Hello friends, Belated Diwali wishes 2 all of u …….I can’t say that I am back now, because I still have eye prblm, but some wards it has become less and I have tried 2 give this update…..I don’t know whether this episode will fulfil ur expectations, but I hope u will read and comment …Thanks for showering all sort of ishq towards the concept “show some ishq” Fenu, Crazy girls, u both are amazing writers, will surely read ur articles once I get cured …..Thanks for continuing articles……@ Uf dear, ur wish of me 2 continue two shots for pinky and shivika will be fulfilled later only as it’s bit hard for me 2 type all articles…..Okay, back 2 story, here are the links for previous one…
Note friends, today’s episode will be focusing present condition , I will reveal the past story on upcoming episode……If u have forgotten the present one which I portrayed in first and second episodes., then pls do check it…….
SHADOW AND SPRING [ISHKARA FF FOR “SHOW SOME ISHQ” , BY Renima] Part 1
Flash back { Scene – 9 , Oberoi mansion kitchen} continues……
Anika : Oh bete ki !!!! Can any one tell me what kind of raita has spread now ??
Om turns back and finds anika standing behind him…..
Omkara : Thank God, Bhabhi u came at the right time……These people are making fun of me…..
Anika : Really !!!! Shivaay, why are u teasing my devar ? Just look @ om’s eyes……It is filled with the innocence of kid….
Rudra : Kid !!!! Bhabhi , U don’t know what this Innocent Kid has done ……..He is dating a Fairy, ….
Anika : What !!!! [ anika also keeps her palm on mouth]
Shivaay : Let me explain Anika……Listen om has find a girl who motivated him 2 think life and art in a new way and he doesn’t know her name…..That’s why he named her as fairy….
Sowmya : Haan habhi and our bade baal waale bhaiya is not dating any fairy…But we all get shocked when he said he went 2 meet fairy…….
Omkara : Okay…I accept it u all guys find it as strange, but don’t know why I loves 2 …..
Rudra : [interrupts] See, shivay bhaiya, sumo , bhabhi…….O has started feeling for her…….He says he loves her……
Shivkara : Just shut up rudra……
Rudra : Okay, I will stay as silent…..
Omkara : With ur permission, may I complete ??
Rudra nods his head…….
Omkara : I don’t know why but I loves 2 call Ishana as Fairy…….
Shivika, Rumya : Ishana!!!!!
Omkara : Yeah….[om smiles and nods his head]
Shivaay : So in my best man om’s life, a girl named ishana has entered as a fairy who has made my bhai 2 smile …….[shivaay pats om’s shoulder]
Om smiles and stares shivaay……..
Scene shifts 2 the present condition of omkara……..
Scene – 10 @ Art hub…..
Om couldn’t lost himself in the sweet memories of his past life as he heard his mom screaming “ No Tej don’t do this “……Om opened his eyes and find Tej entering in art hub with the big photo frame of Ishana …..Tejvi walked 2 wards omkara….. Tej stared om sharply……He placed ishu’s photo frame at the table and placed the garland, diya and a match box beside it….
Jhanvi : No tej, pls don’t do this……
Tej : Don’t try 2 stop me, jhanvi….. Om, wear this garland on ishana’s photo and light this lamp….I wish may this diwali will lighten ur brain ……. It’s high time omkara, u should realize the fact that ishana will never come back……
Without uttering a single word, om lighten the diya and stares tej…
Jhanvi : No, om what are u doing ?? Beta u use 2 say that ishu will come back……
Omkara : I still believe in hope mom and u know what I must thank Mr. Oberoi for bringing this light in my darkness….I mean now my blind hope has changed as enlightening hope and my heart says that my ishu needs me and I have 2 find her……….Mom…..
Tej : Unbelievable…….When are u going 2 realize reality ??
Omkara : I believes in truth and I keeps hope on that truth because it depicts what my heart wants 2 say…. And it just keeps saying Ishana ….Ishana…..Ishana only……[ om smiles and stares tej’s eyes]
Tej : U are such a looser, Omkara who believes in blind hope……
Omkara : It’s better 2 keep a blind hope rather than living as hopeless……Any ways thanks for bringing this photo and diya…….I liked ur diwali gift, Mr. Oberoi……..Thanks a lot……
Tej stares omkara in anger and leaves without saying anything….
