Hello friends, Big SORRRYYYY for updating this one damn late…….As I went ill health and got sucked with some professional and personal issues , I was not in a state to talk with any one and that’s why I didn’t came in TU for weekends also…..Finally today, I got time and I felt I can update this one which made me 2 post this ff……I hope u guys will like it…….Pls express ur views and apologies 2 my tu author friends who msgd me 2 read their articles …I came today only and opening them now finding myself much difficult to read and comment……But still I will try my level best……Links for the previous part is here… Pls read and comment…..
Scene – 13{ @City Hospital}
Khanna finds omkara lying unconscious near the bridge and informs to oberois…… Omkara gets hospitalized and whole family gets worried about his health condition……
Doctor : We have to do the operation quickly so that bullet can be removed….
Shivaay : Yeah….Doctor…..Pls do it….
Doctor : His condition is very critical…..Bullet has stabbed his chest…….So….
Shivaay : So what, doctor ?? I need my bhai back…..[shivaay presses dr’s shirt’s collar]
Anika : Shivaay, pls calm down…..What are u doing ??
Shivaay : Anika, I can’t live without my bhai…..Om…….
Rudra : Bhaiya, pls….Let him do his work……Pls….[ shivaay
releases his hands and wipes his tears]
Shivaay : I am sorry, Doctor…..
Doctor : It’s okay…….I can understand ur concern for ur brother…Mr. Shivaay, ur bhai needs AB+ ve blood……Pls make arrangements for it…..
Sowmya : Doctor…..My Blood Group is AB+ ve…….I will give blood to my bade baal waale bhaiya……
Shivaay : Sowmya!!! [shivaay holds sumo’s hands and gets emotional]
Sowmya : Bade bhaiya…..Pls….Don’t cry……U are the great wall naa…. So u should be strong…….I will be back……[ sowmya turns to leave, but rudy touches her back]
Rudra : Thanks sumo…
Sowmya : Why are u saying thanks, rudra ?? He is my bhai and I am saving my bhai only….. By the way always shivaay bhaiya gains the credit of saving bade baal waale bhaiya…..But today it’s my turn….. Is it ?? [sumo smiles with teary eyes] Why u guys are crying ?? Bade baal waale bhaiya is alright……..He has to complete the lyrics of the song which he left in middle for Ishu Bhabhi…….He will be back……[ rudy hugs sumo and cries..]No rudra…..Don’t be a cry baby…….Believe in ur O bhaiya….. He will come back……
Shivaay : Yeah….
Dadi : Rudy…… Puthar u come with me….. [Rudy goes with dadi and lies on her lap]
Sowmya goes with the attendor for donating blood….. Mean while shivika finds jhanvi sitting as motionless in the chair…….Pinky, Priveer and Sakthi were trying to pacify jhanvi , but jhanvi was not ready to react……Shivaay holds jhanvi’s hand and looks @ her eyes….
Shivaay : Badi Maa……
Pinky : Jethaniji is sitting like an idol only……Shivaay, when she find om in the pool of blood, she didn’t screamed omkara…..She didn’t cried and she is not telling anything…….Jethaniji has completely lost herself…….Beta……[ pinky literally cries, shivaay moves to the corner and turns his eyes from everyone]
Anika : Maaji pls……[anika wipes pinky’s tears]
Pinky : Anika…….I haven’t find jethaniji like this before…….She use to give me strength and she use to stand as bold even after witnessing darkness only……..But now ……….
Anika : Maaji……U are like jhanvi aunty’s sister……U both share a lot of things with each other…..
Sakthi : Anika is right…….U have to stand with bhabhi and make her to believe in herself……Only u can do it pinky….
Pinky : Haan sakthiji….But how ?? See my billu itself has become so weak…….How will I get courage ??
Sakthi : Pinky……[ pinky hugs sakthi and gets emotional]
Anika stares shivaay and cries……Prinku and Ranveer moves near shivaay ….
Prinku : Bhaiya…..U always use to say that my prinku is brave……Om bhaiya tells that prinku is pehalwan and rudy bhaiya tells that no one can beat prinku……..Today I am telling my bade bhaiya that my bhaiya is the best……He loves his bhai so much that his bhai can’t go anywhere…….If om bhaiya will leave , shivaay bhaiya will catch him and he will cut his long hair…….My bade bhaiya is the great wall who is the savior of omruprinku and nothing can separate shivomruprinku……Because we are All For One and One for All……..[ prinku extends her hands and stares shivaay] Is It ??
Shivaay nods his head with teary eyes and hugs prinku…….
“Yeah……All for One and One for All”
On the other hand, ishu got kidnapped by the unknown goons who attacked om and took ishu with them immediately after om lose his consciousness……They brought ishu 2 a dark room and tied her hands and legs with rope and covered her mouth with label]
Scene – 14 { @Dark Room }
Goon : Boss, I have completed the task……But that omkara is been hospitalized….
