu slowly took red and green brushes and started doing some sketches on that painting and wrote a line after om’s quote……when it got finished , ishu gives a pretty smile]
Mean while she hears a gentle voice “ Khanna , I want the full details “ …..Ishu turns back and gets surprised 2 see a man in long open hair wearing a white kurta with a pleasant smile who was engaged in phone call……Ishu turned her eyes here and there and finally find a statue @ the corner….She quickly moves there and hides behind the statue…….Om cuts the call and comes forward 2 stare the painting……He gets shocked 2 see his painting ‘s new version which was named as shadow and spring….. “Om turns his eyes 2wards the lines…….In the path of shadow, if spring can bring colors then shadow will never feel that it’s dark……Shadow can’t be alone if spring is with it……” [om reads it and smiles, He gently passed his fingers through the red and green mixed sketches done by ishu…….]These are not properly done, seems some one has just poured few colors as a mix and match……But this one made 2 think abt a restructuring my painitings……Whoever had done this, I have 2 find it……..
[ Ishu feels scared…..”Seems ,what I did is not right….Afterall he is an established artist…..Why u did it ishu ?? U are crazy….Before this Mr. Artist could find, I have 2 leave…….”Om turns his eyes and finds a girl running behind him from the corner….He went behind her 2 hold her hand….. But before he could reach her, she rushed the spot in hurry leaving her anklet on the floor …… Om bend @ his own knees and picked it with a smile]
PRECAP : UPS AND DOWNS OF LIFE MAKES ME 2 STAND IN DILEMMA ……SEEMS A MASTER BRAIN HAD MADE THIS CHIP IN EVERYONE’S FATE WHEN HE\SHE COMES 2 THE EARTH…….MAN HAVEN’T DISCOVERED ANY THING 2 DESTROY THIS CHIP WHICH KILLS HIS MIND, DISTURBS HIS BRAIN AND GIVES PAIN 2 HIS HEART…….
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Finally, you are back with Ishkara… Good to see you writing on them as well… It’s really amazing… Want to know what happened with Ishu… Continue soon…
Will try 2 continue when i gets time……thanks a lot
Awesome start Renima..if our article is for ‘Show some ishq’ do we hv to mention it in d title??
U can mention it any where in ur article……there is no specific rule…..u can mention it in title or @ beginning as intro or @ end as author’s note….it’s upon ur preference only……Thanks a lot aarti
It will be easy 2 find article if u mentions show some ishq, after december u will find another post from me which will be featured with all authors articles links and that”s the new year gift which we reward 2 all fans of ishkara, rumya and priveer
Splendid di. It’s phenomenal. Awesome…amazing…. Superb…great…khidki thod. No offense but I really liked ur dis IshKara ff more than any other. Plzzzz di try 2 post soon. I m much excited. Nd unite our lovely IshKara soon.
Oh god, that was a huge compliment, i will try my level best dear..thanks a lot
Happy to see you back with Ishkara…… Really missed this a lot…… Awesome writing as always and very beautifully written ??☺☺loved it
Thanks prajkta
welcome back Rinima with ishakara amazing lovely keep writing awsome
Thanks a lot shabnam
It is awesome dii…. Love you
Thanks a lot nikki
Fantabulous dear I love it??????❤️❤️❤️❤️?????????????????????????
Thanks a lot crazy girls
AWESOME FANTASTIC INTERESTING MIND BLOWING SUPERB ??????
Dear Renima Di
IshKara Moment?? It’s Awesome Part???
Keep It Up?
Take Care And Stay Safe?
Thanks a lot uff
Great start di.. .. Wonderful…. Excellent.. . Superb.. Awesome… Fantastic… Mind blowing…n what not.. . Loved it to the core…. Ishkara… ???
Thanks a lot ankita, nice 2 see all ishkarians again
Great start.
Awesome start with IshKara and then flashes of IshKara story and first meeting changes doing by Ishana in painting was superb.love the precap.❤️