Jhanvi : Om…..I am getting scared…….
Omkara : Why mom ?? Nothing will happen 2 ishu…..u won’t believe me , mom ??
Jhanvi : I do….But thing is if ishu is alive then why she hasn’t arrived our home……What happened 2 her family ?? We have 2 find the answers…….Beta…….
Omkara : Yeah, Mom…..I will find Ishana……It’s my promise…….[om holds jhanvi’s hand]
Jhanvi : I am sorry, om…..
Omkara : Why , mom ??
Jhanvi : What tej has done is ….
Om laughs and stares jhanvi…
Omkara : Mom……I don’t understand what he wants from me ?? What he want 2 prove by bringing garland, diya and all…….
Jhanvi : He thinks that by doing it, u will get hurt and u will come back 2 ur life …..
Omkara : My life has lost some where and what u are seeing in me is nothing just a living corpse only… But am living because I have 2 bring my life back 2 me……I can’t live without ishana……..I really can’t live without ishana….Mom……
Jhanvi : If ur love is true, then she will come back, Omkara…….[jhanvi hugs om and kisses on his forehead] U are coming for inauguration of anika’s cafe ……Don’t say no 2 me……It’s ur bhabhi anika’s wish that u, shivay and rudy has 2 inaugurate it together…….U will be there in time, won’t u ??
Om nods his head with a smile…….Jhanvi leaves…..Om stares ishu’s photo and waves his hand on it….
Ishana……..Khwabbon mein jab bhi tujhe paata hoon toh khud ko waapas paata hun
[Ishana…..Whenever I finds u in dreams, I feels I have gained myself back]
Sirf Tere ghungroo ki jhanak mein dhadakti hein mere dil ki dhadkanein
[ My heart keeps beating only @ ur anklet’s rhythm ]
Tere aankhon ki nami mein duawon se kayi zyada taakat nihara hun mein
[ I find more strength in your drops of tears rather than any blessings]
Itna bata de ki abh kyaa badalon mein tujhe doondun ?? yaa phir raah mein tere liye bhatak jawun ?
[ Just tell me now where I have 2 find u ?? should I search for u in clouds or should I wander in streets for u ??]
[Om holds ishu’s photo close 2 his chest and leans back on the wall…….]
Omkara : Ishu, bhabhi’s long term dream of building a café is going 2 be true today…..U always wished 2 see this moment, won’t u ?? I have 2 go there……I hope I will find u there…..Will I ?? [om stares ishu’s eyes and gets emotional] U just keep this silence in ur lips ……From the last two years I am able 2 see u like these only, ishu……..I need u, ishana…….Pls come back…..
Scene – 11 { @ Anika’s Café }
Sakthi, Tej, Rumya, Pinky and Jhanvi already assembled there with dadi as part of the inauguration…..
Shivika and priveer also arrives there after some time…..
Dadi : Billu, Where is omkara ??
Shivaay : Dadi, he will arrive soon…….
Pinky : Oh My Maata!!!Anika, why are u looking so sads ?? Today,u have become the owner of café brown and u should feel happy for this……
Anika : I don’t know how should I react today, I feel happy that shivaay respected my dignity allowed me 2 work post marriage……In fact he wants me 2 stand @ my own feet because he wants Khidkithod Anika who should be the best in everything……..Shivaay has given me everything and never said “No” 2 me…. In fact when I asked abt starting a café after marriage, he said anika u shouldn’t have waited for my permission……Its ur right 2 work and I will be happy if my wife will work after marriage….He is happy for me, but thing is when we thinks abt om, I have seen a kind of worry in shivaay’s eyes…..Om has become a depressed soul now…..I always want shivay,om and rudra as together because shivay use 2 say that for him his brothers are one for all and all for one……Omru are right and left hand of my shivaay…..And without shivomru my café will never get a good start………[anika cries]
Pinky : Anika beti…….Maatha rani will make everything fine……[pinky touches anika’s palm and hugs her]
Jhanvi : Pinky…….Shivaay is asking for anika……
Anika : Yeah, I am coming badi maa….[anika wipes out her tears and smiles]
Every one assembles before the café…… Anika stares the board “CAFÉ BROWN” and smiles….. Shivaay holds her hand……..