Boss : That doesn’t matter to me……Now the whole oberois will be feeling pain……..And that’s what I need……And the disloyal girl will learn what I…..
“Why you kidnapped my sister ? “ [The voice interrupted his words since it was so high……Ishu slowly focused her eyes on the direction from which it was heard……She find a woman with daring eyesight and gets shocked……]
Boss : Swethlana!!!
Swethlana : U wants to take revenge and it’s me who is ur target….Then why u brought my sister ishana here ??
Boss : It’s simple miss Daring Darling…..[He holds her hand forcefully from behind and runs his fingers on her cheek] The one who cheats me is supposed 2 bear the shocking surprise……There oberois will suffer and here u will suffer…….[He sprinkles some chemical on swethlana’s eyes….. Swethlana screams and faints… Ishu gets scared………]
Goon : Boss, so I have to tie this one also ??
Boss : Of course….. The two sisters will suffer the same pain and the three brothers will also…… Got it or should I need to explain it ??
Goon : I got it Boss…. Next one is rudra singh oberoi…… We have to finish his chapter……[ ishu feels extreme fear]
Boss : Exactly………I need 2 leave now…… Be careful….. Don’t allow these two to go from here….
Goon : Sure boss……
They tied swethlana also with rope and covers her mouth with label……..Ishu was unable to move a bit as she was feeling so tired….She slowly stared her body and finds a syringe beside her…….
Goon : It’s ur medicine, girl……Drugs!!!! [ishu gets shocked] U was screaming the whole way when I took u…..To stop u, I simply injected and u was sleeping calmly on the car…….Things became easy for me and my partners …….Don’t try to be smart, if u will do it…..Then u have 2 bear another dosage of this medicine……[ he stares her sharply]
Scene – 15 { @ City Hospital}
Tej arrives and touches jhanvi’s shoulder from behind…..
Ranveer : Uncle …….We tried a lot, but aunty is sitting like these only…….
Tej : What’s the present condition of Omkara ?
Ranveer : He is critical and doctor says that….
Tej : [interrupts] Enough!!!! Why should we torture omkara like these ??
Ranveer : What do u mean, uncle??
Tej : Tell the doctors to stop this treatment and it’s better to see him dead rather than seeing omkara fighting with death and life ……. [Every one gets shocked…..]
Dadi : Puthar, Do u have any idea what u have said now ?? U are his father……Tej……
Tej : I know…..Maa…… That’s why am telling I can’t see my son like these….. I ,Tej singh oberoi is going to kill my own son Omkara……..
“ No”…….Jhanvi raised from her seat quickly and slaps Tej……
Jhanvi : U can’t do this ….Tej…… Don’t separate my son from me…. I beg u, Tej……..[jhanvi pressed tej’s shirt’s collar and stares him]
Tej : I am not that much rude, Jhanvi…..He is my son……Believe me…… [Tejvi stare each other’s eyes emotionally ] I said it because I can’t see u sitting like an idol……Whatever be in ur heart, u have to tell it jhanvi……[tej gently touches jhanvi’s hand] U are his mom…….Mom….
Jhanvi : Omkara!!! [She screamed loudly and break down in tears…….Tej hugged her tightly and waved his hand on her back]
The entire family felt much pain after witnessing the heart wrenching moment……..Tears rolled down from everyone’s eyes and that spoke much rather than words and no one was capable of resisting those tears for a while……
Scene – 16 { @ Dark Room}
At the unknown place in entire darkness, ishana was shocked and badly hurt by the attack and unexpected incidents which made her 2 remain as helpless was not able 2 wipe down the hell like tears which poured down from her eyes……She looked @ swethlana’s face, the person whom she hated throughout her life was lying calmly @ the floor……It was unbelievable for ishu to trust swethlana since she has find her as a person who always keeps everything under her thumb and as a witch who spoils happiness and a home breaker only…….Ishu shut her eyes for a while and recalls the past where she find the philosopher artist omkara and fairy ishana……
Scene shifts to flash back………..
[NOTE : THIS FLASHBACK IS THE CONTINUATION OF EPSIODE SIX IN WHICH OM GIVE SOME SKETCHES TO ISHANA AND CONSOLES HER]
Omkara : A victim of pain is able 2 realize when he finds some one in pain as both are passengers of the painful journey……..
Ishana : May be……..[ishkara share an eyelock….”saathiya”bgm plays]
Om leaves and ishu stares the paintings once again…. Right after om left, ishu finds some one knocking @ the door…… She opened the door and gets shocked 2 see her drunken father with swethlana……
Ishana : So now u started putting fire on ur own blood, swethlana ?
