Hello Shani Fans, I am back with the second update of shamini ff…..Thanks to Kamalnayani for giving support to me……I got 4 likes in previous chapter and I am expecting ur views on this update…..Kindly read and drop ur views….And pls tell me should I continue or not ??
@ Surya Loka {Shani’s Kaksh }
Dhamini decides to meet shani dev again so that she could convince him again about what she feels for him…….She moves to his kaksh and finds kakol in shani’s room……Kakol was trying to cheer up shani by doing entertaining acts, but shani was still confused…..Seeing them together dhamini stands @ the corner besides the kaksh and overhears their conversation….
Kakol : Shani, why u are lying to yourself ?
Shani : I didn’t get u kakol
Kakol : Don’t try to act shani, u can’t do it…..I know u have feelings for dhamini devi….
Shani : Kakol!!!! [Shani fumes in anger and stares him sharply]
Kakol : Stare me like that shani…..This life is given by you, am not scared of ur vakra drishiti…..I am not bothered about what will happen to me @ next moment…..This Vakra Drishti is like a powerful mask which u have wore on your eyes to hide your emotions……U are a big liar….shani…..
Shani : Kakol!!!! Don’t interpret my emotions ……U are my mitra, but your are not my soul….
Kakol :Then ask to your soul……If u would have younger shani, then what will be the decision ??
Shani : I don’t know about decision……What I know is life is a circle and whatever comes in life, behind those everything there is a goal and we have to fulfil it……
Kakol : Exactly……Shani…..Now devi dhamini is your goal…..
Shani : Don’t mix emotions and goal kakol….I have respect for her since she is the renowned gandharva kanya and a talented artist…..
Kakol : Shani u are able to find her art only, why can’t u see her tears ?? Today also u made her to cry badly……I was finding hard to pacify dhamini devi as she got hurt by ur words….So I came here straightly for asking what’s ur take ?
Shani : My Take !!!! My Take is crystal clear……She is surya loka’s guest and as our guest I will take care of her until she is here…..I will certainly talk to her but it will be based on the situations and circumstances only……And …..I will…..
Dhamini gets shocked and interrupts shani’s words……“Shani Dev!!!! U don’t need to take that much pain for me”
Shani turns back and looks Dhamini……
Shani : Dhamini
Dhamini : I am grateful to you ….. [Dhamini folds her hands and stares shani’s eyes] Shani Dev, U made me to remember actually what’s my role and who am I ?? I am the so called guest of Surya Loka and I have to be in my limits…..
Shani : U have mistaken me Dhamini…..It’s not like that……Let me make it clear now…..
Dhamini : Why are u giving explanation, Shani !!! When u clearly mentioned your stand to Kakol, there is no point of telling what I feels for you……Karmafal Daata Shani Dev!!! [ Dhamini bend 2 her own knees and bows before shani] I forgot my duties and devoted my heart to ……[dhamini stops her words in the midst and stares shani with teary eyes] I beg you, Pls punish me for this thing……
Shani gets disheartened with dhamini’s words…..He raised his hand to touch her for a while, but soon he took back his hand and turned his eyes against her……
Shani : Devi Dhamini……U don’t need to bow your head before any one….One should bow his head only before Bhagwan who is the creator of this world…..
Dhamini : Enough Shani…..Ur deeper knowledge is beyond of my imagination and thoughts…..I just demanded my karmafal……Tell me what is the result ??
Shani dev and Dhamini Devi stare each other’s eyes……
PRECAP : It’s hard to control whole things the way you wants even though you finds certain questions have no answers……
6 Comments
Keep up the good work dear. It is very nice. I wish the writer could come up with something like this in the serial.
Thanks a lot yaar
Nice update Renimarenju and thanks for the mention…
But, why Mata Dhamini had to bow down to Shani dev… I didn’t get that part…
And, now you have got 4 likes already– mine also…
I hope I will release my Kamalanayani series article now… And, hope you like it…
Thanks a lot kamalanayani….I will make the next part as long so that u will get ur answers…..It was just a situation according 2 my ff’s story only dear….U will get it more clear in next update……I will try 2 read ur article also once i gets time….
Post the next part soon..
I will try kamalanayani…Sorry, but i was busy with my hectic work and underwent some issues and right now am not in the right state 2 write something….But will try 2 update next one by this weekend itself … Thanks a lot