Shivaay : Finally the moment has arrived , anika……..
Anika : Shivaay…….Are u okay ??
Shivaay : I am fine…….
Anika : I can see in ur kanchi eyes that u are missing om…….
Shivaay : Anika, he is my bhai and I know he will come…….Okay……
Rudra : It’s time 2 cut the ribbon…….
Shivaay : Yeah……
Anika turns back and stands beside sowmya, prinku, pinky and jhanvi……..
Tej : How long we have 2 wait shivaay ??
Shivaay : Bade paapa, om hasn’t arrived…
Tej : I don’t think he will come……
“How can I miss my bhai and bhabi’s biggest day , Mr.Oberoi ?” The calm voice raised captivated every ones attention…….All find omkara in white kurtha with open long hair……Shivika stare each other’s eyes and smiles…..Shivaay extends his right and left hand…..Omru moves forward and holds them respectively…… Shivomru stare each other’s face and smiles…….Anika handover the scissor 2 them…… Shivomru cuts the ribbon and inaugurates the café……..Anika smiles with wet eyes and stares them…… All gives a big round of applause for anika…….Shivaay comes beside anika and touches her palm….. Anika tightly hugs shivaay and gets emotional……..Omru consoles anika……
Omkara : I am sorry bhabhi, I came very late ……I am really sorry……
Anika : Sorry ke bacchu!!!! I feel happy that u all brothers made my day……….
Rudra : Bhabhi, these kind of cry baby face doesn’t suits u….U are our Jhansi ki raani……. So pls smile….. If u will not smile, then u have 2 bear this protein shake made by one and only chef Rudra Singh Oberoi…….
Anika : My pyaare devarji…….I prefer 2 have “ Saira bano Kaali Coffee” from Sree Sree SSO ……[ Anika mimics shivay’s signature style] Omru and shivika laughs…….
Mean while Primya[ Prinku and Sowmya] joins them with two plates of dishes…….
Prinku : Bhaiya, I made this dhokla for u…….
Sowmya : And bhabhi, I made this aalo parattha for u…..
Rudra : Aaloo parattha!!! Sumo u don’t know 2 make any other dish ??
Sowmya : Oh Hello Mr. Cry baby………It’s better than ur protein shake……
Rudra : How dare u insulted my shake ?? U have 2 bear the punishment for this……[ rudy stares sumo ]
Sowmya : Punishment, what kind of punishment ??
Prinku : U have 2 drink rudy bhaiya’s protein shake…….That is ur punishment, sowmya….
Sowmya : No……Bade baal waale bhaiya……Pls save me….
Omkara : I think prinku is right….After all protein shake is rudra’s trade mark……
Sowmya : Bade bhaiya….
Shivaay : Sowmya, it’s not a big deal……
Anika : Haa……Just close ur eyes and swallow it quickly…….
Sowmya : No……
Rudra : What, no…no…… Sumo…..My love angel…..[rudy holds sumo’s hand and extends the glass close 2 her lips] Just have it………
Sowmya : No, rudra……[when the glass almost touched sumo’s lips, she quickly started tickling on rudy’s stomach……..Rudy laughs and his hand slips…Glass fells on the floor…..]
Rudra : My protein shake!!! Sumo……I am not going 2 leave u….. [sumo stares rudy and started running…. Rudra also runs behind her]
Shivika, Prinku and Om laughs…..
Shivaay : They are married couple now , but the fact that often they behave like kids……..
Anika : Yeah,shivaay…..They are cutiepiee tom and jerry……
Omkara : Prinku, where is ranveer ??
Prinku : Bhaiya, he is talking with mom……..
Omkara : Shivaay, I need 2 leave now……
Anika : Why, Om ?? Whatever be the work u can do it later……
Omkara : But bhabhi….
Shivaay : Anika is right…….U are not going any where…….