Swethlana : Choti, u have mistaken me……
Ishana : Pls, let me remind u I am not ur choti…..I am Ishana Mehta…….[ishu hold her paapa 2wards her and made him 2 lie on the coutch]
Swethlana : Ishana, chote paapa….I am sorry….I mean to say ur paapa has drunken too much and I find him lying near the pub……Every one was mocking @ him and I felt much bad……..I think he needs better care and attention…….If u need any help, then pls call me….. This is my card……..
Ishana : I don’t want to keep any contact with a home breaker…….Pls…..[ishu waved her hand to the door]
Swethlana : Pls take care…….[swethlana turns back]
Ishana : Swethlana……. This is not the first time paapa is consuming alcohol…….Everytime he use 2 promise me ishu this will be the last……But those promises are like broken pieces of glasses only……..They are not ready 2 join…….[ishu and swethlana stares each other’s eyes] But I know one day they will join and it will not break……I am trying to do it…….
Swethlana : It’s not so easy, ishana….How long u will lose one by one and keep trying and trying only ? The flames of sorrows, pains and dark memories are nothing just thrones on ur path……. It’s time for u to stop fighting with them and it will be possible if u start grabbing the things the way you wants……
Ishana : I don’t want 2 grab, but I want to achieve….I don’t want 2 break, but I want to move and I don’t want 2 give pain 2 any one eventhough they made me 2 suffer much……What I have learned from these thrones are that I have 2 overcome it….
Swethlana : Seems, u are talking like a philosopher……..A deeply hurt painful soul, like Omkara Singh Oberoi……..Who never accepts failure and I have seen him as a fire who got wounded thousand times , but still remains as the fighter and I always tries 2 give more pain to him since I am the siren who bewitches his father in wrong direction……And in this whole world if he hates some one so deeply from heart it can be none other than me…….Swethlana……..
Ishana : Perhaps not only him, but I also hate u to the most……Miss Swethlana…….I really hate u…….
Swethlana : Ishana!!! [shocked]
Ishana : I think it’s time for u 2 leave…….By the way Thanks a lot for bringing paapa safely……U may pls…….[ishu folds her hands and bows down her head]
Swethlana gets hurt by her words and leaves the spot……..Ishu shuts the door quickly and takes a deep breath in sign of relief……She moves near her paapa and started waving her hand on his forehead……Mean while her mobile rings and she attends the call….
Ishana : Hello
Omkara : Hai, It’s me Omkara……..Iam sorry to disturb you in this night……
Ishana : It’s okay….By the way, how u got my number ??
Omkara : Wooh, actually Mona asked my number and I asked why ?? She told me that ishu di and om bhaiya are friends….And they don’t know each other’s number……And…..she started saying so many things and…..I …
Ishana started laughing…….
Omkara : Ishana……Why are u laughing ??
Ishana : Nothing…….Mona is so naughty and she never fails to play with any one and now she made the great artist also 2 play……
Omkara : When a sky’s fairy can play, then what about a philosopher ?? I am just an artist who knows 2 play with colors only……..
Ishana : Really!!!! U knows to play with colors only ?? I think u doesn’t knows what all things u can play……..U are playing with some thing so magically and it’s hard 2 quit from that play….. [ishu shuts her quickly and feels shy]
Omkara : I didn’t get u……
Ishana : Mr. Shayar……Better u ask it to urself…….U will discover urself as the brave player…..
Omkara : But u said that I am a philosopher……..Won’t u ??
Ishana : Okay….Okay…….Mr. Artist cum Philosopher cum Player…….Until now u didn’t told me why u called me ?
Omkara : Yeah……. I just want 2 know is everything fine….I mean ur paapa…….
Ishana : He is here only…….
Omkara : Did u told him abt the academy ?
Ishana : No…..Actually it’s late night and he is sleeping now……I will tell him later……
Omkara : That’s better…….So tmrw we will meet @ the art hub……
Ishana : Yeah……
Omkara : Bye…….Gud night…Ishana…..
Ishana : Gud night omkara…….
