Hello Friends, I am Renima……This is my first attempt 2 write an article for a mythological show….. This work is my imaginational output and I don’t know how much it will justify the actual story of shani dev and dhamini devi…….Pls give ur views as comments and if u finds any thing as wrong then I will not come again in this page 2 post articles here…..I am not a regular follower of this show, but watched many of it’s episodes and recently after seeing grown up shani’s track I find it as much interesting and I decided 2 write an article based on shani dev and dhamini devi’s story and named the pair as SHAMINI…….. .Characters will be the same just like we watch them in colors show shani…..
I am facing eye pain after a surgery which happened few months back as my eye pupil got affected…. So I can’t be a regular updater here and if u guys like this one then I will certainly think of posting updates
Dhamini’s Monologue….
I am not capable of bounding myself into frontiers now……Devta will be impressed by my performance, they will praise my work and I will get my recognition….But I couldn’t stop myself watching shani and after hearing ups and downs of his life from his vahan Kakol , I have started liking him…..He stands as calm often , but his eyes are sharp and when he speaks in public often words comes as harsh and everyone thinks it as wrong….. But after understanding the depth of his words I can sense that he was neither wrong and nor he can be wrong…..I want to heal his pain and want to assure that he is not alone……But the one and only Dev who stands as the Karmaphal Daata who is capable of reading mind, why don’t he understand what my heart says ??? Why Shani, why ?? [ dhamini feels sad and leaves the spot]
On the other hand @ Kaksh shani dev was seen as restless……He was not able 2 sleep well as he was capable of sensing some bad omen which will be happening soon….Shani decides 2 spend some time alone in jungle ……
Scene shifts 2 jungle…..
Shani shuts his eyes for a while and lost himself in deep thoughts…..Mean while he was able 2 experience a soft touch on his shoulder….He turns back and gets surprised 2 see Devi Dhamini before him….Dhamini made a fair smile in herlips and signed shani dev 2 smile…..But shani dev was confused and his eye sight went down….She sat beside him and looked @ his eyes……
Dhamini : What happened ? U seems 2 be in trouble……
Shani : Trouble is my asset which I brought by birth itself……This is not a new thing…..
Dhamini : May be…..As for now tell me what’s troubling you ??
Shani : It’s U…..Dhamini!!!!!
Dhamini : I came here because I find u alone and I thought that u were upset……But I was unaware the fact that I myself was the reason for ur trouble…….[ dhamini gets emotional]
Shani : No devi…..I was thinking abt……[ shani breaks his words in midst]
Dhamini : I can feel ur inner pain and am capable of witnessing ur detachment towards the material world and desires……shanidev…..
Shani : When u knows it, why u are so keen to get closer with me ??
Dhamini : Shanidev are u not aware abt my feelings also……Won’t u ? [ Dhamini stares shani’s eyes…]
Shani : Not @ All….. I am not committed to anything and I don’t want to know abt a Kanya’s Feelings……
Dhamini : Don’t be so rude, Shani!!! Pls allow me also to travel with u in ur struggle,so that we can face things together…..
Shani : Iam The Karmafal Daata !!! Conflict is not a new thing 2 me….When I can fight with myself, then I am alone is enough for dealing with struggles….. Our paths are different dhamini….. I think ur heart got ur answer…….
Dhamini gets shocked 2 hear shani dev’s reply…..She recalls her monologue and stares shanidev’s eyes…..They stare each other’s eyes……
Shani : Don’t stare @ my eyes, Devi….. My Drishti itself is “Vakra” and it can change any one’s fate…..
Shani turns back and leaves…….BGM….”Sarvash shani…..Nishchal Shani…Vaaman Shani….Pawan Shani…. Tamas Shani….Nirgun Shani” plays…. Dhamini stares him and gets deeply hurt by his words…. She bend @ her own knees and starts bursting tears……
PRECAP : DESTINY’S DECISIONS ARE UNKNOWN TO US……HOW ONE WILL WIN IT ??
6 Comments
Good work Renima…
We have not had any FF for Shani serial yet… But nice to have you.
And great job. Do update whenever you find time.
Also, take care of your health.
Don’t spend much time in the computer/mobile with eye strain after surgery.
Kudos to your work…
Thanks a lot for the welcoming me and this first comment….
Shaniputri does… As she is Kamalanayani…
hahaha how is my new name…
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Try this montage pic for your next post.
Waiting for your next update… Current tracks of the show are supportive to yours… I guess so..
Thanks for the support… I have submitted the second part few hrs. before….Hope tu will publish it today itself….