Prinku : Bhaiya……choti maa and mom need my help….Shall I ??
Shivaay : Yeah……
Prinku walks away…..In the midst a hand stopped her……” U are under arrest”…….. Prinku smiles and turns back……Ranveer stares her eyes……..
Ranveer holds prinku close 2 his chest …….
Prinku : Ranveer, leave me……If any one will see u and me like these…..
Ranveer : Oh come on!! Priyanka….I don’t care what this world says……..
Pinky : Oh My Maata!!! Priveer , u can do romances later………Jethaniji is calling u both, come with me……
Priveer : Ji……
Scene shifts 2 the entrance of café ….Khanna checks the list of programs and names of performers….. A girl comes in burkha……She bows her head before khanna…….She has covered her face and only her eyes were visible……
Khanna : U came late……It’s shivaay sir’s biggest day and he wants everything as perfect and best for his wife anika mam…..
Girl nods her head and moves to the corner
Girl bend @ her own knees and starts wearing ghungroo….Mean while her eyes went up and she finds omkara coming 2wards her……She stares him with wet eyes for a while…..
Girl : Be focused …..U can’t reveal ur identity now 2 omkara…….But u can’t see him sad in this happy day……[girl quickly rise up and starts walking in rush, omkara didn’t notices her…..Girl moves forward without noticing the fact that her one of her ghungroo has fell on the ground…..]
Omkara : Excuse me!!!
Girl stops without turning behind…..Her heart started beating fast……..
Omkara : Ur ghungroo……..
Girl turned her face 2wards omkara with much tension…..Om finds two eyes before him which were filled in few drops of tears……Om handovers ghungroo 2 the girl …….Girl stares omkara’s eyes and bows her head before him without saying anything……
Omkara : Are u a dancer ??
Girl nods her head…….
Khanna : Omkara sir, that girl is not able 2 speak…..She is dumb…….
Om stares the girl’s eyes with much shock……..
Omkara : I am sorry……..I am really very sorry…….Actually this ghungroo reminded me a special person …… I really respect those people who are connected with art…..
Girl folds her two hands and bows her head in sign of ‘thanks’ and moves 2 the corner…….Om looks her again and recalls his meeting with ishana……He finds the girl sitting in stairs ……She was trying 2 tie the ghungroo in her feet…..Om moves beside her and stares her….
Omkara : If u don’t mind, may I ??
Girl looked @ the magical eyes of omkara which was filled with a kind of unknown care for her……. She nodded her head gently ……Om sits on the down stair and started tying anklet on her feet…… Girl cries and stares omkara with teary eyes…..As soon as om finished it he stared the girl’s eyes with a calm smile…….
Girl quickly rise up from the stairs in hurry ….She rushed through the stairs which resulted in slipping of her feet and she was about to fell down from stairs…….But om saves her by holding her in his arms…. His one hand was placed on her waist and other one was on her shoulder…… They share an eyelock……”Saathiya “…instrumental plays…….Their eyelock was broken when a drop of tear fell down on omkara’s wrist……Omkara released the girl from his hold……Girl bowed her head and slowly started getting down the stairs without looking om’s face…….Om looks @ his wrist and remembers ishana’s face…..
Omkara : Ishana……..
Girl gets shocked 2 hear the name ishana…….She kept her hand on her chest with much fear ……Om get down the stairs quickly and comes beside her……
Omkara : Aaap!!! I mean do u know any dancer named Ishana ??
Girl nods her head in sign of “No” ……
Omkara : I felt that today I find the ray of hope……But I think destiny still not wants 2 bring her…….
Girl stares om with wet eyes……
Omkara : Any ways, I would like 2 see ur dance……Pls take care of urself……
Girl nods her head and leaves……..While leaving girl turned back and find om’s eyes drenched in few drops of tears……..She raised her hand for wiping them, but soon she realized that she is not supposed 2 do anything which will make omkara 2 know who is she……..She turned her eyes here and there and finds some tissues which were kept @ the corner of table…….Girl moves there and took one of them….. She made a smiley on the tissue with the tomato sauce and moved again 2 omkara……She gently touched om’s shoulder from back…….Om feels a kind of magic in that touch which made him 2 turn soon…. He again finds the girl’s eyes before him…….She handover the tissue 2 omkara …..Om sees the smiley and again stares her eyes……Girl signs him 2 smile with her fingers…….Om gently smiles and stares her…..