Ishkara cuts the call and starts thinking abt each other……Om starts walking through the balcony of oberoi mansion and recalls his meetings with ishana……..@ a point he stopped walking and stared the shining stars of the night which were glazing more beautiful rather than the usual nights……Om finds a hand calling him from the sky and it was none other than ishu’s.. He raised his hand to touch it, but before he could touch the hand got vanished…….Om realized that it was just his mere illusion only…….Om smiles and feels what was happening with him…… Omkara : “TAARON KI RAUNAK MEIN BHI TALASH HEIN UNN ANKHON KI
JISNE BAHARON KE SAPNON SE PARCHAIYON KO JEENA SIKHAYA
UNN ANKHON KE DO BOONDON KI AASUVON MEIN AISA DARD PAAYA
JISSE SAMHALNE KE KHAATIR HUM APNE HI DARD-E-DIL KO HAZIR KIYA
BAS USKI EK JHALAK MEIN HI KHOOBSURATI KO DEKH PAAYE HUM
JOH SHAYAD INN RANGON MEIN KAI BARSON TAK KHOJ NAHI PAAYE
INTEZAAR HEIN UNN NAZARON MEIN CHIPI ANKAHI LAFZON KO SUNNE KI”
JOH ABBH DHADKAN HI JAANTE HEIN…….[Om shuts his eyes and keeps his hand on his heart and remembers ishana’s smiling face
]
On the other hand, Ishu was also feeling some thing strange and new to her heart……
Ishana : Omkara, I wish I could be the colors in ur hand so that I can see what ur heart says….. I wish I could be the idols which depicts ur inner thoughts……I wish I could be the rare piece of art which makes u as unique and reflects ur soul…..I wish I could be the description of ur poetries as it reveals what u are and who are u……..I wish I could be the empty canvas which always connects with u when u are alone……..I wish I could be the beat of ur heart as I want 2 sense what u feels and what u thinks……Without seeing those innocent philosopher’s eyes, it’s really hard for ishana 2 live…..I think I have surrendered myself in those captive eyes……I have started liking Omkara….Am I ?? [ishu smiles and remembers omkara’s face]
BGM…… “Tere Naina Bade Kaatil
Maar Hi Daalenge
Shararat Naina Karte Hain
Tadapna Dil Ko Padta Hain
O Dheere Dheere Hole Hole
Silsilaa Aage Badhta Hain
Teri Yaadon Ki Garmi Se
Mera Lamha Peegalta Hain
Dard Ko Teri Baahon Mein
Bada Aaram Milta Hain
Bada Aaram Milta Hain
Kaatilana Addao Se Ek Din Iss Dil Ko
Hasayenge Rulayenge
Maar Hi Daalenge” [film- jai ho] plays…..
PRECAP : GROWING IMPATIENCE AND PUZZLED STATE OF MIND MAY MAKES U AS BLANK FOR SOME TIME…..OTHERS MAY SCOLD U, ADVICE U AND SOME MAY LEAVE U ALSO…..U CAN’T BE SO STRONG LIKE A SHIELD TO RESIST ALL ATTACKS WHICH AFFECTS U…… THE MORE U GETS HURT, U WILL LEARN TO SURVIVE AND SILENTLY U LAEDS UR LIFE TO LIVE AND THAT MAKES U 2 LIVE UNTIL AND UNLESS DEATH WILL COME TO CONQUER U……..
14 Comments
It is awesome and emotional dii… Stay happy and blessed dii. Take care of yourself and love you so much
Thanks a lot nikki darling……..Love u too dear and hope u are fine
Hello How are you Dii? Awesome chappy fully emotional.Soumya to TejVi superb scenes.flashback story was superb and Om’s sayari. I love the way you gave shivaay and prinku’s scene which i missed….waise ishqbaaz third class show ban gaya hain. Lovely and intense precap.loved it.can’t wait for next.Take care.love yaa.
Hai fenu, iam fine and what abt u….. Thanks and am glad u liked the chappy….I will try my level best 2 update next by weekend itself….I miss prinku a lot in Ib and yeah Ib has lost the charm now…….Love u 2 bro….
Emotional one but Fab???
How are you?
Thanks a lot, crazy girls… I am gud now, just sucked with certain issues only…..
It’s fabulous… Soumya so sweet… Shivaay and Prinku’s scene is amazing… I missed Prinku in IB… She is more closed to Shivaay compare to OmRu… IshKara flashback is fabulous as always…
Really missed you very much, renima… Hope you are fine now… Take care…
Thanks a lot dear ruby…..I too missed u a lot…..I am also missing prinku badly in Ib….Missing rumya and ishkara also……I am gud dear…Thanks a lot
Awesome update
Thanks a lot alekhika
AWESOME EMOTIONAL? INTERESTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT SUPERB??????
Take care and stay safe ?
Thanks a lot my dear uf
OMG, who reads such crappy story, live a real life don’t live in virtual reality grow up girls in real life there is no man like Shiv Om RU as there is no girls in real life as Anika, Gauri or Suamya mostly we become as Svetlana type. Just wasting time in writing such crap story and others are ready to read such story, hopefully u guys don’t need shrink in future.Good luck.
First of all thanks for giving ur honest view…It’s just an imaginary story only and not a real one…..And it’s abt an author’s freedom of expressing characters the way he\she wants and i have done that only…..I am am really sorry for wasting ur precious time….People have their own likes and dislikes and they have full freedom 2 express it….U can certainly criticize my work, but pls don’t criticize readers…….It’s their choice whether they wants 2 read or not…..I hope u get me in right sense…..