Omkara : I felt so gud when some one caring for me, may be u are also in pain like me……Won’t u ??
Girl simply stares om’s face….
Omkara : Don’t know why but I felt that I have seen these painful eyes before…….I still remember it because those eyes conveyed so many emotions, so many thoughts and moreover some untold feelings also…….I miss them a lot and after seeing ur eyes, I finds that am missing them badly…….Because whenever she finds me as gloomy or sad, she use 2 do something for me for bringing a smile on my face…… And what u have done now also reminded me her a lot……Any ways, Thanks a lot…..[ om smiles with wet eyes]
Girl nods her head and leaves……Om smiles and looks the tissue with wet eyes…..Girl turns back and hides behind a tree…..She slowly raised her scarf and stares omkara…….
Girl’s view….
I am sorry, Omkara……..Before u , I was forced 2 remain as silent because some situations demanded me 2 do this…….When u called me as ishana, I felt scared whether u have find me…….I know in this past two years we both have missed each other literally……I would have reached here earlier, but I was helpless……Today I came here because I know u will be here as u can’t spoil shivay bhaiya and anika bhabhi’s best day…….I wish I could come and hug u but I can’t do it , I wish I could scream loudly and say that I am ur ishana…ur fairy……, omkara…..But I can’t say it now……..I don’t want 2 lie before u as I know lies will hurt u……But I can’t reveal my face before u since am supposed 2 wear a mask…….U know when u asked me whether I knows ishana, I felt I could show u that am here only….But if I will show my face to u then u will hold me with a bunch of questions and I don’t have answers for them….. U might be feeling anger on me that why I didn’t called u, why I didn’t come and met u……. I can’t tell what happened in the past two years , but all I knows is if I will come and reveal my identity then …..U will be………I can’t see u risking ur life for me……..I don’t know whether I can meet u again, may be this will be my last meeting with u, Omkara…..[ishana leans back on the tree and literally cries]
PRECAP : HOPING FOR THE BEST ISN’T EVERYTHING, BUT WE STRUGGLES FOR SEEING OUR HOPE AS TRUE SINCE IT’S MORE IMPORTANT 2 LEAD LIFE IN WORRIES RATHER THAN WEEPING IN DARKNESS……
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Aap thak nahi jaate uf, hamesha acche words hi dete ho, but feels so gud whenever i finds ur comment……And am okay now…..I hoep i WIll join u all by next weekend……Thanks a lot
Beautifully written dear❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️I’m speachless
Thanks a lot crazy girls……
Speechless !!
Loved it.
No need to mention my name…Sam ki toh baat hi alag hain aise twist dalti hain story mein ki baat hi mat pucho.
Thanks fenu
My dear renima di, EVERY RENIMA DI’S ISHKARA FAN FIC READER MUST READ THIS…
I am so glad that with my request in ishkara page u have decided 2 write article for ishkara and trust me in each episode i could literally feel the magic of ishkara. I and swetha mam forced you and demanded you to write for ishkara and swetha mam could really connect her lost husband’s love with this episode.On behalf of swetha mam, i am conveying this message as u are not active on your ishkara page we mailed you and troubled you 2 post fan fiction. We discussed the concept of show some ishq and you promised us that you will tell this to your Tu friends and undoubtedly response was good and we are reading other articles also. We have always stayed as silent readers in TU and we broke our silence in your personal ishkara page only which is exclusively for ishkarians only. We are able to feel your pain, your depression when your engagement got cancelled and ur heart mahi’s ill health. We still wonder how can some one love those person so deeply even after witnessing sorrows and pains only. You gets emotional whenever u finds some thing as hurt or some thing unexpected occurs in your life. But you keeps writing as realistic in ishkara and without knowing yourself it will turn as extra ordinary and emotional and as shama titled di you are the emotional queen.We have hurt you by forcing you to write on ishkara without considering your pain and moreover whenever you writes you visualise you and him as ishkara and we are able to feel it in your each and single piece of ishkara. Di, you are so pure from heart and simple and always you keeps a straight forwardness and lovely nature to each and every one. But we miss the energetic reni di in our page and it’s absolutely wrong to disturb you when you needs rest as we know how hard for you to manage life, profession and health. You are so strong that in past 6 years you are loving your love more than anything in world and you have convinced your family as well which is truely admiring and amazing. You didn’t expected or demanded anything from that love but always you have tried to stand with him in each decision and i respect for you that. Your writing in ishkara often tells the dialogues as real not as reel and that’s what we miss in Ib now a days. Without you, we will feel that we will lose ishkara and we are liking so many ishkarians in tu who use to comment on renima di’s ff.Guys, reni di is the best ishkarian and a best human being. Right from her first ff for ishkara i followed her ff’s and that made me 2 gain confidence in my own life and i am facing all problems in life with much guts now. I don’t know how many of you will agree with my point, but regarding ishkara renima di is the best writer and no one can replace her. Because she is our renishkara. At first i thought why should i open reni di’s bitter pains, but i felt i should share it because when you start knowing reni di as not only a writer but a pure soul, you will be able to analyse each word’s meaning deeply. Sorry renima di , you share it in personal mail, but i have just opened a few of them for ishkarians because i felt it as necessary. I respect you and love u as my elder sister and admire you as a person and writer. DI this is my first comment on Tu breaking silence……
awwwww such a sweet gesture from you dear.
i heard many time or read in Author note always ignore when i found it personal and today by reading this i wish i can know you and your story Dii. i also prayed for ur love mahi when u mentioned in last companion wala ff …..if u want share i want to know u more dii…no doubt dear she is best and always be pure soul nd IshKaraian.
Thanks for the concern and support fenu…..I felt 2 mention it in last one because it was his wish that i should write passion meets compassion because he said that he wants 2 read it even though he was not feeling well and i did it with much pain……
Sweety and swetha mam………It’s okay u guys forced me 2 write this one and i was not much sure abt writing, but regarding swetha mam, i can’t refuse her because she is so close 2 me and if i can relive her husband’s memories through ishkara , then undoubtedly in pain also i will try my level best 2 write for ishkara……I felt sad while reading ur views and abt me also….But it’s okay, u haven’t hurt me…..many times ishkarians have said my ff’s are real and i don’t know what am doing is right or wrong, but just do what my heart says….I am feeling so blessed that u have said me as a pure soul, which i don;t know whether i deserves it or not, any ways thanks for breaking silence…..I will mail u and pls convey my regards 2 swetha mam also….
Reni di, Pls forgive me for doing this, but i felt i should tell this to all ishkarians who knows renima as ishkara admirer and a nice human being. We request you to continue your blogs on ishkara page so that we can feel the life and creativity with it’s charm. You are so humble and i am glad that i got you as my di. Swetha mam underwent depression when she lost her husband as his death was totally unexpected for her. But after reading your ff mam started realizing reality and continued to do her work without staying as isolated. Some of your works are sad ending, while some ends are totally different and rare, but we consider it as the real ones and trust me that makes you as more special. Our demand often troubled you and we know how much you would have weep in each single update of ishkara ff. As reader i have also cried a lot while reading your ishkara ff’s ,but i will try to understand the meaning and depth of emotions and the portrayal of ishkara by you.Thanks for replying to me in ur unhealthy condition.
It’s alright, dear….No need 2 say sorry…..love u dear
Di when are u going 2 write ur next blog on Ishkara ?? We miss u a lot di in our ishkara page. Pls come there and write on them. We all are missing you reni di. I feel so happy to talk with you here.
Well , can’t say now…..But soon i will try 2 join u guys…..Pls convey my regards 2 swetha mam and thanks 2 both of u for showing these much concern and affection 2wards me….
Superb update
Do continue soon
Thanks aarti
It is lovely dii.. Stay happy and healthy and blessed dii.. Take care…
Thanks a lot nikki darling